Reviews by samic
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WTF? this chapter has me confused in some places... apert from that Esme and Charlie, I think thats kinda nice.

As for Bella how the hell did she either get away/be taken/hide from her guards/ get out of her room unoticed?

You've got the Huh? factor going in to overdrive atm!

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Omg, that was a lot for one chapter. I didn't see Bella's change coming at all, I can't remember Tanya being Marcus' mate.

 

the last little bit from Bella is a bit like someone is visiting her mind while she is going through the change - doesn't seam like something Bella would say or think unless she was reading.

 

And the last line - “My mate, my master, my Major, my Jasper. ALL MINE” can only imagine how Jaspers reaction will differ to the Majors. Either way its gonna make for one hell of a chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303578
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I didn't want to come across as mean in my other review or this one but it seems as though everyone is always chuckling

Some one says something and they chuckle

 

At the end of Angela's breakdown the immediate change of subject about her baby she chuckles and the rest of them chuckle as the take their seats.

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You're not coming across as mean. You have an issue with me using the word Chuckle, I get that. I understand. Thank you for your reveiw.

Summary:

Bella's tired of Edward's excuses, so is Edward. When Jacob comes to visit, what will occur?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1710 Read Count: 184
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, i know its a one shot but got any plans to extend it a little?

Summary:

Warning! This piece of literature contains scenes not appropriate to people who are subject sensitive. Be warned. Edward has a fantasy that Bella's willing to fulfill.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1390 Read Count: 548
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

will we get a Carlisle POV? it would be really good. this was a good one shot, maybe a little short (lol) but a Carlisle POV would really put this over the top.

 

please?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33362
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oooooohhh does he want to marry her ??? hmmm we'll just have to wait and see wont we  about 2 seconds it takes for the next chapter to load. hahahahah

Still a very interesting chapter including some background info on Jasper - he's a major part in the story but we know just a little about him. Will there be outtakes from the story? (or are they out there and I've just not seen them?)

 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What decade does this story revolve around?

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm of 2 minds when it comes to Rosalie, as Emmetts just gotta be loved by everyone to some degree... and you want him to be happy but in this case I feel sorry that he's hurting but I'm glad Rose was taken to the train station.

 

I'm starting to go through labour of devotion with drawls and i'm not even to the last available chapter ... God help me when I get to chapter 20.

 

Arrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhhh. So should I start begging for more chapters now or should I wait a bit longer?? ( I don't like begging authors for chapters as I feel like it interupts the creative writing process and distracts them)

 

Oh I um noticed in some of the chapters that here are a few words that have been mispelled or are in the wrong context eg - she fling her arms around me, when it should have been she flun her arms around me. I know its nothing major but if you a perfectionist then I thought you might want to know. Uh sorry if you didn't want to know.

Great chapter btw.

 

 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Dun, dun, dun...

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I know that I'm up to ch 14/20 but I don't know if the story is finished - I didn't look at that part I just read the blurb thingy and was like I have to read this. But this chapter sorta feels like and ending which is silly cos theres still 6 chapters but still I had to check what chapter I was actually reading.

 

The last few chapters have been really interesting esp the fights between Edward and Bella. I can't get over how bad guy like you've made Jake, I'm team Switzerland and don't read stories specificly for good or bad characters but this Jake is still interesting for a 'bad guy' will we hear any more about Seth and Leah? I was thinking that maybe on her way out Bella might have knocked over a candle... and the place light up but then all the ppl who work for Jake would loose their jobs ect... 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought her hands were bound as she was pulled up onto the stage but when she was sitting in the coach she rested her arms on her knees. (I think)

 

You have me hooked just from this chapter I can't wait to read the next - I may not review every chapter unless I have questions or I really want to point out something I really enjoyed, I find it kinda redundant to write 'loved it want more' ect.

I really did love this chapter though.

 

Great work :)

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161902
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He scrambled away from Charlie (not - me - that was Charlie’s pov)

 

Some of the things you have written in this story have been in the wrong view  for example -

in Charlie’s pov he said that - Edward, Emmett and Jasper grab him before he can get away.

it would have made more sense as - Edward, Emmett and Jasper grabbed him before he could get away.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I thought that they might run into Vicky and Jim for a moment there.

Summary:

Jasper helps Edward alleviate his concerns about his upcoming wedding night.   NC-17 SLASH  ONE SHOT


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1815 Read Count: 581
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Mar 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No it wasn't atrocious, interesting in a differnt way but not atrocious.

Eight Ball Express by esglee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Uptight Edward is drawn to his new hippie roommate, Jasper. Slashy drabbles written for Yogagal's birthday. Rated NC-17 for sexual content, language and drug use. AH, E/J.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 702 Read Count: 213
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really cool how you managed to get all the story into those short incriments. it would be good if you decided you wanted to do a bit more with it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I had a lot of fun writing these.  I don't have plans to expand on these boys, but have a few other things in the works.

