Reviews by jomik1
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward met when she was 18. Now 4 and a half yrs later they meet again. Bella is a teacher and Edward works for the fire department. Will they let love in or be burned? AH. M for language/lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44330 Read Count: 41662
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So sad about Alec. Loved the chapter.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, so much happening in this story:a fire starter, an alcoholic Jake, a crazy Renee and what ever it is that Edward has to tell.  I'm loving it!!

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow what a story, let's hope they can get through this

 

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Jacob is getting better. I just hope that it is real. I'm so glad he said the big ILY!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, who on earth is starting these fires.  Oh, I hope they are okay!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great fundraiser, but what's going to happen with there visitor?

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Glad she's doing better. Hmmm, something in the bloodwork.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so glad that they finally have her in custody.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love the trial proceedings!! And the proposal was sweet!!



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Thanks. Glad to see that you are enjoying this one.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Uh oh!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So glad that they came to an understanging. I'm not sorry that Victoria is gone though.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, that sure had a lot packed into it!! Glad Edward was alright and that they were married before the arrival of baby Matthew.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh no, not Felix and Demetri.  I so did not see that coming!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Nice ending, I really enjoed this story



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

On the Line by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Broken after the death of her fiance, Bella moves looking for a new start. She meets and loves again, only to be left broken once more. Can Edward teach her to love again? Is she really willing to put her heart on the line? AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37150 Read Count: 13205
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It would be hard to deal on the day you were supposed to get married.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Little by little she is moving forward. I'm not sure what to make of James.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, lots going on in that chapter

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So hard to decide to open yourself up again knowing you could be hurt wosre than before. She needs to move on but that doesn"t mean it's not hard to do.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So gad Edward won't give up.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, I didn't expect the inheritance. Glad she's going back to Seattle to go to school.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad to see that Edward was able to come back for a little while. I'm worried about what will happen.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Okay, it will be alright, I know it will b alright!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad he's alive, now they just need to find him

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The creepy guy is worrying me!!  Glad to see that Edward is doing everything he can to get home

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay, they made it out.  Now, Bella needs to wake up so she'll know too!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yay, they're reunited.  Good bye creeper.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Finally!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Glad she stood up for herself, he needed a wakeup call

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Sweet Chapter

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful ending. Looking forward to the outtake



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The outake should be coming soon.

Summary:

Follow along as Sexy Geek Boy and Nerdella continue to grow as lovers and parents. Be aware, there is danger around the corner. What, you ask? Read and find out! ExB, AU/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161783 Read Count: 114521
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2012
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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Happy Birthday!

So glad Owen's birth went well.  They need some good after all the bad.  Loved the chapter.

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Forgive Me Brother, For I Have Sinned...

Wow, great chapter. It's amazing how quickly one can repent when faced with his own mortality. He did indeed make his own bed.

Within Reach by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

For years she's wanted him, fantasized about him, wanting more than he could ever give. He was never within reach... until now.


Who wants to play doctor?


BDSM/Kink/Olderward/Doctor!Kink 


Within Reach


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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21814 Read Count: 44071
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prom Night

I love this!!! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Always Be Prepared

Well, Bella is definately doing everything she can to get what she wants.  Is she truly prepared for the reality? Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dr. Cullen's Office

Well, she just got a tiny taste of the reality. Is she ready to move forward?

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Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Wishes Granted?

What has she gotten herself into indeed!! Oh Bella, you are entering the world of the big boys now. I hope she's ready!!

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
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Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142054
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: A Masen Family Vacay

Loved the trip to Disney, but sick kids while there is definately not fun.  Was so excited to see this update.  I've missed these guys!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44063 Read Count: 93682
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2013
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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've been wanting to read this since you first posted that you were writing it on FB. I'm very excited and really enjoyed the first chapter. Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter! I really enjoyed the glimpse into Edward and Jasper's mind.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, Jasper was a very bad boy for lying! Wait til the boys get those pictures. They are going to die!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it, Bella's letters were great. I definately think she peaked our dr./captains interest!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ah, see the innocent letters start to become more. You never know where you might find your net adventure or love

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella is evil!! I'm sure jasper will think twice before trying to pull a fast one on Bella again 

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well, payback is definately a bitch! Hehehe

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I definately think that there wasn't too much acting in that phone call. They may not fully realize it yet, but those feelings are there

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, I think it's time for Bella to get serious and make our dear attain hers, of course with a little help from her friends

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That went well. Now they are both open to moving forward. I can't wait to see what the girls ave planned.



