Reviews by artri
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
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Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104 Details

Masen is such a cutie...



Author's Response:

He is going to be a really sweet, mischevious little boy!

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Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Poor baby... of course someone will buy it.Your great to be doing this with all that going on around you.

Great chapter...like the way they dealt with Renee.



Author's Response:

HA, BUT WILL they be able to deal with rernee on vacation with them?

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Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116 Flight

Oh God...so do I...he, he



Author's Response:

I know, right!  Where do I sign up?

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Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117 Landed

Don't be lonely, we are all here reading and waiting and enjoying this epic story..keep it coming.



Author's Response:

New chapter propbably on Tuesday!  Thanks for hanging in there!

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126 Venice

Naked in a jacuzzi...yummmm

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Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125 Scenery

Being sick is a pain but...it does give you time to write...more please.



Author's Response:

Working on the chapter called Venice!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Verona

A very sweet time between the three of them...

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139 Complacent

Good to see you back...keep 'em coming.

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Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141 Frantic

Arrrgh!!! a cliffie...you have to update soon, can't just leave us for ages again. Great chapter as usual...loved Charlie and protecting Bella from hurting herself.

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Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145 Explainations

No matter the wait, excellent chapter.



Author's Response:

You are so awesome to have waited on me - thank you!

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Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146 Gatherings

Nice twist, should be fun.



Author's Response:

I really hope you enjoy it!  Thanks for being there!

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Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147 Families

:)

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Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Can't wait to find out what the little tyke has been up to now.

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Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I'm thanking them also, its great to see this story continue.

Come Undone by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner winner    


 


She took a risk that didn't pay off, and it left her with nothing. How do you tell someone to come home when you're the one who sent them away in the first place? How does Bella break the news to her ex-husband that the baby she's carrying is his?


 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12753 Read Count: 3304
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2011
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Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely story.

Summary:

A bride-to-be runs away in a moment of panic. What do the stormy woods hold for her? A collab with celesticbliss, written for the Showers to Flowers contest. E/B

Placed 2nd in the public vote, and won best lemon.

[credit to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner]

I stood up, and slid the ring off my finger. Looking down at the empty space on my hand, then toying around with the petite diamond for a few seconds, I set it down on the table in front of him.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11656 Read Count: 1101
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2011 Updated: 14 Jun 2011
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Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Speak Now

Brilliant!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56337
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
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Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Forever Young

Lovely ending, bit of tension, excitment and HEA, lovely...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed the story - and the ending. :) 

Sandra

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36728
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Arrogant little pric...



Author's Response:

Haha yes, arrogant is correct. But as you've seen (I see you just read chapter 10?) he does have feelings but has learned to keep them hidden. Hopefully Bella can stick by him even when he screws up... thanks for reading & reviewing! Update will be EPOV & should be on Friday!

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hooked...

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great relationship E an R have...

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Not too sure how bad he is...Seth is sweet

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Like the two sides to this chapter, acceptance and rejection, his thoughtlessness and her sweetness and cleverness, he is in so much trouble.

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Clever girl...God help him...

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh! I love the interaction between these two.

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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hilarious, all the texting.

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Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

He has feelings and his behaviour comes out of his defensivness

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Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Love the last line...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533686
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

That was one intense chapter...

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Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

Glad it worked out this way...

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Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

Glad you didn't, it wouldn't have been as effective...stunning chapter.

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Arms Banner

Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
Click to visit & vote!

Swan Awards Banner

 

**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


TLS Nursery Banner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

God you feel for her...beautifully written picture of her dispair.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Doubts

Yea normality returns...somewhat...

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: New Students

Oh! that was the best...Hahahahaha

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Thirst

Nice to have his POV.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enojyed his POV.

Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Alley Cat.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Answers

This is an amazing story...seemingly OOC but a twist and you can see the ducks lineing up. So looking forward to the rest of it.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Movie, Mono, and Myth

And it begins to come together...

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Take Me Home

No innocent Edward here...but the world turns and so do their lives.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Redemption, Acceptance, and Love

Like Carlise's visions, its a great device, also like this version of Alice and Jasper.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Anne Tony

Figured it out about him and her, very well done and so another thread is added to the tapestry.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Hope

Great chapter, very funny about the Prom and sad when they find the gravestone but it moves the story along beautifully.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Where Is Everybody?

Glad to see them something hinkey was going on and I'm glad some order is restored.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Suspicion

Like the way this is going. She is being looked after by something.

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Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Family and Friends

Well this is a mixed up world. I'm looking forward to finding out what is going on.

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Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Sunday

You express the heartbreak well.

 

 

 

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Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue - Rosalie's Bargain

Fantabulous ending...

Summary:

This was my entry to the When Love Was Found contest that happened on ff.net in Novemeber of 09. 

Was just going through my computer and found it, thought I might upload it for someone elses pleasure as I have only uploaded this story on ff.net. 

Hope you like. 

Edward/Bella One-shot Contest story. 

This story may have a possibility of being expanded into a on-going series so add me to author alert. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3087 Read Count: 351
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2011 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lost And Found

Amazing...hope you write more of this one.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. hopefully I will be able to finish up one of my other stories in a month or two and can concertate on maybe making this an ingoing story - but with a different name lol. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35248
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
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Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Freaking out does not even cover it...what the hell THEY NEED EACH OTHER.



Author's Response:

Artri~  Please have faith we will make it all work out I promise.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso.  Well quite a few of you are upset with us.  Or at least upset with the way that we had the characters behave in the last chapter.  Edward and Bella are both currently very emotionally consumed in things.  Bella does not trust herself or her judgment.  Edward cannot trust anyone to not be secretly plotting against him.  There is no way that either of them could go through everything they went through in that house, and jump right back into a new formed love they found in each other.  They BOTH need therapy and they both will be getting it.  We meant it when we said that we are both completely happy ever after kind of girls, and we are grateful for the support from those of you who have stood by us.  There will be a total of 23 chapters posted when this story is able to say it is completed.  There will be jumps in time, because no one wants to read about the misery of having them lay open their souls in therapy.  There have been many questions about the tattoo that Edward had done, and we only ask that you be patient and wait for the rest of the story, certain things are best left to learn in time.  Lots of you wanted to know why we didn’t have Edward just shoot Renee, and where we both agree that she doesn’t deserve any sympathy, we could not bring it to ourselves to make him be the reason she is dead.  Plus closure is important, and Bella needs that closure.  The next chapter is better, but it is still not the end.  As for those of you who said those uplifting things to us, regarding the anonymous reviewer, thank you for your support.  Kasi (&Jess)

P.S. For those of you who are reading the story I am writing with WeeKitty, I want to say an extra special thanks to you as well.  Nikky and I received a review telling us that sometime this next week, our story ‘His Cimmerian View’ will be featured in the vote on The Lemonade Stand.  We are so excited and honored by this, and hope that you all will go and vote for us.  Thanks, Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan's typical teenage life is forever changed, she's forced to rely on a brother she barely knows and the makeshift family that surrounds him.  AH, OOC, ExB

"Darlin’, I have some bad news,” Wes began, and what he said next ripped my world apart.

