Reviews by CarrollFamily02
Summary:

After a new beverage tax is imposed on New York State, Bella is forced to stretch her pitiful college budgte to the max, until she meets a stranger who is looking for a home cooked meal.  Hilarity ensues.  Warning, this story is rated NC-17 for a reason...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1817 Read Count: 1195
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2010
Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope you continue this! This would lead to a great story. I would love to see where they end up.

 

As a NY'er, I think that the idea is right, but how they are going about it is wrong. If they want people healthier, then they need to make the healthy food cheaper instead of almost double.  I won't continue to go on because the governor is trying to mess with the Indian Reservations too.



Author's Response:

Now that everyone is asking, I may, but not for a while.

If I honestly believed this was about making NYers healthy as opposed to fixing the budget without having to piss off special intrests by cutting the fat, I'd agree.  They compare soda to cigarettes...which as a relative and friend of cancer survivers I find it insulting.  I'm going to stop and agree our gov is "special" for multiple reasons...you think someone under investigation would try not to piss off the world.  Especially when he took over from Spitzer.  Oh well. 

Thanks for the review and the support, your name pops up on several stories review pages and I wanted you to know that I appreciate that you read multiple stories and take the time to leave your thoughts!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

Nice shot at the Buffalo Bills, LOL. Granted I am in the Buffalo area and do cheer for them, but it is true that the team has sucked in the past decade. 4 Superbowl losses in a row is a hard thing to come back from.

(Twimom22580 on Twitter)



Author's Response:

Haha it was more of a shot at the area as well as the team, just cause I couldn't handle all that snow.  But I'm so sorry for them.  They were once an awesome team, just not so much now.  They'll get it together ;)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211506
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

<3 from PSG! I am so mad at Edward for not trusting Bella, but who would believe their best friend would do something like this. I really hopw we get a update sooner than a week!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

 

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Yeah, so I was utter fail this week with my review replies, lol. Sooo, here's an extended teaser. If you guys continue to leave PSG in your review somewhere, I'll make sure you get a special teaser with each review until the story ends to show my appreciation for helping this jump into the Top 10 here! <3

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Seeing a moment of opportunity, Bella launched herself off the chair and out of the room. Knowing that there was no place for her to run and probably nowhere that she could hide where he wouldn't find her, she set off to find the next best thing - a weapon. Sliding into a large stainless steel kitchen, she found just that in the form of a rack of pots and pans hanging above an island in the center of the room. She quickly pulled down a large and heavy frying pan and hefted it over her shoulder, moving towards the door at the opposite end of the room. As she eased it open, she found herself facing a flight of stairs leading upwards. Just as she placed one foot on the bottom stair, she heard James's voice coming closer. 


"Isabellllllla," he sang out. "Come out, come out, wherever you are."    

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467285
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Thump, thump, thump

OMG, that is classic!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268908
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Great update.  I just want to hug Bella.