Thanks for taking time to read and review.  It's appreciated :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

golf

 

Taking place at the 1956 US Open, 20 year-old amateur golfer Isabella Swan becomes the first women to ever compete at a professional golf event.  With local caddie Edward Cullen at her side as she makes her attempt at history, she will grow more in the span of this weekend then she has in her entire life as she plays against the best players in the world, battling gender roles and the boys club that is this “gentlemen’s game.”  Will she be able to pull out an against the odds victory, or will the prize she wins be even more valuable.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34179 Read Count: 3213
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Start of Something

Through early morning fog I see,

visions of the things to be,

and the pains withheld from me,

I realise and I can see that ....

 

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

Bathurst is on this sunday the 10th of october and it's and Australian MUST watch event and is even cool er now that thwy have it online as well as Tv at the same time showing in side the drivers cars ect every one should check it out - search for bathurst or channell 7 australia or something inbetween

 

http://www. youtube. com/watch?v= JQPOroesMWI  (Remove spaces)

It gives a fairly good look at the track, one year on top of the mountain a kangaroo decided to hop across the track and was narrowly missed my one of the drivers.

 

 

I am really enjoying the story so far - I have never really seen the point to NASCAR - driving around in circles but after reading this I can see the appeal.

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

This is what i was talking about before

 

Bathurst 2007 at the top of the Mt Panorma

http://www. youtube.com/ watch?v= j_-YSwhr5x4   (remove spaces)

 

Check it out!!

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

I thought Tanya was with Shawna (or something similar, not Shannon)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok so, the first and second chapters just didn't sit right with me Bella being with Jake & Edward being with Tanya - not that its who they were with. MAybe i was just assuming about the story and it threw me off a little.

 

But it still didn't sit well with me and I had a really hard time trying to read this chapter, I was trying to decide if I should close the page or keep reading. So I'm at the stage where I couldn't really care less whats happening with Edward or James really for that matter but have to keep reading to see what does happen. Does that make any sense?



Author's Response:

LOL.  To answer your question, No?  Maybe?  It's not supposed to sit right that they are with Jake and Tanya.  But not caring about Edward... well, maybe you should step away.  I'd be interested to hear if you kept reading.  

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thinl i'm at chapter 11- my internet window saves all the tabs i have open when i close it and the page is on 11 so i must be there - can only read a bit at a time.

 

I think i assumed that they would be single and things would go from there. I have nothing against them being with Tanya and Jake, does that last part make any sense?

what i ment in the last review is like when your watching a scary movie and you know something is gonna happen and you can see the scary thing creeping round and your just waiting for it to attack and you have to scrunch up your eyes closed and turn away from the screen.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes, it's the simplest wishes that can change your life forever.

 

"Any change, even a change for the better, is accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts." Can Eric and Sookie survive the drawbacks of their changing future? Set after DitF

 

A Change Is Gonna Come

A Change Is Gonna Come


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119483 Read Count: 13150
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: What I Cannot Change

Why didn't Sookie tell Eric what Heidi said?

Wouldn't that be important? Eric said that some of his plans didn't work out. And Heidi said that Victor knew the plans and what about telling Eric that Heidi was sent to watch her?

 

Pointless to sugest anything as the story is finished - almost pointless to review as well but I am really enjoying the story so far I have picked up on a few little things here and there that I know will come to a head later on and am just going to wait to see how you play them out.

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Change In the Making

Its no suprise that Eric has spies in Victors camp but are they close to figuring out who the spy is in Eric's party/Fantasia area?

 

Onto the next chapter

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Keep the Change

Pam? maybe - no use telling me as I'm on to the next chapter now.

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144835
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Shouldn't have Alice had Edwards blood on her scrubs?



Author's Response:

excellant point:)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Arrr you've driven me crazy. I just caught up on like 8 chapters in a row and now you leave us hannging here... (which I totally understand)

 

Victoria's death was kinda deep even though you didn't go into gory details, the part about Jackob - well to tell youthe truth I really had to try and remember about him before Charlie mentioned his 'unfortunate' (pft) situation. He really is/was and idiot. I was kinda suprised that Victoria didn't want only Bella to leave but her and Jack, if she wanted Edward but was seeing James how did she figure that James would be ok with that?

 

Bella's little serenade was kinda cute - a pretty big step out of her shell, I'm proud of her for doing it and not over thinking it.

 

Please don't make Bella faint or something now that Edward is waiting for an answer... I'm sick of main characters doing that and it just doesn't fit her (I don't think it does anyway).

 

I kinda figured that Edward would turn up when Bella made a point of the weather, definitely did not expect a proposal.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter now that I'm all caught up.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I know this is gonna sound creepy but how will Bella handle school when she has her monthly cycle? you know with just a small cut how vamps reacted.

 

I think there was something explaind in either a FF story or S Myers outtakes and midnight sun (can't remember) about it.



Author's Response:

Hiya!

It's funny you should mention that because in chapter 13 there's a scene where Bella has her monthly cycle. I should have that chapter up soon, it's with my beta right now.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

=)

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Where are you getting the vampires native lang from? Some of the words sound famillar.



Author's Response:

Hiya again!

Great question. LOTV is actually a language made up of Serbian, Russian, some latin, Romanian...a little English mixed in there, too. I know I'm missing like two more languages here. lol But I tend to use more Serbian words and mix around the letters.

