Reviews by aura1975
Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238937
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This connection of blood with Rosalie to break. This is unacceptable and should be Edward merzko.Tolko relationship with Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.

The blood bond with Rose will break off eventually because she doesn't feed on Bella's blood anymore. =)

Thanks again,

Xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Cullen has his problems here yet mnogo.A Angela with her pregnancy, she will thinkthat should get rid of her, (that's the law) then even the Cullens little to help or they may be accused of too posobnichestve.Vot father Ben poraduetsya.Pora to decide their problems, rather than shifting them to others.



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

I agree, I think Angela will not only put herself and her unborn child only in danger if she decides to go through with having the baby, but the Cullens, Bella and Ben will be in danger as well. It's the law, she should stick to it. But you'll see what will happen. =)

I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow the latest.

Thank you

xox

Jells

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Let's dispense with the New Moon, then have enough drama without rasstovaniya.What then about the Volturi, not what is heard. Please do not separates them.



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Bella and Edward will always stay true mates. Always and forever. =)

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with the second draft.

xox

Jells

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hate Angela and Bena.Ben ungrateful weakling, he just creates quarrels, scandals and draki.Ne can control myself and let go pape.A with what money he's going to go to college? Or have Anzh.On think the Cullens are in all pay? by Angela a more problems than Belly.I how he could do so with the other recognized Bell as hissubmissive.



Author's Response:

Hey Aura!

 

Ben will have some apologizing to do for taking Bella as his Submissale.He knows that Edward doesn't approve. No male wants to see his true mate bow down to another. And Bella will make it up to Edward. Angela knows that there's something about her baby. She has a strong feeling that this baby will change things. But you'll see further down the road what that will be. =)

 

Thanks for reading and giving me your thoughts. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

The ceremony will be? Ben abused friendship between Bella and Edward. I would not when no longer have to maintain relations with it. He should come back and perform ll0;m0;m1;k2;l3;.h1;kl5; ungrateful, he is obliged to Edward and Bella all, he and Angela provide shelter, gave protection, food and k4;l6;k6;m1;.h8; is how he thanked them???

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57798
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aura1975 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Long Way Home

I am amazed at how much hatred in every chapter. If he hates Gray, may uvolitsya.Kazhdaya head about how he hates Gray and only wants to fuck Gail.
In the original work of Taylor took care of Gree and even loved him.
This is only hatred and anger.



Author's Response:

I don't agree at all! Have you read the earlier chapters?! Taylor loves Gail - that's why he's so angry, because he wasn't there to protect her.