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Bio:
I'm a 30 year old mom of 2 living in the little state of Kansas. Anybody wanna see my babies? Here they are!
That's my little guy, Kyan. He loves the zoo :)
Heehee, my sweet Emmy loves the swings!
I'm a trained musical theatre actor, but I can't say that there's much call for that here. It's just something I do for fun now anyway. I tend to think and speak in music and theatre terms, but I haven't studied in about six years so I'm bound to get some of it wrong at some point!
I like a lot of things. Music, books, movies (especially with Rob...yum), everything and anything Disney (five words, cast night on Pleasure Island..oh yeah), the list goes on forever!
I'm on FF.net, Twilighted, and Twitter, all under the same Penname. Come visit!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
I think that was the perfect ending! Great job. Definitely an amazing story!
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I stayed up half the night to get these fifteen chapters read, and was NOT disappointed. You're doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what you've got coming!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Seriously, I'm laughing my butt off over here! Poor Jasper. And when Esme said something about being in labor for 26 hours, I just about died. That's how long I was in labor with my son. Not the best, but I'd do it all over again for him! If you get another chapter out, that's awesome, but if not, then good luck and congratulations!! Babies are great!
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yay for babies! This was a great chapter. Why do I have the feeling that Alice went to call Rosalie when she left Bella's room? This may not end well. And I had to laugh a little bit when you dropped the name Rae in there. My name's Rachel, and all through High School people called me Rae so as not to get me confused with all the other Rachels. Funny times. Great job!!
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Oh Edward. You worry too much. The date was incredibly sweet.
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!
~Rachel
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
This was really great. I think it's really brave of you to tackle such a difficult and controversial subject like abuse. It's something that most people want to avoid, but needs to be addressed, so thank you. Thankfully, I've not experienced abuse in the firsthand sense, but my sister was a victim of sexual abuse. It was almost 18 years ago, but I know that it affected her for a long time. In any case, you're doing good things with this story, and I thank you for that.
~Rachel
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Poor Rosalie. That can be so devastating to someone. I was once told that I might not ever be able to have children, but thankfully, I have two amazing little ones. So maybe there's hope for her yet, who knows. I'm really glad that Bella has decided to try therapy. It could be really good for her. I think, most of all, my heart goes out to Emmett. I think it's because not only did he lose a baby that he didn't even know existed, but it was kept from him for so long.
Great job with this one. I can't wait to see what you've got coming :)
~Rachel
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Great job with this chapter. I'm glad that Emmett is taking some time to figure out how he feel and what he wants. He needs it. And I love that Bella is starting to let Charlie in. That's so important for her. Can't wait for more!!
~Rachel
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Great job with this chapter :) I'm glad that Emmett decided to not be with Victoria. Even if he doesn't get back with Rose, it's just not a good time for him to be with someone right now. I LOVE how she stood up to Jake. It takes a strong person to be able to stand up for someone they live like that. And I find it incredibly ironic how Jake said that Edward was too old for her, when she's older Jake by the same amount....heehee
And no worries about the shameless self promotion....we all do it!
~Rachel
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Oh....shit..... I did NOT see that coming! I wonder what's going to happen now....
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Oh lord...I had no idea this was coming! But it's a great twist :) I love how she caught that fish. It could be a great confidence booster for her. I know it's a small thing, but sometimes it's the small things that count the most. And Edward is so completely sweet and perfect with her :) Well, okay, no one's perfect, but still. You know what I mean, lol. I can't wait for more!
~Rae
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal
I really love this story. I was waiting with bated breath for the next update! So glad to hear that there's a healthy baby in the family now. It's always exciting. I can't wait to see how the relationship develops between them all!
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to be able to get back on a set weekend schedule but with the holiday next weekend I maybe a day or two late, but I'll do my best.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved
I'll admit it. I squealed when I saw the update. This story is so completely intriguing to me. I hope your cousin is doing better, and that RL lets you catch your breath soon. In any case, you pulled out a great chapter. I loved it.
Questions:
Would love to hear from Rosalie and Edward. I know that Bella loves Edward, but how does he feel about her?
Also, would love to know what Rosalie is thinking of Bella, beyond the reporter part.
