Reviews by SFuentes
Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: SFuentes Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

Grabbed me right from the beginning.  Really like the reconciliation with Sawyer.  That is one thing Mrs. James was lacking in the original story. 

Summary:

This is my sequel to my first 50 Shades story (I am so cool, I make my own sequels).... The kids are 6 and 4. Ana is 28 and Christian is 34. This story contains characters from my first story. The original was moved from Fanfiction.net

This is rated NC-17 for language and sexual content


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29860 Read Count: 44098
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: SFuentes Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue: The Big 4-0

Sad that it's done.  I really enjoyed your stories.  Please consider writing again.

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: SFuentes Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!  I was surprised Christian didn't respond to Teddy's eye rolling.  But I loved "You guys need to get a hobby". Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

I guess Ana's eye rolling is the only one that affects him. Next on the way.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

E.

Reviewer: SFuentes Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awwww!  I love the "maternity car".  Keep them coming.  Sooners rather than laters. ; )



Author's Response:

Everybody needs a $180,000 car to use while they are pregnant. Doesn't everybody have one?

Thanks for leaving a review.

E.