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Bio:
I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place! These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 228029
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Yes yes yes ... more outtakes of Carlisle and Esme ... your choice of topics.
Awesome outtakes this be. Love Carlisle's commanding presence and Esme's realization towards the end that maybe he's not as sure of himself as he makes out to be.
Author's Response:
thank you for the review sweetie - more to come
Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Carlisle to the rescue.
Great chapter. Wonder how all the rest are managing ... hope they don't resent those in the mansion. Hope help comes quickly.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
The ending to this chapter was so very sweet and touching. So emotional. Love how Edward, Jazz & Em are taking care of everyone & being so fair.
Eager for the next chapter.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Please tell me the "new recruits" include Carlisle & some medication for Bella.
Author's Response:
I would tell you, but then I'd have to kill you, LOL! I will admit it is one of the possible options, but I don't know if it is the one that i will use.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Oh ... sad ... I'm whimpering and crying too ... how heartbreaking for parents to witness the cruelity inflicted upon their child.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
cool chapter ... love the revelations!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
stupid stupid stupid Edward ... he's twisting himself in knots ... make him stop ... well, no, don't make him stop as it makes for a good story, but geez ...
love the baby lemon ... Bella is a wee bit evil
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Love the fluff and the connections and the way you wrangled the continuing family into the move home. Great chapter.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I tend to love fluff! Great fluff it is. Love the re-emergence into civilization. The buying a car was great. Eager for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
intense session having to relive all the most 'crucial parts'
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
cool new pad ... this is getting fun
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
oh I do hope the baby is fine
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
what a sweet awesome wonderfully special chapter ... good job
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
love the part about the Oprah show ... and the penthouse sounds fabulous
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
another great chapter ... what fun it would be to be turned loose in a mall
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
oh no ... she can't lose the babies!
love the surprises earlier in the chapter though
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238945
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is different ... like your beginning ... keep going ... I'm intrigued.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
completely enthralled ... on to read the next chapter
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
that was an awesome chapter
loved the emotions from Edward to the punishment he gave
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your reviews! They do mean alot to me!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
oh that was luscious ... Bella's list of what she likes that Edward is doing is a perfect description of what I love about your story ... keep going
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear you are unjoying it! More to come real soon! Thank you for reading it!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
Excellent chapter.
Love the part about Bella appearing shy to most, but to a Dom watching she appears as the perfect sub. Excellent.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really value your reveiws! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade. But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.
Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters. She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life. She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves. And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.
Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
What a fun and interesting story. Thank you for sharing with us!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
Oh no ...poor Bebe.
You have an excellent writing style. The visuals you create ... leaving just enough for me to imagine. That probably doesn't make sense to anyone but me.
Your transposing of our pets into another universe and making them experience the same sad and abusive things out pets do when owners no longer have time for their pets ... makes the reader think.
Author's Response:
It makes perfect sense to me! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
So sad that she's still hoping/wishing for Sir & Madam ... understandable, but sad.
Author's Response:
It is sad, but people don't magically get over losing the ones they love. And for that reason, I don't believe they should magically get over it in stories either. It needs to be a progression.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
Love the addition of Bach and Pani. I understand you have a story about them. I'm going to have to look into that.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'm surprised at all the people who have responded so positively to Bach and Pani's reappearance.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
I was starting to not like Ben, but maybe he has promise after all.
Great scene!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
excellent ... love Bebe's nervousness - she wants what she knows; and Pani's calm reason
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe
good for Bebe ... and glad Tral had the oppty to vent
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.
After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: New York City
Intriguing and different ... off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks! hope you like it!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Road Trip
cute on the 'bender' pun
liking how Em and Bella are believable
Author's Response:
I thought it was a little silly, but... :) Yeah, I write how I talk. I want my characters to seem more real, I guess. react the way you would, ya know? Anyway, thanks for the review!
What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra? What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time? What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?
This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon. The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.
Can a new love save her? Can his voice pull her from the darkness?
This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding? If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).
