Reviews by noomom
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Part of me wishes I had found this story when you were finished...I hate getting to the end of the chapter!

I'm really anxious to see how Edward presents Bella at New Moon with her friends there...and I think it is so funny (and true-to-life) how anxious to get in her brother is!

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Diamond in the Rough

So glad to see an update! I enjoy Dougie and Bella's interaction...he is trouble, though!

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

I was just wondering when you would update! So glad you did! I am eager to see how Quil and Claire fit in later...

 

Tanya is evil! I hope she and James get their just desserts!

 

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, update! I understand you have a life outside of fanfiction...but I get so impatient to hear about your Bella and Edward!  If I knew you IRL I would totally help you out so you could write more :D

This chapter...I knew something was fishy with that white van! And I think Edward will be a great mentor for Embry...good stuff!

 

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hope all is well and that you can update soon!

Waking Up by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella was happy with her life with James until a new revelation causes her to run and a terrible accident traps her to a life she never desired.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9507 Read Count: 1687
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2013
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Crashing

This is an intriguing start! I am excited to read more!

 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! And as others have said, we've got to get them off the island before the baby comes!!

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Cliffhanger! What did that sicko do??

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Involuntary Rapture

It seemed like a piercing and I have a pretty good guess as to who Alice actually is...

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I don't understand why the story is suddenly focusing away from Bella and Edward...I feel like these last couple chapters are out takes. Idk. Maybe it's me, but I'd rather see them start figuring a way off the island or Emmet and Rose should somehow find the island. 

Don't misunderstand, these chapters are well written, it just feels like the story is stalling and I want closure! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sorry that you feel like it's stalling. In a way it is. You are very perceptive. I didn't have a chapter because real life and also Midnight Caller are taking tons of my time. The James chapter was never going to get out to you guys. I wrote it so I could get him out of my head and get a better feel for him. The plot isn't though. There will be closure soon enough :)

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Yay! I loved this chapter! I hope that as they are avoiding James they start to find a way off the island or at least to get rid of Aro and James!

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

They did it! They got away! 

Man, Aro is just a sick fuck, as is James. I will have to go back and re read to remember everyone's ending place. I liked the escape/rescue. 

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 68: The Second Elizabeth Part 6

It's hard to phrase this in type so it doesn't sound harsh. I appreciate the back story, but why is it being posted within the story and not as an out take? Also, if it is written already, why are you posting such short snippets?

I like the back story, the fact that you're sharing it, but when someone comes to read the whole story when it's complete it may totally throw them off!

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


banner by SoapyMayhem



banner by JA Mash


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44071
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dr. Cullen's Office

I would like to chime in that I like Doctorward's forceful personality more than Tasteward's!

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104516
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

What does autodidact mean?

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806499
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

Nice chapter! Sibling dynamics don't change much, huh? :D And poor Peto! That is funny to me. 

Also, the CaraNo lime...I have been reading one of her ebooks and I was thinking of it while reading this! :)

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

Thanks for the update! I love a story with thought out chapters, that take more than 30 seconds to read...it is crazy that I want Dame involved in "that thing of theirs," right? I do, though. He needs to be accountable that way. And I agree with Sonny that Amelia is trouble!

Playing Games by bagpuss Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Story.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3239 Read Count: 30999
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 13 Sep 2014
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I would say more plot. You introduced the ex and his son, so they need to be addressed more fully. Also, if they're going to play with rope, etc it shouldn't be a total surprise, but have  some conversation about it. 

 



Author's Response:

It's an odd one; not quite PWOP but a bit lacking in the plot area, too, I agree. The issue is mostly with me; I'm not talented and/or experienced enough to deal with more than one tale at a time and I've been concentrating on something else. When I sit down to write this, it's usually off the cuff in short spaces of time.

Bottom line, more plot to follow. And as for the rope, I'm not sure this is the case. I see it more as, he brought it out and she didn't say no. Stupid, yes, but lust makes you daft and her trust wasn't misplaced in the end.

 

Thanks for taking the time to comment; I love a bit of interaction and appreciate your time.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152446
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Duh duh duun! Great cliffie...

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717354
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I am enjoying this! interested to see how Nadler will fit into this world with Edward going in full force...

 

Black Hole by addict_writer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

New attitude. New job. New friend with benefits. What started out as casual takes on a whole new meaning when things twist and turn and sink into the abyss of reality. One big mistake changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121478 Read Count: 119273
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel like the story has died way down. I like a lot of angst, though, and that ended a while ago. I hate not finishing a story, so I hope you put up the ending soon!

Right There by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

*Sequel to Come Closer* Accepting your place in life–and letting go of all that kept you in the wrong–is a powerful thing. Edward Masen knows this. Knows it with his heart, his soul, his being. Forbidden doesn't exist anymore. 'Can't have' are no longer words in his mind's vocabulary. And were never in his claim's. Isabella is getting everything she's ever wanted. To be his.

 

Right There banner by Frozen Soldier


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45749 Read Count: 5376
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

Good start to the sequel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I like possessive, asshole Edward. I think it makes for a good story. Hope that he gets mad at Aro for letting Bella rescue him. I also hope this isn't a set up. 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, please don't make this all mushy now. I like strong, asskicking Edward. Someone needs to fix this pronto!

 

Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Not the story told in chapter 19!

Summary: Past Featured Story

PWF

Jackson Teller gets himself into a veritable shit-storm. Will he be able to truly change his fate? Or will Opie do it for him?

Will contain: language, violence, explicit sexual content, abuse, drinking, drugs, smoking.

Genre – action, drama, romance, family, friendship, horror, humor

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Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 348276 Read Count: 39945
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 08 Feb 2018
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Daze

What in the world does it mean to “look a certain way” at someone?

Summary:

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Honestly, she wasn't expecting this when dragged on a camping trip...


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18593 Read Count: 3124
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2020 Updated: 22 Jun 2020
Reviewer: noomom Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like the premise so far. I always think Emmett is under appreciated, but I gotta say - it’s so hard to read vernacular. I’m southern and already getting frustrated with Jasper’s “drawl.” I find it better to imagine than to read “suga” and “ta.”