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Thanks for all the reviews, next ch is about to go up! Enjoy!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love Bella's surprise! I think Edwardis going to just die when he sees everything she is doing for him. It is just going to make him fall in love with her more!

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww, they are just too sweet!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a great way for Edward to celebrate his birthday when he's so from home. Loved the t-shirts. Wonder what's in the last envelope

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well the got the ILY's out. I'm sure Edward will enjoy his pictures!

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it. Bella is one tough chick. Nurse Mallory better watch out!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved it!! Wait til Bella finds out what's going on.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I so want that house!!!  Loved it, can't wait for more!

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella is going to die when she finds out that the house she watching being built is really her house!!!  I wonder what her birthday present is??

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved her present. Now they've made promises to each other. He just needs to come home now.

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107118
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
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Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm excited about this new story. Can't wait to see where you take it.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So far I'm really liking this. Can't wait for the next update

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Always love a bad ass Edward. Looks like Bella has some things to think about.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, the Newton's are in for it now.  Karen should have just kept out of it.  I'm looking forward to the dinner.  I can't wait to see what Bella's reaction is to Edwards confession. Looking forward to the next chapter

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well, she didn't handle that well at all!!  Now that she has had some time, hopefully they can finally have that all important talk.

 

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good for Bella, making that jerk pay.  Looking forward to the next chapter

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Outtake: The Note

OMG!!!  Way to go girl. That's a hell of a letter.  Can't wait for more

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Just as she was finally going to say it, he gets called away!!!  Grrrr.  Looking forward to the next chapter

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Very interesting turn of events with Tanya.  Loved the date.  So sweet.

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I can't wait to see what happens next! Monday is just too long!

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was so good.  I hate having to wait for the next update!!!  Loved it! :)

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49588
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
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Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok, so definately did not like the date with Tanya, but you are 100% right that it had to happen.  He is not in any type of relationship and he thinks that Bella and Jacob are.  It makes perfect sense that he would start to test the dating waters.  Now, as for Bella, she needs to stop being so damn stubborn!!  They both need to just stop assuming things about each other and start to communicate WITH each other (Bella needs to listen to her momma!!).  I'm sure they will be amazed by what they will learn.  I am so loving this story.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I am super glad that you get that! I've found that most people agree, even though they didn't like the date. lol  Bella IS going to take her mom's advice in Ch 6!

Thanks for reading-I'm happy you like it! I really appreciate your reviews, too!

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, what a first chapter. How devastating to find out that not only is your wife no where near the page you are on, but has lied to you over and over again about the one thing you truly want. Well, now Edward has a new direction in life and I can't wait to watch it unfold. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts. Ch 2 will be up before next Friday :)

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter.  Part of me just wants to hug Edward and part of me just wants to slap him silly!!  He's been through a lot, unfortunately, he is taking it out on Bella.  I think that is because he doesn't want to deal with the fact that he is attracted to her.  Our boy has some tough changes to get through.  Anyway, someone needs to shove Kate off a cliff for inflicting all these emotional scars on Edward.  Bitch!!!



Author's Response:

You hit the nail dead on! Sure, he's still stinging from the shit with Kate, but some of his attitude is him deflecting his attraction to Bella :D  And Kate will get hers...Karma is a bitch.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

First, I just want to shake both of them!! So damn stubborn. Oh well, they will get there with time. After all, they will be neighbors and working together. The attraction isn't going anywhere, they just need to put their prejudices aside and get to know  each other.  Second, I love your Jake. He sounds like the perfect best friend.



