I just read your entire story this past weekend and I must tell you...I love your story!  As I read the original books, I wondered what Ana and Christian's life would be like in the future.  I knew they would still be together and still in love and. of course, still have their problems.  You created some very memorable scenes and situations that feel very believable for these characters.  You ended this particular story in a lovely way and I and I can just picture them being madely in love with each other when they are even much older.  You have a wonderful imagination and an incredible writing talent and I'm so thankful that you shared them with us, your readers.