Reviews by ON Labbit
Summary:

In a world that is rapidly being overrun by zombies, a group people from different walks of life converge, while learning to live and love amongst the ruins of their old lives. AH. Language, gore, humor, lemons. Indie TwiFic Award Nominee! stories/1619/images/Love_and_Zombies_banner.jpg


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61045 Read Count: 8473
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Beginning

Mischa's line at the end, "Are those fucking zombies?"

Haha, I love this story. ^^  ~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I had to do that lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Running is Sometimes the Best Option

This is the best Alice and Jasper.  And I love Jacob and Jared! ^^  Rosalie - well, she is the most awesome blonde in the universe, and that's that. ;)

Another great chapter!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I love this version of Alice and Jasper. They are so young and yet so wise

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Mad Scientists, Dogs, and a Hummer

“Love you too brother,” I put the barrel to the back of his head and close my eyes as I fire.

This, of course, reminds me of, Of Mice and Men.

I loved that you showed what an amazing love James and Victoria shared in such a small amount of space.  When he pulled her to his lap, holding her close, I actually choked up.  It was really well-written and this scene was one of my favorite scenes when I read it at FF.

Great job, Raven! 

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I didn't want James and Victoria to just be throw away characters so I needed to make a lasting impression. I'm glad it worked

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 On the Road Again

You can't beat a fun road trip!  ;)  Another great chapter!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

Especially when you have Jared and Jake to entertain you!

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spoons Annoy Me

That's a way to give Alice a nice hair cut. ;D  And Angela and Ben's death was still really sad. :(

Great job again!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

In most of my tales, I fins a way to give Alice long hair, but thought it was time to give her another short cut because it worked so well. And I didn't want to kill Angela and Ben, but I had to

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 To WallyWorld We Go!

And this was the point in the story when I did this:  O_O 

Leah and Charlie?  Leah and Charlie?  *blink blink*  Leah and...

Yep, that was pretty much it.  ;D

I love the pairing right now, actually.  Another great chapter!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I had to do something different!

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Incoming!

Bella and Alice really do kick some bootay! ;)  What a great couple. :D

Another great chapter!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

being bi myself, I think I might try to do a Bella/Alice story one day

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Game Plans

Everyone is off, and as you aptly put it, 'mobile buffets' for the z's. ;P  Another great chapter!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

thanks hun!

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Race is On

Another good chapter with Rose, Alice and Bella - Jasper too.  Esme is so sweet and caring.  I have to read the next chapter, don't I?

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

:-) of course you have to read! lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Luck is Always Two-Faced

:(  Esme is a goner.  And now Carlisle hits the crazy juice. 



Author's Response:

rofl what a way to summarize it

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Stupid Smart People

Thank you Jazz, but you should have given the wuss a good kick. :D  Bella is just too awesome for a certain doctor.  I guess she's out of his league?  HAHA

This is still such a great story.

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I don't know if you noticed, but I changed Bella and Edward's roles in this...she is the strong one, the protector and he is the weak one...people usually don't have the balls to do something like that

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: THIS IS RIDICULOUS

Thank you for sharing what went on between you and FF.  They never wrote me back.  I'm amazed they wrote you back. 

I completely and wholeheartedly agree with you.  If you know of anyone else being harassed by the LU let me know and I'll provide a full list from what I have of all the members to block from this insipid little group of hatemongers.  They are simply organized to harass authors of Twilight fanfiction.

Thanks, ~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I thought it was important that everyone knew what kind of treatment to expect.

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Thank You's Target Practice and....Bait?

New dog and Bella taking target practice on a roof.  Hah, this was a fun chapter.

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

I had to bring in another pup and get in why people could actually hit a target instead of poof! and magically being marksmen lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Missing

I'm glad you tried to clear up a little of what's bothering Tanya and she is not all to blame.  Nothing is clear cut and it was just the one time, plus I'd like to see Tanya get past the bedhead and have a life too. :)  I'm hopeful, since I love Tanya and that she speaks her mind.  

I really didn't expect Rose to take such a hard line against Tan (since I'm sure she's made mistakes in her life also), other than she's more loyal to Bella, and in that Tanya was just lashing out, and she's pregnant, and so far is feeling like the mud at the bottom of everyone's judgmental shoes because of the one night stand.  And there sits the perfect little coppertop acting like... well the perfect man of the world. Oy... I have a headache.

Charlie's POV is always great to read.  And I got to see Leah being competent, which is always a plus.

