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Fifty Shades...Clarity
Book II
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.
"I look into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children. He tried to lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust." Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does? This is Book II.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138690
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
You never disappoint us....Thank you for KILLING ELENA!!! You are the first person with the guts to get rid of her. Can't wait to hear who done it/how...etc. Next update soon please!!!
Author's Response:
I wanted it to be another first.
E.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Oh Nuwriter....I have LOVED these 2 books of yours every bit as much as FSOG...BUT please don't go there with the children...you have done an awesome job, even on this chapter keeping us on the edge of our seats but again, let's keep it with the adults. I look forward to getting the email that you have added another chapter and I am never diappointed! Thanks for bringing Teddy hope quickly and unharmed...PLEASE let's keep the kids that way!!! Can't wait to ready more!!!
Author's Response:
That is something you will never have to worry about. Ever!
I even hated having Christian go balistic on Elena and I realised it was more for him than Teddy. I don't like the dark stuff.
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I hate the man in the jacket is back ~~~ I was so nervous reading this chapter!!! I look forward to the updates, I know it's time for some drama...anxiously waiting to see what happens! You are the best!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Drama on the way, but not what you expect.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity
WoW....grandmother....Christian and Taylor off and Lord knows when they are coming home....The mystery man delivered grandma's letter...Hmm, wonder what kind of possiblilities that could have...AND the possiblity of early labor...GIRL, you ROCKED this chapter and set up a TON of future plot lines!!! As usual, my heart is racing and I can't wait to findout what is up next! AWESOME!!!! I'm telling everyone I knonw about your story! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Amazing once again...can't wait for this drama to resolve...makes me very nervous :-(
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Post another chapter soon.
E.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Holding....my....breath....!!!! I know who I hope it is...Once again, you are AMAZING!!! I can't wait to find out!!! Hurry, please!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
So I had this really bad day at work; get in the car, check my email in traffic...and find I have an update to my FAVORITE STORY!!! YOUR. WRITING. IS. AMAZING! I agree with the previus review...get a publisher or talk to EL James about having your story lines adapted for the weekly TV show after the movie comes out! This story is my therapy, my escape, my happy place! Thank you SO MUCH for another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens...Loved that the perfect Grey children are not so perfect any more!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I. Love. This. Story. Thank you so much for another awesome chapter and for allowing Ana to handle Elena...please let them handle Elena once and for all! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
...made my day...sorry I just have to say it again...I love the story and you are an amazing writer...please keep going!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Book III
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*
Thank You.
This story continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and accepting his past have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger? This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Ok...I had a revew written begging you to fix Christian because broken Christian and Ana makes me so sad...then I read all the reviews where you promised Christian will come around and be back soon...so I decided to just say thank you for commenting on all the other reviews!!! I love this story...It is my first fan fiction and I live for your updates. I really feel like I live in this story. You are an awesome writer and I hope even though Book 3 says Full Circle I hope you continue. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm sorry if I didn't respond to your review. I do read them all and try to respond to all of them, but this site gets funky sometimes. Sometimews it won't let me review at all and sometimes it will cooperate for a while and I can get to some and then it will just crap out on me. It is so hard to post here. It takes forever and quite often it posts a chapter twice and when I delete the duplicate, it also deletes all the reviews attached to it. I'm glad I answered your question somewhere.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Wow...that was...intense! I don't recall Christian being quite so Dominant and having Ana be quite so submissive...don't recall the use of the cat when they have played either. That was...intense. Wan't expecting her to be punished for getting her hair cut...not like that anyway. WOW! Love the story...I so look forward to the updates and you never disappoint!!! Can't wait to read more...I go back ad re-read from the begining every so often, this is an amazing story!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
Loving this story as much as the first word I read in book one...I love to these updates...It just makes my week!!! Can't WAIT for DATE NIGHT!!!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128
Oh My Lord....I didn't know if I'd live through another Columbia experience...whew...thanks for letting his stay home this time...for now...I can't wait for Tommy's birthday and to read about him with all his presents and all the attention!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
Awesome chapter...loving this story...it's what I look forward to every week! Please keep it going, I just can't imagine your Greys not being in my life! Thanks for updating. I just love your Christian and Ana!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124
I love Christian talking about both his sons! Precious! Love the story!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
Hilarious! Your story is perfect as always!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
I smiled the entire way through this chapter...I LOVE this story... Please don't ever stop writing!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
That was TOO FUNNY!!! Please don't let Ana get in trouble!!! Or be late for entertaining...with all that anniversary drama I don't think I could take another bit of Christian being mad at her drama!!! But oh I see trouble with Tommy...hmm...visions of his mama no where to be found...or constantly calling for money...Can't wait to find out!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Oh what a story...to go "full circle" I hope you will find a way for Christian to meet his grandmother and somehow bury the past once and for all! .... and not KILL Ana for what she has done in meeting Mrs. Douglas!!!
Author's Response:
He won't kill her but she may wish he had.
thanks.
