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Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Book III
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*
Thank You.
This story continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and accepting his past have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger? This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154
Yay for the mouse. I think I was as torn on the decision as they were. They said they weren't going to take her....and I thought, yes, I agree. Your family is perfect as it is. Then they said yes...and I thought...I'm so glad. Mouse belongs with you. And Ella was my mother's name....so doubly glad she will get all the Christian Grey family love. Wow. You do take us for an amazing ride.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
"Everyone thinks they are a writer"....too funny, but true. You most definitely are a writer, and I love your work. Maybe as much as I love Barney in this chapter. Glad Ana is showing the strength to stand behind Sawyer, that will make for some interesting dynamics! Christian has totally blanked out the amount of forgiveness Ana has had to give to him. Anxious to see what it will take for him to open up again.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I think of myself as more of a story teller. I definately don't have the command of the language or the ability to turn a phrase like a real writer does. But I thank you all the same.
It will take a chapter or two for him to come around.
E.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Completely loving your three books, very well written. Your profile says you are new to writing, I would never have guessed. Must say you will be scary stuff indeed as you continue to develop your skills. Maybe as scary as Grace will be as she grows up! Could almost hear her clear enunciation of "fuck" at the wedding! And so glad the ring is back. Have been dying for Ana to peek in her prized purse!
Christian has been so private with his family, it's hard to imagine him giving Elliott free access to Escala. With his contractor background, a locked playroom door would be no challenge to him! Thank you so much for continuing to give us "more"!
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Nice research on the medical issues. So well written. I'm torn whether or not I want them to take her....I really liked their family with the three they have. I think they are torn, too. At least Christian is...think they had Ana at the word "baby".
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Please let Ana finally realize she is ALSO a billionaire, and can hire her OWN security staff, and not let Christian punish her by taking away someone that has been so devoted to her! Hate to see cold Christian, think the kids may have to be the ones to bring him back to us! Anxious for your update!!
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121
Hmmmm. Why did Ana have to talk Christian out of the asparagus in favor of oral activities? Can anyone educate me? Fun chapter...love them with their family, but love seeing them spend time just as a couple!
Author's Response:
Asparagus can give 'body fluids' a funky taste and smell. Pineapple juice makes them sweet.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122
Too horrifying and way too funny!! My husband kept asking what was making me laugh so much. Kate won't be forgetting that anytime soon...hope she takes it out on Elliott! Great chapter!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130
Really enjoyed this chapter. Wish I could have a Piderman party! And I'm not even a Piderman fan! And what a surprise for Ray...none of us saw that coming! Love, love, love your entire story...wish it would never end!
Why was the house on the Sound put on the market? Christian learns the reason, with profound ramifications for him and his family.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52319 Read Count: 4675
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect Fifth
Nice concept and writing! I see you haven't updated for a long time, I hope you don't abandon it - I'd love to see where you are taking us.
What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement
I discovered your story yesterday, and read straight through all of the chapters available. Really love your storytelling. Severine has a most compelling personality, and if I didn't know Christian's history, I would think she would be a "keeper" for him. So looking forward to Carl meeting a real Dom. And so torn between her staying with Christian and developing things with Luke. Great job - thank you for sharing with us!!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement
Yay!! Was so happy to see an update! Very much enjoy this story and the New Orleans background!