I knew he was talking, trying to explain what happened, trying to lessen the blow. His lips were moving, but the pain was so loud I couldn’t hear him. My father was dead. Dad, the only family I really had, was gone, and I was…what?

 

*banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17212 Read Count: 7816
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Excellent start...

The Hex House by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

BannerFans.com

Bella had a bad feeling about it. She knew that they shouldn't have gone to the Cullen's haunted house. Little did she know how bad things were going to get...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11043 Read Count: 1054
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent, tension from the begining until the end.

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167539
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: 11 Shattered

God he is such a twit...as if Jazz would encroach on his territory.

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Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro

Nice intro...

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Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: 2 Change My World

Hahahahahaha, the best...cockey little fu...this looks like so much fun.



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Welcome aboard!

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Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself

This is going to be fun...

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: 16 If You Only Knew

Getting there...they both are developing a mature attitude where their relationship is concerned.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is going to hold a lot more changes for them! We're excited to share with you all just as soon as we get the final edits finished.

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Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 44: 44 In Tandem

Love how it is all coming together, still enjoying the adventure and learning amazing amounts about marine  expoditions.



Author's Response:

We are glad you're still enjoying! Thanks for reading & reviewing!

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Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: 39 Trapped In A Rip Tide

:) Glad they sorted that out.



Author's Response:

Edward is definitely working on sorting it out. He wants Bella to know he absolutely knows what he did wrong and that he will do all he can to make sure it never happens again.

Taken by Missile-proof_glass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 Taken Banner

Edward is drawn to the mystery the new girl presents, but not as much as he is drawn to her blood. Unforeseen consequences await his decision to claim her as his prey. Canon but slightly OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11244 Read Count: 884
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Taken

Lovely...

MALEVOLENT by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

He manipulated and tainted everything he touched and I wouldn't allow him to touch me so I ran. "You can run Isabella but you can't hide, do you hear me? You're mine Isabella, you're mine!" He's found me... Warning: extreme Darkward. Read at your own risk.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42123 Read Count: 61612
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2011 Updated: 16 Jun 2015
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Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Lying

He is a nasty little bugger , isn't he...

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
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Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh dear...at least she has help.



Author's Response:

hey artri - thanks for the review honey - update over weekend!

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Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She is getting better at accepting help...

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Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Hate that you left us hanging but...I do understand that these chapters can get completely out of hand if you don't put your foot (or rather pen) down. Enjoying the slow reveal. OK stop reading this go write now...want the next update soon.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
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Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Ghosts or Goats

This just gets better and better...love them all.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for the compliment. I'm writing chapter 22, so stay tuned.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Happy to see you again. ^-^

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

Really enjoying this , the hunt was great fun.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

The Hunt was fun to write as well. Thanks for your review.

Regards, JKazzie

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Making a Move

You did fine, just enough not too much.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing ... and the moral support :)

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Search and Rescue Part 2

Alice deserved what she got, glad to see them all safe.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

I think Alice got what she deserved as well. It's not over for Alice yet!

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

love Esme taking control...think they have all learned a lesson...this is no adventure holiday, its real and deadly life.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

You are absolutely right. Being wrecked on a deserted island is no picnic. Yes, they need to take chances, but they need to do it wisely and with proper planning.

Esme rocks and rolls. She's no wallflower. We'll see more of her in the future.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues

Alice's highs and low, I get it, well played.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 17. More on Alice coming up soon.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Soap and Dope

Liked finding out about Bella and love that she is an intergal part of their survival.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed learning about Bella's history. She brings alot to the table when it comes to survival; they all do.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

You bet...



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reviewing the chapter 27 reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - One down, two to go

Great chapter...though I was really glad for the teaser...would not have slept until the update.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 28 and the chapter 27 teaser.

I hope you got some sleep after.

Chapter 29 will be posted sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Hahahaha...what a nitwit...



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

Let me know what you think.

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Fav story,wait for each update.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35. I'm nearly finished with chapter 36 - it should be posted tonight or tomorrow night.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Don't know the Island is a safe place  for a 57 year old to be going through that, then again it is a story.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. Sorry it took me so long to respond, but I was busy writing chapter 37.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

Sure why not after all it is quite possible in their situation.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for your support for a pregnancy for Esme.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

Tensions showing...will be interested in Alice's story.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. Alice's story will be included in chapter 39 along with the wedding and the honeymoon. I'm writing it now and it should be posted early next week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Played that well didn't ya, wonder if he will get his employee, what ya think!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39.

Aro won't get his employee, not that he really cares. He was more interested in how his employee could enrich him.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Nice to see what is going on and that they have prople on their side.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Missed your updates, glad to see you back was wondering how thwy were getting on. Its a great story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263192
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

Can't say I have not met their kind throughout my life, usually they are just jumped up snobs. Any person can have class and be a 'lady' , with or without money. These bitches are the type that either had no money and think having it means they are better then everyone else or come from money (that they never worked for) and think this somehow entitles them to behave this way. Edward is right Siobhan behaviour was appaling and Al and Ro were not much better.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Well we knew that you all would have some sharp feelings about the behavior of Alice, Rose, and Siobhan.  We were excited to see that a few of you mentioned the seemingly difference in Esme and her attitude.   Have faith in Jasper and Emmett, they will be having words with their wives.  As for Siobhan, I think she has worn out her welcome around the table completely.  So what did you all think of Charlotte?  She will be important in the coming story.  A lot of you are guessing that the witch in the next chapter will be Sue Swan, but I assure you that it is not her.  There is a lot of super exciting chapters coming soon.  We want to tell you all just how much you reading and reviewing our story means to us.  This is the first story for either of us, that is getting this kind of attention.  It is completely amazing to us that we are averaging over 100 reviews per chapter.  We want to be very clear in saying that each and every review you have left for us mean so very much to us.  Thank you for taking time to not only read our story, but to also leave us your thoughts.   Thanks, Nikky (&Kasi)

Teaser for Chapter 14: Subject to changes, during Beta Process.

She looks perplexed. “Edward, aren’t you expected to be at the college; I mean, I thought you have classes today?”