The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService. Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings
Just found your story ... well, that's not entirely true. I have seen it posted before, but I tend to shy away from stories that kill off any of the Cullens or Bella. I took a chance.
.... and ... read it straight through. Excellent story. Well thought out. Loved the meadow scenes and the Denali's arrival. Really happy to see Bella and Carlisle coming together.
Now, I'm eager for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking a chance on this! I know it is not easy when we have such a love for E&B. But this story came to me and I couldn't ignore it.
I'm glad you are enjoying it and I am working hard on the next chapter as we speak.
Thanks so much for the review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101
Excellent ... what a lovely chapter. Your ability to make me *feel* the emotions *see* the scene is fantastic. Eager to see how their relationship continues to evolve.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the beautiful compliment. It means the world to me.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One
Hot! Loved the dominant scene as it fit in so perfectly. Eager for next chapte.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed Domisle. I am working on the next chapter as we speak!
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New
Lovely ...missed this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I am sorry you had to wait so long for this. Time for writing right now seems to be coming to me less and less as RL is kicking my arse. But I promise I will never abandone these two!
Thanks again!
Till next time
Nickey
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Awesome chapter ... Both of them. Loving Judge Lucas. I do want to hear what Carlisle says to Edward. Edward is more than a bit out of control and needs to know that.
Eager for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Def. he's out of control, but he wouldn't be Edward if he wasn't. Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Loving your story. So different. So well written!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! I know certain elements of my story are not the norm, but I'm glad some people are liking it. :)
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
The intensity just keeps building ... Wow!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
This story keeps getting better and better!
Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?
(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)
- Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
- Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184537
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
Just finding your story ...sounds intriguing. Your Alice seems a bit more mature than how many portray her. I think I'm going to like that.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Wow sees! What a revelation!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Makeover
Well Alice is still a whirlwind ... Refreshing actually. Quite the contrast to Edward.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
Ooo la la ... Hot daydreamin'.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Why He Is the Way He Is
LOL love the mutual sex dreams. They've got it bad.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Small World
Normally I don't like mike, but your mike is delightful especially since he is rocking Edwards world. Loving your story and the way the girls are playing Edward.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Okay you have a gift for lemons even if they are just daydreams. Can't wait for the real thing.
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
Awesome speech Alice weaves! Hope Edward sees the light.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Too cute ... You have an excellent way of drawing your reader into the emotion of the moment.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Sunflower of My Life
How cute are they?
Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents. Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with the loss of both her family and her future. When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.
**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!!
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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery! Click to visit!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Thank you for the glimpse of Bella. She'shurting but I'm happy to know she's okay.
Could it be that some things are just meant to be?
Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.
Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.
Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.
So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.
Some things even Alice can't predict.
WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Suspicion
Liking the twist with Bella and Dr Cullen ... Wonder how that's going to play out?
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Family and Friends
Really different story. I'm enjoying the twist.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoy it :) Welcome abord, and thank you for leaving your thoughts for me :)
Alley Cat.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Doubts
Wow ... All together and Bella on the horizon. Great story. I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Hope
Great ins and outs of weaving the family back together. Sad about Roselie being dead though.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Where Is Everybody?
Love how you bring Alice and Jasper into the story.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Anne Tony
You are introducing our favorite characters only not ... Love it!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Redemption, Acceptance, and Love
Oooooo .... Loving the lemon.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Movie, Mono, and Myth
Alice is just as conniving in your story ... Love it.
Author's Response:
Yup, Alice is a fun character to play with :) She has a big part in setting things in motion, but from now on the story would have a little more focus on Bella/Edward.
I'm gald that you're enjoying the story, and thank you for leaving reviews that keep making me smile :)
Hope you have a great day,
Alley Cat.
Carlisle perverts a Christmas classic. See what's going on in and around the Cullen house on Christmas Eve. This is just for shiggles. M for really dirty humor, smut, and mistreatment of forest creatures. Vampire/human. AU. CPOV
Categories: Crackfic, Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 547 Read Count: 700
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my ... Um ... Different ... I like it!
