Reviews by MrsJakeBlack
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

yay JACOB TO THE RESCUE (:

nawww edward and bella finally expressed thier love to each other

that was sweet

I CANT BELIEVE THAT CARLISE IS CLOSING DOWN THE SCHOOL!!!?? thas soo sadd, what about all of is that want to enroll :P

awesome chapter

loved it

UPDATE SOOON!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

ooooo ARO!!

i wonder what hes going to do

loved carlises POV coz hes like the most interestingest person (:

awesome chapter

UPDATE SOON!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

haha lol edward remembers jake from carlises house

how awkarwd lol

sersious chapter though

drama!!!

awesomeness

UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

:O :O :O DRAMA!!!

is it james again??!!

scaryyyy

btw.. how come we cant see the picture for the chapter? :S

UPDATE SOON!!!

loved it

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

owwww holy shit

did james just kill laurent

not saying he didnt deserve it but he seemed okay in this chapter

stupid bastard

wonder what hes going to do with bella and victoria now :(

hope edward makes it in time

awesome chapter

UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

naww poor edward

and poor carlise

at least aro had nothing to do with it

anyways awesome chaptrer

UPDATE SOOON!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

haha what an awesome chapter

i loved jakey at the end

but poor edward

his whole world is falling apart because bella is gone :(
please bring her back

anyways loved it
UPDATE SOOON!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

ROFL loved that ending

james went out with a bang :P

awesome chapter

loved it

UDPATE SOOON!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

yay there safe

i didnt really get that chapter for some reason

but i got the ending lol

lets see what Aro is going to do to the poor sucker :P

anyways loved it

UDPATE SOON!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

omgee hahahahahahah

serves him right

loved that

nawww cannot belive its nearly over thought

:(

soo sad

gona cry next chapter tooo

UPDATE SOON!!!

cant wait to see how it ends :A

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMGEEE ITS OVER!!!

I CANT THINK OF LIKE NOT GETTING ANYMORE UPDATES SAYING TTSG HAS UPDATED

THATS SOOO SADD
I THINK IM GOING TO GO CRY

OH WELL HOPE YOU WRITE MORE

THAT WAS FANTASTIC

I LOVEDDDDD ITT

AWESOMEST STORY EVERRR!!!!!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625385
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

OMG howww cutee was that

little edwar and bella are adoarble togeather

expect james totally ruined that cute little memory

im sad you can update on fanfiction or your blog anymore but i suppose this site is cool too (:

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

naww bella and edward are soo sweet togeather

and alice and rose are being such good friends to her

yay for the wedding cant wait

but what i really cant wait for is the drama thats going to happen over family dinner

UPDATE SOOON!!!!
awesome chapter

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

nawwww

nooo edward dont do it

be your nice loving self again

who the hell cares about demetri and marcus

there such bastards to treat bella like that

what idiots

poor edward

that was a totally awesome chapter

loved it

UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

poor bella having to go through all that even though it wasnt reall

but at least now they both knnow the truth about everthing

that was an awesome chapter

loveedd itt

UPDATE SOON!!!

p.s cant wait to see some justice on carlise demetri and marcus

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

naww how sad for esme

it all makes sense now and the garden seems awesome

loved this chapter

it was so sad thought

UPDATE SOOON!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

nawwww that was really scary and sudden

it was totally random but i loved it

whould have wanted to see bellas reaction to when demeti took her though

anyways awesome chapter loved it

pooor bella help her out

pray edward comes to save her in time

UDPATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

:O CARLISE DEAD!!!!

OMG im happy but sad at the same time

feel no remorse for demetri though

OMG that was an awesome scary fantastic chapter

LOVED IT!!

UPDATE SOOON!!!!

but why is bella being so cold to edwarD?

poor edward

he looks cut

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

whoah i thought that was the epilouge

it would have made a good epilouge

but still an awsome chapter

its so nice to know that everything turned out nicely

XD

but poor edward having to wait 2 whole years to see bella again

UPDATE SOOON!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

naww that was soo sweet

loved it

i cannot belive the story is over now :(

so saddd

but such a good story

i loved it

cant wait for your next project :)

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

nawwwwwwww howww cuteee is jacobb

that was the sweetest date ever

i want my own jacob now!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!

awesome chapter

but how come you havnt updated on fanfiction.net yet?

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

naww poor edward

getting hassled from chief swan for not really doing anything bad much

and he has to get rid of his plants ):

saddd

oh well hope this whole thing blows over soon

anways awesome chapter

UPDATE SOON!!!!

Summary:

Hate is a passionate emotion.  It can drive people to do things they never thought would do.  Hermione and Draco's hatred collides and explodes into hot, steamy passion.  Our entry for the Birds & Bees Writing Challenge.

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Categories: Harry Potter, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2769 Read Count: 2198
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Impassioned One Shot

WHOAH!!! that was awesomeeeeeee

update soon!!

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was sooo toatlly hot but kinda freaky at the same time

jasper can be scary, who knew

but that was totally awesome

loved it

is this just a one shot or a story?

UPDATE SOON!!

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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SIAU

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwwwwwwwwwwww

how cutee

loved it

that was sooo adorable!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  I'm really glad you liked it :-)

Match Point by emerald eyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

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He is the world champion. She is the daughter of his sponsor. Edward Masen has to teach Bella Swan, but who will teach who in the end? If you think that tennis is a boring game you are wrong. White Polo shorts, skirts and a lot, lot of sweat...

Written for the Sport of Love Challenge.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6954 Read Count: 797
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Match Point

naww cutee

loved it

awesome story

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it.

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooo i like this

update soon XD



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW LOVED IT
MADD STORYY
CANT WAIT TILL YOU CONTINUE IT!!!!

i hate that emmetts a bad boy though, i always imagine him as a cuddly lil teddy bear :L

Forbidden by Jennmc75, TheSpoiltOne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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Hate can be passionate and cloud your judgement. Hermione and Draco share a secret passion fueled by their mutual hatred of each other.

 

Can they keep their meetings a secret? Do their friends notice changes in their behaviour? Will the guilt eat at Hermione and cause her destruction?  Can she change their hatred into something more without losing their passion?


Categories: Harry Potter, Hogwarts, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6743 Read Count: 4391
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

yaaayyy LOVED IT
TOTALLY AWESOME
HERMIONE AND DRACO SOOO YUM TOGEAHTER
AND WHOOOTT HARRY POTTER 7 WAS AWESOMEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!