Reviews by slynnmitchell
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145696
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn! That was hot!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! Great storyline!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much.

E.

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49123
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Nolan Reed

OMG! Nolan is as obnoxious as the real deal....gotta love it!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Worst Week Ever

Wow. The six degrees of separation can be very cruel sometimes.

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Fabulous story. just as good as the first one. Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.

E.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591742
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

This is such a wonderful thing that she wants to do for Tommy and Lorna...but why do I smell a shitstorm coming?

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Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

That was HOT!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I have a sister who is addicted to crack cocaine. I haven't seen her in at least 10 years now. It is very true how you have written Lorna's character. When you start talking rehab to them, it's like the walls are closing in on them and they have to get away as quickly as possible. I can't even begin to get into their mind to tell you what they are thinking. All I can tell you is that when somebody gets too close to their business, they are like trapped rats. and if she is true to form, what she is going to do next is try to check Tommy out of the hospital and run. Because he is so sick and has obviously been abused, they are not going to let her do that. So she is going to try to just TAKE him out of the hospital and run. If all else fails, she is just going to run. If she does actually eventually seek help, she is going to be the exception, not the norm, and if she doesn't end up dead somewhere it will be a miracle! My sister lost two children--they died as babies--and it still wasn't enough to get her clean. Sad but true.

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man that was classic! Ana stood in the back of the elevator just quietly listening to this bitch talking about her man. Then he inadvertently gets on the elevator and this trick makes her move. And after she gets her face "cracked" by Christian, Ana coyly calls to her husband who helps her out of the back of the elevator and grinds her in a liplock right there in front of the girl! Not only are you standing there rejected but you just had this entire conversation with his wife standing right behind you! She should just want to curl up and die right there! But to make a bad matter worse, she's FIRED before she even steps off the damn elevator! Completely freakin' classic!!! I LOVE it!!!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was fantastic!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Okay I know this not supposed to be funny, but I am sitting here cracking up. Besides the whole "I think I'm dying" thing, can you imagine you're about tohave sex and the next thing you know you wake up in the hospital, your spouse's wrist is broken, and you get home and your bedroom looks like the Apacolypse (did I spell that right? lol). Too great!!! Loved it!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes. Thank you. and yes it was suppose to be funny. They Grey's are really funnny people.

thanks for leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG! Poor Christian and Ana! I couldn't even imagine being caught in that situation. Tragic yet so so funny--except for the whole broken-arm-emergency-room-thought-your-husband-was-dying thing. But that whole housekeeper/security-saw-us-naked-vampire-sex thing was hilarious! And Christian couldn't get his priorities straight for shit!!! "So we didn't have vampire sex?" "Did Taylor see you naked?" I don't know if I should be laughing or not but I am cracking up! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You can laugh. Mr. Grey is one funny guy.

Thanks for the nice comment. I appreciate it.

E.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow. So now we get some more insight into who Christian Grey is. I wonder how she's going to handled this? Christian is going to feel just as betrayed as he did when she saw Leila "behind his back" although that night did end with some kinky fuckery...

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh good Lord! Leila and Susie again. Welcome to the sub club. Good grief...what the hell are they playing at?

Author's Response:

Maybe it will be okay.

E.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hot angry sex is the BEST!!!!!!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What am I missing? Why are they so upset about Ray and Myra?



Author's Response:

Explaination in the next chapter....just posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I am actually sick wondering what he's going to do. How can you just detach yourself that way? I means I know we're dealing with a unique breed but I've never seen anything like that before in my life.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I am too invested in this damn story. I actually went to sleep last night crying for Ana because I know how it feels to love someone and feel like they don't love you anymore. Dammit I need a life, lol.

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Let sigh. I told you I was too damn invested in this story. If they didn't reconcile soon I think I was just going to roll over and die. This was an argument/separation like I have never seen before with them and I just didn't know how to handle it. People were discussing it in the group and I couldn't say anything because Christian had left me....I means Ana (lol). So glad they worked it out. I'm not worried...I know you'll keep the story going how you see fit.

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming along on the journey.

E.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Okay, the talk about the kids was hilarious...and the hot sex wasnt too bad either! ;-)

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Ana has adopted a little family. Please don't let Christian get mad...it's a sweet thing to do.

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

That was a good chapter. I was wondering what ever happened with the cast. Thanks for reminding me I'm not completely crazy, lol. "I have very strong entrepreneurial genes, that will dominate your I wanna' read a book genes." That's funny!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

"Hi Honey. I'm home."...well, fuck!! I hope it's you! Or I just got fucked by a phantom!!!

 

OK....One of Tommy's babysitters is calling. I hope to hell the drugged-out heifer has not come and taken Tommy out of the hospital or I might have to jump into your story and kick her ass. 

 

I'm just saying...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Ray Steele is a former Winston Cup winner struggling to finance and keep his NASCAR team running.  He has just got Steely, a very promising new driver.  He needs funding and sponsorship.

Enter Christian Grey, who take an interest in racing a business venture, however its the new driver that really peaks his interest.

AU, HEA, 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Sports
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57854 Read Count: 18458
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2015
Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Fanfiction ousted you for that? As far as foursomes go, was really very classy. When you said that fanfiction ousted you, I expected some raunchy orgy, crazy shit! Fan fiction was just being prudish and apparently some troll hater must have reported you because hell… I've seen much raunchier, nasty, not so classy scenes on fanfiction. That was very, very well done!  Good on you!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so really loving this story!