Reviews by gitgit
Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806607
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Crawl to Montauk

oh myyyy lol

some smexy times Loved the chapter i llike Damion but i wish he and Edward would get along :( 

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

First of all thank christ that you are okay. Oh man I was so nervous for you I'm like dude I hope she is okay. 

That was really sweet of Damion, to tell maggie's parents that they should trust sonny. And I was glad that we got a whole lot of Damion. He is working through his problems. But I really don't like the way Amelia is forcing Damion. I wonder if she slept with him that night inorder to ensure that she was pregnant. I hope not. 

And I dont like the way he is forcing himself. Edward said to be straight so I do hope that he will be. And awww i loved his interaction with Bella and Edward. Damion also got a Kylie hug I loved that. 

I wish Sonny and Damion can work things out. I really do.

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

LOVED IT! 

i just finished re reading Quiet Storm and working through WEather the storm for the second time around I just love the story so much ;D cant wait to see what happens next! 

 

And hmm i feel weird about Maggie. And awww Sonny is naming the baby Izzy too cute! and wonder what will happen with that angle 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

im so excited!!!! this is going to be insane 

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Santino

oh shit that was deffinitely an interesting chapter loved sonny's pov. 

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Kylie

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The Skip

ooo looks like daddy C did know about his little boy 

wow 

what an interesting chapter 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Damion Part Two

well crackalackin hell that was awesome 

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Baby Girl

oh wow 

what a chapter 

i wonder what will happen now especially with edwards ov and AWWW i cant wait!!! im all caught up *pouts* 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

oh o edward made a boobooo. that was definitely interesting CAnt wait to see how the sit down goes and if he has the button ceremony bella will kick his ass. 

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

well holy shit 

that was insane 

i dunno what to say i think i cried a lot for sonny, he has it tough :( i dont like katie very much at the moment. 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Change of Pace

i think i love damieon just a little bit more after this chapter pooor guy! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

well heck looks like damion got some! hehehhe 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Old Habits, New Days

lol i absolutely always love edwards pov! lol 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

oh man sonny hasnt seen his mommy in a while 

someone is going to get there ass kicked until then i do hope that you update earlier i like it alot :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

noooooooooo dont say next wednesday noooooooooooooooo dont do that@ well shit right now im thinking what LAuren Did really fucked with Damions head and that has a lot to do with why hes so messed up and i feel really bad for Damion i know he was causing trouble but his head is a really fucked up place so this could get insane as long as he doesnt leave or hurt himself right now he is alone. and edward and co are against him. I dont like that. 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

well 

hell that was definitely an interesting chapter 

and looks like lots of stuff is going to go down 

 

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

WELL SHIT!

I hope aro gets his dick out of his ass or santino will take him out 

thats for sure 

that was intense and insane 

can't get enough of this story :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

wow that was an insane chapter. WEll lets see what happens now and if edward will beat the crap out of mr sulivan 

lol 

and no boring days for you mr.fuckhot

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 43: New Edition

awww i feel bad for Damieon, i will tell you though if dame gets hurt im kicking sonny's ass lol 

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

SEEE! i was thinking that he would feel everyone hates him! Atleast he didnt do anything else that was stupid the edward and dame conversation broke my heart 

and i cant wait to see how the talk with bella goes 

i wonder will he tell her about Lauren. I hope that he does so bella can clip her ass. Man oh man what a chapter and once lauren is out of the picture katie wont have a bitch fueling her brains. 

But wow that thing with Lauren really did screw him up. 

I'm not a fan of maggie for some reason but i was really happy when Sonny showed up that was pretty freaking awesome. lol I guess those two will grow on me. :P 

Can't wat for the next update :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

holy shit batman ! 

IT WAS coming OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH man. OOOOOOOOOOOOH MAN!

i wonder if shes going to shoot her head off and then edward will have to clip the mofo thats there. 

and DANG she yelled it out loud too eh. 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

well hot damn 

happy hot friday in deed! 

well hell 

i think the fact that bella nearly shot her head off was awesome 

and i wonder what edward has planned its final lauren must die. Doesnt matter how they should stage an accident. fucking light the bitch up i tell ya. She has some nerves! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

So i had to delete my original review as At that moment I was really angry with Sonny. Actually i have to say that I am still upset with Sonny. I still think that no matter what he should have gone back . He should have. His brother was in the hospital. 

I always love what you write. I loved every story that I have read of yours and you may know this. But this chapter was not my favourite, but i didn't hate it, just didn't like it very much. And it has nothing to do with you. Becuase YOu are an awesme writer thats why you got all these emotions in me erupting. So keep it up you are awesome don't let my anger at sonny make you think otherwise. 


I think im going to have to go back and re read quiet storm because everyone relates maggie to bella and For some reason I am not seeing it. So i have to back and read that. 

I found my self skipping parts of where sonny was being all lovey dovey with maggie because i was upset that he would think that its a ploy for his brother to gain attention. 

It was a cry for help! 

And he has been asking for help for the past how long? And didn't sonny get asked by Bella to find him and bring him home? 

I agree you are allowed to be selfish. But now was not the time. Although he had Skips blessings doesn't mean that Bella wont tear him anew one.

And with the baby on the way will this not screw him over? Especially with Lauren the dick still out there. Does he feel that his child is safe with Lauren? Why has he not thought about his baby? Dame hit rock bottom. But hopfully that Edward will be able to help him work through those emotions. 