I chuckle.  “Yes I do, but I got this morning off.  I am using some of my vacation time.  I would like to take you to see Charlotte today.  She is the one that sells the girl stuff; remember I told you I would take you to see her?  She was sitting on my right at the ball.”  Bella nods her head at my explanation, but I see she is biting her lip again.  I know she is worried, so I do my best to reassure her.  “I will be there with you. I am not going to leave you, I promise.”  Bella nods again as we begin walking to the bus stop.  We take the bus and arrive at Charlotte’s store a little after half past nine.  Charlotte had texted me earlier and asked that we enter through the back entrance.  She was going to leave it open for us, as she had the front locked up so that no unexpected customers arrived.  I hold onto Bella’s hand as we walk thought the door. 

Charlotte sees us as soon as we enter; she smiles and makes her way toward us.  “Edward, Isabella; come on in.  I already have a bunch of stuff laid out for you.  I have done this for a few years, so I am pretty good at guessing sizes.”  I rub Bella’s hand and smile at Charlotte’s obvious excitement.  “Isabella, I am so sorry, sometimes my mouth runs away with me.  It’s very nice to meet you.  My name is Charlotte, but you can call me Chas; all my friends do.”  Charlotte gives Bella a big smile, but keeps her distance from Bella for now.

“It is nice to meet you. I am Isabella, but you can call me Bella.”  I squeeze Bella’s hand, trying hard not to jump for joy.  This is the first time that she has openly asked someone, apart from me, to call her Bella. 

Charlotte smiles at her.  “Well, I was thinking that this stuff would be perfect for you.”  I look at the collection of bras and panties that Charlotte has picked out.  They are mostly plain white ones.  There are some with lace, but none them are overly sexy like the stuff that was in Alice’s bag.  I am both relieved and somewhat disappointed about that.  “Come with me, Bella, so I can take your measurements to ensure that we will have the correct size.” 

Bella looks at me and I nod my head at her.  “Bella…” I clasp her face between my hands.  “Baby, I’ll be right here. I will not leave you.” Bella whispers a low thank you, and strokes my hand before giving it a squeeze at the end.  I watch as she walks away with Charlotte.  

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly

Aro is very astuite and can read  Edward so well. Alice is appalling and will be trouble for Bella. As for Chas, she is lovely.



Author's Response:

Many of you are wondering what he deal is with Edward and the talk of his lost son.  In chapter 5 there was a dream sequence that told a lot of what happened that fateful day when Edward found out Tanya was using him, to get his money.  She was not pregnant like she had told him, the problem is the night before they had unprotected sex, and she actually did give birth to his child.  Esme found out about it, but hid it from Edward trying to protect him.  Tanya and Edward junior later died in a fire.  There will be more to come on that, but it seems to be getting a lot of questions.  Now for Alice...She is clearly a not nice person in this fic, and to some she will partially redeem herself, but for some there is no redemption, her words and actions are far worse than any you have seen from Edward.  Siobhan is for the majority out of the picture, so she is of no major worry.  Uncle Harry is a very mean man, and there will be more to come about him.  We love our Aro he is one of the kindest and most loving men and we are proud to have written an Aro who is not only out of character, but also so very loveable.   Bella has come to trust Edward, and it shows.  A lot of you keep asking if she will sleep in the step-moms room, or if Edward will talk her into it...the answer to that is no.  The next few chapters have so much going on in them, I am sure that you will all have favorite parts.  We love hearing what your thoughts are so keep asking questions and we will answer what we can without ruining the plot. 

Thanks for Reading and Reviewing
Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 15 teaser...Subject to changes during BETA process...

It’s Saturday, and we are into the countdown to Thanksgiving.   Alice has called me numerous times, and left well over a hundred text messages and voice mails.  I have dealt with each and every one of them the same way. Without reading or listen to them, I just hit delete.

Esme found out during one of my talks with Carlisle about the stunt Alice pulled.  At first, I thought she would take Alice’s side, but was stunned when I found her on the phone giving Alice a piece of her mind.  Jasper has also said that he and Alice are talking, but not back to normal yet.  Jasper is really pissed at her.

Yesterday, Esme called me, and to my surprise, she asked me if I would still come over for Thanksgiving dinner.  She told me that she would understand if I did not want to come.  She said it was my choice, and she would still make my dinner if I wanted and bring it over to my home or Midnight Sun.  Not once did she try and force my hand.  After much thought, I said that I will be there.  I do enjoy spending time with the guys, even more so in the last few weeks.  I know they all were hoping for me to come, and I know I owe them a lot. I told them that I will join them and stay, as long as Alice and Rose keep their mouths shut. Esme, Carlisle, Emmett, and Jasper, have promised to keep them under control.

Things with Bella are still going really well. Too well, in fact.  She…fuck! Every time I see her, I want to hold her close.  It’s no longer just me having dirty thoughts about her, a lot of dirty thoughts about her, which I still am, but I also want to hug her, lie with her, make love to her, and that is really fucking scary for me, for lots of reasons.  I am worried, because I wonder if she could even cope in that type of a relationship. I have been a pussy about it, because I haven’t had the guts to ask Peter or Jasper what they think.  I know it’s because I am afraid they may say she couldn’t handle it, or I am not good enough for her.  I already know that I am not, but one can always hope for his own redemption.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: First Sight

Nice device...lets see where he goes with the info.



Author's Response:

HI, we are sending out this reply to everyone, and answering any questions above and beyond what this does not cover along with it.  First in the story right now Bella is 18 years old and will be turning 19 in September.  The twins are just turned 7.  Bella’s mother died when she was very young.  Charlie, Bella’s father is dead, and Sue, Bella’s step mom is the one who left Bella with the twins when Bella was age 13.  We don’t want to give away anything else about Bella at this time, it would ruin parts of the upcoming storyline if you learned it too fast.   As for Edward, he is our dark and troubled man with a horrid view on all women.  He and his story and back ground are coming out, over a few chapters, there is a lot to learn.  I have to tell you that while working on chapter 5 of this story I myself was so mad at Edward, I wanted to rip off his balls and feed them to him.  Ultimately Both of us are HAPPY EVER AFTER KIND OF WRITERS.  We are both extremely proud of this story and the reviews, readers, and following it is getting.  We have had a few people ask if we minded if they pimped us out and the answer is of course, please do.  It is an honor to have other authors think our story is worthy of reading, reviewing, and recommending too.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. 

Kasi (&Nikky)


Here is the teaser for chapter 4, of course it is subject to change during the BETA process.