And yes, seeing the session would be....we'll say lovely (for lack of a better term). Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I posted the story real quick and I hope to be able to write sometime this week. I honestly could use the down time.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open
Wow. I don't know whether to say "poor Rose" or "damn she's strong". If, for some reason, Bella does end up with them in the end, I hope Rosalie is alright with that. I hope there's a happy ending for everyone in the end.
I'm glad real life calmed down for you! Hope your days are carefree for a while!
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression
Very good chapter! I will admit, Rosalie was acting like a spoiled brat there. She's going to have to learn to get over herself. I can understand that she's been through a lot in her life, and I would only expect that to linger for a very long time. However, she chose to live this lifestyle. If she doesn't want to share Edward with whomever he deems worthy to bring into their family, she shouldn't have let him start dating. That or she should have left, as awful as that sounds. Wow, I sound incredibly mean. I'm sorry! That's not what I was going for! In any case, I'm completely addicted to this. It's like I just have to find out what's going to happen.
Happy birthday, BTW! Your weather sounds pretty close to what we've had here. Storms and all.
~Rachel
Author's Response:
You don't sound mean, it's the truth. Thousands of people are abused and they don't act like the world owes them, there comes a time when you just have to let it go. I for one think it's time for Rosalie to realize it.
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge
I really love this story. I'm still afraid of how it's going to end. I know ideally everyone would end up together and happy, or they'd even somehow end up in good old canon couples. However, I just have a feeling that somehow it won't be that way. No worries, I'm too invested in this to not follow it all the way to the end! I'm actually very excited to see how it all comes out.
~Rachel
Author's Response:
I truly love Edward and Bella... but I honestly don't know where they are going to go at this point. I have a slight plan but nothing is set in stone. I'm just letting the story go where it will.
Thanks for the support.
Denise
Author's Response:
I truly love Edward and Bella... but I honestly don't know where they are going to go at this point. I have a slight plan but nothing is set in stone. I'm just letting the story go where it will.
Thanks for the support.
Denise
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback
I love that Edward finally said something to Bella. And I like knowing some of Bella's history. Great chapter :)
As for when you post, I'll stick with the majority on this one. I love longer chapters, but at the same time, I love faster updates. Pros and cons to both, I suppose!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Rachel
I agree it's nice to finally start to see them together.
I agree with the pros and cons on upsating that's why I asked. I enjoy longer chapters.
Denise
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire
I'm so sorry to hear about everything! That's so hard. I really hope that your friend is healing in the best way she can right now, and I hope that your cousin has a speedy and uncomplicated recovery. Sounds like your little girl had a birthday, so happy birthday to her! And I hope you had a great mini vacay :)
This was a great chapter. I think it's one that we've all been hoping for! When they kissed for the first time....wow. It's like I could feel everything that they were trying to tell each other. It's not easy to get an emotional AND physical reaction from a reader, so great job with that! Hopefully Rose can get used to the idea of Bella being around....though I'm sure it won't be without it's drama!
Again, it was a great chapter. We're happy to see you back!!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Rachel, thanks!
I'm glad you liked the chapter it took a lot of time to write. If you haven't figured it out yet I like the drama, so of course there will be some major drama in the near future.
Denise
Author's Response:
Rachel, thanks!
I'm glad you liked the chapter it took a lot of time to write. If you haven't figured it out yet I like the drama, so of course there will be some major drama in the near future.
Denise
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table
I'm glad they got some of that out into the open :) I think it was really important for the story to be able to move forward. Hopefully Rosalie won't be TOO upset about Bella and Edward. It would be a shame if things just fell apart between ANY of them.
Great job with this one...I can't wait to see what you've got coming next!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Up next... Dating.... Lets see just how far they can push Rosalie shall we.
Denise
A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33362
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
This was so sweet! I really enjoyed it. Great job!
After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance
Awwww. I'm glad that Edward called Charlie so that they could make up. He was being stubborn, but as soon as his baby girl was in trouble, he was there. Just like a good Daddy would be. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Edward knew he had to make that call. Charlie is stubborn, but like you said, he would never not be there for his girl. Glad you liked this one.