 



Author's Response:

I normally hate Tanya with a passion, but since I was changing so many characters around, I thought I'd give her a shot too

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Two Months

Ewww, is right!  I love that you are giving us the horror that we pay for.  As sad and disgusting as this scene was, I'm thinking this would have been awesome in a zombie movie and made me fast forward or turn away. ;D

Carlisle is truly crazy crackers now! ;P

Great job!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

It's great to have people understand that this story isn't fluffy hun :-)

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Where There Is Smoke....................

Poor Alice feeling all the crazy. :( 

LEAH!  And that's all I have to say.  LEAH POV, oh yeah!  :)

~Labbit ;)



Author's Response:

I felt so bad for Alice, but I had to do it

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: To Hell with Waldo, Where's Edward?

Bella for the win!  ^_^  She's a gymnast with poor taste in men.  Ah well, at least she has the zed killing skillz.

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

my philosophy is that all men are assholes and all women are bitches, you just find the one you can deal with the most shit out of lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Labbit's Awesome Outtake

Ahhhhhh!  I am definitely one of the Zombie fangirls!  Thanks Raven. :)  Your story is just so awesome its brimming with outtakes.  You're welcome and it was totally my pleasure writing it.  Now, you just have to get to work and write that next chapter. ;)  

Love your story, thanks Superman!

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

Nah, you're not just a fan girl, you're a Zombie Girl now, especially if that crazy brain of yours keeps this up! lol And I'm not the only one who is supposed to be working on chapters ;-) 

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Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What Can Go Wrong Will

Oh wow, what a great cliffie!  Bella, Tanya and Leah...dun dun dun. ;) LOL

Emmett and Rose - love his POV, and your OC's.

Poor Alice and Jasper, thwarted by a BBQ.

And as I've told you before, I'm finally warming up to Edward.  I mean, I don't love the guy, but, he's very bearable now and I'm okay with him and Bella in the story.  Okay. :D  (Man, I felt like something was going to fall on my head after typing that.)

Another great chapter and I'm totes looking forward to the next one!

~Labbit :)

 



Author's Response:

duck and cover! rofl I just got started on the next chapter, hopefully I don't get distracted lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Blondes and Bombshells

Again, I hope you the best with your family and take as much time as you need.  Not that you need our permission, but I know I love this story so much I'll wait for whenever you're able to update.

I wrote such a long review on FF that I'll shorten it here.

I loved Rosalie's POV and the fact she got a little girl.

Tanya and Leah, well you know they've been over at my place, and I just love those two.  :D

Bella POV was a crack up.  She and Jake are such great BFF's.

Thanks for the shout out and you take care of yourself.  Another great update!

~Labbit xoxo :)



Author's Response:

I had to give Rose and Emmett a little girl, it just felt right. And I just view Jake and Bella like my hubby and I would be if he was gay actually lol

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Flight

As I reviewed over at FF, I'm so sorry for your loss, Raven. :(

This was a great chapter.  Again, its amazing you wrote this with all you are dealing with.  I think from the scene with Bella to the end it was fantastic.

I completely understand why the topic is upsetting at the moment.

I hope you the best with the funeral and all that you are dealing with at the moment.

Take care of yourself!

~Val xoxoxo



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing over on here too hun!

Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Five Years Later.....

Short and sweet. :)  [I'm going to copy and paste from FF - makes it easier.  I might have added a few things also. :D]

That was a really sweet end.  I wasn't disappointed at all.  I'm glad you ended it in Alice's POV also.

I was especially impressed at how you made it very old-fashioned since the world is starting over.  They're like the first settlers on the homestead, all taking part in schooling the next generation, and then the horse and buggy driving up to the cabin was a nice touch.

I thought that was especially cool.

I wanted to also add Edward's death was EPIC in the previous chapter!  I forgot to tell you that earlier.  Of course, this whole story was EPIC, and I enjoyed it all, despite my random whining. ;)

It was well-written, always kept my interest, had fully developed characters, and fantastic and well-thought out plot, and so I'd say it's one of my favorite stories.

Thanks for sharing it with us and hope you the best this weekend and the days ahead.

~Labbit :)



Author's Response:

thank you! I don't think I'm ever going to say that enough

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: ON Labbit Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day

It's definitely got my attention.  But I need to know, is this the fic that you will have some girl/girl action, or is this another Bedward story? 

(I'm just considering my options.) ;P lol

Leah in the mix is definitely making this story look promising. ;)

Okay, good start and looking forward to the next chapter. 

~Labbit :)

 



Author's Response: I was thinking about doing this as a Bella/Jasper fic actually, but I also may have the beginning of a Bella/Rosalie storu trying to form in my head as well