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What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57747
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
ah…how wonderful to have a honeymoon where your husband takes you the the city you’ve always dreamed about going and have him to share it with and then take you to the most romantic cities…first class all the way…*sigh*
one of the reasons why taylor is so great at what he does is he has an incredible talent of reading people. he knows christian very well and when he was talking about how much christian loves ana, he absolutely knows and could even guarantee that christian found his light and happiness in ana and won’t be stupid to hurt her. jason saw how christian felt when and left him.
i laughed when jason indicated that ana was actually running the show…ana just didn’t realize it. i agree! with that in mind, this is why i believe that christian and ana would stay in love and married.
love this chapter. JT was at his best…witty and funny! love love love jason taylor! well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Skin. Ana will realise she's in charge... eventually. Lovin' the love : ) jx
My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant
My story has language throughout and some sexual content.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Worst Week Ever
hilarous chapter. looove it. ROTFL
Fifty Shades...Clarity
Book II
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.
"I look into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children. He tried to lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust." Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does? This is Book II.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity
i love your version of Christian! more please...asap. thanks
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
omg. the bitch troll is dilusional! next chapter...please.like tomorrow...pretty please.
thanks.
Author's Response:
A real sickie.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
dammmn...when are christian and ana going to have some peace and normalcy? just as soon as they think their life is about to be perfect, bam! shit happens!!! another great chapter! YOU ROCK! next. chapter. please. soon! thanks!
Author's Response:
Hopefully, some peace soon.
E.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
i love that man Christian! ana and christian's love story is one of my FS favorite stories. well done nuwriter! can't wait for the next FS saga.
Author's Response:
I love that man too. I always wish for him to be real, but that wouldn't do me any good either.
Thanks for following.
e.
Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Book III
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*
Thank You.
This story continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and accepting his past have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger? This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
the first time christian and ana went soaring in georgia was the first time was the first time i saw christian acted his age, it was how christian would have been had not for his childhood trauma and the bitch troll's evil influence. i'm really happy that you brought this back...christian and ana reliving one of their happiest and best moments, before the children came along. looking forward to ana's birthday celebration with the family.
love, love, love your story!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
precious grace strikes again...always so curious and so adorable.
poor tommy. i hope he learns his lesson.
looove the lemons. they really are perfect for each other. i've always known from the very beginning that ana's always into the kinky fuckery...gentle or rough. i love this story and it's definitely one of my favorites!
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
teddy and grace are so blessed. fiction or not, some kids are lucky to have both parents who would love their children so much and fortunate enough to provide the emotional and financial support. in tommy's case, he only has a parent to provide what little love his mom could give him and sadly, whatever money she could get, she'd choose to spend it to get her fix. somehow, there might still some hope for her. she's lucky that ana and christian were able to get to her before something happens to her. too bad ella and christian didn't meet grace and carrick beforehand. but sometimes life is a bitch...and then you die! on the other hand, maybe it was for the best. grace found chrisitian and she and carrick adopted him and love him as their own. if only christian was able to forgive his mom early on, then perhaps he wouldn't have those issues. you are a genius storyteller and a fantastic storyteller.
i love the convo during the family dinner. it appears that tommy is already a part of the family and as much as i don't want anything bad to happen with lorna, i want tommy to say with the grey permanently. i wonder what the secret is between father and son!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
the dinner convo was hilarious! i think christian is grooming grace to take over the grey empire! teddy and his "pendis"!...glad christian was able to square that away!
your ana and christian are one of my favorites. they have their ups and downs but when things are great between them they're marvelous!. i love how christian spoils ana and makes time for her and listens to her. i hope ana brings lorna and tommy back to seattle. this chapter is beautifully written and made me laugh quite a lot!
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
i want tommy to stay with the greys. someone like lorna and with what she had done with tommy and herself and how she treated her own son...she doesn't deserve him...tommy couldn't and shouldn't go back to that shitty life with his mom again.
christian and ana fell in love that day she fell in his office and the nanosecond he helped her up...they touched...and gazed into each other's eyes...it was their destiny...it was fate!
the gift was a loving and sweet gesture but all unnecessary...because they both know that they're equal...but it was a nice gift though!
i wonder if lorna contacted her pimp/boyfriend from sacramento...she's hopeless and tommy's better off with the greys!
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
delicious lemons! great job!
the last part of the chapter with teddy in bed with christian and ana was hilarious that i was spitting my drink out laughing!
i truly love your stories! well done!
