Reviews by silversimon
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Please, please post more chapters! I am such a fan of many (most) of your stories. Yet none (except shorts are completed) . Indeed many have not been updated in a long time. Either here or FF. If you were to add to your stories, I'd jump for joy :)) Truly, your are one of my top fav authors. Best wishes.

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89144
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was all kinds of juicy fun. Just a little disappointed in some of Carlisle's cad behavior. He should be more solicitous ... rude to leave her spunky and splayed on the kitchen table without a word. Boorish cad. Expect better from Carlisle, especially when toying with an innocent girl. And ripping her v-card so callously. He's treating her like a tramp. If his guilt is driving his actions/inactions, would still expect better. If Charlie treated Alice (his daughter) in such a fashion, he'd be displeased.

Don't get the wrong idea. I'm enjoying your story

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 21 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

In response to the AN -- love is messy. Glad Carlisle treats Bella better now.

Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 22013
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thought from your note on FFn that everything was transferred here. Apparently not, or not yet? Sorry that FFn isn't protecting its authors and don't blame you for leaving, but it's a PIA although not as much of one as I'm sure you and the other authors are dealing with. Best wishes.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm rereading this lovely story. Thought from the AN on FFn, that I could find the entire story here. But alas, it seems I must go in search of your blog. Hope it's there.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

He found her broken, a hollow tortured shell of what once was. He vowed he would find the ones who did this to her and destroy them... But what happens when he finds out his brother was the cause of it all?

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25093 Read Count: 32492
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 30 Jun 2014
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So glad I found this story again since it disappeared from FFn. I adore it in all its terrifying intrigue. Hope you continue someday soon.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad I was able to find this gem of storytelling here, since it's disappeared from FFn. Feeling the need to reread it this morning. Isabella, Peter and Lykos are awesome. I'm very intrigued with the future of your story. Especially looking forward to Isabella's retribution upon those deserving it, even more exciting with her new coven and allies. It's been a while, but I still have faith in your promise to return. Best wishes to you and your Muse. :-)

Summary:

 

They thought everything was fine, that their problems were over and they could finally start to be together. Then one night Bella is taken when the castle is under attack, what will Caius do to get his mate back?

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25201 Read Count: 6151
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2013 Updated: 24 Nov 2014
Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah! Didyme lives! Hope their incarceration is brief ... please.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapter, however brief. It continues the story and provides several useful historical tidbits.

The Demon's Mate by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

'It is decreed that the mate of the heir to the crown of the Dark Kingdom will be of human flesh born of pain, loss and hate.' Follow the dark prince as he finds his mate and seeks revenge on the one that harmed her.    

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, The Demon Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127795 Read Count: 100927
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 19 Jun 2013
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Admittedly, it took me a long time to read this story, unfortunately. I avoided it because the Prince of Darkness thing wasn't my thing. But the other day, while checking out your stories again, I thought, "what the hell". So glad I began, because then I couldn't resist. A terrific story. Who knew that wings could be so sexy?! Great twist with James regeneration, non-final death, and the game played setting icky Vicky against James. Loved Michael, Lucifer too, and always Peter. Mommy dearest....not so much after her"you're not good enough for my son" spiel. Anyway, sorry it took me so long to read your wonderful story. Thanks for sharing. Still looking forward to updates on at least two of your stories. The Dimitri story and the Peter fuckery story.

Author's Response:

*Laughs* Yeah, I've been told the whole demon thing was a turn off for others before, so I totally get it. That part really isn't for everyone. 

 

That said, I'm so glad you ended up reading it. This is one of my favorites I've written, and everytime I'm told how much someone enjoyed it, it always makes me smile. 

 

As for Mommy, I mean, we're dealing with demons, afterall. Not off them are gonna be awesome. 

 

As for the stories you're waiting for, You'll have to be little more clear on which Demetri story you're talking about. I have two, and I'm working on both of them as they allow me. As for Peter, I assume you're talking about Standing outside the Fire. That one is a little more difficult, but I am hoping to get that one done eventually as well. There will be a new Peter story going up in the next couple of weeks, but it'll be complete when it does. 

 

Thanks for reading!!!

