Reviews by randomreader
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: randomreader Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

God, what a NIGHTMARE!  I've always wondered how people like this guy gets anybody to listen to him, let alone follow him in the first place.    I mean, Bella's situation is different from the adults in this wack-job's cult-her being young and the mental and physical torture she was put through--

But he had to start off with some people who were willing to follow this nutcase! I mean,  you can't brainwash everyone from the get-go.  

I guess there are no shortage  of people with sheep mentalities.

Come on, what happens next???

Tempting Bella by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tempt

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

Bella tells herself being with Edward is wrong because he's to young for her though it doesn't stop her from wanting him in every way including her biological clock picturing green eyed babies. And if it is wrong why does he feel so right?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48225 Read Count: 35963
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Overprotective, possessive, & grabby Edward is so hot!

I love your story.  It's kept me up!, and smiling.

Thank you.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

Ha Ha!  Can't wait till Bella gives him what for!.   

So much fun..

I'm enjoying your story immensely.  

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Family Time Part I

I really wish you'd do EPOV.  Gotta wonder what's been going through his mind through some of the changes in attitudes he seems to be going through.  

You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

 

You Belong to Me 2

Banners made by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70150 Read Count: 37860
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Oct 2010
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Completing

You kept me up reading all night--It's now Friday  4:17 AM.   I still have to go to work!

Thank you for entertaining me.   Seriously.

Can't wait to read continuing series.  

 



Author's Response:

haha, that has happened to me a couple of times. Hope you weren't too tired at work! lol

I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for the review! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love your psychotic Edward!

He's got a mean sense of humor, and i find myself chuckling at his antics while I wonder perhaps there is something definitely wrong with me if I find it funny...

Thank you.

 

 

Summary:

stories/15495/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpgEdward isn't The only one lusting for Bella's blood!

Carlisle has a few DIRTY secrets ,involving how he creatively quenches his thirst.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 3799
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Making Sense Of It All

Sick and cute at the same time!  What a combo!.  

It made me chuckle..

Thank you. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I am glad you got a chuckle out of it:O

Thanks for reading:)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

I'm so loving your story.  

Love Edward's family & how they back him up.   

However, I'm a bit perplexed about the whole "Gianna" mess.

She is the Publicist for the band? and/or Edward?  

There's no way that contract doesn't have some sort of clause or loophole that will get her the fuck outta their lives.  I mean, she is not doing her job. Publicist is supposed to promote the positive and nullify any negative press--so as to make the clients' life easier so they can concentrate on their career, no?   Well, she's definitely a nut-job and any agency that will press charges and stand behind such a person should have no leg to stand on.   All they would have to do is to threaten or remind them  as to how they were acting unprofessional and if they ever want to keep their name and continue to work in the industry,  they should just bow out gracefully.   If anyone can't afford bad public image, it is the publicist, right?

And I'm so afraid that the sex video will be showing up all over the media soon!

Anywho-  Love your story!

 

 

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ahhhh!   so cute!!

Great beginning.   I can't wait to read next chapter.   Hey, I don't have to wait.  You've got this up to 11 chapters!  Yeah, me happy!  

Thank you.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Somebody needs to kill James very slowly and very painfully. Perhaps, Bubba in jail cell, using his rectum for entertainment purposes, at the very least, over many years first. And I don't mean it the way that he'd enjoy, ya know?

Author's Response:

LOL .. i know what you mean ...

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hi!

Just wanted to tell you  how much I enjoy reading your stories.

Your mind must be a fascinating place to live in.

Can't wait for what happens next!

 

SIGN ME,

INTRIGUED AND ENTERTAINED. 

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much =) That means a lot to me.

I should have the chapter posted soon.

Thanks again, your comment made my day =)

XxOo

Jells

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389594
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Gotta say you write one of the hottest fics and even hotter Edward in all fandom.   Oh,  don't forget funny, too.

I'm always happy to see a new chapter from you.

Thank you.