Today is Friday; I know that I have about twenty minutes or so before Isabella comes out.  I head over to the café that is still open to get a coffee, it’s thirsty work stalking someone.  After getting flirted with by the waitress, I walk back to my car with my cardboard cup of coffee.  I see that the security guard is locking up.  Checking my watch, I see that Isabella has about five more minutes before she will be done for the night.  I run over to him, worried that he is accidently locking her into the building.

“I think someone is still in there,” I tell him as I approach him. 

He looks at me strangely.  “Hey professor Masen, are you feeling better?”  The guard asks as he continues to lock the doors.

“I am feeling much better, but I really think that one of the cleaning girls is still in there.  Did you check, I never saw her leave?”

“I have checked all of the rooms, and corridors.  There is nobody in the building Professor.  The last cleaner has just left, and she always leaves last.”

I close my eyes, and run my fingers through my hair.  “Okay, do you mean the small girl with really long brown hair?”

He nods his head and points off the direction she always walks, nodding his head as he walks away.  I’m sure he thinks I have lost my mind.

I move quickly over to my car, and start to drive down the road that she walks.  I come up to the park she cuts through, and don’t see her anywhere.  I park and get out of the car, slamming my door shut as I head down the trail she takes.  I hope I can catch up with her.  I have really lost it, fuck I don’t know what is going on with me right now.  This whole stalking thing is really not been good for me, fuck in a strange way I will miss this when I go back to work on Monday.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: New Job

Its heartbreaking, so selfsacrificing, got to love her...I think he does.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.

 

We are both extremely proud and excited at the response this story continues to garner.  Thank you for being one of those who leave us some love.  To heed off a bunch of extra questions, we want to be clear that all three of them (Bella, Seth, and Leah) have birth certificates, social security cards, and were born in hospitals. Bella lived with her birth mother for a while (more will come about this soon), then she went to live with her father and step mom (cough.. MONSTER).  Bella does not know anything about her actual information; she has been kept ignorant for MANY reasons.  Bella does however have all the needed info for the kids, a part of that is because of Zafrina and Aro assisting her in getting the needed paperwork found.  As for Edward, you will continue to see the changes she causes in him, and at least they are for the better.  Thanks for the story love and we look forward to hearing from you again!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 8… Subject to changes during BETA process… of course.

I shake my head.  “We are fine Isabella, you can return to what you were doing.” She gives me a nod, turns, and walks away.

“So that the famous Isabella then?” I can’t tell by his face what he is thinking.

“Yeah, that is her, so first thoughts?”

He lets out a sigh and rubs his head. “She’s what, twenty-four?”

I nod my head.  “Well, in three weeks she will be.”

He walks with me towards my kitchen. “Well, she sure is small and not just in height.  She looks like she has missed some essential nutrients over the years.  She’s very pale and the dark coloring under her eyes would lead me to believe that she doesn’t sleep much and she looks to be extremely tired.  Her pupils show that she needs more Calcium, and Iron. She also looks to you for permission to call me Jazz.  She seems to be unsure of what she is, and isn’t allowed to do.” He stops talking while pouring himself a drink. I pull at my hair having not learned anything new about her.

I make us lunch as we continue to chat some more, but not about the topic I want to discuss, Isabella.  I make some extra food for her on the off chance that she hasn’t eaten anything yet.  After what I saw at the mall and what Jazz just confirmed, I assume she more than likely has skipped lunch. I decide to make up some sandwiches to go with the soup I am making.  I can’t decide on what kind to make, so I make four different kinds.  Everything is done, and I carry the covered pot of soup to the table. 

“Isa. . . Ouch, what the fuck, Jazz?” I ask rubbing my head where Jasper just slapped me.

“She is not your pet, Edward.”

I glare at him.  “Jasper, I know that, I was just. . .”

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

Perfect chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View and being such a wonderful part of our success in writing this story.  We both put a lot of time into this story and we are very grateful to have the following that we have gathered.  Because of the upheaval going on in Fan Fiction we are both concerned that HCV will or could fall victim to the haters and be removed – should this happen be assured that this story can be found on TWCS under the same name and it updates on the same schedule.   We are also going to be posting a blogspot for this story and all of our stories, therefore we will always be able to be found.  So rest assured that HCV will go on, no matter what.  A lot of you are asking about Sue and when her return will come.  We have made no secret that she will make an appearance, but before she does there are a few other things that will happen.  At this point her return will not be for a few chapters yet.  There are a lot of comments about Rose and there isn’t much about her in the next chapter, but after that there will be some things coming up.  As we have said other times there are approximately 30-35 chapters within this story, and there will be around 6-8 Out-Takes posting...The Out-Takes will post under the name ‘Enduring His Cimmerian View’.  There were not a lot of questions, and we have covered most of the comments concerns or worries, but if you have more questions you can always find us on Facebook under TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  There are always people leaving comments and their theories there, come join the conversations.  Kasi &(Nikky)

 

Chapter 22 Teaser...subject to changes during BETA process.

We spent most of our day watching Christmas movies, and for supper we had a huge spread of really fattening foods.  I had Eric prepare for me several wonderful dishes.  I had wanted something easy for today - something that wouldn’t take away from our family day.  The dishes he made only needed to be warmed up before serving.  The kids loved it, but then again, we had some great things to choose from.  Bella really loved the extra cheesy enchiladas and the lobster bisque.  There were so many things to choose from that we had enough leftovers to last us for the next few days.  After we ate, we cleaned up the kitchen together. 

We all settled down in the living room after the clean-up was done for our new tradition.  After we were all settled in, I passed out a few gifts to each person in the room.  “Okay, here are a few gifts that you get to open before we go to mass tonight.”  I made sure to pass out the gift bags that held our new matching clothing that Esme had chosen for our first Christmas mass together.  I had asked Esme to help, and she did, but then refused to let me pay her back for the gifts.  Esme said that the new outfits were from her, and that she was happy that I and my new family were going to attend services together.  

“Edward, we can wait and open these gifts tomorrow, can’t we?”  Bella asks.

“No, Baby; these gifts are for tonight for our church service together.  This is our first Christmas mass we get to spend together and these gifts will help make it more special.  They are from Esme, who wanted to help make this special.  There are gift bags for each of us.  Okay everyone, open them up and let’s see what we have.”

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

Wonderful, wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete.  We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short.  When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both.  Nikky has written hers and I have written mine.  Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on.  I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS.  We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten.  THANK YOU!  Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it.  Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

It just seems to get better and better.