~Speklez

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes. Peter. Standing Outside the Fire. And the Dimitri story in which Bella had a steel plate in her skull that melted when he turned her, and she's wearing a strange mask because scents give her a bad headache.

Appreciate your response. I do adore your stories and have read some several times.

Author's Response:

You Will Be Mine...

 

I've added a couple 1000 words to that one since its last update, but not enough to post it yet. I am working on it, though. 

You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55655
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I continue to be amazed by your Dimitri!!! Always happy when Jasper survives, along with Peter. Anticipation for the next chapters and the rest of this terrific story remains high. Looking forward to next alert to hit my inbox. Thanks.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Your Demitri is so badass!!!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well, this is my third and final attempt to post a review (TWCS keeps erroneously telling me I've already submitted reviews for ch. 12 and 1). Skipping all the glowing remarks I don't feel like retyping on my not so smart phone, I'd just like to ask, why only 12 chapters so far despite the AN which tells of 14 prewritten chapters? Patiently waiting for the lemony claiming and Volturi retribution against the Cullens and other wonderful goodies you've planned. Thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Because I mislabled the chapters in the story doc. I have part of the next chapter written, and it will see an update, just not real sure when. I am almost done with what I'm working on, then I have a OS I have to see to, then I will finish this one's update. It *should* be updated by the end of the month. 

~Speklez

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hooray! A new and fabulous chapter for one of my favorite stories. Enjoyed Alec's conversation with Isabella. Can't wait to read the next chapters! Who's come for Isabella? Will Demitri take over the Volturi?

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Another rocking chapter! And what a cliffy you little cutie. Sorry it's taken me so long to read and review. Delay not indicative of my interest in and love of your story. Just had too many other icky distractions. Reread 14 too. Very much looking forward to the Cullens getting their asses kicked. Hope you're back soon!!!

What If by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What would happen if Bella is in college when the Cullens came? What if Carlisle is acting his age? What if Twilight starts now, but with a twist, a huge twist named Carlisle Cullen?

A/J, R/EM Es/? C/B E/? All will be revealed later.

This story was inspired by Feral Blood.  It was dicussed with the writer of the story and she endorsed it.  I have in no way try to steal anything from that wonderful story, but her Carlisle opened me up to a totally different world and made it where I wanted to write and read Bella with other characters.  Thank you…

Banner is made by MMsimpy09.  She is trying to help me out, and works with me to do the Banners.  If you are interested, her site is here:

Meg’s Modern Art

This Disclosure is for all stories contained under this heading: Twilight is the property of Stephenie Meyers. All characters belong to her, the plot of this is my own.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106015 Read Count: 22612
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2016
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

Awesome!!! Please write more chapters. Please. And more chapters for "When I Pretend" and "Wisdom, Justice and Love". It's been so long since WIP was updated, and that fabulous story deserves some love and attention from its author.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Be In Our Past

Terrific new chapter. Again, I'm so happy that you have returned to update this wonderful story. Hope Jacob gets his just desserts, and that Charlie is appropriately shamed for his role in driving Isabella away and not protecting her from Jacob.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A Moment in Change

One of my favorite Carlisle/Isabella stories. So glad you've turned your attention back to it. Enjoyed this new chapter with its citrusy flavor. Anticipating the next chapters with much enthusiasm!!!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Dead End Fury

Terrific new chapter. Appreciate that the story is moving forward more significantly. But poor Brad... . Looking forward to future chapters.

When I Pretend by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

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When I Pretend: Blood is spilled, and instead of James losing his life, a mate is found and the world is in a world of hurt.  The God of War is about to give lessons on why leaving him and his alone is a good idea.

Rated M for a reason folks.

Many thanks to thewriteashley for taking up the reigns on Betaing this.  Again, this is your reviews making this a reality.