What if Edward's motivation for dating Bella wasn't becasue he loved her but because he was frustrated by the fact that he couldn't hear her? What if he lied about a lot of other things as well? WARNING: Abuse and a later chapter non-sexual SPANKING. Carlisle/Bella
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128104 Read Count: 26796
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Presents
What a fantastic round of Q&A. The Qs were well planned and theAs wonderful. I especially loved Carlisle's protection of Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I added the protection at the last minute. It seemed fitting. Glad you liked it.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Dark
Excellent chapter ... I have a strange suspicion that Carlisle is going to go ballistic when Edward confesses.
Hope you are feeling better.
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: All I Really Want
An interesting turn of events.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Truth
Just finding your story. It's different and I'm intrigued. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it,
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Pain
Excellent ... And a unique gift ...refreshing.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Restraint
Wow! That was different, emotional ... Need to digest.
Edward by the way is toast.
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Meeting
About time that Carlisle did something punish Edward. Thank you for the update. I am enjoying your story.
Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction
Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for. She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given. Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him. Can an uneducated Bella teach him something? What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263192
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?
Wow! Intense capter. You do such a great job of hooking me and keeping me captivated throughout.
Author's Response:
Thanks again and again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. As the story comes closer to an end, it seems we have a lot of questions or comments that are geared toward answers already given in the story. So we decided to give a little background to clear up the misconceptions and questions.
Edward Masen: Father is dead, mother is bi-polar and left him in the care of Esme and Carlisle. Mother is alive, but whereabouts are unknown. Edward met ‘Tanya’ in college, they had a short affair and she left, after being caught in trying to get money from him. Edward then shut down and treated all women as if they were not worth his time. He refused to date or trust any women and he instead only was with a select few at Aro’s club, where he paid for sex. Edward owns the restaurant where his parents used to take him to eat at, before his father died and his mother went off the deep end. Edward is also one of the youngest English professors at UW.
Bella Swan: Bella was born the child of single mother Renee Higbottom. Renee met Charlie during one of his planned scams to get money. Renee was very rich, as were her single father. Charlie ended up impregnating Renee, but he was already married to Sue Clearwater. Renee paid off Charlie and Sue to leave her and her child alone, but then subsequently died of breast cancer when Bella was three. Renee’s father fought for custody, but grand-parents rights are not acknowledged in the state of Washington, therefore after Renee’s death the state went in search of Charlie Swan. Once he was found Bella was placed in his and Sue’s care. After Bella went to live with Charlie and Sue, she was treated iek a slave and was never allowed even normal things such as schooling, food, new clothes, and every other basic thing as parents we give our children without second thought. Bella grew up starved for affection, so once she got to take care of the twins she gave all that affection she has been starving for to them. Her love of the twins is unconditional as is their love for her.
I hope this helps answer a few questions and clears up a few things. I’m not sure why, but we have several who think Sue is Bella’s real mother, and that is not the case at all.
Thank you again so much for all the wonderful heartfelt reviews you all leave for us. It is amazing to us that we have managed to instill such a deep devotion in our readers to our characters, and we are blown away by just how much emotion our readers feel for our characters. I know that the character names belong to Stephenie Meyer, but these characters and the way they are in this story are in fact ours, she owns the names and appearance descriptions, but the attitude and demeanor and words are all ours. Thanks, Kasi (& Nikky)
TEASER Chapter 28: Subject to changes during beta process.
I am so proud of Seth and Leah this past month has not been easy on them, but they have held their heads up high and got on with it. There has been some name calling at school. Now I know kids can be cruel but the things that they are saying, is coming from older mouths first. Things no parent should be saying in front of their children. Bella and I have addressed the school regarding the problems, but we’ve been brushed off like nothing is going on. Mrs. Crown the principle said that people will talk. She went on to point out that I was after all, Seth and Leah’s father, and I was shaking up with their big sister. The way she said it, implied that Bella and I were doing something wrong. After her rather rude little speech I called Caius and explained the whole thing to him. To say that he was angry is putting it mildly. He went as far as taking the principle in front of the school board, and she was put on a written warning. Not only is her job and tenure in jeopardy, but her career as a whole is. Since we have proof that she knowing let kids and adults harass the kids, she was warned that a lawsuit would be filed if the behavior continued. Her biggest mistake was she was aware what the twin have been though these past five months, yet did nothing to help stop the harassment.