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: The Best Revenge is Good Sex
Such a sweet chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thanks for the love, I'm glad you liked the chapter and there won't be a long wait for more!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Something Worth Celebrating
Oooohh I wish I had had some of Bella's shirts while I was pregnant. I hated people touching me. My mother was the WORST. And, of course, you can't say anything to your mom because it's just rude. So I grumbled in silence until I got home, and let my hubby have it. I'm surprised I'm not single today! But seriously, great chapter! I love that they were so excited about her article. And that Alice finally spilled....ha! You rock with this story (and of course all your others!), and I hope you know that!
Author's Response:
Alice finally stopped fighting her inner cougar! Thank you so much for the love and I'm going to be posting again very soon!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift
SUCH a good chapter! It's situations like that that make me grateful about having 2 fairly uneventful pregnancies. Jake's gonna get it, though! Grrrr....
I'm still waiting for that moment as a writer that blows my mind....but I have faith that it'll happen someday! (I can't be as bad as I try to think I am! LOL) I'm really glad that you're moving up in our little fandom family. I've only heard the best about you, so it's nice to see that you're also hearing those positives. Congratulations!!! ;o)
Author's Response:
Yes Jake certainly is gonna get it. I'm sure that moment will happen for you too! It makes me glad that you guys love what I do and hearing it in every review makes me smile. I'm glad you like it!
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions
Stupid Jake. I love how awkward he was with Billie. My husband was like that with our first baby. You did a great job with this! I loved it!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Thanks...I wanted to show that young guy who never experienced a baby before. He doesn't have a sister to show him all this stuff, or let him watch her kid so he's going in blind. Jake is stupid but I swear he's gone for good. Thanks for the love!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard
Soooo good! I really love that Billie was brave enough to call her parents. She knew that she needed her mom and dad. Amazing, as always!
She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered?
When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?
Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.
(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Weekend to Remember
I love this story! I had to get through everything before I could stom to review. Edward is completely wonderful. Bella so deserves someone like him. As for James, I truly hope he gets what's coming to him. He needs to pay. Maybe I'll just play it out in my mind where he's stuck in a room with Edward, Emmett, Jasper and maybe Carlisle too. Heehee. He wouldn't walk out of there unscathed.....if he walked out at all. (Not that our favorite boys are killers, that's not what I meant.)
Author's Response:
absolutely loved your review. It made me smile as I read it on my BlackBerry... people around me were asking what I was smiling at!!
Our boys are certainly not killers, but hey, if they were going to be, James would be the one to practice on... hehe
I'm glad you found my story! Stay tuned!
Thanks again for the review!
~Fatima
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Uh-Oh
I had a feeling it might be something like that. Okay, I'm a little worried about her sending that picture to Carlisle and Esme. I'm thinking that somehow James is going to see it and know where they're at and come after her.....crap! I hope that Edward isn't mad if she is pregnant. I mean, I can't truly see him being upset, but stranger things have happened. I'm really excited that you updated, and I can't WAIT until I see what happens next!!!
~Rachel
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Inevitabilities
Uh oh......Carlisle is going to feel awful when he realizes that he dropped that photo.... I really hope that James gets what's coming to him. He's such an awful man.
Great chapter! I'm really glad that Edward was so happy about the baby. Can't wait for more!!!!
~Rae
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens
I really hope James gets what's coming to him....he's pure EVIL! Though, I worry what will happen if the authorities ever find out that she faked her death. Hmmmm... Great job! I'm excited for the next chapter :) Have a good time on your trip!!
~Rae
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I love this!! I'm a sucker for happy happy stories. Sometimes you just want to read something that's not full of angst and drama. Can't wait to see how it all pans out!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19
EMMMA!!! Girl, I'm so glad to see you back! I really liked this chapter, and no worries about lemons. They'll come when they come. You can't force yourself to be ready for anything.
If you need a beta, I'd be happy to help you out if you like. I'm doing one for my girl pattsylove (plus running thorough all of her old chapters before we hooked up). Whatever you like!
If you have a minute, check out the new story I just put up. I'm kinda proud at how it's starting out (plus, it's the first thing I've written that's longer than 1 chapter) and would love your opinion.
Love to ya!
Rachel
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue
My sweet, sweet girl! You've done SO well! It was the perfect ending, I think. Love the banner for the new story. Great job!!! Love ya girl!