Author's Response:

Artri~ 
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.
This story is not always easy to write, just as parts are not easy to read.  Edward does not know yet of course, but it is very true Isabella cannot read nor write.  She has never attended school.  Bella was never allowed to be a child, or experience a normal childhood, in any way, shape, or form.  Bella has nothing more than a glorified slave all of her life since her birth mother passed away.  We don’t want to give away more of her story than that, but feel free to keep asking your questions and we will continue to answer what we can.  Edward does have a long road yet to travel, and part of that is to get him-self healed enough so that he can love someone and trust someone.  Edward’s view is very tainted and with great reason, there is much more to learn about him.  He will continue to improve, but he will have his moments.  Keep in mind as of right now, Isabella has not lied to him, but she has withheld very important information.  She doesn’t correct him on her age, because she fears his reaction. 
Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 7…Subject to change during BETA process as always.

I have written out everything, when I look at my watch seeing that it’s ten after ten.  I know that being on time is something she is normally good at.  I rub my face, fuck maybe she changed her mind about the job, or she just lied to me just like every other fucking woman I’ve ever known.

Or maybe you scared her, and she said yes to the job thinking that you wouldn’t let her leave the room unless she agreed.

Knock. Knock.

Thank god, she is here finally.  “Come in Isabella,” I say to the closed door.  The door opens, but it’s Taylor who is standing there. 

I frown at him.  “Hello, I see you beat me here,” he says smiling at me.  I wave at him to come in, but I am still frowning.  “I take it I am not who you’re waiting for?”

I shake my head.  “I was expecting someone, but I don’t think she is coming.”  I sigh, and throw my pen on the desk.

“Small pale girl, brown hair, looks a little lost?” I look at him, and nod my head.  “I think she is standing outside,” he says motioning his thumb toward the door.  I move toward the door, and Taylor stops me.  “Here, take this; it’s really coming down out there.”  He offers me his umbrella and chuckles as I take it and head out of the office.

I head to the front, and see Isabella standing outside in front of the window in the rain.  I open the door.  “Isabella,” I call to her standing in the door way, she turns and looks at me. I wave at her to come in.  “How long have you been standing outside, and why didn’t you come in the restaurant when you got here?”

She walks up to me, clearly worrying I am mad by the look on her face.  “I thought that…you said to meet you outside.  Didn’t you, never mind, I am so sorry…sorry.”

Looking at her, I see that she’s drenched to the skin.  The jacket she is wearing is paper thin, and clearly very old and well used.  I know that she been outside a long time.  I close my eyes, pinching the bridge of my nose.  “I am sorry I meant for you to come in, if I was not out here.”  She walks through the door; I know that she needs to get out of her wet clothes.

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

I just want to get my hands on Sue and really smack her more then once...I hope she gets hers.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Edward’s view is improving, and he is learning quickly that he is not able to function to his fullest at Aro’s club.  Aro’s club and Aro and some of his girls will remain a vital part of this story.  Having Edward putting on one of Bella’s newly gifted bras was such a fun thing to write about, we hope you all found it just as amusing as we did.  This story has a long way to go.  We have been asked when things will pick up between Bella and Edward.  Well we promise they will be together, but Edward is just learning to change and before he could give himself to her fully, he has to let go of a few things from the past.  There are a few more bricks that need to come down off that wall he has built.  As for Bella, her pure innocence alone is a good reason for things between them to simmer slowly into a boil.  I will tell you this, there first kiss is written already...and Lordy I needed some ice water after that one.  WOOOWHOO!  I know the weekly updates, seem like forever, but if we get things wrapped up and have the story done on our side then we will post faster.  Right now Nikky is working on 25 and I am working on 24 and we know that there will be at least 30-35 chapters.  Thanks again for the story love.  This story is dedicated to those of you who care enough to review!  With our love, and until next week.   Kasi and (Nikky)

Chapter 13 teaser...subject to changes during beta process.

I hear the beep of a horn, and know that the car is here. I grab my overcoat, and I head out for my painful evening.

“Good evening, everyone,” I say as I close the limo door.

“Hello Edward, I see you still haven’t tied your bowtie, Siobhan can tie it for you if you’d like; she’s really good at them.”

I turn to face Alice, trying not to scream at her. “No Alice, I can manage myself, thank you very much. I will tie it right before we arrive at the Autumn Ball.” I feel eyes on me, and my head turn’s to see who else is in the limo. There sits Siobhan, in a…dress? Fuck, it leaves nothing to the imagination, the dress… if that is what you call it. It’s more like a sheer piece in the front, glued to her skin. There doesn’t appear to be any cloth on the sides of her entire body at all. She cannot be possibly wearing anything under the dress. I can see from her armpit to the sole of her foot in the clear stiletto shoes she is wearing, there is nothing but skin. She looks like she should be working for Aro, what a trashy high class whore!  I am sure she thinks it’s attractive, and I am sure everyone will know she is going commando. I mean I like women to go commando, but I also like to be the only one that knows. If I wanted my date to not wear panties, I wouldn’t want every other person in the general vicinity to know too. I don’t want to share! Thank God she isn’t my date! There is another reason on the list of why I won’t date her, or any other women.

“Wow, Edward, you look really good,” Siobhan smirks at me before crossing her legs. She lets her dress fall to the side, I am sure if I was looking I would have seen her pussy. The way she was right now I, or anyone for that matter, could finger fuck her here and now for all to see. I turn my head in disgust at her behavior.

“Edward, are you going to tell us how we all look?” I look back at Alice, with a broad smile on my face. “Sorry, forgive my rudeness. Alice, Rose, Esme, you all look very beautiful.” I give them my best smile that almost says, see I can do nice.

“Siobhan, your dress is very…nice?” I make my statement sound like a question because I real don’t know what she has on. Siobhan laughs and goes to touch my arm, and I shrug away from her.  I see she’s about to speak, so I jumped in first. “And of course Charlotte, you look beautiful as always. Peter is an extremely lucky guy, and if he does not mind me stealing you for a few minutes tonight, I would like to ask you something?”

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background

It really moves the story along in the background department. Do either any of them realise her real age? I expect this to be a slow burner and to take time to get the whole story...not too much hopefully.



Author's Response:

Thank you once again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  As you can see Edward’s view is changing and for the most part it is better.  His time at Aro’s will take a drastic downward spiral soon, once he realizes that without thinking of Bella he is rendered unable to perform.  He will struggle with this mentally, and as you will see from the below teaser he will finally seek some assistance.  A lot of you are worried over his reaction to her age, and how soon that will all unfold.  I don’t want to spoil it for anyone, but I will say that you will all want to be sure to read chapters 17 and 18 rather closely.  Jess2002 who has been on board for discussions since the beginning ideas of this story said to tell you that in her opinion chapter 11, will be over-shadowed by chapters 12, 13, and 14.  There are some really great chapters coming up here and according to what I am hearing from the pre-readers they will make the story even better.  There are also a lot of questions coming in about Charlie and Sue Swan.  First Charlie Swan will most certainly not be making a show in this story, he is dead.  His death is what sent Sue into premature labor.   Second, eventually even if just for court, Sue Swan will make an appearance.  There are a lot of people in this story that will bring drama to the surface, and there is a lot of story yet to come.  Thank you for your continued support in us and our story.  We hope to hear more from you again soon.  We will be right around 30 to 35 chapters when complete.  No one but Bella and of course the MIA Sue Swan know her correct age of 19.  Things will pick up fairly quickly.  See you next Thursday. 
Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 12 teaser…subject to changes during Beta Process.