Disclaimer for the story contained under this heading: Stephenie Myers own Twilight.  Not me.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13511 Read Count: 8225
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Oct 2013
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Condescending Talk

Since I've left reviews on FFn and your website for this story, thought I'd be consistent and leave raves here too (3 for three, although it's actually more because I've left several glowing reviews on each of the other sites :-). Anyway, I love this frigging story!!!It rocks!!! You've created an interesting mythology with a true and bonded mates, and the differences they present. Look forward to reading more about Jasper and Isabella's spspecial abilities; the evil one's (Eddie and Alice) evil purpose and plot; why and how Carlisle fell down on the job so to speak since he was preparing to interrogate the evil ones when last we read about them; and, how often Peter checks on Maria's pieces and how much distance they travel in between checks (evil smirk). Strong, sexy Jasper is awesome. New chapters are highly anticipated.... I've read the extant chapters numerous times. Trying to be patient while recognizing that you're a talented, albeit busy author in addition to your daytime job :-)

A Light in My Dark by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Darkness was my friend, my comfort, my constant companion until he came back into my life for good, lighting my path and my soul. He is the light in my dark. Xtreme OOC Bella/Jasper Vampire fic. Mature themes/language


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26017 Read Count: 9232
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2014 Updated: 05 Jan 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start!

Quasar by ArabellaWhitlock Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Could cruise with her father change her future? AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8617 Read Count: 1189
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2014 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Read this intriguing story on FFn a while back. Not usually interested in sci-fi, but your story hooked me. Really wish you'd continue by posting additional chapters. It's been a while, so please don't abandon or neglect it.

Summary:

Surrounded by oddities and the unexplained almost since the day she moved to soggy Forks, Bella's thirst for answers leads her to her ultimate prize; little did she know that she was destined for a Prince. Volturi Vampires, Twilight A/U, Mature, Alec/Bella/Jasper POLY HEA some slash


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alec, Bella/Jasper, Jasper/OC
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26110 Read Count: 10686
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2014 Updated: 05 Jan 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very happy to find this story again. Even if it doesn't include all 12 chpts. previously posted on ffn. Hope you'll post it on Bella Mac's sites soon in its entirety and daresay even write more chapters! !!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oohhh ... I forgot about this subplot involving Charlie. Been way to long since I read this wonderful story! So happy to find it again m

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Looking forward to the continuation of this interesting triad. Probably the only Alec story I've ever enjoyed.

Dark Places by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sometimes dark places are the best. At least to a simple girl like Isabella. Especially so when it's the dark embrace of an impassioned Volturi King. Mature language/themes Vampire AU Bella/Aro


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Aro
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7611 Read Count: 4363
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Sep 2014
Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's been quite a while since I read this sexy Aro story. My notes say there are at least 7 chpts. (previously on FFn), although only 5 are posted here. Guess I'll check out the new story site but it's difficult to navigate because it doesn't allow summaries or chapter differentiation. Anyway ... I love this story along with so many of your other stories. Miss you. Hugs to you.

Summary:

Banner by: Caiteexx

Bailing Peter out of jail was as routine as eating for Jasper. However, this time, he wasn't the one to do it and the choice to ask Bella to go instead would rock the coven to its core as everything she thought she knew was questioned by someone with his own developing agenda. AU/OOC/Bella/Peter.  All normal disclamers apply


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Wanna read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13505 Read Count: 12774
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2014 Updated: 02 Feb 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks for continuing this fun story. Gotta love "scrawny ", irreverent Peter :) Please continue to post here. I truly dislike dealing with Facebook. Hope you post more chapters soon. And also continue with new chapters of "You Will Be Mine ". Another terrific story.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Very entertaining :) Hope you continue this story. Peter is awesome :) Get Edward's ass kicked too :) Go along to get along Bella is very boring. Why won't Carlisle turn her? He any Jasper surely know the consequences of ignoring Volturi law.

The Writer by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

She thought she was writing fiction but what happens when her vivid imagination gets a little too close to the unknown truth? Twilight AU Mature language/material Vampire/Human Bella/Major Whitlock pairing DARK/DOMINANT MAJOR not a fluff story! SOME DOM/sub SITUATIONS Can't handle that, take yourself elsewhere. Full summary now heading Ch. 1.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26483 Read Count: 13503
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2014 Updated: 04 Jan 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Another excellent story. Look forward to reading more, as always!