Losing It by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After years of saving herself for that one special guy only to have him turn her down, Bella is on a mission to lose her virginity. Can the lucky guy she chooses hang on to her, or will he lose everything in her game?

High School Drama
E/B

Banner by MDealsWithIt and Blinkie by Angedelaube


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37171 Read Count: 39751
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 **Revelations**

Parents  are, up to a point, responsible for influencing the kids for their outlook on life.

Especially single parent kids, probably more so.  Being a teenager is tough, and we all want acceptance and praise from people we are close to, or people we are supposed to look up to--Mom certaily should fit that bill.  Bella is not an airhead though.  So up to a point, yeah. Mom's definitely not blameless.  But if you've got a head on your shoulder, Bella should have known Better!.  But that's what being young is for--making mistakes and learning..

I love your stories!

Thanks so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427884
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

Wow.  

It's hot already!!

next chap, please.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oooh! Cute.  They have their own secret phrase and everything.  

 

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

All of the above!

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Alcoholic showdown

Writing, translating, beta'g, etc of fan fics,  mostly feel like a thankless job.

Some of the readers who  can totally  be "BITCHES" with the 'tudes, I'm sure, can and will knock the wind out of you. But there are people like me, who usually lurks and reads in shadows--and feeling mightly guilty for  not reviewing enough, and I'm sure we are the majority of the fandoms throughout-- we appreciate all that you do.

So, thank you.   



Author's Response:

Jeez, thank you so very much, you have no idea how your review is heart warming right now, at a moment in my life when I'm questioning my purpose, seeing as so few people leave a review whereas there are thousands of them reading what I publish (the read count is there to prove it...) I'm not talking about this particular story though, as I have more than a thousand reviews if I combine FF and TWCS together. But you see, I'm translating a long story called People like us in French, and I posted an update 48 hours ago. How many people are following me on it? More than 2000 according to the read count. How many reviews in 48 hours? 3. I mean yeah, sometimes I feel like my work is somewhat not acknowledged... So comments like yours are immensely appreciated :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by IllictWriter

 

The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Twenty Seven

OK.  I know the story is supposed to be complete.  And it really doesn't need another chapter, 'cause you know, my imagination is running wild, driving me into dark places.  But one of the reviews you answered - one more chapter, and really, I found with your stories, no matter how wild and dark my imaginations are, they can never compare to yours.  So, maybe an epi??

The Rebellion by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

This was one of those sad nights since she left. But we were tired, we were ready to fight for her, it was time for a rebellion


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2595 Read Count: 480
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Rebellion

"But i was in and out, so  half the conversation was missed"

That was funny and cute!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

attm

When Eric killed Talbot, Russell Edgington only had one thing in mind: revenge. But this time, he took it from somewhere else; and when Pam hand-delivered a fairy, Russell knew it would tear Eric apart.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200171 Read Count: 19615
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2013 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Come Undone

Fucking Pam!   Fucking Bill!

What selfish Bitches!



Author's Response:

Definitely! Thanks for the review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334500
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

Oh! My! GAWD!!

I'm guessing Bella was out sick when they were handing out parents.  

Poor thing just wants love and acceptance, a kind word or two.  

And any sane person can see that Rene is BONKERS!   

And also didn't she just try to commit murder by slipping her peanut butter?  if not attempted murder, then at least try to poison her own daughter?  And I think Rene knew very well what her daughter was alergic to.

And Phil!   Love Must be BLIND!   Talk about enabler!

I want to slap him silly,  also. 

Bella must be a really strong and resilient girl to have withstood two of the lousiest and sorriest excuses for parents.

You've gotta have Charlie get what's coming to him x 100 ! and the ungrateful step kids and also the evil personified Jacob and his minions.  

Love this Edward! 



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Declaration of love, a baby(+), and a marriage proposal-all within 24  hours!  Yeah!

I'm glad that they are not wasting precious time dicking around.  I'm so happy for Edward, Bella, and Esme++. Glad to see Bella getting a stiffer back bone.

