Reviews by Katherinelizzi
Summary:

Edward is an eighteen year old man, who has been blind since the age of ten. This happened in a car accident in which his father was killed and his mother, Esme and his twin sister, Alice had taken care of him since then. They live in Miami, Florida, where Edward and Alice are both enrolling in college as freshmen.

Edward will be going into music and literature, while Alice will be taking business management and fashion design courses, since fashion has been her interest her whole life. Their mother, Esme has been a widow since the accident, but that is about to change when Dr. Carlisle Cullen starts treating Edward.

Bella has lived with her father, Charlie for four years since her mother remarried a man named Phil. She received a scholarship for a university in Miami, so she decided to move back in with her mother.

What will happen when Bella returns to Florida? Will Bella meet Edward? Will they fall in love?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69656 Read Count: 17795
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Katherinelizzi Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: English Literature

I really want to love this story but I can't you really need to work on your spelling and you need to decide on how to space your chapters not keep jumping from the next day to the third day all in one page. You also need to create links between the actions of the characters I just got so confused on some things and thought where the hell did he get that??

 



Author's Response:

I noticed that too. I think those mistakes are less appearing on the coming chapters...I had a beta for the first few chapters but I don't have one now... I'm sorry,  hope I don't lose you as a reader...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set Post-Eclipse. Canon until that point. HEA. Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just off shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob must put aside their differences to save the girl they both love. But will they be too late? ExB

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251232 Read Count: 47813
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Katherinelizzi Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Surfacing

Good story, but maybe you can move it on a bit faster, it's getting a tad dull to hear the same thing over and over



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Most of this is pre-written but it speeds up soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Katherinelizzi Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Really wish you would stick to the Edward/Bella story not keep switching it's getting quite boring



Author's Response:

Sorry, that's my style. You probably won't like it then. Sorry to have wasted your time this far.