Reviews by cecelouis
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: cecelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

all I can said is WOW

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76230
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cecelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Homecoming

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love this story and why do you have to leave it with a cliffie.  I hope you post next update some.



Author's Response:

I promise to update again on Tuesday as I always do!   I'm glad you love the story but yeah I am a mean, wicked, Evil author that left a cliffie.  You can hate me, you won't be the only one!

 

Thanks for the review, here's your tease for next week, I hope it helps!

Finally she had finished her nightly rituals and climbed in bed sighing.  I listened steadily to her and her heart rate dropped indicating she was asleep quickly.  I went to her room and walked to her in wonder. In sleep she looked so much more at peace than she did when awake. The worries of the day no longer causing her jaw to clench. As I looked though the tension was diminished but not gone.
 
My angel’s brow was not smooth but slightly furrowed. I tried to resist, but I found my fingers reaching out, seemingly of their own accord, to caress her brow hoping to smooth out the tension. I breathed out a breath I hadn’t been aware of holding. As I touched her the connection I felt to this diminutive human girl was again complete.  Now my brow furrowed in confusion as to why this human girl affected me so.  Slowly the tension seemed to ease from her as I continued to softly caress her.

Reviewer: cecelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back

I love this chapter.  When do you think we will find out what happend to Bella.



Author's Response:

kinda soonish!  I have one huge plot point to get through which will cover the next two chapters.  Then there will be a one chapter lull and deep breath and then it will be 5-6 chapters of hold on to your seat with a lot of revelations and agnst thrown in.  So yeah, it's coming but there are a few things to get through first. most of it not happy, though I promise a lemon of sorts in there too so it won't be all HF!!!!

Reviewer: cecelouis Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated

Wow, this chapter is the best so for!  Thank you updating early

My question

Edward do you think that you can save Bella from whatever she going to thought?  If so how?



Author's Response:

wow, I'm glad you liked it so much.  I'll ask Edward your question

 

Thanks for the review!  Here's a tease for next week:

I hadn’t been off the phone with Bella for long when I heard Emmett and Jasper coming up to get me for a hunting trip.  I groaned before they made it to my room calling out, “I went hunting with Carlisle yesterday! I don’t need to hunt again.”

“Get up brother! I don’t care if you went hunting. We need manly brother time together. Now that you’re admitting to being mated we need to make sure you’re not going to fuck with our little sister! So get up and get moving!” Emmett bellowed as he plowed into my room.

“Language” Esme called up the stairs.

Emmett smiled. “See, that’s why we need to have this conversation elsewhere.  Don’t need to upset the ‘rents.”

I rolled my eyes. “Seriously, Emmett, can’t you say parents, or better yet Esme and Carlisle? Or the best idea, ignore it all and leave me alone!”

Jasper interrupted before Emmett and I bickered and nothing got accomplished. “Just come with us Edward.  We want to talk to you about a few things. I promise to keep Emmett in line.” As much as I can. He finished.

Reviewer: cecelouis Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

I like this chapter.  And I will pray for your beta father.  Are you going to update next Tuesday.

CeCe



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I am not updating weekly right now.  I will be updating everyother week.  i know i'm mean!  sorry!

Reviewer: cecelouis Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

when are you going to update again?  I miss Edward last week :(



Author's Response:

I'm sorry :(  I don't know.  I don't think I can update next week, so I will shoot for the week after.  I will try hard to keep to every other week.  sorry!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373565
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: cecelouis Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

I love this stoy.