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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Good girl Ana!  Don't let him run off!  

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Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Best line:You look like Ronald McDonald's gay cousin." He growls at me.  Had me cracking up!

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Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Gah, I get nervous with lines like "if someone ever tries to turn your head".  I liked the conversation about the beginning of their relationship.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Woah to Christian's reaction at the restaurant! It seems like there was something more behind it.   I hope he likes Ana's hair!  

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Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Poor Christian!  This must be bringing back some memories.  Maybe bringing this to light will help him beat all his demons now.

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Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Leila needs to back off.  I wonder if she is planning any shenanigans during her show in Seattle.  Ana handled the painting situation well, glad that Christian listened to her.   

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Loved Emotional Christian at the end...it shows how far he has come.

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Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Poor Christian, laying in his closet thinking about his mother.  I love how the kids are open to "keeping" Tommy because he doesn't eat much.  Another great chapter!  

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Awe, the story has come full circle! Very sweet!  

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Mr. Grey....hope there were no cell phone pictures taken during the festivities !  Loved that Ana did an inspection on drunk Christian.  Can't wait for Ana to confront Elliot!



Author's Response:

Confrontation Chapter 16. I hope there are no pictures either. 

thanks for leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love the last line of this chapter!  I can totally relate to Ana as I have a 3 year old who has picked up some colorful language as well.  Great chapter...can't wait to hear from Elliot!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Teddy is going to be a lady killer!  It felt that Elliot is miserable and wanted to take Christian down with him....even some jealousy of Christian.  Loved seeing Ana and Christian happy and playful!

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Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Nice to see a lighthearted Christian laughing about the dog.  Oh boy....Leila better know she is not welcome in Seattle!

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I am with Christian on this one....run Ana run!  What is the sub club up to?



Author's Response:

Ana doesn't run or obey Christian. She's not a sub.

E.

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Glad the sub club was not up to anything devious.  I love that Christian flew down there to save  Ana!  And a hot reunion!  If he knew about Leila's movements did he know about Mrs Douglas as well?

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I love Christian and Teddy conversations.  I will never look at Oreos the same way!  Can't wait for date night!

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Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Loved Christian's speech about Ana's wedding rings!  Another sweet chapter, thank you!

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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

And here comes the drama!  Can't wait.



Author's Response:

Drama to say the least.

Thanks for following.

E.

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Phew...I can breathe again!  So happy he made it home!

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Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I love the note on the mirror.  Another great chapter!

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Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Oh boy, I am sensing some of Christian's past is on that street where his sister lives...

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Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Awe, I knew Christian would come around!  Poor Ana finding that necklace and all those memories coming back.  I hope the social worker doesn't bring some bad news about them keeping Tommy.

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Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Oh dear, you have me worried about Christian's health and the ominous "we always need to make it back home". Can't wait for the lemons!

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Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I love the description of the Seattle house "contempory Mattel". I love that Ana not only thought to pack her collar but she is topping from the bottom using it!  Can't wait for Mr Grey's reaction!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Love this ..."No, I fucked the shit out of you because I love you and I had an overwhelming desire to make you come and then fuck you. No hidden messages."  Classic CG line!  Can't wait for more!


Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Tear city!  Love that Teddy!  What a sweet Mommy Son conversation.  Thank you!

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Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I love that Christian still gets surprised with Ana's love for him.  I loved the kds, especially Teddy, talking with Ms. Collins.  Great chapter!  Hope the wrist feels better!

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Oh boy!  I am sure Mr Grey will find it very difficult to let Ana's meeting be.  Can't wait or the next chapter!

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Yikes!  That author is bad news! I think the phone call was about Ana defying him about meeting the author at the hotel and not about him and his BDSM.  How did  he know? I am thinking that the security at the house told him there was a delivery for Ana.   I hope Ana does not meet Colton in his room.  She would flip out if Christian did that!  Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Seriously, what is up with him?  Waiting on pins and needles to find out!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Woah!  Did not expect that twist at the end!



Author's Response:

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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Great chapter.  I loved that CG asked if he needed to send flowers!  What a cute couple they are!  Thank you!

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Loved their banter when he walked into Ana's office.  But...Ut oh, Mr. Grey needs to go double on the hearts and flowers!  He is in the dog house big time!

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Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Oh deAr...could it be Tommy's sister in the nicu?

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Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Love CG's ring speech!  So cute!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Yikes, that us a lot to think about.  Grace is awesome, I love how she set  Christian up to hold the baby.  Lovely chapter!