Reviews by foufymaus
Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

EEP?! 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.

AWK!!! Oh No!!! What about Esme, Please don't let Carlisle... gah... poor Edward... caught between EVERYTHIHG! OMG... *sniffle* 

 

Great update I loved it. Thanks 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh wow... poor Edward, and Carlisle. Having been betrayed by Esme the one woman they both trusted. Poor Bella! the people she thought of as parents essentially used her and her residual feelings she had for Edward. I can't help but hope she takes a few years away from the Cullens figure out what she really wants. During that time i'd like to see how the relationship between the members of the Clan work themselves out. 

 

Thanks for the awesome update. I'm glad Doc. C didn't kick the bucket. 

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

GAH! Please please PLEASE you must do everything in your power to get us a quick update!!! I loved it. thanks 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

ooo... im intrigued. Thanks for the update... now i'll be thinking of vampires doing blood transfusions....hahaha. Can't wait to see what happens. 

 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

AWWK!! OMG. She did, really wow.. really... and *squee* Edwards back!

 

Can't wait for your next update.

 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

LOL I love the interaction between Bella and Carlisle in the present. It's cute! I adore how Alice still loves chocolate chip cookies. Now i have to go re-read the Carlisle/Bella interaction they mentioned about Forks. can't wait for the epilogue! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

*claps*

Yay!! I loved it. Thanks for the awesome read. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh My Word... I totally forgot about Tanya! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Great sofa king great! LOL

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LMAO I love the fact that the Volvo met it's match. That'll let Edward know the BEAST cannot be killed! bwhahahahha, i bet the Airbags totally went off. Seriously they probably just *poof'd* at even a low speed crash.  LOL tee hee. Poor Jasper, serves him right hahaha.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

AWK! Poor Ms. E. Wow... *blinks* poor Crazy Jake. I hope Roy doesn't find them. 

Thanks or the update, cant wait for the next. 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

oh... thanks for the update, i totally wanted to give Edward a knuckle sandwich because he yelled at bella but he's on the up and up and really feels like shit for yelling so that's cool. I'll let him slide for now. 

I like that Charlie is trying to help. That's cool. :D

Thanks for the update can't wait for the next. Until next time.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school

*squee* it's baby makin time! 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise

*squee*!! a baby!!! and a reunion!! woot! 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion

Oh good luck with the job interview! I loved the update!!! It was sweet. Let us know what part of the states, I'm sure the twi-verse could hook ya up with rec's that can help ya with the moving part WHEN, not if you get the job :) 

 

 

Summary:

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Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Happy fucking birthday

LOL i saw the tshirt quote but there's also the Bridget Jones Diary: The Edge of Reason's quote where Colin Firth's character is asleep and tells Bridget 'Don't stare at me' In the beginning of the movie. ;) Great imagery, i love Lauren's little surprise. 

Summary:

We all have something that slightly irks us about the events in the Twilight Saga. For me, it was the fact that Edward's family seemed okay with him abandoning Bella in New Moon. I just couldn't swallow that. Surely, Esme and Carlisle had something to say about Edward's ridiculous decision to leave! So here is my version of what happened at the Cullen household leading up to the day they leave from Esme's POV…

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Winner of the Judge's Pick - Summer  2010's Most Tragic Hour Writing Challenge and a 2011 winner of the Vampie's Awards One Trick Vampie (best one shot)

Part of the Carlisle and Esme:  Through Their Eyes Series

SM owns all of Twilight.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4021 Read Count: 267
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GaH! you totally made me cry... cant wait to see what you come up with. 



Author's Response:

Agh!  I know -- I totally made myself cry too!  I actually had this o/s in my head for months but couldn't get myself to put it on paper because of the emo toll on myself!  Sounds weird, I know.  I just love C&E so much...

Thanks for the review and sorry I couldn't hand you a tissue!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

So far I like but there are a few bits that may warrant your attention. Is Isabella going to school? Perhaps she is starting work? Oh and remember ther is a time zone change of a couple of hours. So six in Seattle is like nine or ten in New York. 

 

Thanks for the read.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

AWK! wow... just ... *blinks* wow. Poor Edward. Thanks for the update! I loved it.

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Oh my word... Eyes down...*shakes fist* NOOOOO.... Cliffies... *sobs* 

 

LOL you're like evil...dom like... holding the readers satisfaction hostage... *sighs* 

*wink* 

I loved the update, REaLLy? it took 5 years... WTF. Please tell me Edward had therapy. hahaha.  Brilliant I loved it! thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

AWK, that hurt... my poor little heart. I love the spitfire that is Bella in this fic. I totally understand that Edward broke her. I love how realisitc it is, how if i were in B's shoes I would do exactly what she's doing. And be highly annoyed by his appearance in her life. I can't wait to see what happens. Please, Please, Please don't go for the instant forgiveness that  Steph did in NM. Make him work for it. *wink* 

 

Thanks for the update. I loved it! 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

aww, poor roughie, I was almost a bit sniffly. but then i thought of jogging edward.. and yea... *fans self* LOL 

 

Thanks for the update I was jonsin for it earlier. :D

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dying

oh goodness you made me cry. *sniffle* 

Thanks? *wipes eyes* for the update. LOL Can't wait for the next one. *wink* 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533075
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

*blink*....*blink blink blink* wow... I know in canon Daddy C is a vamp and is subjected to the rare passions that most vampires don't suppress. But this Carlisle... he's scarier than Vampire Carlisle.

I think it's because he's more 'human' with human problems that unfortunately can push a normal person over the edge. The thing with Esme, Wow. Honestly it was hard to read but keeping it in context i could understand it. I won't condone domestic violence but I can see how he went a little psychotic for a bit. It's almost like he was channeling the scray psycho of killerward but in his own calculated method. That in itself is most terrifying. I loved it.

I followed ya from ffn, my screenname over there is thepinktabby. ;)

Excellent update i loved it! Thanks

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Wow hot and violent. What a delight! Thanks for the update. BTW i followed ya from FFn. :D

I loved the update it was great. Thanks

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*waves* Hi! I've read 24 chapters in one day and so far it's very addictive. :D One little nit pick i caught in Chapter 24 the phrase, "I am there Queen" should be "I am their Queen" because there is a place and their is belonging. You did get it right in the sentence following this one.


 


Thanks for the great story so far. :D I hope to finish it tomorrow :D 

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

er... that last update... somewhat disturbing. Although i did enjoy the story so far an am looking forward to more :D Thanks