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Bio:
I am creating this user profile to highlight my comments on the Making of the MASTERpiece contest.
I am calling myself The Avid Reader, because I love to read and I love to read Romantica. If it is a good love story with a strong male Hero...and there is a good HEA.. count me in. (Throw in a dog or a cute puppy and you have me for life)
Let the Judging begin.
Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?
Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?
Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - My Boys
That was sweet... I really love Sam and Olis relationship. It struck me as funny how he mentioned changing his name...they are going to have a lot to talk about...ten years is a very long time.. And girlfriends...you know he has had girlfriends...that could be sticky...especially if they knew the meaning of the necklace.
Good chapter...you gave us more insight into their characters and why they go about what they are doing. ... I now dub her.. Princess potty mouth. Lol.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - A Body's Obsession
Woooo. Because this happened so fast, alcohol was involved, and they exploded so quickly...I have a bad feeling about tomorrow morning...lol. One or both of them is going to pull away. The fantasy is one thing...I worry what tomorrow will bring.
But that's what makes a great romance...conflict. Don't make this too easy on either of them. Yes, it's been ten years...but they really aren't the same people no matter how hard the try to be