Reviews by gitgit
Summary: Past Featured Story

botm

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooooo
I like

this was definitely an interesting first chapter!

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awww they gave the baby her middle name thatw as beautiful nice chapter!

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh o i wonder how charlie took the news and that meddling pixie eh

:P

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ohhh my

definitely an attraction hopefully these two will be able to see that the other has an attraction for them soon enough!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

awww what an action packed chapter me like 

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

awwwwwwwwww how romantic :D 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467276
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Alex Outtake

heeeey@ i just re-read your story agian i was reading on ffnet and then you pulled it down :D ill go back and re read it again i love this story so much i hope you do post that CC outtake!!! 

Immediate Action by TigerBoo2U Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 281]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Immediate Action Banner

 

Bella Swan, Senior Intelligence Analyst with the CIA has uncovered a plot to blow up the capitol, but there's a traitor in CIA HQ and they have their eyes on her. In order to protect the country she loves, she has to risk losing everything.

AH/Some OOC behaviour. Heartfail Warning. Character Death.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131170 Read Count: 36690
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2011 Updated: 19 Oct 2011
Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - June 14th 2010 – CIA Headquarters - Mclean VA.

yikes shes been captured?

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - 14th June 2005 - Cambridge MA.

interesting! 

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672147
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: A Bitch Named Karma

wow 

that was hell poor bella and edward that is going to be tough to get over 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

well hot diggity dang 

that was hot! 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Quick Like A Cat

ooooh she went submissive on his ass for a second 

lol 

loved it 

 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

well il be damned edward has it figured out! sorrta need the roof now!

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E

im a little nervous about edward and gail he wouldnt do that you wouldnt make him do that right 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Poker Face

so alec is dead and now jane will go craz things are going o get interesting 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

whorelilsle and urglock or mine are hilarious names lol 

shit is going to go down! 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Hot

looks like a war is comin!

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Stages

i wouldnt really wanna live in brooklyn i am a chicken shit lets leave it at that 

wow 

what a chapter 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

well thta was definitely an interesting chapter 

 

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

i think im in love with mobward... 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

shame on carlisle i like esme 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

well hell looks like things are going to be intense 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

that was definitely an interesteesting chapter he took her there! 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

ohhh carlisle you are so freaking skweed 

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

wow they are getting married i guess there real love starts now 

 

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

oh wow turmol 

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

i wonder what edward will think of whats actually happened between carlisle and bella the conversation i mean 

 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Decision/Draw

carilise has some ass kissing to do with bella 

lol 

and i love that esme and bella are die hard potterfans pottheads i should sa no?

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

well hell 

heheheh that was awesome by the way really hot too 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Light my Fire

well hell they are gonna drive each other nuts 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

well shit 

that was insane at the end !!! 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

well shesjust become a true mafia wife thats for sure well shi! 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

well hell that was awesome 

loved it it was well written1 

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Antipasto

edward on top sounds fantastic 

oh snap 

lol awesome chapter i do hope that aro stops by and he doesnt go all crazy i like him 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

carlisle needs another asswhooping 

 

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

well hell these kids are on a emotional rollarcoster lol 

 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

holy freaking hell 

 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Every Dog Has Its Day

well a shit storm is about to start especially with baby cullen on the way

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: SunSational Day

looks like her morning sickness is here now 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

i hav ethis bad feeling this really bad feeling about edward going to vriginia 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

DID I NOT SAY THAT VRIGINIA SOUNDED SKETCH!!! 

sorry for the caps 

but holy god damn! 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

well hot damn that was insane 

bloody insane 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Baby Blues

well shit edwars the bss now 

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Oobotz

they both have alot of insecurities alot

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

well hot damn 

that was really realy smexy! and hot 

:D 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

oh shit bella is going to be so devestated when she finds out about jacob 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

wooo woooo 

i loved it 

absolutely love them :D 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Icing on the Cake

well heck the feds are sniffing again 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532853
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

aww her dad doesn seem bad at all i guess she gets her rambling from him 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

awww all lovey dovey 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

well hell that was insane 

nice chapter though loads of drama im so sad to see nanny die though :( 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

loved it 

good chat daddymafiaward lol 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity

loveed it that was definitely awesome sauce 

that roger looks like trouble! 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One

wel damn sonny is too smart for his own good time to man up eddie boy! 

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

well frick looks like a war is on the horizon! 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Knee-Jerk Reaction

oh dear those two bicker too much 

lol 

 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

awww they kissed and made up :D 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

oh shit on a stick that was insane!

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

ohhhh carlisle is in trouble! 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

giggles 

oved this chapter 

ahahha :D bella told em all off 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

hea for edward and bella is all i care about lol 

im mean i know but i love aro; i hope he doesnt cheat with esme 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

hot damn looks like jersey is going down 

 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

well shit fbi on there ass eh 

that just makes it even more insane! 

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Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

well shit 

that was freaking nutzo! 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

well shit 

things are going to be intense i hope he doesnt off aro please dont off aro eddie 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

please dont kill aro please edward dont kill aro 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

well shit on a stick everything was going to blow out of proportion no 

dang 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

awwww im so damn glad that he didnt kill aro 

but that was one insane chapter dunno even where to begin 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

well heck 

3 mill? dang i wish i had that amount of money lol 

 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

ohhh shit 

ESME !!!??? she is MArcus's daughter isnt she

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie

well shit 

that shits off the hook 

and crazy ! 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i think they are going to fight a bit more before things are going to get better arent they 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

giggles* aro is awesome 

stilla ho but aweome 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance

other then her threatening esme lol

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

well shit that was insane 

wonder if esme is really that stupid 

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

well hell that was intense! 

i dunno what to say 

i wonder what jasper and edward will plan 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure

well damn to hell who was bellas father?!?!? 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

wow 

that was defintiely an interesting chapter !

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two

well that was one heck of a chapter 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

well heck 

that was insane 

 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

i hope aro doesnt try to off him! 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Fight Club Part Two

i had to skip the part where he you know 

but heck edward enjoys his torture 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

i wonder if edward will still off esme 

if bella were to talk to him about it 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

they are totally going to off esme 

eh 

isnt he 

damn 

 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

well shit on a stick 

shit just went to hell 

didnt it 

if sehs flipped whose side is she on and who does she have with her 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

giggles that was awesome 

heheheh :D 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

well then that was definitely interesting chapter 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

well heck 

that was definitely interesting and yuck vomit lol and carlisle jealous i lol-ed 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

LOLOL well hot damn!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

well shit carlisle freaked the flip out 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

mamma bear has come out to play that was a scarey chapter!!!!!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

well hell 

that was awesome 

nice chapter btw.  i thin kalex doesnt love carlisle 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

holy hell things are going to get out of hand arent they 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

sht bella drove him over the edge and i will be shocked if he doesnt get arrested becuase of his anger 

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

well shit 

i think they have alot to work on now 

dont they 

 

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

well snap that was defintely an intense chapter!

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

heheeheh kylie is freaking hilarious 

i loved the chapter wow 

 

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

i wonder what was up with the money 

 

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Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

well looks like eddie has some work cut out for him 

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

awwwww that was awesome