Reviews by Rushmr
Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49102
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Rushmr Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Cranky in Seattle

I'm glad to have found this story of yours on here being that I have read your other stories on fanfiction.  You are a great writer and I enjoy reading your work. However, I'm annoyed that your Ana seems reluctant to tell Christian something that seems so minor compared to what he shared with her.  After that scare with Hyde didnt they agree to be open and honest with each other by communicating better? Ana really need to get it together, she's the one making a big deal of this, if she want Christian to think its nothing.   

Reviewer: Rushmr Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Nolan Reed

This is different take at FSOG, but it is hilarious.  I laughed my but off... Absolutely loved it! 

Summary:

This is my sequel to my first 50 Shades story (I am so cool, I make my own sequels).... The kids are 6 and 4. Ana is 28 and Christian is 34. This story contains characters from my first story. The original was moved from Fanfiction.net

This is rated NC-17 for language and sexual content


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29860 Read Count: 44130
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Rushmr Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The Fallout

Ana definitely overreacted with her mother.  Yes it's wrong what Carla did, but Carla is a grown woman so she's entitled to do as she pleases even if it means having an affair with her ex husband.  Calm down Ana!  Maybe Ana thinks the same thing will happen to her and Christian?