Reviews by ellabell
Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: ellabell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Babies

Dec. 21, 2012

I have just come to know your stories in Nov. 2012 at Fan Fiction and came to this site to continue with this story (which I am glad you have turned me onto).  Your writing makes me laugh, tear up, and aww. 

It is amazing with all you have going on in your life that you write and bring joy to your readers.  I know it has been awhile since you have written but please know you have followers who anxiously await you and appreciate your creativity and your time.

Wishing you and yours all the best in 2013!

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Love is Strange

This chapter is a hold your breath heart breaker.  You captured the torment of this situation, one that would make it hard to breath normally again for a long time for both of them.  

I so look forward to the next part of the story and very curious about Alice's reaction to this emotional trauma.

Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Love is Strange

It seems as though she is having a baby...but that can't be...I'm hanging in there on this one!   Talk about a cliff hanger!

Hurry, hurry with the next chapter please...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152446
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The tenderness in him is surprising and so sweet.  I am glad to see the mystery is staring to unfold and looking forward to it.

Summary:

 

Bella prepares to navigate through the entertainment industries perils as famous Edward Cullen's new girlfriend. Will she survive or will she be just another Hollywood tragedy? What happens when Edward reveals something that may cause Bella to rethink her relationship with the man she loves? Read Part One first. Warning for spanking and domestic discipline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148461 Read Count: 50479
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

All I can say is WOW and I can't wait for Part Three!

Summary:

Bella has had many ups & downs throughout her relationship with famous Edward Cullen. Now it is her time to shine in the spotlight. But in order to do that she will have to find the strength within to fight for the things she wants in life. Will Edward be able to let go of the control he once had for the sake of his and Bella's relationship? Final part of A Working Title Series


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 272703 Read Count: 68161
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2013 Updated: 28 Apr 2014
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was really happy to see you posted Part Three! 

I hope Bella holds strong and makes Edward wait awhile to resolve his abusive behavior.   Bella certainly did give him something to think about.....(you sure did! I loved it.)

Looking forward to your next chapter....it can go so many ways.  I kind of  hope Bella has another good man come into her life and they take mutual interest in each other....so Bella can see other options in her life as she has only had one serious relationship. This could  make Edward see how to treat someone he loves...and not control them so when they get back together they can be on more equal footing.   

Hmmmmm....I wonder what you are up to.

Summary:

Isabella Swan has her eyes on the prize. Unfortunately that means she has to steal from the most feared Mobster around, Edward Cullen. Isabella is about to find out just how possessive Edward is over his things. Mobward, Possessiveward, and a little bit of Domward. Lemons AH.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11652 Read Count: 12648
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2014 Updated: 19 Aug 2018
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting

Well, you had me looking for more and was disappointed it ended so abruptly.  I would definitely be interested in reading more as you really have a way to hook one's imagination as to where you may be leading. You began this in an unusual way.

I hope you feel challenged enough to continue.

Curiosity peaked...

 

 

Summary:

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Barely back from their romantic wedding and honeymoon in Greece, Olivia and Xander Wade should have a happy life ahead.  But Olivia's past comes back to haunt her, and she's been brutally attacked by her ex-husband Caleb. Battered and broken, she works to rebuild her shattered life with Xander, but she has many hurdles to overcome.  Will Xander be able to deal with the aftermath of her attack and the emotional difficulties that it brings for Olivia?  Will their love be strong enough to keep them together, or will they be torn apart?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 353918 Read Count: 15125
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2015 Updated: 18 Oct 2015
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As I read, I feel tense and anxious for this couple.  You really write  emotionally raw dialogue.  Hunter brings the thought of Xander possibly being unfaithful and how he would feel so badly disappointed if he did.  I hope you do not go this route.

It would be very interesting  to see Xander remain faithful while they struggle to get back to a loving serene place.  I feel they were both complicit in enabling Caleb's actions and Olivia would again be emotionally brutalized if her husband committed adultery.  I don't know if I could continue to read on even with being enthralled by your writing style.

By the way, I really appreciate your quick updates.  I am embarrassed to admit that I kept checking on Easter for an update. Thanks for the Easter treat!

Your Blue Ridge Mountain Fan

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words, and I'm thrilled to know that you were anxiously awaiting updates over Easter, LOL!  I get excited when I see I have new reviews!  

I believe that Xander and Olivia have been through enough pain to last five lifetimes!  That doesn't mean there won't be more turmoil and heartache, but in the end, what I love most is writing about their love story.  I really want them to have their 'happily ever after', so we'll see where they take me next!

I'll keep writing if you keep reading!   It was so nice to see a new name...I've been secretly wondering if it's the same half dozen people re-reading over and over again!  (Just kidding; that's a lot of re-reading!)

~Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen meets Bella Swan. She's the young veterinary nurse who still believes in true love. He's the tattooed architect who finds himself very taken with the special girl. "There's something about you... Somehow you've got to me, Little Swan." This is their story of a fairytale romance in a modern world.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101028 Read Count: 39737
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Jan 2016
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I just read the first 5 chapters of your story today and have so enjoyed your Edward and his Little Swan.  Your dialogue is so sweet and refreshing.  The patience and care Edward shows in developing his relationship with LS is an unusual storyline and I am hooked and can't wait to see what unfolds.

Susan aka ellabell



Author's Response:

Hi Susan, 

First of, thank you for the lovely review. It made me smile :) The dialogue and conversations between Little Swan and Edward are something I want to be as natural as possible. I seem to put most of the work into that and it's great to know that it's reading so well.  

J x

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84465
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Please don't have it end here.  I have been eagerly checking daily hoping for an update and you have been great keeping the story moving so quickly.

These characters have me hooked.  You surprised me with Anthony's quick demise but especially Carlisle' release and the options he gave Isabella.  I was hoping Edward would eventually find her and I wondered where  their relationship would go.

I am an avid reader and your story has kept me on my toes.  I appreciate your talent and hope you will continue and give Danger In New York a satisfying conclusion.

 

Thank you for this journey.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

Five years ago they were together, but then his weather girl got a new job in a new city and he was benched. Now, he's got a new job in her city and he's back in play. Will he score the goal, or will the game be called due to rain?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26759 Read Count: 20992
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2016 Updated: 19 Dec 2017
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the dialogue...esp Edward...this story was fun to read.



Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing him.

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50920
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: ellabell Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am excited to see you are continuing this story and eagerly  look forward to see how it unfolds.