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
Tony huh? Could it be? Dare I hope? Only you know! Love it so far and I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
;) I'm glad you've liked it so far. I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
Ooooooo...still getting that feeling about Tony! Although, I can just see him getting all mad at her for not telling him who she really was. But then again, he didn't say anything to her either...this will be good!
Author's Response:
I'm so looking forward to revealing all of this to you guys! It's so hard to hold these back, but I don't want to have you waiting a week or two between posts if I can keep them on a steady schedule! Thanks for the review1
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
He can be incredibly sweet when he wants to be. That was awfully nice that he didn't force Angela in to anything. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
AHHHH!!! I can't wait until they see each other. And I hope that Angela gets to go with her. But I have a bad feeling about Jessica....I hope she doesn't do anything stupid. Love it!! Can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities
AHHHH!!! I can't wait!!!! I'm really happy that you posted early. Though, I know it will probably not happen like that often. It was a great surprise though. I was so excited to see the notice in my inbox, I actually squeaked. Like a thirteen year old girl, which I have NOT been in about fourteen years so imagine my embarassment at that! Love it!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
AAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I had a feeling early on and damn it, I WAS RIGHT!!! Perfect. Simply perfect.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
How incredibly SWEET is he? I love this, but you know that already!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
Yay for Emmett coming! It just wouldn't be the same without him. Love it! Still love it, you know that though!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
All good things must come to an end. That's right, I just pulled out that cliche. But's true! Great chapter, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Have you gone into your account info/edit preferences and clicked the little box to indicate you want email alerts when an author updates? If not then that is probably the problem with you not getting your alerts. If you have then I suggest sending out a message to Bob or even posting it on the Shout box on TWCS homepage. They're super awesome about fixing things if you let them know!!! :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
Ahhh, a semi honeymoon. Time alone with our favorite couple. Can't wait to see how they utilize it.....
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment
So sweet! I loved it. I have to say I'm kind of excited for them to get to their "normal" life. I'm excited to see how they handle things as they learn to balance their royal life with their personal life.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen
Hopefully Bella won't have to go through TOO much hassle. Can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty
Poor Emmett! He's all lonely. I hope that will be remedied in time. Great chapter! Still love it, but you know that already!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante
I hate gossip mongers. Those people who spread things to just hurt others or be mean. It's just wrong. Anyway, I think it's great that Bella is going to sit in on those meetings. She's incredibly smart, and will be an excellent asset to them.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
Ah, Tanya. She's just pure evil. Okay, so I know she was just introduced, but I'm hard pressed to find a story where I like her. Great chapter!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
HELL YES! Feisty Alice is my FAVORITE! Never liked Tanya. Probably never will. Can't wait for what comes next. Have a great weekend, filled with fun and adventure!
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
I wonder.....hmmmm.....I'm not gonna guess. 'Cause if I do, then I'm going to be wrong. Loved it!
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
I had a feeling that might be part of the problem. Ugh, morning sickness (or in some cases, morning sickness that can't tell time...) sucks.
I just wanted to take a minute and tell you how impressed I am with this story. Not just because of the good storyline you have, but with the Old English vocabulary and details pertaining to the age it's set in. You're doing a fantastic job, and I think that everyone should read this.
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished
YES! She's gone! Evil wench. And how cute are Emmett and Rosalie? Great chapter!
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
Tanya is just EVIL! I can't wait to see what happens now that she's started this crap. She has to know that she can't win. She's just desperate. Hopefully there won't be too many people who believe it!
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
Bring it on! I'm really quite desperate to know who's behind this. I mean, I know Tanya is, but I want to know if she's the mastermind or if it goes any deeper. This is just so GOOD!
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
Yay! I love that they got to come for Christmas! She must be so excited. Edward is possibly the sweetest man to ever live in our fictional little world :)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings
Great job! I love that she was caught and I hope she gives them the information that they need. I wonder who killed Newton.....
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
Greay job on this one :) I'm really glad that they're making Tanya go work in the fields like the servents she used to command. And the fact that James has been sentenced to death....thank God :)
~Rachel
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
Great job with this chapter. I love that Emmett was named Duke. And that he and Rosalie got engaged. Also, the fact that Bella was gracious enough to give Kate the freedom to be with the man she loves at night. And that they're both being moved to the castle.