Author's Response:

I agree with everything you said! Once these two actually talk to each other with their defenses down, it's gonna get better :)  Jake is cool-he's loosely based on a dear friend of mine.

Thanks for reading! (and reviewing!!)

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

These two!! *shakes head* I can see the explosion coming! I have a feeling they are not going to know what hit them.  I love Jake but I'm very wary of Tanya. I think she may be up to no good. The last thing Edward needs is another Kate. I realr am loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Oh wow, you are dead on about the explosion. It's brewing, just like a storm! Jake is great, but Tanya is not the typical character you're used to reading. Thank you for reading. I appreciate that you took the time to review, too. It makes my day to read everyone's comments!

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter. I'm so glad to see them slowly moving forward. Baby steps were taken and that is okay. They both started to communicate!!! It was only a little but it was good for a first time. They are both starting to realize that they are feeling things. Now we just need for them to realize that the other person is feeling those things too. It will come. As for Jake, can't wait until Edward finds out the truth there. Actually, I can't wait to see HOW he finds out. Does someone tell him?? Or, perhaps he sees something that will stop him dead in his tracks and say WTF!! Oh my, the possibilities. Absolutely love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter to see if these two can move things further along. The BBQ promises to be interesting.

Author's Response:

Many people have been pondering the circumstances surrounding how Edward finds out. All I can say is, it won't be much longer!

Forward is good, slow but sure. There won't be any going backward, either.  It tickles me to see how excited everyone gets. I'm really happy you like the story! Thanks so much for the kind words :)

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was a great bonding chapter.  They are getting more familiar with each other and that is a good thing.  Start to build the foundation even if Edward is still clueless about her relationship status.  Still looking forward to that BBQ.  So, we were all worried about Tanya and she turned out to be necessary in Edwards progression forward but basically she was a none issue.  Now we are going to be seeing a James.  Should we be worried???  Can't wait to read more.  Love the story.



Author's Response:

You hit the nail on the head regarding Tanya. That's exactly what she was, just a step in the right direction :) James....  nope. No worries, there. In fact, you might end up really liking him! Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! I can't express what it means to me :) See you Thursday!

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have been dying for this chapter and you didn't disappoint!!!  That was fantastic.  The "Ah Ha" moment was priceless!!  It's a wonder what a little bit of clarity can do to move things forward.  So glad that Jake and Seth are "out" now.  Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward proceed from here.  You rocked it, girl!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad it lived up to your expectations!! Even though I had this scene in my head for a while, I was sweating this one. I'm thrilled that everyone was happy with it :)  

Thanks so much for reading!

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter. Loved that they are moving forward with the relationship and that Edward called her his girlfriend. Edward made an important step forward when he told Bella about Kate. He's healing and slowly starting to learn to trust again. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! I was a little worried about him calling her his girlfriend, but I think it was a big step for him. Thanks so much for reading!  xoxox

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I so want to go tubing down the river with that group.  What a blast that would be.  I know Bella is frustrated, but Edward needs to get there at his own pace.  It seems like he is starting to realise all that is in front of him.  He just needs to continue to let the past go so he can focus on the present that will get him the future he desires.  Hmmm, looks like we need to find some one for James.  Maybe Edward can shoot Tanya his way!!!!  :)  Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I know, right?!  It would be a hoot.  You're right, Edward needs to get it straight in his head then put that shit to rest!  lol  Good idea about James and Tanya, i was thinking the same thing!  Thanks for reading & reviewing!! xoxox

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

My goodness, once Edward finally broke through those road blocks he had built up, it was full steam ahead. Over and over again!!!  Loved it.  Laurent is going to be an interesting character, I believe.  Very smarmy.  Loved that you made him short and "rotund"! I see trouble a brewing with him.  Can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

Yup, and as he continues to progress, he's only going to get more comfortable and 'willing'.  LOL  Laurent is a smarmy guy, and you're right to be wary of him.  Thanks so much for reading!  xoxox

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the chapter.  We finally get all the parents together. I can't hate on Esme. As the mom of two boys, I would be super protective if one of them went through what Edward went through. She's Leary and just wants to be sure that he won't be put through the ringer again. Poor Jake, it's so sad that that such closed minded people exist in the world. You are who you are and no one has the right to beat you for it. As always, looking forward to the next update. 



