Reviews by teetag
The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Almost Losing It

Great story. Turning out to be the best one other then Emacipation Proclamation and I hold that story has the highest of fan fiction. So you know you are in good company with me.

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533202
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

I LOVE THIS  STORY. I LOVE THE VIOLENCE THE GORE AND THE HOT SEX.  THIS IS A GREAT MAFIA STORY. IT IS EVEN BETTER THAN JOHNNYBOY THERE WILL BE FREEDOM.  

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

HI I HAVE NEVER FELT FOR A STORY LIKE THIS  FOR AGES EP WAS THE LAST STORY FOR ME AND THIS STORY TOUCHES MY HEART.   IT HAS EVERYTHING IN IT HUMOR AND NOW I AM CRYING WITH BELLA. THIS STORY IS BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL TWILIGHT. WILL IT BE A SEQUEL. I JUST BECAME A LOYAL FAN.  THANKS FOR BEING A GREAT WRITER. I HONOR YOU. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm so glad you like it.  There is a lot more to come, but I'm afraid there will be no sequel.  The story is defintely finished as it's written.  I'm happy with how everything wraps up, and I have two other stories in the works, one Twilight and one HP, which I'm anxious to have time to work on.  Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806560
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 49: By the Book

This third story is good. But kind of tame. It doesn't have bloom and guts like the first two. I missed the blood and guts the lemons are nice. But Santino seem like a whimp. He definitely is not Edward. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

I am so sorry that ff cancel your story. They have been taken over by the TEA PARTY. but I am glad I can read it here. Also could you put all your stories here. I appreciate  each and everyone. You are my favorite writer out of everybody. Even JOHNNYBOY. 

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Good story. I really want her to keep Edward at a distance. He can be a part of the baby life. But Bella shouldn't let him be a part of her life til he get some proffesional help.  And start paying child support. She needs to keep her option open. 

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

Is Edward the boss son. Is that why he save him.  

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

Hey will their be a sequel? I hope so.  

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

 Let me guess? Edward's parents only stage their death. They are still alive. The boss is Caleb and he is Edward father?  So Edward is mafia royalty. That means Isabella is his princess. I can't wait for Alexc and Felix to meet a horrible death. I hope you go butt ugly gross me out. This is TWSC after all. I guess you can tell I followed this story UH. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

Thanks so much for a great story. I love the characters and you bring them to life. 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717424
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I ALREADY LOVE IT   THANKS SO MUCH. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I pray this is is a long story. I love this story. I have it on alert on my IPad. Will their be a sequel. I really love you. And your writing skills. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yes yes yes.  Do 2. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I think you for this story. My doctor want let me do much. So this story and wisp are greeting me by. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Will Edward be boss

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

How long is this story. I like long stories. And how long will it take for Edward to come into his own. He is definitely Boss material. This is my favorite story. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

GREAT AS ALWAYS. I AM LOOKING FOR THE MOB WORLD STUFF TO KICK. BLOOD AND GUTS. WILL EDWARD ONE DAY BECOME THE DON?

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Thanks for one of the best stories here. I will wait till you get thru telling it. I love all your stories. I am a big fan

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

So I was wondering. Edward is being groomed to take over for CJ dad. Will Edward get to knock his grandfather off too. I love the way you write your Edwards.  And thank for being my number one author. You rock!!   

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Great story. I am still sticking to it. Keep writing the violence and the sex.  You are  GREAT.  

Summary:

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

When the worst thing imaginable happens, every little girl just wants her daddy and Jade was no different. The difference between Jade and other little girls is that her daddy won’t just make everything all better, but will paint the world in blood while he’s at it. 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/OC
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6034 Read Count: 2721
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2013
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to read the next couple of chapters. How often do you update. I love the writing style and the story caught my attention immediately. 

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

Great story. How often do you update. How long will the story be. I love long stories and will you be doing a sequel

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

My God what a horrible family. Please keep writing. This is so good

Summary:

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Edward Masen is a normal 17-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a soldier, but when tradegy strikes his family, his entire life changes. Edward is introduced to the supernatural world he had no idea even existed, and he certainly doesn't want to live in it.

