Reviews by Ayaxav05
Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the story, but chapter 1 of this is not at the end of fifty shades more, so the diclaimer about starting with chapter 3 is misleading, either that or these chapters are missing from more, i was only able to read 32 chapters in more.



Author's Response:

You haven't missed anything. More has 32 chapters and Chapter 1 of Clarity picks up there. Originally I had 35 chapters in More and then decided to end it at Chapter 32 and  make chapter 33 the  beginning of Clarity. I thought I had gone in and taken the  notes out. I'll go back and check, but  More has 32 chapters and Clarity as 32 chapters and Full Circle is still in progress. 

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

This Story Is Amazing, better than the original trilogy.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Fabulous!

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Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Damn you're GOOD!!!

 

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Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Love it!

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Love it!

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Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

These kids crack me up!

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Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

love it!!!

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Date: 17 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I absolutely adore this  story, great chapter!

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Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

oh my too funny!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 06 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this just gets better and better!

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

That was sweet! I love how the characters have grown,this really needs to be published.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

AWESOME!

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Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Haha!

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Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Oh My God! That was HYSTERICAL!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This story is soo on point!!

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Love the way Ana subtly cussed out Colton! Lol smart very smart.

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Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Ooh sounds like this is going to be good!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Girl! You sure know how to write up some DRAMA! Love this!



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Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Suspense, i like it!

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Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

This just gets better and better!

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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Too funny! 

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Well damn Ana.....lol

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Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Wow that's good twist!

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Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Love these kids they are too funny!

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Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Cute!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Good one lol

Summary:

What happens in the months after Ana is released from the hospital after her confrontation with Jack Hyde?  A glimpse into the life of the Greys before and after Teddy's arrival.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Jose Rodriquez/Anastasia Steele
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90526 Read Count: 39614
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice chapter!

Back to Us by wordrunner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

"And even though I know somewhere in his twisted heart he loved me as much as I still love him—maybe more, in some ways—I know I couldn't stand to live with him anymore. He was killing me, slowly and painfully, and I had to go."


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 205120 Read Count: 65049
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow! This is awesome. Next chapter please!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ooh this is good!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is an unbelievable unbelievable story. I can't wait to read more. Also I am so glad that you post a bunch of chapters at a time instead of just one. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This just great.....I hope Elena gets exactly what she deserves.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What a great story! A few spelling slips but that's probably due to auto correct, if this is the end of it it's a perfect one. Otherwise I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This is truly an amazing story.

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Great story line you have here. I really like the changes with the characters personalities. I'm glad you are not portraying them so close to the originals. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  More to come soon.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - What's going on with us?

Awesome sexual tension......hilarious!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Sunsets by Henrika Fanfiction Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Two people in need of change happen to meet. But what happens when they realize that their instant connection stems from their childhood? This is a story about love, fate and destiny.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81131 Read Count: 10407
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is really good. I like the alternative storyline. 

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

After acrimonious shouldn't it say Ana not Kate? A little confusing lol



Author's Response:

Ooops.  Yes.  Edited it.  Hope you're enjoying the story!

Soul Mates by Lady Shakespeare Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Not even time itself could separate them.  **ON HIATUS**

 

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Categories: Sleepy Hollow (TV)
Characters: Grace Abigail/Ichabod
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34560 Read Count: 2311
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2013 Updated: 07 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start! Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you continue to enjoy!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Short Stories of Christian and Ana Grey- Twenty Years Later.  No cheating.  All about the love.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156478 Read Count: 23187
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Ana's Birthday- 20 Years Later Chapter 17

sweet!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 18: In the CCU- Chapter 18

Tears!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: First Date- Chapter 12

I like this! Great story twist. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Date Two - Chapter 13

Oh my goodness! That was hot! Next chapter please!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Off the Floor - Chapter 14

Nice!!

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Third Time's the Charm? - Chapter 15

Wow that was NIIICCCEEE!!!