E.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134
oh Lord...Please don't let this be another Columbia experience! I can see Christian going to Togo to negotiate with the pirates and being on the news and Ana finding out he is there...oh no....Ana said if he went to Togo she and the kids would not be at home when he got back...I sure hope there is no trouble erupting in paradise...Love the story!!!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Awesome story and I can't wait for the updates! You keep my heart pounding and I trust you to always work things out! Never disappointed!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
The best story...I am so glad you have kept it going!
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm trying.
E.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I knew it was chest pain/heart attack coming but have mercy during set..Please let Taylor or Sawyer hear her scream and not poor Teddy have to come get his mommy out of the cuffs!!! Have mercy, please update soon!!!
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. I enjoyed the update on the D/s relationship...I never felt Ana was week and gave in to Christian all the time...I read it as a healthy loving, fulfilling sex life, you have never written that she is forced to do anything that I recall. I hope you keep this going for a long time...looking forward to the reveal about Christian's past and hope it does not rock his world and their relationship in too much of a negative way...on pins and needles till that is resolved or at least Ana tells him and we get his reaction!!! Your story and one other FF are my very fav's and I just look forward so much to reading the updates...Thanks for keeping the story alive!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Not at all how I expected that to happen...wow...you have me scared to death...I hope "Full Circle" does not mean all the way back to the begining...cold and dark and alone...I love all the frequent updates...I hope we get through this grandma issue and back to C&A and alls well with the family ASAP!!! My heart is breaking...But I LOVE the story!!!
Author's Response:
I found it! Just keep in mind that this story is a happy place.
E.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
...pretty please...I am dying here...Ana is groveling...she has realized the error of her ways...I am trusting you as usual and I know this is gonna work out and is gonna be good...I jsut don't know if my heart can take it!!! I am not a patient person Ms. Nuwriter!!! (Just kidding! You know I love this story!!!)
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Oh my goodness I am sobbing outloud and everyone around me wants to know wht is wrong with me...Thank you so much for this wonderful Saturrday Anniversary gift. While waiting I had gone back to the begining to read...On my Lord I love this story! Thank you a million times for this update...I know this is not over but gosh has a weight been lifted off our shoulders..whew...I can breathe again!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Ah...back to the land of happiness and what a sweet reunion...talk about Christian coming around...WOW!!! Awesome chapter and awesome way to wrap up the drama of finding out about grandma! Loved it! Take a deep breath, I'm sure you'll get an idea about where to go from here...The kiddies have to come home from Gials to daddy being home...is grandma gonna meet the kiddies...Ana has her new job...What are Grace and Carrick going to say about grandma...they need to have a long sit down and here the story from Christian and see the pics...then put it to rest...although you did leave the door open for Christian to go in search of his birth father's family...hmmm, bet Welch has already done that research!!! Where ever you go with this story I am gonna follow!!!
Author's Response:
Kinda know where it's going and glad you'll be there.
E.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Love the family time! Gotta love those kids!!! I love this story! So glad the anniversay went so well!
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Wow...after all the tense drama of the grandma and anniversary that was a welcome chapter full of laughter and smiles! I am so exicted every time I see an update on this story and I am never disappointed! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Thanks again for another amazing chapter!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
That was the sweetest chapter...I love this story..I love your C&A...I see love Tommy and hope Christian and Ana save him live Carrick and Grace saved Christian....please!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY.!!!! I am get so excited when I see your updates! Almost forgot about the little fella...here we go...his story has played out a million ways in my mind...can't ait to see what REALLY happens!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Full Circle...Christian is really going to come full circle...never to compare a child to a dog but I don't see this little boy ever leaving...and if he does temporarily I feel like he'll be a Grey before it's over with..WOW, what an amazing book you have going here. I love this story! Thanks for keeping it going!
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
WHat...are you kdding? POSSIBLY a sad chapter...A heart wreching chapter and I loved it! You can really get in touch with their emotions and I feel so connected to the story. THat was amazing...I cant' wait for more...I have lost a child and i know Sam can't be replaced but I so hope Tommy can be a Grey one day...he didn't knw what a dad was....not that broke my heart! LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please keep it going...you have such a way with words.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145
Awesome as always...I feel the baby girl slipping through our fingers but it feels okay if it happens now...I absolutely love this story and anxiously await the updates...thanks for the time and effort you put into this story! I LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
The sweetest thiing in the world...I burst into tears when poor little Tommy gave Ana his Jimmy bear for her birthday! Precious! Love the story! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
I am so sorry to write the same review over and over and over again... I love this story; I live for these updates; I appreciate so much your faithfulness to keep the story going. i have started so many other stories and the writer's just stop; leave you hangiing, no explanations. I have re-read this one several times and it just keeps getting better. I LOVE THIS STORY...sorry, I can't stop saying that. Please keep the story going...you sure are adding a bright shiny place to my sometimes very stressful days. Can't wait to see how this Tommy situation works out...trusting you to take care of everyone...iincluding all of us who have fallen in love with him. When he asked Christian to play for him I lost it...a connection Christian shares with his new "son" that he does not share with Teddy or Grace....LOVE IT!!! Okay, I'll stop rambling now...