I can't wait till next chap when we get to find out that Charlie is a:

A.  Total dickhead without a heart,a soul, brain, common sense, morality, etc...

B.  Police chief who cannot tell who's lying and who's telling the truth therefore should be fired from his job and made to give back his salary.

C.  man who should never have been given the chance to father a child let alone adopt them by marriage; therefore  he should be castrated tout suite!

D. God only knows what he is--He's definitely impersonating as a police officer & a human being; therefore an imposter and a fraud = criminal.

E.  All of the above.

Honestly, I can't imagine anyone being that nasty, evil, abusive and just plain wrong in all points.  WTF, Charlie??!  

 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Sookie Takes Charge by Meridian Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 80]
Summary: Past Featured Story
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A complete rewrite of how I think the story should have gone from after the vampires died for the day leaving Sookie babysitting Russell (after Eric's betrayal). "M" for language.


**Generic Disclaimer: Charlaine Harris and HBO own the "recognizable" character names and bits...I own the rest. As always, my stories are COMPLETELY NON-CANON and REFUSE to follow 89% of True Blood's chaos**May also contain nuts, eggs, and odd bits of SVM roots, stems, and leaves**

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102731 Read Count: 18135
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2013 Updated: 29 Jun 2017
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes!  What you wrote makes sense, and whatever that was on HBO was a total dribble.

I'm thinking "GODRIC" eric kept seeing was a result of a curse --appearing at random to drive Eric nuts.   That Godric was unhappy when Eric caught that nutjob Russell,  and was unhappy when he didn't want to kill him.   I mean, what was he supposed to do with that Psycho?  That Godric didn't want Eric to kill Russell, yet he didn't want Russell tortured.   I guess maybe Eric could have taken Russell shopping, maybe?

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I hated how Sookie just blindly followed Eric's fecked-up orders like that - totally annoyed me to no end.

 

And, srsly, what WAS up with Eric not just, you know, ENDING RUSSELL???  That was weird.

Uninvited by California Kat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Beginning in the middle of Season 3, Uninvited explores a different direction for the TB story following the van incident.  As Sookie lies in the hospital fighting for her life, Eric must pretend to be the ally of his greatest enemy, Russell, in order to save Pam’s life.  What if Russell looks into Eric’s blue eyes and recognizes the young man he saw so long ago?  What if Eric has to run for his life?  Will he leave Sookie behind—at the mercy of Russell and the vampire who almost killed her?  Or will he take her with him? 

Uninvited


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB, UN-Series
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151310 Read Count: 11650
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2014 Updated: 16 May 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: And All Was Said

What an ASS!  

With a relative like him, who needs enemies?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478658
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Just what every super-villain wants!

World Domination

by the way of Super Soldiers!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is an A/U “what if” story set in the True Blood universe. What if Gran had helped Sookie to develop her telepathy, rather than encouraging her to hide it? What if Sookie had grown up calling her ability a “gift” rather than a “curse?” What if Sookie had sought out Eric’s help for a very different reason than trying to clear her brother’s name?

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35620 Read Count: 7234
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2014 Updated: 02 May 2014
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Smoke Gets in Your Eyes

Grifter Shifter! Ha! That was funny.

Summary:

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It has been a year since Eric and Sookie were formally pledged. The world has become a less welcoming place for supernaturals, and vampires in particular. Against this backdrop the couple is starting a family using the miracle of science. They will face their greatest dangers, never suspecting the real danger comes from within their own community. Sequel to The Far Reach.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swimming to The Light Series
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 316580 Read Count: 5462
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2016 Updated: 14 Aug 2016
Reviewer: randomreader Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - The Breaker Line

Wow!  

What happened to Karin?

 



Author's Response: Sorry about that - it was a bit of a cliffie. Revealed Thursday (Eastern US time). Since I've promised a happy ending, you can assume her fate is not too terrible