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Gloaming by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU of Twilight. What if the Cullens located to Forks 18 years later than originally planned? She said she would have been happy with Jake. She would have married him and had kids and she would have been happy. But she's not complete. Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98939 Read Count: 16035
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

oh boy...what will the future hold for these two? Quil has to eventually forgive and let it go...but how long will it take? Thanks for writing this story. I love iT!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well, that makes me feel a bit better, knowing that Rebecca misses her mother that much, that she would search for her...



Author's Response:

Thank you. And just because Quil hadn't heard from his mom because she left , doesn't mean Rebecca hadn't.

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: BPOV EPI

guh?! I did NOT see that one coming!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I can't believe how many people didn't see that coming. LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

I cannot believe it took me THIS long to read this story of yours!! I've read some of your other stories, and love your style of writing, so now I'm kicking myself because I deprived myself of this wonderful piece of writing for so long!!

Anyway, on to the next chapter!! I'm so glad Bella's pregnant. That way, Edward has more than just her to return home to! :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

my goodness, why I never read this, I'll never know, but I'm so very pleased to have found it now! Better late than never! Your stories are always great!! :) Can't wait for the update!!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

fantastic!! Great update! How amazing it must have been to see her husband in the flesh after not seeing him for almost 2 years!! And Cherie's apprehension with him was very realistic, but I'm glad she warmed up to him in the end... can't wait for more!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

awwww adorable! I wish them good luck with the creation of baby #2! :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

what a great story, and a fitting ending!! It's sometimes hard to picture B&E as 40 somethings, but you've done it well here, and the children sound like they would have been lovely individuals. Kudos on this story, and I await an update on Sovereign Fate!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Reservation for Explanations

I'm SOOO happy that you've posted this story here!! I'm absolutely in LOVE with your banner, and I hope you update soon, because this story ROCKS.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

awwww what a great ending! I hope that my husband is half as sweet as Eddie was during the birth...and Daniel is such a classic and perfect name! Good thing you flipped that coin, because now I can't imagine their child being a girl!! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373209
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

What a wonderful chapter. Poor Bella, suffering morning sickness, which was just compounded by her worry that her prince had gone to Tanya...thank you for writing this wonderful story, and I look forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

fantastic, as always...a bit short, but ah well...can't wait for another update :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

what a wonderful Christmas gift! I am absolutely loving this story! Enjoy camping, and we'll see you when you get back  :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

great chapter, as always!

As for names, perhaps Phillip (means lover of horses...haha) Greek origin
Or Peter - more of a Biblical reference...means Rock.

As for girls, Sarah means princess, so it would be fitting, though it's kind of boring...what about Emma? It means Universal, and is of English origin...

"It was introduced to England by Emma of Normandy, who was the wife both of king Ethelred II (and by him the mother of Edward the Confessor) and later of king Canute." :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

oh man...what a chapter. Fantastically written, completely realistic, and completely heart-wrenching!! Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter probably won't be up for a week or two, I'm still trying to fine tune everything.

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

a little short,  but great chapter nonetheless. I'm glad Charlie knew about Carlisle and her sneaking around, and approved. Now, the question is, will he forgive her? And what did Edward and Carlisle discuss...?

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

while I completely trust that you'll give us all the satisfying ending we all believe Bella and Carlisle (and Edward) deserve, I find myself wondering if just one more chapter will give us such an ending...

BUT, like I said, I trust your judgement! You haven't led us astray yet! :) Can't wait for the update!

~Fatima

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

I'm sooooo very sad that this is the final real chapter...But you have done it extremely well, and bringing James back into the picture to give Bella closure was brilliant. She needed to have an unbiased opinion and she got just that from him. I actually liked reading a James that wasn't the bad guy (at least, not in the end!). I cannot wait for the epi!! Make it long!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

fantastically wonderfully exceptionally done!! What a satisfying, unbelievably wonderful ending! I would have loved to read about Carlisle's reaction when Summer came, but you left things off at a great place. I feel like reading the entire thing over again!! And I think I will!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I thought about putting the baby's birth in, but really it just kind of stopped on its own. Maybe I'll do an outtake of the birth

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

omg what a devestating story...you write with such description that I can't wait to see what happens next...update soon!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

this story is so incredibly heart-wrenching, and I get excited when I see that you've updated, but the chapters feel a bit short... Loving the story, though! :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hmmm...James developing feelings for her...hmmm...good (yet short) chapter. :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh no! They were sooo close to reaching her!! I wonder how he managed to forget about that phone...? Anyway, I'm so glad she's standing up to him, and not just zoning out. She needs to remain strong until the Cullens reach her!!



Author's Response:

It wasn't that he forgot about it, he got complacent. He figured that Bella was being well-behaved and he banked on the fact that she didn't want anything to happen to the Cullen's.

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ahhhh!! Italy?!?! Why, James?! URGH!! What a daft prick!! ahhh!!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hmmmm...here I was, thinking that Aro would be another enemy for Bella, but in actuality, he might just be an ally! awesome! She needs something good to happen soon...

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

thank GOD James is gone!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Aro's character always seems to surprise me in fanfiction, so I'm sure your Aro will be surprising, too :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow what an awesome turn! I really really enjoy this story! And your writing just keeps getting better! Keep up the fantastic work!! :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great chapter! Well worth the wait! Please don't hold us in suspense for too long, though! :)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ahhhh!! Oh no! I'm sooo very intrigued!! (as always!) keep it up! :)

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I suspected that he'd only speak to Bella. Regardless of his history with her, she's too good a person to just ignore that he would only talk to her, despite him creeping her out... and AHH about the wedding proposal! OMG! Soooo Edward!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

no, don't do Aro's POV...not necessary. We like hearing things from BPOV & EPOV :)

uh-oh! I was sure she was going to get caught hacking the computer, but I didn't think she'd get caught after! hehe! Great update!

Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

hmmm I think you're right! hehe duh! ;)

Great, great story!! Can't wait for the update!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: tima Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Uh-oh!!! update soon!! What a fantastic story!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.