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
this was such an emotinal chapter!
the reunion between tommy and lorna started as heartwarming, touching and sweet but then when lorna was saying goodbye to her son and tommy not wanting to let go and became hysterical, i just lost it. it was clear that lorna loved her son but at the same time she still had some inner demons that must be battled and controlled. i was so heartbroken for mother and son. and at the same time i couldn't help but wonder how christian was really handling the scenario.
the car ride made it even worse for me (by this time i couldn't even breath and felt i had a lump in my throat), as christian got out of the car, pacing back and forth, deep-breathing, angry...the kind of anger which could teach him what he needed, what he believed, what he valued and what was missing in his life.
this chapter was poignant...the writing was stellar...and you're one brilliant writer!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
they will work it out.
they will work it out.
they will work it out.
that's my first mantra...and here's the next one:
sawyer will be rehired.
sawyer will be rehired.
sawyer will be rehired.
i think christian took the note and pictures with him to meet with mrs. douglas. i hope he does meet with her and listen to her while she tells him about ella and his biological father.
ana should have told christian that she and the kids would be going to visit carla. but then she couldn't because of her work. and this is one of the reasons i wish she'd just done back to work at grey publishing...where she could just take off. but she probably would not want to make things any worse between them. i always believe that ana is the stronger and the more mature one. :)
well done nuwriter!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
my favorite chapters are the ones that have some yummy lemons, christian and ana having conversations about almost anything as long as they're being playful, family, some gossips (not that christian does, but as a woman, ana sharing some tidbits with christian, is something most women do), spending time with family, family dinners, a touch of drama, and whenever little grace has something to say about anything and everything...i do love her (i know she's fiction...but when i'm having my grey moments, she's quite real to me! lol).
i would award christian grey are father of the year! would you be writing more christian and tommy moments? i would love more.
i love ana doing her share pre/during/post intimate moments with christian! i see them enjoying their sexcapades even in their 90's!
looking forward for another brilliant chapter! xo
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
grace and her tiara...precious!
chrisitian in a tiara...priceless!
love that the greys + tommy + Jack were enjoying their pool. poor grace...still so cute while pouting and in tears when christian gave her a time out! he's a great dad and glad that he didn't give in to the princess. i also liked ana and tommy moment at the pool.
i'm surprised that christian wasn't as pissed when the helicopters were hovering over their backyard with the loud noise and bright lights could have waken up the kids...i guess post coital relaxed him quite a bit!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
what a lovely chapter. i loooove all your christian and ana stories. please keep the grey's romance coming. thank you.
Author's Response:
Working on it diligently. More on the way.
Thanks.
e.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
such an emotional chapter. stories about children who have been gone through any type of abuse affect me like no other. children are gifts and precious. i hope that christian would reconsider especially he was once like tommy. grace, my favorite, was so sweet to tommy and for someone who's tiny, she sure has a big heart! are we going to see a backstory on tommy?
it was an brilliant chapter...heavyhearted but sweet at the same time. well done.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
grace and teddy are so adorable...as always! iom really glad they've been making appearances in every chapter.
"Dad you must have worked hard today. You look tired." Teddy observes.
"Yes, son. I guess you could say I've had a long, hard day."
that was hilarious!!!
ana and tommy's convo was so heartbreaking. i admire tommy for opening up to ana. what a brave boy. i really hope he gets to stay with the greys permanently. i think teddy will do better with him as time goes by and i think christian will too. sweet little grace...i'm not worried about her. she's just like her mom except when she drops the f bomb, that's what she gets from her dad!
i knew that paul and susannah weren't going to last. i do believe that whatever deal she made with elena will now have to do with christian. these ex-subs just don't seem to want to go away!
i don't trust this terry...i hope she doesn't find out about them taking care of lorna and tommy. i see him as a jack hyde's evil twin who might bring trouble to christian and ana.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
i truly enjoyed this chapter! love the christian being romantic by sextexing ana and sending her flowers just because, the sex marathon, the banter, the name calling: ana as the shit stirrer and christian, what else, as the dick, and the promise of some ass fucking!
christian making fun of ana by telling her to teach tommy how to pee correctly and reminding her what not tell the kid...what she told ted about his penis is going to fall off and grow back later!
playful christian and ana...it's epic!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
snoring christian was funny...poor ana! i have a client who divorced her husband because he snored like a freight train and wouldn't do anything about it! lol
clearly, the husband was not the christian grey!!!
