Reviews by jomik1
Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh,I hope she is okay. Maybe it's being out of the hospital, maybe it's Edward. Maybe she can sense something is different.

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Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OMG! Maybe the kiss will trigger something in her.  Come on Bella, don't give up. Wait I you see what's waiting for you!!!

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I trust you, I trust you, I trust you!!! 

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I don't want to wait all weekend!!  :(  Okay, I'm done whining.  I know you'll pull us through this, I have total faith!!  Definately looking forward to Monday's update!!!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ooohhhh!!!  It's pure evil to make us wait!!!  Okay, until tomorrow.  I have faith, I have faith, I have faith!!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes! I kept the faith. I knew you would get us here. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm so glad she is still alive. Now if only she would start to come back Ito the real word. Can't wait for the next update

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Can't wait to see what comes next. I hope that Edward is starting to break through tmo her

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

She saw him!! Perhaps her angel can lead her back.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

She judst needs to hold on to her angel

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh, I love it!!  He heard her say Hi!!!  I hope he and Jasper can lead her back.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Love that she is fighting. I just hope she's not afraid of her angel next time she encounters him

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I hope Eleazar can help.  Edward needs to reestablish the connection.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yes, progress!!!  Baby steps but at least a connection has been made

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

God, I just love these chapters. What will she do? What will he ask?  It's torture waiting!!!  Love it!!

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Oh no, just when she was going to open up.  What on earth happened??

 

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He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 17073
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
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Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved the chapter. Bella's making it thru the day slowly but surely. And Edward is just wonderful!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Hard Tackle

Loved it. Our boy sure is in this deep! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Finding A Groove

Oh my, you paint quite the picture with your words! I could definately "see" our soccerward!

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Encroachment

It was sooo worth the wait.  Absolutely loved the chapter. Now I can't wait for the official meeting with the parents.  Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

That turned out to be a really sweet chapter.  Poor girl was driving herself crazy.  Maggie was just what she needed.  A mother figure to help her through.

 

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A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 106407
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
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Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh my, that boy is something else.  You just gotta love him and all his cockiness.  More changes for him to deal with.  He is soooo whipped!!  Loved the chapter, you never fail to make me laugh.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hehe that he is!  I do adore his cockiness.  Changes everywhere he turns!  Love to make you laugh!  Thanks :)  More soon!

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Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

YES! YES! YES! You just made my night!  I'm so excited for the sequel! I LOVE clueless, cocky QBward. This was a wonderful chapter. So glad he figured out those flutters. Hate to have him think he was going to "die" on draft day. LOL!!



Author's Response:

Aww glad to hear it!  I'm glad you want more of him.  he's so much fun!  Haha he gets his flutters now!  Thanks so much!

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71656
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
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Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Fairy Tales

Aww, poor Edward. It's hard to walk that fine line.  Looking forward to Christmas at the Cullens.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Being a part of a Family

I think our Bella is starting to grow up. She has a long way to go, but she is starting to surround herself with good friends and family. I'm sure she will have some growing pains, but at least she is starting to move in the right direction. Can't wait for the next update

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48919
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward seems like a total sweetie.  Got to get used to the idea of Vampire Bella and Human Edward, but I like it so far.

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I do love this Edward. He's seems very sweet and romantic.  Poor Emmett, I wonder what Victoria did to him. Hope they find him soon

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So glad Edward is rid of Tanya. I hope Bella can come up with some info on Emmett, I also wonder what happened to Bella. She is obviously having some sort of flashbacks.  Looking forward to reading more.

 

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved all the info in this chapter.  Loved seeing Alice. Can't wait til they all meet in person.  I just hope she can keep Edward safe in the mean time.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loved it. I think Edward is maybe buying a ring???  Yes, he needs to be changed otherwise they can't be together forever.

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127527
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh my God, I don't think I even breathed while reading that.  I'm finally catching up on my updates, but I am totally dreading the next chapter. Okay, they'll get through this, they'll get thru this. I'll just keep repeating that!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow, what a chapter. That first part was incredibly difficult to read. I can't imagine how hard it was to write. I'm so glad it ended positively, the really needed some good news.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved the chapter. It will definately take some time but hopefully they both are getting better and stronger, day by day.  As for Emma, she's still so young. It's hard to understand the effects of what happened. She'll get there too.  Can't wait for the next update.

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I loved the birthday party.  Little by little, Bella will get stronger.  She's making progress.  Can't wait to see what happens with Rose and Emmett!!!  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144428
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
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Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: World's and Connections

Loved the chapter.  Glad the short program went well.  Though, my heart breaks for Bella.  Can't imagine having to give up what you love to do way before you are ready to.  So looking forward to the proposal!! Yay!!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Finals and Proposals

Loved, loved, loved the proposal! So glad they won gold. It's nice to go out on top. Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Exhibitions, Lemonade and Wedding Bells

Loved the chapter.  So glad that Alice and Bella made up. Jasper needs to get off his butt and propose!!