As for baby names, I'm not sure how relevant they are to the time but I've always been partial to Brighton, Kenton, and Ashlyn. Just a thought :)
~Rachel
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
*sniff* So wonderful! This was the perfect ending. Amazing job, and congratulations on finishing another story.
~Rachel
What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?
NC-17 All Human/OOC
Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Crap. Is it over for good? Are they just going to decide that they're better off without each other? Is Edward ever going to forgive Carlisle? Does this sound like the ending of a bad soap opera? Just kidding. I'm done! Love it, even though there's trouble in paradise.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever
I think it was a great ending! All I was hoping for was that they ended up together. And James did turn out to be a decent guy. That's how I wrote him, too. But he's going to be a villain in what I'm working on now....shit. Sorry, that's beside the point. Anyway, great job. I can't wait to read the epi!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Perfection. I don't think I can express it any better than that.
I'm ready, I am totally ready for this. I'm just gonna knock on his door take charge and get it done...
today was Valentine's Day and I was going to lose my virginity.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5385 Read Count: 2040
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was great! I loved it, good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry been total fail at responding.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I love this story! I wanted to get through every chapter posted before I reviewed. I think it's great. I'm about ready to smack Rosalie though. But then she'd probably kick my ass, and I'm a wuss. I'd just cry then. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Okay, I'm in actual physical PAIN after reading this! I have to admist that I'm a little angry at how Esme reacted. I understand that she was upsed that the girls kept a secret again, but she was bordering on cruel with how she talked to Bella and about Alice. I can't wait until the next update so I can see how this all gets resolved. Or at least STARTS to get resolved :)
~Rae
Author's Response:
tle - you blow me away with your reviews - thank you for them - working on update now
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I have to say that I'm so impressed with the was Bella stood up to Rosalie. Can't wait to see what happens when Edward gets home.....
Author's Response:
yeah, Bella doesn't share our enthusiasm!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I'm sure that they have a funny way of trying people's patience. I really loved this chapter. It's funny, the more stories I read that have a D/s theme, the more intriguing I find it. Great job! Can't wait for more!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great job! Can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Wow. My heart was actually aching at how Bella wanted so badly to please him, and how he wanted so badly to just hold her and love her. You write SO well. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
They better get it right! But, they're both very new to this. Edward may have been a Dom for a while, but he's never done the sub/girlfriend thing. And Bella's never been a sub before so it's all very complicated. I hope this doesn't fuck everything up for them. Great chapter!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Okay, I'm off to take a cold shower....I think I'm in love with Domward.
Author's Response:
Oh I am totally in love with him!!! thanks for the review xoxo
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
It's sad that they're apart, but I think it's good for them. Anybody want to tell me why I got a funny feeling about Vicky and Jim? Hmmm...... Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I don't know why you have that feeling *giggle* ...thanks for the review - you keep me honest
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!
So, she needs to move out. Like, NOW. I knew there was a reason I didn't feel good about Jim and Vicky. Ugh. He's such a slimeball. Riley sounds cute, as long as he doesn't turn into a giant prick too. Great chapter!!! Can't wait for more :)
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Uh oh......I think I'm a little scared.....
Author's Response:
me too! thnks for the review xoxo
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I love the chapters that don't end! They're the most fun! I'm torn between being excited and scared for the punishments..... Can't wait either way!
Author's Response:
I am busy with the update now - thanks for taking the time to review
xoxo
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
God, I think I'm in sub-space just after reading it! Whew! Domward is by far my favorite kind of Edward. I think an outtake of Alice and Jasper would be great. This was a great chapter. I loved the ceremony, too. I though it was really sweet and loving. And the part where the guys served their girls was incredibly touching. It might seem like something small, but the undertones of such an act are great. Great job! Can't wait to see what you've got planned for the rest of the weekend :)
~Rachel
Author's Response:
thanks, Rachel!
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I had a feeling his reaction would be something like that. In light of his reaction, I know it must be awfully tempting to run out that front door, but it's probably in her best interest if she does exactly as he says. No reason to anger him any further. Great job with this one!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Thanks Rachel - I have told her to listen to you - hope she does!
xoxo
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Oh. My. God. Whew. I think I need a cold shower after this one! Awesome chapter!! Lessons with Edward....mmmm......sounds like a fun Saturday to me!