i certainly hope that virginia would live with them. she's lost so much precious time with christian and i think with what little time she may have left, this would be a perfect opportunity for her to continue creating beautiful moments with her dear family. i love ana, her heart is just so pure and beautiful and she definitely transferred some of that energy to her dear husband.
poor sweet teddy! it was bad enough that he was in a lot of pain from his injury but to be afraid that his dad would be mad at him from breaking his arm...i hope christian doesn't go thermonuclear on teddy and/or gale! ;)
brilliant as usual!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
"So you're Mrs. Grey?" mancuso asked ana...what's that supposed to mean...not another bitch! hmph! i don't like her already. she better remember she's just an employee of christian and ana grey!
love the breakfast convo with christian, ana and tommy. tommy is such a sweet and smart for his age kid! and happy to hear ana reminded christian to bring the sunscreen when they go sailing!!! i'm a big pusher of sun protection! lol
great chapter as usual!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
i hope lorna makes the right decision. poor tommy...he's not only sick but seems he's been physically abused.
i'm glad that ana listens to christian when it comes to her safety. she's sensible enough that they're quite high profile and will always be a target for pretty much anything. that's one the reasons i love your ana (some versions of ana are just annoying because she always seems to put herself and her family in danger...even E.L. James's Ana). i also like that taylor is a softie and she and ana have a really great relationship...like he's family to her. thank you for posting soon!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
your grey family sounds and looks like any normal family. It's so wonderful to see how they interact with each other...so real..so genuine. i love so much hoe christian and ana treat tommy like he's one of them. he fits in and really belongs to them. i hope he gets to stay permanentlhy.
gramma ginia is such an adorable grandma. i felt sadness when teddy mentioned about tommy's mom being on drugs and unable to care for him. it reminds me of ella and christian and i'm sure virginia, ana, and christian had the same emotion but christian probably had other feelings about it.
oh the little greys are just so precious. and my favorite, grace, she always makes me smile whenever i read. she always brings joy in my heart! thank you edie for your beautiful story and superb writing!
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
i love these lines...so powerful and full of emotions.
"Everything in my life brought me to you. I wouldn't trade you for anything or anyone. Not even her."
"It's nothing I haven't asked myself a thousand times. And the answer is always the same. You and the kids mean more to me than anything I gave up in my past. Everything I've been through, every path I've chosen, every decision I've ever made was worth it."
"Mrs. Grey, for a man who had complete control over aspect of his life, I lost all of it the day I met you and I've never been able to get it back. And I wouldn't change a thing."
when ana was reading lorna's letter and when she found the necklace she wore when she lost sam with the bloodstain intact reminding him of that horrible tragic night, i felt lumps in my throat and it made me reach for tissue finding out the box was empty! had to run to another room to get one, my men were asking what was wrong and too embarrassed to tell them the truth so i said allergies.
your story is beautiful...this chapter is emotionally intense...your writing is perfect!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
sexxxxxy!!!
christian and ana genuinely love each other so much they always have hot, luscious, steamy, titillating sex all the time wherever they are! *sighing* *fanning*
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
My body shakes as Christian chuckles. “I do love that kid. How did we end up with him?”
“You remember how. You kept making deposits until we ended up with a little savings account,” I smile at him.
BRILLIANT!...LOL!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
this is exactly how i see christian and ana post E.L. James' FSOG. their bond is stronger than ever. their relationship continues to grow...it just gets better and better. i love them being playful with one another.
i've always felt that ana could always match christian pound by pound when it comes to sex. she loves the kinky stuff, vanilla, and she's just one insatiable woman...just how christian wants her. the lemons are amazingly delicious...love ana's moment in the the tub.
brilliant story and writing. love the dialogues between CG and AG!
thank you for sharing your story and talent!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
christian's note to ana was so sweet and romantic. every man should always do that to his wife or girlfriend!
grace, my favorite, was so cute and bossy! tommy was learning so much while he was with the greys, especially the feeling of being loved and cared for. i hope he gets to stay with them on a permanent basis.
what happened with christian, taylor and teddy? i hope nothing bad and welch would be able to track them down. ana should also get in touch with carrick and elliott and let them know about the situation.
please update soon...the suspense is making me eat and drink more than usual! LOL
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
i see ana's point and also see christian's point.
i'm just glad that ana didn't bring up amy patterson during the confrontation...otherwise it would have made things a lot worse.
it was smart of ana to talk to flynn.
i'm hoping when he comes back from his trip, christian gains a different perception of his biological parents, a positive one.
my favorite scene is the kids and jacko sleeping in ana's bed.
brilliant chapter.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
another sexy, sexy chapter. they really belong to each other!