It was during the month of March in the year of 1918 that the first signs of the influenza was revealed to the public, although no one ever imagined the damages this historic event would have on the American people.
One citizen in particular faces an irrevocable change that cause a chain of e...vents to unfold through the twentieth century. The price was to give up his old life, but he would later gain more than he ever thought he would.

A Pre-Twilight Canon story about the life of Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Angst, Family, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight Origins
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117254 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 20 Aug 2019
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2016 Title: Origins: A Lost Soul

Please please do a  version of Bella. I love everything that this story is. It's actually better than Stephanie version. Yeah I'm a fan. Can you give us a novella of Bella please. I will tweet this story forever. It so amazing and visual. I never got that feeling from the Twilight books. I can actually see these characters. 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for the story update and welcome back

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am so glad you are keeping story here. I heard that fanfiction is getting ready to censor stories again. And your story is at the top of my list. I wait patiently for each chapter because this story is yummy

Summary:

Isabella Swan has her eyes on the prize. Unfortunately that means she has to steal from the most feared Mobster around, Edward Cullen. Isabella is about to find out just how possessive Edward is over his things. Mobward, Possessiveward, and a little bit of Domward. Lemons AH.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11652 Read Count: 12648
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2014 Updated: 19 Aug 2018
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Hit

I think you had this story on fanfiction. And then you stop writing it. I loved this story. And I love your Bad Ass Bella. I am glad you are back. And could you post more than 1 chapter and I love the longer story. I like to feel that I am actually watching the movie version that I read thru your words. It all about the details and the story for me

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting

Great story.  But don't write it short. Run with a longer version. I love long stories. I love back history on characters. I am sticking to this story like glue. I've been missing Sexilexicullen but not anymore. Write this thing. Home girl. Will their be a sequel. Is Bella a badass. I pray so. I hate clumsy and stupid weak Bella. Sorry Lol

Summary:

 

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Banner made by Eva

War has ripped the world apart. Bella is living in one of the few cities left. Life is cruel, food is scarce, and a few people hold all the power, but all is not as it seems.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11544 Read Count: 13306
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2014 Updated: 02 Mar 2016
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Jurisdiction

Can we have a lot more updates please. Waiting for months is not a good idea



Author's Response:

I am sorry that my update schedule isn't good enough for you, but it is what it is. I've had a poor health these past few months and I have 3 kids to look after. If you don't like it. Don't read.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478801
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is you mob boss a wimp or will he get bloody.  This is the mafia after all



Author's Response:

Not saying bloody, but he's not a wimp.

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

How often do you post your chapter. This story has be salivating. Can you do more than one chapter. How about 2. Did I tell you I love this story. 

Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hey maybe they clone Bella.  Or she has a twin she didn't know she had

Summary: Past Featured Story

E.X.P.R.E.S.S.


Express is the hottest bar and lounge in Carlsbad, California. Kate only hires the hottest staff members to entice customers. While drama sometimes happens with customers, there is no drama that can compare with her employees. Rumors are constantly spread and there are no secrets with this group. You’re either accepted or not. While they seem like a dysfunctional group, they work great together. However, when relationships start to develop, things get a little rocky.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4706 Read Count: 1321
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2014 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: teetag Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It sounds like a very good story. I know I won't be disappointed. Oh what the hell. I have all your stories and I am never disappointed. See you on the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Here is your teaser!

“I knew you’d be back here,” the smooth velvety voice whispered in my ear.

I turned my head slightly to the left with a coy smirk on my face. “You think you know me so well, don’t you?”

I went back to organizing the back for tomorrow morning as Edward continued to talk to me. “I wish, but you got that sexy mysterious vibe.”

I placed the last box on the shelf and turned around, not realizing how close he really was. My back was pressed against the white tiled wall, trying to allow some space between us. My brown eyes stared into his darkening green eyes.

“You think I’m mysterious and sexy?” I asked breathlessly as my heart beat quickly.

A chuckle escaped his lips before his crooked smile widened. “You are sexy as hell, Bella Swan.” He leaned away standing taller before leaving me in the back.

See you Tuesday!

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65970
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: teetag Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving the story will it be long cause I love long story Also how often do you post.