Author's Response:
Yeah, so I asked but she doesn't share either!! Damn!
Thanks for the review
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Great chapter! I'm glad that she's starting to be more open with him about how she's feeling. I can't wait to see what happens next!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
thanx!
Author's Response:
TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29
“P-pardon?” Bella felt faint. This is bad! This is really, really bad!
Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’
Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.
Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you. It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.
Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.
She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents. Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.
My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life?
Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.
What had she done?
Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.
“y-yes?” she whispered.
“Bella?”
“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
I love a commanding Emmett....it's just hot sometimes :) Great job with this one! I'mm really excited to read about their weekend in LA. Hopefully it'll be fun times for all!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
A commanding Emmett - yummy! Thats one of the reasons that I wrote the outtake on him and Rosalie. Thanks for the review
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Oh that's just mean....:) Great job! I know we'lll all be waiting for more!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
thanks Rach - not long now!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Dun dun dun....I wonder if it's got something to do with James and Jacob. Seriously creepy. I'm so glad that Edward was told that he had made a mistake when he didn't warn Bella about the other women at the party. She might be his submissive, but she's still a human with feelings that she sometimes can't control. GREAT chapter!! I can't wait for more!
~Rae
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Lady- you did a DAMN good job with this! It was incredibly well thought out and executed. There were little twists and turns and surprises everywhere. I LOVED it. You are awesome. Thanks for giving us another amazing chapter!
~Rae
Author's Response:
thank you so much xoxo
This is a story about LOVE. It’s the eternal love of a parent for their child. It’s the steadfast love for your best friend. It’s the passion of your first love and it’s the spice of forbidden love. This is a story based on the immortal music of Elvis Presley and in his words, “Without love, we have nothing at all.”
Edward and Bella attend their son's wedding. It is also their 25th wedding anniversary and throughout the day they reflect on events leading up to their own wedding day and what could have been, if only they had the courage to stand up for what they believed in. Is it too late?
This story is rated NC-17 for lemony scenes of a slash and polyamorous situations in later chapters.
ExB ExJ ExBxJ
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20369 Read Count: 6086
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Without Love
It's so sweet, but so sad at the same time! You've done a great job. I'm very happy I stumbled across this one.
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love this story and I loved writing it, although I did cry A LOT doing so, ususally in the car on the way home from work listening to Elvis CDs to get in the mood for writing when I got home. I am sure people at the traffic lights must have thought I suffered from some major tragedy rather than an overactive imagination. Thanks for the lovely review :-)
Suzanne
Bella, Alice, and Rose own a club together and one night the one person Bella never thought she would see shows up but she don't know tell later. sorry not good with summary but is really good rated m for 2 lemons
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5321 Read Count: 453
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was great!! Very hot. I loved it!
Bella finds herself as Emmett's new statistics tutor. How did that happen? Emmett's loud and Edward was vulgar? First attempt at Twilight Fandom. A/H Canon Pairings. A little on the fluffy side.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50141 Read Count: 10112
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
You did a great job with this! It was sweet, funny, and fairly realistic of high school students. I have to tell you, I think my favorite thing was Edwards "mini stroke". I can't tell you how hard I laughed in that chapter. Awesome :) Keep up the good work!
~Rae
Bella doesn't want to go out, Alice and Rosalie force her to join in on the fun! What happens when a gorgeous stranger spills his drink on her? AH/AU OOC ExB One-shot for St. Patty's Day!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3907 Read Count: 621
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, come on Bella! You know you had the time of your life!
Great one shot!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This is really great!!! I'm not a HUGE sports fan, but for some reason I'm drawn to stories where Edward's an athlete. And football player comes in second only to baseball player, and it's a close second at that! You've done a great job!!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Did you say baseball? Hehe I have a 2 chapter story over on FF that was a reader request that has baseballward! He's a shortstop. It's called Stealing Home and I just posted the 2nd chapter Tuesday. You may want to check it out :) I'm Nolebucgrl there as well.
I love athletes myself and my two loves are football and baseball so now I've written them both. It makes me happy. hehe I do include a lot of sports because I feel like if he's an athlete, we need to experience that as well. So glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On
I think I'm ready for the new season to start now...and it's still baseball season! Great job with this. I love Emmett's nicknames for Edward; they're perfect :) Can't wait for more!!