Author's Response:
Yes they do.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
yeah! what in the world happened????
princess grace in her tiara...picturing her in my head...precious!
tommy saying "cwisten home" while patting christian home and christian smiling and putting his arm around his shoulders pulling him over to him...was one of the sweetest and heartwarming moments between the big man and the little man.
brilliant chapter!
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
ahhh...it's nice to be christian and ana grey...actually it's fanfuckingtastic to be christian and ana grey!
what a lovely chapter! until next chapter!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
VAMPIRE SEX...what else!
what a great, hilarious, quite memorable chapter!. the greys never let us down when it comes to their sexcapades!
ana's got nothing to be embarassed about. there's nothing wrong with sexy, naughthy, playful, wicked, dirty, nasty, libidinous sex, especially when it's with your husband!
thank god for taylor and gail!
Author's Response:
Especially when your husband is Cristian Grey!
thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
i just want to say that christian grey will never be jealous or possessive or stalkerish enough for me. he's perfect and ana loves him the way he is. kate may never get it but deep inside, i think she wishes elliott would have some christian grey in him.
christian paying for kate and ana's lunch was so christian-grey and ana knew well enough that she didn't even have to double check with their server!
the quickie in the restroom was tittilating...jealous christian was hot. christian stopping by ana and kates's table to say goodbye and give his wife a kiss was so sweet and apologizing to kate showed was maturity and well...kinda sexy!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
oh s***! witch elena is dead...suzie and leila will takeover!? watch out christian, ana, and company! poor paul (well, i hope he's not part of the suzanne and leila scheme!).
i love ana and the fact that she wants to do something with her career and all but i can't help it, sometimes she annoys the heck out of me. a lot of times, her troubles could have been avoided if she'd only listen to christian. but i still and will always love christian and ana together. i love love love your version of christian. oh, well you gotta have some dramas (which you do amazingly well) to change the pace but i mostly enjoy playful, romantic, sexy, naughty, sweet, funny, crazy, loving christian-ana-ana stories. your story is quite brilliant and your wtiting skills are incredible. thank you for sharing your wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Now you know how hard headed Ana can be. All it does is infuriate Christian. They have matured, but still are basically the same old Christian and Ana. I prefer the relationship story as well, but some people like a little drama to keep it interesting. The Grey's will always have drama in their lives. They can't help it.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
wow...wow...wow!!!
absof******lutely sexy, hot, lascivious make-up sex!
looks like suzie and leila have moved on and found their soulmates! i wonder how curious paul is going to be about his finace's past relationship with christian.
while the greys are in sacramento, will ana tell him about her meeting with his grandmother? will ana run into lorna and little tommy again? hmmm, so many questions...more revelations to come?!
brilliant chapter! you are incredible!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
these two are just perfect together but i can't help it, suzie is up to something...i hope not.
i wonder if christian will get to meet lorna and little tommy...and how about mrs. douglas? will ana tell him about her meeting with her? i certainly hope so.
and dear sweet grace, i was laughing when christian was telling ana what happened and what she was doing, "...painting her face with those big brushes and talking to herself. That girl does enjoy looking in a mirror." she's such a girlie girl! :)
i'm posting the same review on fanfiction but i forgot to log in. i'm curious if your chapter here is the same exact one you post on FF? LMK please. thanks.
HAPPY HOLIDAYS! </:)=<
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
thank you so much for writing this beautiful chapter about my favorite couple! it was a lovely christmas present! :D
grace once again was hilarious! dropping the F bomb, making ana's missing ring part of her collection along with the dried french fry and crayola, playing with her mom's makeup, and having jacko play tea party with her...she's sooo adorable! (you see, i have two boys and never had the chance to play girlie stuff and i'm in the beauty business!) ha ha!
the greys trying to be normal by going to the movies...not quite possible as these two are always horny no matter where they're at!
ana was very smart to have christian return the package to the sender. they don't need any leila reminder. well done ana!
i agree with you 1000%! ana is a very strong woman. they both know what each other's wants and needs. the love and support they give to one another make them perfect for each other. the way you write about these two, i can't see christian without ana and vice versa!
