That was a beautiful moment between Bella and Edward and worth the wait.

It's really sad what happened between Bella and Alice. I hoped their friendship could be repaired, maybe not to what it was, but at least for them to stay friends. Then Jasper leaves her for someone else, well, that's horrible. Alice doesn't deserve that much sorrow for what she's done. I am glad Bella tried to reach out to her when she saw her in the park. 

I am happy Bella and Edward had a little girl who could play with Rosalie and Emmett's son, and that they plan to try for another child. They seem really happy. 

Thanks for sharing this story. 

What a great way to start the morning. I truly enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing it. 

I enjoyed this peak into their future. Thank you for sharing it.

Oh boy! That was hilarious. Bella and Edward thought they were so smart, having outwitted the old man during his visit. I must say Charlie's whistling in and out of rooms had me suspicious that he already knew. I didn't expect the parents to trick them into revealing the change in their relationship.

Thanks for this lovely family moment. 

Wow! That was so extreme. Bella's life was so miserable. Why did no one help her? After the first incident, I would have threatened the school district for not protecting her.

I'm glad Bella has gained a friend and protector in Rosalie, while at college. It looks like Bella's life is looking up. 

It was great to see how Edward fits with his group of friends. Jasper is a good pal and confidant, it seems. Rosalie and Edward interact more like siblings. Alice seems to want to matchmake her friends without really seeing the lack of attraction between them. 

I was surprised that it was acceptable by Edward and Bella's parents for Emmett to spend the night with his high school girlfriend after their dinner. I could see that in college, but not in high school.

I liked that Edward wanted to have a safe sex talk with his son, but he was way too late. It felt like Emmett was schooling him. Emmett was hilarious as his word vomit kicked into overdrive and he was talking about condoms and making sure his girlfriend reached orgasm. So funny! Yeah, Edward lost that round. ;)

It was really sweet of Edward to bring flowers for his son's girlfriend when he was late to meet her. Edward and Bella's first meeting in the kitchen was definitely memorable with Edward's physical attraction to her and then Bella's fall before hitting her head on that drawer. LOL. I'm glad she was okay. 

I did feel sorry for Bella being embarrassed after Edward corrected her for calling him Ed. Emmett was so immature in setting her up like that, even if the target was his dad. I'm glad he apologized to her.

The rest of the night appeared to go well. I liked that Edward offered Bella a ride home. 

Edward and Emmett have had a hard road to navigate with just the two of them, but I'm glad Edward shows no sign on giving up on his son. I partly blame the school too. You send that many notes home, get no response and it doesn't send up a red flag? They should have had a backup plan and contacted his father directly.

Well, Edward and Rose' situation doesn't sound promising. It's good he has a friend in Jasper. 

Great opening chapter!

I enjoyed the tribal politics, but Jake's revelations about his father and Bella were really done well. He grew up a lot in these last couple of days. 

I would recommend getting a beta to correct some of the grammar issues in the story and with the title, but I could understand the story despite them.

Thanks for sharing your story.