Jasper sets the bag he carried down, and lets out another sigh. “Edward, as your friend I am here if you need to talk. As a psychologist, I strongly recommend that you talk to someone soon. Edward, I do mean soon, because you’re not helping anyone by getting so worked up. What just happened is a form of an anxiety attack. Your fear almost caused you to have another panic attack. They are not just going to go away. You need to talk to someone to help deal with it.”

I look at him, then close my eyes and pinch the bridge of my nose. “You can’t help her if you stay on this path, Edward.  She needs to talk to someone too. Just think of how you would feel if she doesn’t talk to someone. What if it was her who keeps putting it off, and you have to watch her slowly lose it and get closer and closer to the edge.”

I nod my head at him, fuck I would drag her to see someone if I have too. “Make me an appointment, for at night not during the day. Just let me know when it is, I will be there.”

Jasper nods his head at me. “Have a good night, Edward.”  My head rests against the door after Jasper leaves. I feel the restriction in my chest, the sharp pain, shortness of my breaths and my heart is pounding. What is fucking wrong with me, I can’t believe I get myself so worked up about Bella, but fuck I am so fucking glad that was not why he was here. It doesn’t mean that she is okay. She could be lying hurt in the fucking park all beaten and broken. Well, more broken than what she is. Fuck, don’t think like that.  Zafrina would have called me by now. Bella is fine. She is at home in bed. I’ll get to see her tomorrow; when I drop off the bags of clothes. If she is all right, that is. She didn’t go to the police the last time. Maybe they went after her again, knowing she is an easy target. God only knows if it has happened before. Just because she went home, doesn’t mean that she’s okay. Anything could have happened. Fuck, it is after midnight, it’s not like I can go over there and knock on the door. I just want to check on her, but if I go over there she will think I am nuts. 

I pace my floor pulling at my hair. I should call her. I would know by the sound of her voice if she okay or not. Fuck, I can’t call her at this time of night. Why in the fuck can’t she just take the fucking bus, instead of walk? You know what, just fucking call her. Fuck!

I pick up my phone and dial her number. Just after four rings someone picks up.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Confessions

Jasper has to report what happened and save her and the kids from Sue. Bella needs to be educated and now they know the true story they know how much they need to help her. Once Edward stopped fighting himself they can now move on. Key chapter, great.



Author's Response:

WOW...the responses are so awesome that Nikky and I are both giddy.  There haven’t been many questions asked in the first 60 reviews, so I am going to answer a few non questions I noticed.  Bella was never kidnapped by Sue and Charlie.  Charlie Swan is Bella’s biological father, and Bella was sent to live with him after her mother died of cancer.  Aro honestly never knew of Bella’s real age, he had suspicions that she was not raised correctly and was acting younger than the 18 he thought her to be, because of the inept social skills.  Zafrina did not know either, but again had those same social skill thoughts that her son had.  We in no way were bashing DCFS or DHS or any other social workers, by saying that the kids would be taken by the state.  If anyone had turned Sue in for abandoning the kids the almost 6 years ago now she has been gone, the kids would have become wards of the state, because at 13 no state official or judge would have deemed Bella capable of fully caring for 2 yr old twins alone.  Just want to say that we both believe that it takes a special kind of person to be a social worker, and we both give those of you who are in the field of social work a round of applause because the things you have to see and or deal with can’t always be fun.  I have to say that the wonderful response to this story is more than either Nikky or myself could have hoped for, and we owe that all to you the readers.  THANK YOU!  If there is any questions or discussions you would like to have or read about past discussions, feel free to join us at TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction on Facebook.  Kasi (& Nikky)

Teaser for Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things.  Subjected to changes during beta process.

I dropped Bella of at Seth and Leah’s school. Before leaving her, I told her I would pick her up from the college when she got off.  It was so fucking hard to leave her; I just wanted to stay with her forever.  I knew the minute she was away from me, my old doubts would come back.  I knew that I had to talk with Jasper about her upbringing.  It’s that thought that makes me leave, even though I want to wait with her, take them home and stay with them. I am really at a loss for what I should do.  What can I do?  What do I do?  How do I help her?  How can someone so pure and good, come from people so evil?  The questions are killing me, but I know one thing for certain: if that bitch doesn’t stay the fuck away on her own, I will make her.  That sorry excuse of a parent will never get her hands on my Bella, Seth, or Leah again.  I will protect them with my very last breath, and deplete every cent I have, if need be.

I sit at my piano and just start playing.  I let the music guide me, keeping Bella in my thoughts as a play.  I let out all the feelings I have been denying myself. I haven’t been at it long before I find myself playing ‘Angel Eyes’ by The Jeff Healey Band, and I begin to sing along with my playing.

Girl, you're looking, fine tonight,

and every guy has got you in his sights.

What you're doing, with a clown like me,

is surely one of life's little, mysteries

 

So tonight I'll ask the stars above,

"How did I ever win your love?"

What did I do?

What did I say,

to turn your angel eyes my way?

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Warning Signs

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  If things keep goign this way the update will be next Thursday.

Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise

Sublime, just the right amount of levity to offset the tension and sadness of a clearly abused childhood and the slow bringing out of feelings from Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.

We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club.  I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight.  Edwards’s girls at Aro’s:  Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play.  Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old.  Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained.  Maria:  5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls.  Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts.  More relaxed and sensual.  Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits.  He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex.  Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella.  Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most.  He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex.  Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act.  I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore.  He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself.  I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views.  I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.

Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.

“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”

I shake my head as we keep walking.  “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check.  I am accompanying you to yours.”  We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.

“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me.  I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown.  There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.

We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back.  I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me.  I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out.  She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does.  I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.

“Will you stay with me, the whole time?”  She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor. 

Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin.  I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin.  These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it.  I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want.  This is your choice Isabella.  I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision.  If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will.  If you want me to leave, then I will.  This is all about you, and what you want.” 

She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand.  “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In

Personal...she is such a beautiful innocent...he's a gonner...loved Aro's response (God help who ever did it) loved this update, great story.