happy holidays!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
merry christmas!
looove the greys! what a beautiful story!....reading this while eating and drinking...perfect combo!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
i follow a lot of FSOG fanfics and yours is one of my favorites. i find myself smiling, laughing and feeling happy when i read the adventures and sexcapades of christian and ana. i love your version of the greys and company. i love how your story and the way you write the characters make me feel when i get into my grey moment! thank you for sharing your incredible talent! i like some dramas and angsts but i love happy, funny, and LOL moments more! have an amazing 2013! :D
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
ahhh... another beautiful chapter. it's so wonderful to read your christian and ana. teddy asking them how they met was adorable. grace telling christian he was was eating jacko's cookies and everone laughing at him was priceless. jacko is a great addition to the grey family. so what are hey going to do about the ray and myra situation. but hey if it makes ray happy, they should just let them be. :) love the lemons...i'm so in love with this family!
thank you for this brilliant story and have a great 2013!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
uh oh...christian's going to find out about ana's meeting with mrs. douglas! dun dun dun!
so glad ray finally found someone. he and myra are going to be happy!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
wow! this can't be happening. what's going on with christian?
when christian had his panic attacks and had to be hospitalized was the reason she had to meet with mrs. douglas to find out more about christian's family's medical background but instead, she got sidetracked by mrs. douglas' revelations about ella and christian's biological father. i think christian overreacted. he needs to hear the truth. i hope he realizes that his trust issues especially when it comes to ana have been exaggerated. afterall, he doesn't have a perfect record either. so christian, get over it!
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
i feel bad for ana. christian can't miss their anniversary. it's going to break her hear and teddy and phoebe.
most of the time i find kate quite annoying but in this chapter, i feel that ana is very blessed to have someone like kate. she was amazingly supportive and sweet to her. she knows exactly how to treat ana and knows the right thing to say. #teamkate
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
oh thank f***! he didn't break his promise to her. everything is good and about to get better. nothing can ever stop him from not being with his wife on their anniversary. can't wait for the lemons! please, please post soon!
that was a beautiful ending for such an emotional chapter.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
christian and ana playing games reminded me of them being playful while they were in aspen. however, i like yours better nuwriter...much better! i was laughing so hard...so hard that i fell off my chair...my sister was wondering what happened!
looove the lemons! brilliant chapter!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
i'm glad ana decided to treat herself...no need to feel guilty. she deserves it. afterall, christian makes what?...over a hundred grand an hour?...i think. what she spent was nothing.
glad that lorna decided to call ana. poor tommy is in the hospital and ana is ana...she's got a mega heart and always thinks of others...just like grace. i have a feeling lorna and tommy will find their way to seattle and good things are coming their way...courtesy of christian and ana gray?!
well done nuwriter.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
love this christian and ana. they're perfect together!
love adorable mini-christian teddy and handful and smart grace!
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
"My stiff dick has an outlet. And a beautiful one that I love very much." He traces his finger down my cheek. "Teddy will have more hormones than you can imagine and they'll drive him crazy. I just want him to be prepared and understand how to handle them. I wasn't and I went off the tracks."
i love this man!. he's such a wonderful husband, lover, and father! your christian and ana are just perfect for each other. the fit together! this is why your are on my favorite list of fifty shades FF stories. thank you for doing an outstanding job!
sounds like harold and maggie's sons are jealous of christian grey! what's going to happen at the signing of the contracts? hmmm...
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
lovely chapter! the greys are so much fun and full of love!
lorna made the right decision. but will she stick to it and change for the better for her son's sake?i can't wait for the next chapter!
well done!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
what a fabulous chapter! it's so wonderful to read your story, specially after reading some cheating stories. i'd say yours is one of may favorites...gotta have my fix, you know!!!
i love that christian wanted ana to be next to him during the contract signing. they are perfect together and christian grey only does perfect...whether it's his business or his relationship. i have so much more love and respect for christian when he offered to add ana's name in their business and how she owns half regardless. i would want to know too just like ana wanted to know...just to have a better understanding of what it would mean in case something happens.
it was quite generous of christian to give 2.5% ownership to ros which i feel she rightfully deserves. so how much is christian grey worth at the present time? just curious.
brilliant chapter!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
love love love the lemon!
enjoyed the convo about ana's sixty-year-old ass-to-be.