 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

You for got the 'I' in  - MS9131987  (IMS9131987)



Author's Response:

Hi again, samic!

When I saw your comment earlier I was like *facepalm* How could I miss that?  And I did it twice, too! Gaaah! lol Thanks for pointing that out. I've already corrected it. I appreciate it. =)

And thanks for reading!

~Jells

Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know I had a kick arse review all typed out and everything - even spell checked it the closed the word doc pasted here and pressed submit then up comes the page telling me I can only submit one review so I was like major facepalm! then to make things ever worse I only just realised this second that i could have pasted the review in another chapter ... god I am suck an idiot sometimes.

Now I can't even remember 1/2 of what was written in my review and it was after 1am when I wrote it - so uh sorry bout that lol but I did love the chapter!

My review had something about -

The consequences of Bella's blood 'tainted' with Edwards venom, and the Angela/Ben situation. And a bunch of other stuff.

Meh - can't wait for more (I will though cos If I badger you, you won't be able to concentrate on writing) Ok I'm gonna shut up now - good luck with school and happy writing!

 



Author's Response:

Hi again, samic =)

You know whatty? That's happened to me before, too. So don't feel bad. I appreciate that you take the time to comment. It means a lot to me.

Thank you =) I'm happy that you did enjoy the chapter. It was kinda a pain in the arse to write, but I'm glad that it did turn out alright.

Yeah, there's so much to cover....Angela/Ben situation...Bella's tainted blood...illegal human hunting clubs...Volturi...hybrid situation...vamp jail and court...possible human disease...and even lighter stuff like vamp concerts and stuff like that. I haven't even covered 1/2 of it yet. There' so much more that it makes my head spin. Almost info overload. lol

No prob, but you aren't badering me. I love to answer q's and whatnot.  =)

Thanks again,

~Jells

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She's asking just a bit too much isin't she - a night out with out her bro's attentions...

 

Oh well we'll see what happens.

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

she should have been a bit meaner to him... make both of them open their eyes a little and why didn't Emmett apologise? (I think I can understand why)

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Typical Bella always forgiving I can't say it's too soon bacause it's not me in the situation ...

But something didn't quite sit right with me for some reason, I just can't put my finger on it.

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Is there a Tanya one shot? that would be interesting.

Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

False advertising! CLASSIC!!

 

Candy, ice cream, sunshine? Where the hell do ppl come up with those discriptions

 

Poor Edward and Bella - but more so Poor Emmett, not only is he going to find out about them being together and lovers but his friends and girlfriend also know! Then he's gonna have to battle the big bro instinct wanting to beat the crap out of Edward even if he is one of his closest friends.

 

You get the picture I'm trying to paint here?

 

Very humours chapter. :)

Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So is Rose gonna get an earful from Emmett about them sneaking round? And then find out the she knew?

 

Oh shit! - I'm glad its not me in this sitution/story.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

¨Oh Edward,¨ she cried. ¨I would love to be your girl and marry you, but sweetie, I can´t. What would we do with your father?¨


Hahahahaha love it - my next thought was -- father's body


I couldn't help it


 


As Esme was wiping Edwards tears away my eyes were starting to tear up from the beauty of the moment.


 

Reviewer: samic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Crap that last statement even has me cowering - it's just Bella's personality and strength in this story so far I think that has me feeling like that.

And I soooo can not wait for O.G.J.B.

I feel like doing a little Alice jumoing up and down squeeling at a pitch that even dogs have trouble hearing...

:D - even that smile isnt big enough to show how excited I am. 

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 80738
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: My Bella

Uh I thought Jacob was a werewolf - you said vampire earlier

Summary:

My piece for Fandom for Tsunami releif. When Bella goes with Edward to meet his long time friend, Jasper Whitlock, she finds what she least expected.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10554 Read Count: 7483
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 May 2012
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awwwww a HEA just what i needed!

a little bit of uhoh she touched him, whats he gonna do?? then the HEA :)

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Will u do a Carlisle pov?

I think that would be rather interesting. 

The depravity of Carlisle has me hooked,  usually I cant stand these type of stories but so far this has been hard to read but like a train wreck,  you just have to look.

 The quick updates have been good other wise I think it would be too overwhelming to have to wait more then a couple of days for an update. 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well this deff sounds interesting. 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aaaarrrrrrhhhh I'm addicted already can't wait fir the next chapter and to see how Carlisle responds to her feelings resignation at being there.

To me it feels like she doesnt really have any feelings at being firced I to this, she hust sighs and saysok even though she's filled with despair. 

You've got me wondering if Carlisle will be disappointed that shes not showing any fear (yet) or if he will be impressed (isnt really the right word) or more like 'huh I dont get you shouldn't you be scared?? Or more like tge tough barstard mob man and be like, 'notmuch but you'll do'.

 

 

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holey fu€king sh!t

Didn't think this Charlie had it in him! Knew he had some 'hatred' towards Bella but that was insane,  Carlisle didn't really surprise me was expecting it.

 

Another riviting chapter and interesting character development. 

Reviewer: samic Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hory fu*&ing mackrel, the way you've twisted these characters is quite amazing!