Caius informed me of another school that had room for more students. It was little school that only had a little over one hundred students. It went from kinder-garden to fifth grade and each class had mix of around fifteen children per classroom. It was a private school, and ranked in the top ten of all schools in the state of Washington’s education program. There was a sister school that managed the grades sixth through twelfth, also ranked in the top ten. Both schools are quite prestigious and expensive, but cost is of no matter. There are a few nice things the school is located close to where Esme and Carlisle live, but that also causes us transportation issues for to and from school. Both Bella and I have talked about this and we all talked about it in family therapy. Seth and Leah asked to just finish out this year of school where they are before deciding. We agreed that this was the right choice for right now.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil
Wow this story is fantastic! You keep surprising me, but it all fits together so well!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View. A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come. I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far. And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she? Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh. I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter. A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter. Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise. Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out. There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat. I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue. She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun. I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are. Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them. There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31. Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up. See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...
Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night. I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in. “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”
She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”
I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her. “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.” I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye. “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you. The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers. Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band.
“Baby, what’s wrong?”
She looks up at me and frowns. “I was just thinking about my past. There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.” Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it. “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me. Her friend... he gave me a muffin.” Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts. “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?”
My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head. “Yes, baby, it was me. I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”
Bella shakes her head at me. “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you. I wanted you to come back and take me with you. At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch. If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here. They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”
I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly. “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them. I will not fail you or my children again.”
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221097
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Wow! This story gets better with each chapter.
Jasper is hurt by an old enemy, and it's up to Carlisle to save him. Can he show his son what family is all about?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (non-slash)
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7350 Read Count: 266
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What a beautiful story. You portrayed jasper and Carlisle so very well.
Edward has returned to Carlisle's side, but what was the price of his return? What secret is he hiding?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5513 Read Count: 336
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What a poignant story. You portrayed your version so very well. I love your character development of Madame Vi. It leaves me wondering how she knew what Edward is and why her reaction was what it was.
After graduating from Auburn, young Veterinarian Dr. Nathan Ogilvie moves to Savannah, Georgia to begin his practice in a difficult year: 1936. He is successful, and he is well liked for his compassion and assistance to poor farmers, but his personal convictions soon make him a controversial figure. In the small town of Pooler, just outside of Savannah, he befriends a colored woman named Mattie Walker who takes in orphans and abandoned children, many of whom are half white. Out of desperation, Mattie calls him for help with a rape victim who has taken refuge with her, and his life is changed forever. He soon falls in love with his patient, but there is one problem: she is colored. As their relationship develops, he further alienates himself from the community and endangers his fledgling practice, but he also finds support among true friends, including the sheriff in Pooler. Life becomes even more complicated when a wealthy cotton broker goes missing, and Nathan finds himself fighting to save those closest to him from murderous accusations.
Categories: Original Fiction, Historical, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110309 Read Count: 1417
Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
You really should be a writer. I'm loving your story. You could sell this.
Author's Response:
Thank-you for your encouraging reviews! I will post the story in its entirety before the end of the month. Hang in there!
Jeremy McCollum
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love the start of your story.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
They are both brave to go against the norms of society. I admire them.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
It's sad how folks treated those that were different. Makes me realize how very far we've come as a society despite the distance we still have to go.
Your writing is very gentle and easy to read.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Gots more and more interesting!
He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After. From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.
