I love your style of writing. However, the only thing that I did find a little difficult was the historical differences in your story from the original. Ana tells Christian in the original FSOG that the Portland bar is her first time being drunk. She is referenced to have had "too much to drink" on several occasions after that throughout the trilogy. I found the explanation of this Carter Jenkins or whatever to be just too contrary to the original series and therefore not as believable.  Other than that, I've really enjoyed everything I've read. As I said on FF to one of your FSOG stories, you are one of my favorite authors and I really find your Christian to be more believable than the original. The original FSOG Christian is way too formal and uses language that is much too stuffy for a typical American, even one that was educated at Harvard. I think the writing style really shows that E.L. James is british and not american. I really like your more Americanized Christian who speaks like the average person.