so jealous when ana got a foot massage and then some from our darling christian!
can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder if something happened to tommy's mom and if ana will be going back to sacramento to perhaps pick up little tommy? if so, i hope he brings grace and ted with her and christian.
another brilliant chapter, as usual!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
i enjoyed this sweet and tender loving moments between christian and ana. sexy and yummy lemons. well done.
love overprotective christian...andi believe christian can and will buy any future beivers who comes along grace's way! ha ha
so happy that lorna showed up and is willing to move tommy and herself to seattle. she should feel very lucky to have chrisitian and ana in their lives and the least she could do is commit herself in straightening her life for tommy's sake.
i love each and every story you write. thank you for sharing your wonderful gift!
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
i love this chapter even though it made me cry. grace my dear dear grace...she is si precious. she makes me smile, laugh whenever she makes those little comments. i hope teddy doesn't continue to behave the way he did when tommy called christian dad...but i guess kids will always be kids. i have a sweet spot for little tommy...you just want to hold him and love him and protect him. ana and christian's conversation about sam was heartbreaking. i'm glad they have each other during times when they miss their sweet sam. it was a beautiful chapter and it touched my heart!
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
i hope lorna stays on the path of wellness of her sake and tommy's. she's very lucky to have any by her side and tommy under the grey's care.
helen mancuso should have shut her mouth and stay in business mode. will christian fire her after ana tells him the story?
like what i have said before, the original christian grey and your christian grey "don't stray." the moment he met ana, christian knew that she belonged to him and he to her! he'd experienced life without ana and he made sure that he would not lose her ever again.
i'm glad you're keeping them together...being in love, playful, having oodles of sex, enjoying some kinky fuckery, and being great parents to teddy and grace.
love love love your brilliant trilogy!
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
HOT....mind-blowing-shattering-twisting-twisting lemons!
they're perfect sex partners and lovers. christian grey has no reason to stray...ana grey is there to stay!
magnificent chapter nuwriter! you always aim to please!
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
oh no! someone passed away?!?!
oh nuwriter! you and your twists! when ted spoke up about the house, i knew it was the bitch troll's house. i do hope nobody else finds out! christian buying his own house...i assume it was the house elena left for christian in her will. oh well, another thing for christian and ana to talk about and just laugh about it afterwards.
carla really needs to change her ways. she's lucky ana's very patient with her. glad to know jose showed up. christian will never change, i guess when it comes to jose!
ana's one very lucky girl! after all these years, christian is still very much in love with her. he continues to do things to make ana so happy and feel incredibly special!
yup, i agree with kate, never a dull moment with ana and christian. i also agree with christian, ana seems to have a tendency to stir things up. but i believe it's one the things christian loves about her.
brilliant chapter!
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
christian giving the same love he received from grace and carrick to tommy...a sweet and tender moment between christian and tommy...
a beautiful story about the life and love of two beautiful people and the people in their lives.
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
"Him didn't comed to see if I was okay." She pouts.
"Well, doggies, don't usually do that, but I'm sure he's sorry about it."
grace is just so adorable...love her! she's like my fictionalized daughter (i'm blessed with 2 boys).
tommy was just the sweetest boy giving grace a present for tripping and getting hurt. he was so thoughtful and compassionate. i think he had a passion and talent for music...i think he's going to be a natural.
love the lemons. christian and ana truly love each other and there will nobody else for them but each other.
thank you!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
what a lovely chapter! i love it!
the social worker was ogling christian...damn i'd probably lunge at him and kiss him...and then they'd blackmail me and i'd tell them oaky but one more time and the it's done deal!!! lol
looking forward to christian and ana's NY trip and virginia's visit!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
"I kiss Teddy and Grace and Tommy. Christian does the same only he picks Tommy up and whispers something in his ear and then gives him a kiss on his cheek before setting him back on the floor."
i wonder what christian whispered in tommy's ear? i love that christian was as affectionate with tommy as same as teddy and grace!