~Rachel
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I'm more than ready for the season myself, especially after writing that chapter! We're getting closer...preseason approaches (not that that counts for much!)
I'm glad you liked Emmett's nicknames, I had a lot of fun coming up with them (and need to peruse some more for some new ones! hehe)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Kick Off
Awwww....he's so cute! And poor Bella; embarrassing herself like that. Sounds like something I would've done :) I have to tell you, I laughed so hard at Alice's football terminology. She sounds like me when I first started watching! My husband was a football player and was MORTIFIED when he learned that I used to cheer for it in high school and didn't have a CLUE as to what was happening :) Great job, I can't wait for more!!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
He is a cutie, isn't he? I just want to hug him...and do other things but we'll get to that eventually! haha
Bella blurts something inappropriate in every chapter, I rather adore that about her. My best friend did that growing up and I thought it would be fun to give Bella that trait. Made me laugh all the time!
I'm glad Alice made you laugh :) She's so much fun and I adore her, supporting her man blindly! Glad I could take you back to your early days with the husband. Too cute :)
Thanks so much, glad you're liking it!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down
Hopefully not TOO much longer!!! Great job :) I loved this one.
Football season...college or pro? College (don't laugh) Nebraska! GO HUSKERS! (Thank God Pellini is back...) Pro-Vikings!
Can't wait for more!!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Not too long, we know they're hot and heavy in less than 2 months so we're getting closer all the time :) So happy you liked it!
As a Nole, I can't laugh at your Huskers, we've been wallowing in mediocrity way too long for me to cast stones. Vikings are fun, we'll see what Favre has left in the tank this year (we all know he's coming back!)
Thank so much for the review!
Amy
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down
Footballward!! You know I love him :) I'm really excited to see what happens at the shoot, and with meeting Emmett. THAT'S bound to be fun!
And College football has begun! Yay! Hope your team does well this year :) Hell, I hope MY team does well this year! Heehee.
Can't wait til the next update :)
~Rae
Author's Response:
Haha who doesn't love footballward? Particularly QBward? I have such a thing for quarterbacks. Was just picking out pictures for my thread and of course I was picking out all quarterbacks. hehe
I'm writing the shoot now so I'll have it for you soon! Hopefully you'll enjoy it.
I'm thrilled to have college football back. Weekend 1 did not disappoint and can't wait to see my Noles play Oklahoma. Great games this weekend. Which is your team? Good luck!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
We're hardcore Husker fans, and like you, weekend 1 was great :) I think we play Idaho this weekend. Honestly, I hope you guys win.... ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I lived in Nebraska twice during my dad's military days so I know how hardcore Husker fans can be! I hope we win too, it'd be nice to have a good team again! Well, you know what I mean!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
Awwwww!!!!!! I LOVE that she was in the commercial!! That's just awesome! And Tanya...well, no one likes her anyway ;) I love that Alice got in there and took care of it all. She's amazing. And I have to tell you, I laughed so hard hard that Laurent was from Topeka....that's only 30 minutes from where I live right now! Too funny :) Great, GREAT job on this chapter!!
Loved it!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Hehe yeah I always knew Bella was going to be in the commercial, I just didn't know Alice would be my tool of choice for said thing happening :) I love the reactions to her. I know there's a lot of hate for her in a lot of fics so I'm glad I could create one that is pretty much loved!
You could go see Laurent, I mean David Lawrence! hehe I loved that in only about 30 minutes alone with Alice, she had his real name, location and had no doubt bullied him into not using that fake accent around her. hehe
So happy you liked it! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
You are TRULY evil, do you know that?? Haha! Can I just say that I LOVE Emmett? He is absolutely hilarious. And the collage on the ceiling?? Genius! Too perfect. I can't WAIT for the next chapter...though I'm pretty sure you already knew that.
Hope your team's doing well :) We have a bye this week so we'll see how next week goes... Though my NFL team is sucking some serious you know what. Oh well, can't win 'em all!
Great job, hon!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
Evil? How? I wanted their first time to stand alone, not to be tacked on the end :) I'm not trying to put it off on purpose, just trying to make it right, promise!
