Reviews by Carlisle girlfriend1
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-The Start of Forever

Great ending to the story. Good luck with your book.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Reunited

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Sweet chapter. Happy to see Bella and Carlisle together as a couple. Just wished they would kissed already.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

Aww, sweet chapter. I have a feeling Bella is going to stay now. Though, I kind of wanted her to leave for a while. Maybe have Carlisle come to her instead of the other way.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

What do you mean we might hate this chapter? I totally love it, espeically how Carlisle entered into the drama and comforted Bella.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

All I can say is H.O.T.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

I wondered what dare Carlisle wouldn't do? More, please, more.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes

I think this is by far my favorite chapter in this story. You did an amazing job on the proposal. I don't think you could have done anything better than that.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's

I like it. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time

Bella's in her numb state now.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus

Awesome chapter. I love how concern everyone is about Bella. Shows how much they love and care about her.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three

I like this Rosalie better than the books. Great job.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices

I wonder what that means? Carlisle walking into a dense fog like that? More, please.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

Yay! Bella's getting better. More, please.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

Well, I didn't cry, but I don't think I'm a heartless monster. Great chapter. Happy to see Bella finally awake.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

What a sweet and romantic chapter this was. I love it!

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

I think you did an excellent job on the lemon scene. Can't wait to see what happens next in the lives of Bella and Carlisle.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

What a sweet chapter this was. I totally love it.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Fantastic chapter. Can't wait to see how Carlisle response to the lollypop set.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

Yeah, Carlisle is there. I hope he beat the crap out of her for hurting Bella like that.

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Beautifully well written. I love it!

Reviewer: Carlisle girlfriend1 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Hot is all I can say about the lemon scene.