""I didn't notice that your stomach was bothering you. I haven't asked about your scans lately. I'm not taking care of you like I should." I search his gray eyes that are locked with mine. "I've been so busy with my job and Tommy. I haven't paid enough attention to you. I'm going to change that. .....and I'm starting today with this trip. You're my priority Christian and I intend to make you feel that way." Leaning in I brush my lips across his and then press them against his mouth as his tongue begs entrance........"
i hope it's nothing serious with christian's stomach issue. with three kids and jack to take care of, i would give up my job if i were ana. she could always go back when the kids are older.
love the chapter and looking forward for the lemons!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
this is probably my most favorite chapter so far!
what christian and ana said to each other post-coitus were the most beautiful and honest declaration of their love! it was very touching and every word, every phrase, every sentence was quite moving...i actually felt their emotions, their love...so beautifully written nuwriter!
christian and tommy have a very strong connection...they're bound forver! like ana, ted, and grace!
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
oh a new york day the in the life of mrs. grey!
ana is the not the only lucky one...i'd say christian is as lucky too. they're perfect for each other!
i'm always so happy to see adorable grace making an appearance. she never fails to amuse me. i looove her! thank you nuwriter!
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
lovely chapter!
i could understand ana's lingering insecurities. your husband is beyond gorgeous. oozing with oodles of sex appeal, inside out, multi-billionaire...of course women and men will desire him. but christian always tells ana how beautiful she is, how much he loves her, goes crazy when he thinks she's nowhere to be found, pretty much does what she asks him to do...it will still be not enough to feel secure. but at the end of the day, the both love each other so much and there will never be anyone else for them...just christian, ana and the little greys and tommy and jack! :D
that's exactly how your make me feel nuwriter when you write about christian and ana!
well done!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
the lemons were hot, steamy and so so sexy!
glad that the pimberton woman excused herself and got the message.
i laughed so hard reading this chapter!
the little greys are sooo adorable! and grace, crankcalling christian and ana =D, is just precious!
love love love this chapter!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
poor christian! i hope it was just a nasty cold and nothing serious! ted was so sweet and i find his sensitive part of him quite endearing! tommy is fitting in quite well. for a small boy, he has a big heart that he wants to share with christian and ana and the rest of the greys. grace, my favorite is a little firecracker! yup, i could see her run GEH! and i believe she'd do an incredible job!
i feel a lot of sadess for virginia because she had missed out a lot and didn't have a chance to help her daughter. but watching christian and his family, not just his financial success but most importantly, the family he's created with ana's help, is something virginia will surely treasure forever.
beautiful and brilliant!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
the last part of the story where tommy called ana "mama" made me cry...tears of joy. i always enjoy reading these sweet, tender, loving and fun moments with the greys. your story is so life-like. it makes me feel like i was there with the greys and i don't care if was just the chair, the table, or the spoon as long as i was a part of their special moments.
i wish you'd keep writing about them. i want to see how much grace will put christian through hell! LOL ;) ;) it'll be so much fun seeing christian being 100x more overprotective with the kids especially grey.
brilliant as always! love love love your story, your writing, and YOU!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Tommy gives her a big nod and I hear Christian chuckle. "Want part of the paper, bud?"
"Peese."
Christian pulls the cartoon section out and folds it handing it to Tommy who gives the pictures serious consideration. Christian goes back to his paper and coffee.
this adorable scene was just so natural between the christian and tommy...like a normal thing between father and son.
Christian leans in and gives Tommy a kiss on his cheek. "Bye Bud. You and Jimmy have a good day."
"Ukay. We well. Bye daddy."
My heart skips a beat and Christian stops in his tracks. Christian turns around walking back over to Tommy. Pulling him up into his arms he gives him a hug and another kiss. "I love you son."
and this one hit me hard. i got so emotional and couldn't fight my tears.
the care package was so ana. she's always been so thoughtful and caring. the time, the energy and the love she put into that was the same as when she was putting together christian's 28th birthday presents: the playroom keyholder with the digital "YES" blinking (i think or was it the seattle space needle or both?), the music, the toys, the jeans. and let's not forger the glider she left after they broke up.
the lemon was fantastic...the chapter was beautiful as always. the writing was stunning!
i hope your hands gets better. the writing can wait. it's best you take care of those golden hands of yours!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
it was nice for christian and ana to have some alone time at escala. i really like the idea of rebuilding their own personal playroom.
never a dull moment at the greys' house!
i love love love reading about christian, ana and the grey kids!
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
this chapter made me smile and happy. thank you for writing one of the best stories!
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The continuation of Bee1982's one shot 'One Wild Night'
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At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?
What dangers will follow after their one wild night
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: You Own Me
thank you for sharing this wonderful story. you two are quite incredible! i truly enjoyed it and so happy that you're writing a sequel. i'm looking forward to the first chapter! well done!