Summary:

Edward and his friends spend a day at the pier. They visit the fortune teller and she tells Edward that he will find something, and not to throw it away. She tells him to search for it with all that he has. Will he find it? or will it slip passed him?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54451 Read Count: 22293
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2014
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Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:)

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved it! :-)

 

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Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491650
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 08 Aug 2013
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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Poor Bella. Boy, Charlie just messed with the wrong people!

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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward will make sure everything is taken are of. Kind of makes me wonder what he's doing while Bella and Alice are away

A Good Thing by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
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After Bella graduates from college she thought her dream job would be waiting...fate had other plans. When her brother Emmett asks her to join his band, she agrees. What happens when music isn't the only thing that sparks her interest?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36264 Read Count: 20828
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter.  Looking forward to the next one

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this. I'm excited to see where this goes.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Looks like they both are starting to see light!!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jacob needs a beat down!  Loved that Bella and Edward are getting closer.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, no, no, no, no, no!!!  Don't do it Edward!!!  Gah!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

First he wants to "hypothetically" date her, then he decides to be with someone else to get her out of his system and make her jealous, then he feels guily.  Boys are sooooo STUPID!!!!! I know they're not together but he is still playing games wiith Bella.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hmmm, so where do they go from here??

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, a little cliffhanger.  On to the next chapter to see what's going down.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well lets hope they can start to move forward now.

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Okay, much better. Now they are starting to move forward.  Wonder what's coming up next

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella, but at least Edward is getting his feelings in order.  Someone needs to kick Jacobs butt!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww, that was a sweet chapter.  I wonder what Jacob has to say to Bella.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awwww!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yey, We have the I Love You's!!!

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yep, that was the other shoe.  I knew Tanya would be back.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh oh, time for the truth??

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh, another little Cliffy. I thought I knew who it was but now, not so much!!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, well that took me by surprise. But it does answer the question of what happened to Charlie and Renee.

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Uh Oh, what else is going to happen??

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Tiffany's!!  Hmmm, I wonder why he is going there???

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Emmett may have overreacted just a little bit!!! Sweet end to the chapter.

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Very sweet story. I enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

I think you are reading your way through my entire collection. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Lost and Found by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

On the run from an abusive ex, Bella flees to the sanctuary of Forks. Can new love save her or will she be lost...

This is my first ever fic, so be gentle


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20971 Read Count: 9431
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds like it will be a good story. Porr Bella, no one should ever be treated that way.

 



Author's Response:

Keep in mind that this was my first attempt at FanFiction. This story is unbeta'd, so all the mistakes are mine. I hope that you enjoy it. I appreciate the support.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope she can confide in Rose, she needs a good strong support system right now.

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, poor Bella. The phycological trauma has to be devasting. She definately needs to talk to someone.

Don't worry about this being your first fic.  Everyone has to start somewhere and I am really enjoying it!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

James is going to be one scary dude.  Can't wait to see how Bella's day goes with Alice.

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

God, her story is so sad but it definately ended on a positive note!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww, that was sweet!

 

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh no, not good!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG, it was just a dream.  Okay, but I know the confrontation is coming!!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, at least they had some fun times. Poor Bella, this is not going to be good.

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

James is pure evil.

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thank you for not dragging that out, he was vicious.

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so glad they are going to therapy. It's an important step form both of them to recover.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

They're recovering and moving forward. Sweet end to the chapter.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very sweet ending to the story. Really enjoyed it.

 

Game of Love by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After the death of her father, Bella inherits the Seattle Mariners. Does she have the strength to run the team? Can Edward and the gang help her? Can they fight their feelings long enough to play the game and win? AH Canon Couples..M for Lang/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31124 Read Count: 25240
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting plot. Looking forward to reading this.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Will

Oh I loved it. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Reporters and Recruiters

They're bth longing for each other. How long will it take for them to realize their feelings are mutual?

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Changes and Chances

Great chapter, on to the next one

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: The Press

Hmmm, don't think I'm going to be liking Jacob very much.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Reality Bites

So, so close. Time for Edward to step p the wooing!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Springtime

I'm so glad they told each other how the feel but tat last line has me worried!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Game On

Uh oh, that is not good. What did Carlisle hear?

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Opening Day

I have a feeling Jacob is going to be stirring up quite a bit of trouble

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Trials

Well this could prove to be very interesting

 

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Discussions and Decisions

I know they are both at fault for spending enough time together, but Edward is being a baby!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Surprises

I'm glad they made up, but whoever is watching is bound to make some trouble.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Disturbances

Glad Jacob got arrested and loved the letter from Charlie

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Changes

Well it's about time! :-)

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Commitments

Loved it

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Unexpected

Aww, a wedding and a baby. Poor Bella though, to have pneumonia while pregnant would be awful!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Separations

Great chapter!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Injuries

Ow. Poor Edward, knee injuries are a bitch!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Vows

I wonder what the future will hold for Edward. And yay for the baby!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue: Change of Season

Sweet ending! Loved the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope that you will check out my other stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward met when she was 18. Now 4 and a half yrs later they meet again. Bella is a teacher and Edward works for the fire department. Will they let love in or be burned? AH. M for language/lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44330 Read Count: 41662
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think I'm going to like fireward!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved Bella's confidence!