*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113810
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I keep hoping that Daryl will come clean. Guess I'll have to wait and see.
love the scenes with Edward and Bella and the kids.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh I've missed you and your story! It's like I'm part of the family ... Your writing is that excellent!
i do hope things continue to be calm on the home front.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
So excited to see a chapter. I keep falling in love with your characters and story over and over again. Love especially the talks between Edward/Bella and the kids. Eager eager for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words - I'm afraid that RL (real life sucks!) is catching up with me a little bit - but don't worry, I'm writing like a demon when I can!!
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter. Love the images that you included. I want that cake! Great moments between the children, and the children and Edward.
Frowning at Peter and hoping this all has a HEA ... I know you'll take care of us!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Excellent! Happy to see Edward and Bella reconnecting more and more. Love the scene with Edward and the tadpoles. Too cute! Uh-oh on Sam at the airport. Highly doubtful that he will let anyone off the hook. I'd almost rather he didn't. Edward needs the opportunity to step in and take control of his family again. He needs to be the head of the house .... Maybe taking Sam off for a discussion ... Or maybe Carlisle needs to step in as patriarch. However you pull it off, I know it'll be good!
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I remember now why I enjoyed your other story so much. You put a lot of substance into your chapters. They are like entire stories each on their own the reader gets so very wrapped up in the characters. You make them real people. Thank you! It is such a pleasure to read.
Now that I've come to the end of the chapters that are posted, I do have to say .... arghhhhhh ... Not a big cliffie, but I *****NEED***** to know what comes next NOW!!!!! Hurry and post the next chapter pleeeeeeeeeease!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
**snarl** **growl** you stop there ... You can't stop there!!!
okay, happy that the girls are safe, but but but WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Excellent lemon with Edward and Bella. Glad that they are reconnecting.
Wonderful growls from Carlsle and Jasper. Very glad to see the younger generation stand up for themselves.
Intrigued with the mystery intruder and really wanting to hear how Jasper starts the conversation with Jackson.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow! Love the scene! Love the chapte! Love Garrett!
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I always love the pictures you include!
This chapter sure piles on the angst! Love that Garrett didn't react to Edward's anger. Eager to read the next chapter!
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I just came across your sequel ..... So very excited!!! Off to a good start. I love your descriptstions and writing. You make all the children so very real. Sad to see Edward and Bella are not in a good place. I'm going to enjoy seeing where they lead!
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
So excite when I realize dot day that you updated! Hoping your thumb is feeling better. It always reminds not to take the little things for granted when something like that happens.
wonderful chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella are reconnecting. I'm enjoying getting to know the "kids" and watching their interaction with each other and their grandparents. Carlisle is always my favorite so love to see his wisdom come forth!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
So happy to have the privilege of reading your writing.
Please please finish the story.
i know I've said it before, but you really need to consider publishing something. I'll buy it and I'm sure many others would too. You are so very good at creating characters that are real!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Slow is good ...gives m e a chance to savor!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Excellent. What are you cooking up for Jackson?
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh oh oh! A chapter! I was so excited to see it that I had to stop to read it thru! Excellent as lays. You get better at writing with every chapter.
love the girls' antics and the drama on the beach.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
As always, I can't get enough of your writing and story. More please more more more!!!!!!
love the plot twist and hoping Erica is found soon so she doesn't have to suffer long ...and can help locate Kathy.
Did I mention I want more?
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Excellent ... Love the new perspective!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Yum yum yum! I love your stour and the relationships you have created between them all. I think I've said this before. You really need to do this as a living. Point me in the direction your book and I'll be in line to buy.
i especially love Alice and Jasper interacting front of Bonnie. Such a lovely scene!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Squeeeeeeeeeeal! A chapter. I'm so excite. Had to stop and sit and read!
excellently done. I am enjoying each and every member of the family. I think I am loving the moments like the one in this chapter where one of the children interact with Bella and Edward on an emotional level. Your portrayal of Sam is fabulous.
thank you for giving this story to us to read. I so very much appreciate it.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Never giving up on your story. It is so utterly awesome!
sending prayers that your life settles and becomes "normal" for you whatever that would be.