Author's Response:

Wow what else can Nikky or I say...once again the overwhelming response and the amount of story love we are receiving from so many people just makes us both feel so loved.  I know that this story may have a few minor flaws, but we have tried all along to keep them to a minimum.  So essentially thank you as always for reading and reviewing our story it makes us all giggly and excited to see all the reviews we are getting. 
We asked you who you thought it might be that broke into Bella and the twins apartment, and I must say we were a little surprised that a lot of you have it figured out.  With a wide range of evil or rude nasty characters, many of you said it was Uncle Harry...and you are right.  There will not be resolution for a bit when it comes to Uncle Harry, so if you want to figure out what he was looking for all I can suggest is watch for clues.  There are some very important and much asked for things coming soon. 
We have been asked many times for Edward to stop using Aro’s girls for his pleasure.  And where we understand why, we also knew it was very unrealistic for a man with so much anxiety, pressure, cynicism and tainted view to jump into a healthy relationship and give up the release and hidden pleasure he has surrounded himself in to get by for the past five plus years.  He has slowly been weaning himself from the place, and very soon he will open up and tell Bella why he went there.  We have been asked when you all get to know a lot more about Edward...well very soon actually, and by that I mean the next few chapters are chuck full of things from the past. 
We have been asked if Renee will come back...(A LOT ACTUALLY)...Renee was Bella’s biological mother, who died when Bella was only three years old.  At the age of three after her mother died, custody of Bella was given to Charlie Swan who was her biological father.  Charlie was married to Sue Swan, who is the mom she talks about leaving all the time.  Sue Swan is the person who left Bella to care for the twins.  Since this story is not alternate universe, neither, Charlie or Renee will be making any grand entrance, unless via a dream.  But don’t get too happy, because Sue Swan is still out there somewhere, and she has a few things to say.
We have been asked a lot if Alice, Rose, Siobhan, and Esme will make any redemption...Esme already has begun her turn around, and we think she is doing well.  Siobhan, well she wore out her welcome quite completely at the ball, at this point there is not a real plan to drag her back into the storyline.  Alice...well this is a hard one for me.  I actually normally always LOVE Alice, but this Alice is a tough nut to crack.  She is not going to bring in the roses and become a fan favorite anytime soon, but you will notice some changes.  As for Rose, well...I just can’t wait to hear your opinions of her...and I am sure you’ll have plenty next week.
Updating...we had planned all along to only update every other week on Thursdays.  However since posting the first chapter we have been on an every week posting schedule...and we have NO INTENTION of changing that at this time.  Nikky and I have a comfortable cushion, and the next chapter to post is with the beta now.  I got this weeks chapter back from the beta on Tuesday afternoon, so realistically we are posting around when they are ready.  Nikky is working on her part of chapter 26 right now, and I am working on 24 so we are not looking at any lapses in time.  We are both so excited you are choosing to come down this road with us. 
Where the next chapter has some major info and angst, we promise that chapter seventeen will make up for it.  Thanks again for always being so supportive and showing the story love HCV deserves.

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 16 Teaser...subjected to changes during the BETA process...

Its Thanksgiving today, and I am on my way to pick up Bella and the kids.  Bella and I decided that, after dinner with my family, they would all stay the night at my house tonight.  I will run them home to get their things for the camping trip in the morning, and see them off to camp.  Bella will make sure that Jake has enough food, and then she is coming to spend the weekend with me.  I’m looking forward to this weekend, but I am worried about my growing feelings for her. I knock on the door before using my key to get in.  Bella gave me a spare key so I could let myself in. The new door has a double lock on it, and is reinforced with steel; no one is breaking this one down.

I walk in, seeing Leah in a black, knee-length dress with a cream ribbon around the waist, and black shoes.  Seth is wearing a pair of black pants and a cream colored button down shirt, with a black tie and shoes.

“Wow, look at you Leah! You’re very beautiful, and Seth, you look so handsome.” They both smile at me and look up as Bella walks in. She is in a cream colored dress, with a black ribbon around the waist. The dress goes to just above her knees; she looks fucking beautiful in it - so fucking beautiful.

“Wow, Bella! You look sensational...really beautiful.  Are we all ready to go?” I look her up and down, I am so glad she allowed me to buy us all new outfits for today. 

I got around her apprehension by telling her that I wanted to go to church with them this Sunday night.  We are attending the evening service after Seth and Leah return from camp.  Since I was buying something for myself, I wanted to get them something, as well.  As usual, getting Bella to let me buy Seth and Leah something, was easy, but her...not so much.  I was so fucking glad Seth and Leah helped me. I have on black pants and black shirt with a cream colored tie.  I push my fucking guilty feelings down and smile at the three of them.

“Yes, we’re all ready.” Bella picks up their bags, and I quickly take them from her.

“Let’s go,” I say as I usher us all out the door together.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day

Gulp...what can be said, a horrible situation to have found himself in.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Nikky and I are both just so blown away by the response our story is garnering.  Thanks to the many recommends and pimping we have been getting.  Thanks for the response of our fans that make and send us banners and poems and mostly the kind words of love that give us the drive to keep HCV going strong. 
There have been a lot of you all asking for the Bella point of view, and you are going to get it.  The next chapter will have a lot of things going on and we hope you love it.  The age reveal will be in chapter 17, along with a first kiss, the kids going off to camp, Edward and Bella together and meeting up with Sally...those are a few things you have to look forward to.  We started a group on Facebook, you’re all invited to join.  TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. 
Now to the nitty gritty... 
We both wondered how many of you would ask if Edward’s son was really dead or not, and if Tanya was dead or not.  We want to be clear that Tanya Denali and the child she gave birth to are in fact deceased; they died in the fire.  
We want to point out that Edward is not a Dom.  He role-played and dabbled with the girls at the club, because it was his way of maintaining full control.   He has no desire to tie Bella up and spank her, he is not looking at her as his next submissive or slave.  Just want to be perfectly clear, he is not into the BDSM lifestyle, he is just a man who was seating his needs at a club the only way he saw fit to do so and protect his heart and soul. 

Thank you again for all of the story love and wonderful things you say.  You really have no idea what your words and kindness mean to us.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 17 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
Right now, we’re back at Bella’s apartment getting Seth and Leah’s stuff ready for their trip.

“Okay, Seth, you have everything from your list in your bag, right?”  I watch as he nods his head, and chuckle to myself since Bella had just checked over the list and the bag with him herself.  “Leah, do you have everything from your list in your bag, too?”

“Yes, Bella. Edward and I just went through the list twice.”  I turn my head to hide my chuckle. 