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
I hope you are in thiis for the long haul...I just have to watch Tommy grown up with Christian as his father and the bonb they have. I can't even imagine how all our hearts will break if Tommy does not stay with them! LOVE. THIS. STORY! Your story is amazing and I just want to say thanks for your faithful updates and keeping it going! It's a joy to read! Thank you!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127
Oh how you can make me have a sinking feeling in my stomach...why would Christian need to stay up all night...waiting for more...at least Ana is with him...or at least she left with him...Love the story..it's absolutely the best!
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
LOVE. THIS. STORY!!! I re-read the your entire 3 books a few weeks ago...amazing! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
Oh. my, goodnes!!!! Awesome!!! I knew that card going in the desk drawer was going to bring BIG TROUBLE and I thought the John conversation might have been about Christian knowing all about the author and his SWEET SUITE...I just LOVE CONTROLLING Christian! I just LOVE your story...you threw out so my new things in this chapter...this is gonna be a long night, then the morning with the author, and the new housekeeper person and the adoption attorney meeting and the Friday night date and then daddy's wedding...AND won't Tommy have a brithday coming up in October??? Just don't you go get any funny idea's about his mama showing up on his birthday or anything crazy like that! The Halloween, Thanksgiving and Christmas!!! Have I told you lately that I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!! Thanks for the awesome update!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
OH. MY GOODNESS. How could you leave us hanging like that? Please oh please oh PLEASE not another Amy whatever her name was...I just don't think I can take it. I feel sick...Ana was so honest about the flowers and the card and stuff...Holding my breath till next time...
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
OH. MY. GOODNESS!!!!! First...what an awesome Wednesday surprise!!! Thank yo so much for not making us wait!!! I was crying so hard in the middle of the chapter when Gail said they went to Escala and Ana decided to go...THANK YOU so much for keeping Christian faithful! I can't wait to read more. I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. I'm sorry, you just can't ever end it until they are old and grey (no pun intended!!!)
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111
Awe!!! I love their change of "taste"!!! Love the story...please, please, please keep it going!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112
Mia?!?!?!? OH NO!!!!! Can't wait...hurry...please!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113
WOW...didn't see that one coming...amazing story, amazing update...can't wait to ready more...
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114
Oh how I love a good cry...and that is just what I ad ready this update...love the story...LOVE.THIS.STORY.!!!!! Can't wait for the update!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116
Ah....My weekly fix...Finding out what is happenings with the Greys' and Teddy, Grace and Tommy. I love this story...thank's so much for keeping it going!!!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120
Another awesome day at Grey Manor...Love the family...love the story...alway excited when I see your updates! Happy New Year! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121
Thanks for the Wednesday update! Happy New Year! Tommy's adoption final...looking forward to that and the rest of clubbing!
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122
I was getting a little paniced in the middle when Christian was feeling all guilty...what's up with that...he's usually not guilty unless he's up to something then I got all worried that something might be wrong with him and then OMG Kate walks out of the bathroom....Okay, forget worrying about why CG is feeling guilty...THAT was PRICELESS!!!! Awesome as usual...can't wait to read more!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123
WHAT??? THE END??? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my God NURWRITER...what will I do when there is no more FULL CIRCLE??? I HOPE and PRAY that you have another story in the amazing mind of yours because I think I will just die if you don't!!! Okay...now back to the story...I thought life was way too quiet...please let CG's powerful attorney's make her sign over her parental rights!
Now back to PLEASE write something else for us when this is done...Pretty please?
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125
I'll never be able to look at a grape the same again!!!!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126
I burst into tears when I read the title and sobbed all the way through. This story is my very very favority most amazing, steady, true to life fanfiction I have ever read. I'm not sure when I startedd following but I feel like I am their neighbors, or best friends living every moment of their lives with them. From the "cheat" and shooting at the beginning, to Christians revelation of his true relationship with Elena, to Columbia, to the loss of baby Sam, to the anniversary Christian almost missed and all the other amazing events and now to Tommy...I feel like this story is part of MY LIFE! I am so so thankful for the time and effort you have put in to writing and updating faithfully every week. I can't imagine this ever ending...I hope you plan to keep it going and going and going!!! Thanks again for the amazing adoption of Tommy!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130
WOW!...Had to go from a hot mess with CG sexpertese to a crying mess as soon as Tommy said "Piderman". OMG I love this story and look forward to the updates so much. I feel like these people are my family and I just don't know what I'd do without them. AMAZING WRITING, you get my emotions everytime! Can't wait for the rest of the party!!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133
Poor little Tommy :-( ... that was just precious!!! Love the story, always have, always will, it's my favortie!
Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86203
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
so glad I found your story...it's awesome...I'll read all the chapters you want to write!!!
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Oh, Daddy Cullen is not going to like it; he's going to be jealous and mean and maybe even treat Bella like a little gold diggy hussy...and then Carlisle is gonna slap him up side his head!!! Love your story, can't wait to find out how things go in the restaurant. I have to say I'm surprised Carlisle is putting on such a show for his father who has been so mean to him. Wonder how long they'll stay at the restaurant??? Hmm...Can't wait to find out!!! Next update soon please!
Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!