I Just want her Back by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

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When Aro's mate was taken, he vowed to do whatever it took to get her back. However, the question is, when he does... what will he find? *Repost due to request* This story is rated for language and situations.  ***Aro/Bella Pairing***


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Aro
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23590 Read Count: 4131
[Report This] Published: 14 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Jan 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for the additional chapter. I'm enjoying the re-post of your Aro, Isabella story. Hope she's not too fu**ed up for too long. A good mix of POV(s).

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. Glad it's back!!!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Again, I'm so pleased you reposted this story. It's been so long since I originally read it, that it's almost like new. Have you rewritten parts? Regardless, it's terrific. The different take on Aro's personality is interesting .... not goofy, silly eccentric, albeit a false face, but a stern, fierce, super vampified king. Look forward to the ensuing chapters! Poor Isabella. Will Carlisle return to provide medical help? Hope she's not as psychologically damaged as they fear. Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you still enjoy the story so much. I didn't so much rewrite anything, but I did do some heavy editing before I started reposting. That might be what you're noticing. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it continues to be reposted. 

 

~Speklez

Summary:

 

 

 

This song revolves around the one shot I did for Ellie Wolf.  She gave permission for me to expand it.  The one Shot was:

 

Points of Authority Banner with TWCS

 

The title of the Fic comes from this:

 

I come to this magnificent house of worship tonight because my conscience leaves me no other choice.  A true revolution of values will lay hands on the world order and say of war: “This way of settling differences is not just.” This business of burning human beings with napalm, of filling our nation’s homes with orphans and widows, of injecting poisonous drugs of hate into veins of people normally humane, of sending men home from dark and bloody battlefields physically handicapped and psychologically deranged, cannot be reconciled with wisdom, justice and love.”

 

(Beyond Vietnam: A Time to Break Silence by Rev. Martin Luther King – 4 April 1967)

 

Cast of Characters: Here

 

Song list: Here


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15530 Read Count: 4163
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2014 Updated: 26 Jan 2015
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 When you Told That Lie

So happy to read this new chapter to one of my new favorite stories. I was so glad you extended the O/S POA. Love how you're writing the brothers and Whitlocks. Anxiously await further chapters!!!

PS I also look forward to new chapters for What If and When I Pretend :) You rock!

Summary:

Altered Paths

 

 

 

What happens when Jasper makes a discovery he simply can’t ignore?

 

Will contain: language, violence, explicit sex, drinking, smoking, gambling

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Horror, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119498 Read Count: 17454
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Fall

Excellent beginning! Very curious about this "control" Jasper says Alice and Edward were exercising over the two of them. Doesn't seem like the type of problem that the gruesome twosome usually cause. And I'm curious about the references to Carlisle's involvement?! Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul

Now I'm very curious about what kind of creature Jasper was fighting? Did it "infect" Jasper? What's up with the nosebleeds? Especially in a vampire? Is it a byproduct of the power that Carlisle has been hinted at possessing? Guess I'll have to keep reading ... :) Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm

That's a first for me. The Whitlocks' blood farm ... certainly different. Wow!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes

Glad your AN explicitly denies any intent of this story being a crossover. I was beginning to worry since all of your stories on FFn are crossovers and I don't read them (no offense intended). Only found this story because it was rec'd by another author's AN. I am enjoying your story and looking forward to the big reveal!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Dogs of War

Hope Isabella and Jasper were freed by Marcus while his troupe was entering the building and Aro's minions were leaving with their captives? And perhaps Jasper and thence Isabella have CoM werewolf taint/infection that I suspected in the first chapter review? Look forward to reading further!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Persuasion

Damn. Carlisle and Aro and Alice are naughty, naughty creatures. Ugh ... poor Jasper. Why is everyone sitting on their thumbs not doing anything to rescue Jasper and Isabella?! How long are they going to wait? Surely Jasper and Isabella will be driven insane from their various tortures and separation! Great story!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 10: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT

Ah, so my guess of CoM infection was wrong. The Aztec Sun God mythology is more interesting along with the reclusive Aztec vampire race itself. And much better!

Reviewer: silversimon Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 – Shackles, Ropes, and Chains

Terrific story. Looking forward to reading future chapters!