Thank you! I adore Em. He's so much fun and mischievous but good hearted. The collage was truly awesome. Poor QBward! Bella will make it all better though!
My team is 2-1 now, after getting thrashed by Pitt last week. They're on a bye week as well so I'm gonna get to watch without raging on Sunday. Always nice. hehe
Thanks for the review, new chapter, the one you want, soon!
Amy
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown
Holy hell.....wow. I loved how they could laugh a little while they were still loving each other. It was perfect for them. Great job!!! I can't wait until more :)
Hope your teams are doing great! We had a little party here when Alabama lost the other day. My hubby was crazy excited. I just laughed at him, lol.
Hugs!!
~Rae
Author's Response:
I thought it seemed fitting to throw in a few laughs. That's the kind of thing that happens with them so why change it up? :) Glad you approve!
My teams are! The Noles KILLED Miami and the Bucs managed to win despite all odds. I'm amazed. Bama going down made things a lot more interesting! :)
Hugs back!
Amy
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Awwww...she loves him :) That's so cute. And lemme just say that Zeus is PERFECT, hahahaha! Hopefully either he tells her that he loves her soon, or she gets the courage to tell him :) Can't wait for more!!
Huskers are 6-1 now, stupid Texas! Just kidding. Hope your guys are doing well!
~Rae
Author's Response:
How could she not? I'd fall in love with him for that bathroom alone. hehe Dream bathrooms are worth it! And so is he. hehe
Zeus is absolute perfection. I think 10 or 15 readers threw that one at me and I wanted to kick my own ass for not thinking of it.
The ILU's are coming, I promise.
Nole's keep winning, though less than impressively vs. BC. They're on Thurs night this week so we'll see! Sorry bout your Huskers but with this weird year, they're still in it ;)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Awww...ILY's! Yay! They're so cute together. I love how Emmett is with the guys. And how he stuck up for Bella. So funny. Then there's Jasper. Love him too. He's a smart one ;)
Great chapter! I really loved it. Hope your boys are doing well, still :) We just barely squeaked past Iowa State, but we play the University of Kansas this weekend, so we should be all right. Though, I'd better not talk much about it with the people here seeing as we LIVE in Kansas and follow Nebraska...lol!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Rae,
My boys are not doing well! Two heartbreaking losses in a row that never should have happened. Hate that. At least your boys pulled it out! Always hard living in another state from your team :)
Yeah, I love you's are out now. They can relax a little!
Emmett and Jasper are both awesome. I love how they're there for Edward in their own ways. hehe
So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Amy
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
Awwwww!!!!! Dammit, they're cute! I'm really excited for the day when Bella meet's his parents. I can just imagine Esme. Hell, if she hated Tanya then she'll LOVE Bella :) Great job, sweets!
On a sadder note...we lost to A&M. Crap. And Bo threw a FIT at the QB AND at the line judge! It was not a pretty sight. Hope your boys have been doing better :) Guess we'll see what this weekend brings!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think they're pretty adorable myself ;) Meeting the parents won't be far off. One more chapter to EPOV I believe and then we'll go to town on meeting the fams and dealing with the public eye. I have no doubt that Esme will be pleased with Bella.
I saw that! 9-6? Holy defensive battle. Saw the coaches apology but yeah, not pretty. My team is trying to kill me weekly. Biggest game of all this week. If we don't beat Florida I will cry. Good luck to you!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan
Hey!! Great chapter, hon :) I'm a little weirded out by Victoria. The way she was pushing him at lunch was a little...odd. I'm I wonder how Bella's going to feel about the bachelor auction. I don't do well with angst so I'm cringing a little at the thought of a fight breaking out. BUT, I'll hang in there! I can take it, lol.
Well, we blew it in the Big 12 Championship. Ugh, it was bad. I hope your last couple of weeks have been better than ours, hahaha. Can't wait for more!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Hahah odd but very like a PR director I think. She's definitely all about manipulating the press. I'mm sure we'll see her again. I'm not going to write angst, I promise. If they have an issue, they'll work through it like rational adults.
Saw that. Surprising game! My Noles screwed up too but they aren't ready to be in BCS games right now anyway. Sorry though! Thanks for the review.