Reviews by Mari1023
Summary:

This is my sequel to my first 50 Shades story (I am so cool, I make my own sequels).... The kids are 6 and 4. Ana is 28 and Christian is 34. This story contains characters from my first story. The original was moved from Fanfiction.net

This is rated NC-17 for language and sexual content


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29860 Read Count: 44098
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Dreary Morning

What an awesome series. A great read on a rainy Saturday, and I want more. Great job !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Phoebe Grey never had many friends growing up. It’s hard to know if people like you for you or your father. Christian Grey is the richest man in Seattle and Phoebe has grown up under the constant companionship of her bodyguard Chuck Travis. Now it’s time for college and Phoebe is finally going to be just Phoebe, college freshman at Columbia University. Will she make friends without her father’s name and money to influence them?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32579 Read Count: 20861
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Will you be finishing the story?  It's very adorable and loving grown up Grey kids. 

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Lost Cause

This story had me laughing so much. You did a great job. Please write some more.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591642
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ohhh...I'm so excited to see what happens again.  I forgot who Paul was and I went back to the 1st book.  Well, I re-read chapter 13 where Ana is introduced to Paul by Carla's husband, Bob, as his golf buddy.  I love jealous Christian, because you never know what will fly out of his mouth.  I love the way you think, and you always keep us guessing.......Thank you, and can't wait until the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading. More today.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter~ I'm glad Ana didn't cave into Mr. Sexpertise. For a moment their I thought she was going to, but glad she stuck with it. What about GHE employees.......the day they must of had was not pleasant. Thanks for the fast and long update.

Author's Response:

No. I would hate work for that man. I doubt I would last very long. 

Thanks for leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the interaction of Ana with Christian's employee's. I read this chapter twice, and giggled both times reading the elevator portion. It would be nice to see Anna work part-time in GEH. Can't wait until the next chapter !

Author's Response:

Ana is going to go back to work. I just won't say where. 

Thanks for posting a review.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww...that was a sweet chapter. I laughed a bit at Christian yelling at his employee. Keep them coming. I love getting notification their is a new chapter because I drop everything to read. Thank for another great chapter.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I read the chapter last night, but I went straight to bed (wink !! wink!!)  I LUV Ana and Christian so in love and their children.  I love how you incorporate the everyday situations in a family, and their  dinner talk .  I can't wait to see if you incorporate Christian a little jeaous because it's very funny to read.  I sometimes read in FF but the steamy hot sex I read on here because I don't want to miss any juice detaild.    Thank you for another fabulous chapter.  My hubby is very grateful I read right before bedtime too.  (LOL)  

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Cute chapter -- can't wait to Texas.    Thanks for the quick update. 



Author's Response:

We get to Texas today.

e.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for not keeping us waiting so long for a new chapter about Paul Sanders. It's going to be very interesting Ana working for Paul when he was so into her. I kinda wish Ana would take over Grey's Publishing, and make a run to run the company. She did great when Christian was shot, and kidnapped by the Colombians. Ana could be the CEO, and a force to reckoned with. Maybe she will change her mind. However, your super creative and can't wait to read what you have coming.

Author's Response:

Would you want to work for Christian Grey? Okay, maybe that's not  the right way to put it. Ana's reason coming up next chapter.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a full  & wonderful chapter.  First, Ana rushing to get their things packed while Christian drooled over the drawings of the  plane was priceless.  I love  their banter back and forth and I felt like I was a fly on the wall.   The welcome home from Teddy and Grace was adorable.  I felt bad for Ana not being able to go through Sam's things, but Christian always trys to do the right thing but the delivery isn't always well.   I think baby  Grace might have something to do with the missing ring.  Can't wait for WWIII.  As always your writting is superb, and you never disappoint. ~~~~



Author's Response:

Thank you for the  nice review. I  always appreciate it.  Mr. Grey always means well, but sometimes has  poor delivery. Luckily Ana, understand this.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story --- and baby Grace with throwing the F Bomb was hilarious - I knew eventually it would come out when least expected.  It's going to be very interesting if Christian will give up the tape of Escala or if Ana will have to go behind his back --   Looking forward to the next chapter when Ana confronts Elliot about dropping Christian off on her lawn.  Luv -- luv your story.   

 

 

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm dying to find out about the Kate and Elliot situation. I'm thinking the bastard cheated on her, and now is regretting it. I hope if is so Kate hangs him by the balls.

Author's Response:

Coming in Chapter 24. No ball hanging I'm afraid.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love Ray because he reminds me of my dad. I really want to know about the Kate and Elliot mess. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

You are a glutton for punishment, reviewing on both sites. But I really thank you. I appreciate it. Kate and Elliott next chapter. 

E.

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh!! No.......I guessed it with the indigestion, and when he handcuffed Ana I was screaming at my computer.  Who will get her out of the handcuffs......Teddy ??? Grace ??? Myra ?? The taylors ?? Ana has to start screaming to get some type of help.  Enjoy your Thanksgiving, and hopefully the turkey will not make you too tired to give us an update.