I guess I should congratulate sonny and maggie on the wedding. Even if i am pissed at him. I hope Maggie grows a back bone and tells him off when shes upset after all shes only 18? 19?. 

Sorry about the long review. I just wanted to get my feelings out there. And that I still think you are an awesome writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I love detailed feedback. 

I was nervous about this chapter, knowing some of you would hate it. And as someone who knows ALL TOO well what it's like to take care of a sibling most of her life . . . Sometimes, you have to do things for yourself. I know from personal experience that you can't save everyone. Just like you can't please everyone. If you live your life FOR someone else, put yourself/your happiness on hold to hold someone's hand through life . . . you're not really living, are you?

Oh well . . . I don't expect everyone to see Sonny's side of things. In the beginning, he does express that he can't understand Dame's mindset, and . . . Whatever. No matter what I say I find it interesting that you all take someting different away from my words. Some of you get it, while others see/read into what they want, and that's great - the beauty of an individual mind

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

well looks like things are moving towards a battle and a half thats for sure

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

WELL HOT DAMN GIRL! 

THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER@ OH LORD 

i want to sing and dance *ding dong the bitches dead* 

so is The skip ordering for Aro to get clipped? I was confused at that part is he going to die now? 

And Im so glad that Edward and Dame talked that was really important. 

I hope that Sonny and Dame will be able to rebuild there relationship. Until then I am still team Dame unless Sonny does something Crazy and makes me like him loads :P 

Oh man I wated all day to respond to this chapter had such a busy day. But im glad I could finish the chapter before I had to go. I think im in love with Edward more. 

Poor Dame, I think he has a long way to go. I just hope he doesnt think he is alone. I wonder how bella will find out about Sonny being married that would be interesting tosee how she deals with that lol! 

OH man I have to tell you that I loved how bella and edward reacted. MAde me love them even more. I think they are amazing as is and they worked hard to keep there kids safe and Edward prooved that he would do just about anything for their kids. 

 

And one thing... DING DONG THE BITCHES DEAD@! 

 

it had to be done :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

hahahaha 

Freaking loved the chpater 

aro the cleaner 

i wonder what kind of plans are up with the skip im sure he will give sonny and aro hell for it hahah. MAn that was great loved that he talked to lisa at the end. And go maggie she gave sonny hell lol 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it 

that was awesome 

they love each other and they had that long awaited chat that was important! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

I have this really bad feeling about Amelia, Is she going to try to get Damion Killed. If she does SKip is gonna go ape shit. 

Loved the mellow of Bella and the skip loved the sexie times. Was hawt. And then smoking up a joint was hot damn lol. 

LOVED IT!

i love damion I loved that he wants to heal and find little mush monster and give him a hug 

SIGH!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

damn sonny is having a baby!! 

i wonder if Dame is more upset that he isnt having a baby of his own/

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Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Well hell I am so excited that I got my laptop in the mail today. I had to send my old laptop for repair two times. So now my new laptop came in and I am so excited that I can finally write reviews on all three chapters. I gotta say I loved the way things are progressing. I have to re read chapter 36 becuase it was amazing and I totally can not wait until chapter 37 comes out and thats in our skips pov! w000000000p! 

 

Gotta say though Maggie is gonna bust Sonny's ass thats for sure. I hope she gives him a good smack around especially becuase now he is getting addicted and is letting the coke rule his brain! 

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Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

I love how down with it Edward and Sonny were when they went to pick up Damion. I was really sad when Jordan ran away. It makes my heart hurt for Damion that was definitely an interesting chapter though. And Kylie and Maggie are crazy! lol. I'm really scared about re reading the next chapter though. 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

Awwwww Damion Came a long way. 

I really really loved this chapter that was definitely interesting. I am so glad that he talked down sonny I was so sure sonny would have gone ape shit on edward. I was so scared! 

Im so proud of Daminion! He helped his brother out when things were really important and that he needed to be there! I liked it:D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

OH MY!!!
looks like things are about to change! Will Sonny now be in power?

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Halfway

it makes my heart hurt at the differences between damion and edward. I wonder what will happen i'm a little scared. 

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Zoo

YESSSSSSSSSS! i got up and did a little jig at the end of that chapter 

:D 

makes me excited 

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Rat Race Part Two

oh man 

that was so sweet at the end it melted my heart 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Rat Race Part One

oh my god thats scarey as hell 

I'm a little worried now. 

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Aftermath

well hell, that was hot!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

WELL FRICK!

wht a way to start damn im so glad jasper made him throw the rule book out! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Fifteen

well shit i hope he does go see bella :( 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

well shit! 

legal counsel can shove it up his ass 

bitch should not have driven drunk*grumbles*

Reviewer: gitgit Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

ohhh la la! 

he kissed her 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Adh Mor

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 

wwow i really love them together! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Gray Matter

oh o looks like Charlie is going to be giving someone the third degree!! lol 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717447
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

ohhh man emmett needs a thrashing too! poor bella she was all over the place 

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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

oh my that was intense!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Awww thats too cute the purple bag :) 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

jacob assface is going dowwwwwwwwwwn! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

oh hello, 

edward is gonna break you to pieces you sick twit! 

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

oh my breakfast for champs those rice krispies 

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

jake gone, whose next on that list 

i like riley but can we trust him?

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

this was so intense 

my heart broke the way bella and edward interacted

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

first mission 

i think im going to find riley amusing 

lol 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

ohhhhhhhhhhh shit, 

hahahah jacob black got framed at the end 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

AWWW 

sweet 

loved the chapter!