Author's Response:

That is how I saw Esme. Not really judgemental or too assertive, just worried and wanting the best for him. We'll see more on her in the next chapter that may help to explain her motivation a little better.

About Jake...It is a terrible thing and happens more often than most people hear about. The experience was just another point that cemented his close relationship with Bella and her parents. There will be a little more on that in the next chapter, as well.  Thanks so much for reading!!  xoxox

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved the chapter.  Twins!!! Yea! Can't wait for the next update.  Yeah, those vaginal ultrasounds are not fun.  Had one when I was pregnant with my oldest.  He's 19 now and I still remember that exam!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the chapter! Thank you for reading :)  I don't think those exams are easily forgotten... :(    xoxox

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Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh my, so much happening. Glad Bella and Esme are getting along. I love Katrina and I love that she was Able to connect with Carlsle and his strories. I sure hope Laurent goes what's coming to him. Total creeper who just doesn't get it. Hope Bela is okay. Looking forward to the next update. 



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree. A LOT is happening. I'm taking the word count down in my next fic. These long chapters are killers. I'm not one to include a massive amount of detail. I don't like to read it and I don't write it. Just enough to get a sense of what's going on and set the stage, so to speak.  

Esme is great, she was just worried about her boy. Carlisle may have found a new calling? You'll have your answers shortly, I'll be updating before the day is through!  Thanks so much for reading  xoxox

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Go Edward!!  Way to pay back the slimy weazle for hurting Bella. So much excitement coming up.  Edward is FINALLY going to be a daddy!! Loved how this chapter ended. Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the chapter-thank you for reading!  xoxox

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yay!! The babies are coming.  Loved the chapter.  Can't wait for the delivery!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it. He finally got everything he wanted. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419231
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh how I love Dr. Edward!!  He is just what Bella needs.  Charlie needs to be shown the reality of his behavior and Bella moving out will do that.  It will also give her the independence that she desperately needs. With Angela and Edward, she can start to become the woman she is meant to be

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I just loved this first chapter.  Poor Bella, she needs someone to show her how beautiful she really is. Both inside and out!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am totally falling in love with Dr Feelgood!!! Poor Rose she has a long and difficalt recovery ahead of her

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter.  I really enjoy how you are building their friendship.  They both seem to really need each other in that way right now.  Can't wait to watch this progress!!  BTW - Why no love for my White Sox??  Good guys wear black after all! *cough*firstplace*cough*  :-)

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I absolutely love this Edward.  What a great chapter.  I love all your stories but this is quickly becoming my favorite. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!  Such a great chapter.  I am sooo in love with these characters.  God, I wish chapter 7 was ready already!!  ;)

 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was such a perfect date!! Loved it.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awesome chapter. Love seeing Bella's growth. She never would have stood up to Jasper a few months ago. I know things can't end with James with just his eviction. I'm nervous to see what happens there. And then we have the mysterious surgeon. Hmmm...Jacob, possibly? I think very possibly!!

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299875
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

I'm so excited about this story! Loved this first chapter and can't wait to read more

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

Loved this first chapter.  So excited to read another one of your stories. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Fifteen

Great chapter.  Alice and Bella are definately out there.  Poor Edward, he seems likes he wants to like be he's just not sure if he should.  Just keep Tanya away!! :) 

 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

Loved the chapter.  It was weirdly sweet!!! LOL!  Well, we got some insight into these two and now some of the quirks are starting to make sense.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Glass by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three women develop a close bond despite having never met face to face. When tragedy strikes one of them, they band together to help her heal. A story about friendship, loss, and love.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29708 Read Count: 33979
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 23 Apr 2013
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You've definately peaked my interest.  Can't wait to see where you take us with this!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113788
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: jomik1 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I've missed this story!! So glad you are posing again.  Can't wait to see what happens next