“Okay. Well, we have to be at the church in forty minutes, and since Edward is taking us, we have time to double check.”

“Baby, Leah and Seth have everything they need. How about you go pack your bag now, and feed Jake?  I will help Leah and Seth take their backpacks down to the car.”

“Okay, I will hurry,” she says, leaving to go to her box.

I can tell that Bella is trying to put on a strong front for them, but I know this is killing her to let them go on this trip. It will be good for them, though, and good for her, too.  I have planned out this weekend so that she gets a chance to be a twenty-four year old for a change.  After we have everything packed and ready, we head out.

I drive them to the church, seeing a bus and a bunch of children.  I also see Sally there, and I frown as I pull into a parking space.  “Sally works in the Sunday school. She’s the main reason they are going.  She is taking her cell with her, and said that I could call her anytime.  She is also going to have them call me before bed, and when they get up in the morning.  You can stay here if you want. You don’t need to come with me. I won’t tell her who you are.” I turn to look at her, and smirk because she answered my internal question.

I shake my head.  “No, I am fine, Baby. Thank you.” 

The night of the break in, I explained to Bella that I went by a different name at Aro’s, and the girls I was with, had never seen my face because they were blindfolded.  I was very glad that she just nodded her head, and didn’t ask any other questions.  I hate the fact that I’ve been with them.  I don’t want my sins to show in her eyes when I look at her each time I remember that she saw me there.  When the time comes, and she finds out what I did and what happens there with me and the girls, I hope and pray to God that I don’t lose her friendship.

We get out of the car and start walking over. As we do, Sally waves, making her way over to us.  Her eyes hit me for only a few seconds before she looks back at Bella.

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes

Really love the story, look forward to every update and enjoyed the development of all the  characters so far. Keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter.  When you get through the chapters posted here is the next teaser, enjoy!

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Nikky and I are both just so blown away by the response our story is garnering.  Thanks to the many recommends and pimping we have been getting.  Thanks for the response of our fans that make and send us banners and poems and mostly the kind words of love that give us the drive to keep HCV going strong. 
There have been a lot of you all asking for the Bella point of view, and you are going to get it.  The next chapter will have a lot of things going on and we hope you love it.  The age reveal will be in chapter 17, along with a first kiss, the kids going off to camp, Edward and Bella together and meeting up with Sally...those are a few things you have to look forward to.  We started a group on Facebook, you’re all invited to join.  TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. 
Now to the nitty gritty... 
We both wondered how many of you would ask if Edward’s son was really dead or not, and if Tanya was dead or not.  We want to be clear that Tanya Denali and the child she gave birth to are in fact deceased; they died in the fire.  
We want to point out that Edward is not a Dom.  He role-played and dabbled with the girls at the club, because it was his way of maintaining full control.   He has no desire to tie Bella up and spank her, he is not looking at her as his next submissive or slave.  Just want to be perfectly clear, he is not into the BDSM lifestyle, he is just a man who was seating his needs at a club the only way he saw fit to do so and protect his heart and soul. 

Thank you again for all of the story love and wonderful things you say.  You really have no idea what your words and kindness mean to us.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 17 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
Right now, we’re back at Bella’s apartment getting Seth and Leah’s stuff ready for their trip.

“Okay, Seth, you have everything from your list in your bag, right?”  I watch as he nods his head, and chuckle to myself since Bella had just checked over the list and the bag with him herself.  “Leah, do you have everything from your list in your bag, too?”

“Yes, Bella. Edward and I just went through the list twice.”  I turn my head to hide my chuckle. 

“Okay. Well, we have to be at the church in forty minutes, and since Edward is taking us, we have time to double check.”

“Baby, Leah and Seth have everything they need. How about you go pack your bag now, and feed Jake?  I will help Leah and Seth take their backpacks down to the car.”

“Okay, I will hurry,” she says, leaving to go to her box.

I can tell that Bella is trying to put on a strong front for them, but I know this is killing her to let them go on this trip. It will be good for them, though, and good for her, too.  I have planned out this weekend so that she gets a chance to be a twenty-four year old for a change.  After we have everything packed and ready, we head out.

I drive them to the church, seeing a bus and a bunch of children.  I also see Sally there, and I frown as I pull into a parking space.  “Sally works in the Sunday school. She’s the main reason they are going.  She is taking her cell with her, and said that I could call her anytime.  She is also going to have them call me before bed, and when they get up in the morning.  You can stay here if you want. You don’t need to come with me. I won’t tell her who you are.” I turn to look at her, and smirk because she answered my internal question.

I shake my head.  “No, I am fine, Baby. Thank you.” 

The night of the break in, I explained to Bella that I went by a different name at Aro’s, and the girls I was with, had never seen my face because they were blindfolded.  I was very glad that she just nodded her head, and didn’t ask any other questions.  I hate the fact that I’ve been with them.  I don’t want my sins to show in her eyes when I look at her each time I remember that she saw me there.  When the time comes, and she finds out what I did and what happens there with me and the girls, I hope and pray to God that I don’t lose her friendship.

We get out of the car and start walking over. As we do, Sally waves, making her way over to us.  Her eyes hit me for only a few seconds before she looks back at Bella.

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights

Really moving this along...Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 22 of His Cimmerian View.  There aren’t a lot of questions about things going on, other than the arrival of Uncle Harry and of course Sue’s return.  The story only has roughly 10 to 12 chapters left and through 26 are written and 27 is more than half way completed.  BPOV out-take is coming along nicely but man alive is it HUGE over 22K word count right now and it is for sure a tissue warning.  As for the few questions we have gotten, we have answers... We want to be clear that Emmett filed a paper that is giving Bella custody until the court hearing so right now no one can take the twins away from her, without first going to court.  We also had someone ask about the title of the story over at TWCS, it is the same as it is at FFN... however at TWCS I have found it is easier to look up the author and then find the story, the story search is not super simple like it is at FFN.  We are the same names both author name and story name at all sites we post at.  On a side and personal note, I am very sorry for the delay of this... after I posted the last chapters on Thursday morning, my mother passed away.  Unless something gets in the way the only thing that will be delayed is this review reply.  The next chapter is ready to go... minus mine and Nikky’s final read through anyway.  I want to thank you all for the kind words shared on Facebook already and thank you for the prayers and well wishes.  If you haven’t joined us on Facebook, please do so there are lots of fun discussions and of course sometimes extra teasers and info too.  Just search for TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Thanks everyone have a great week.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 23: teaser subject to changes during beta process…

It’s New Year Eve and the twin’s eighth birthday.  Seth and Leah shared a party yesterday at Chuck E. Cheese and they loved it.  Esme, Chas, and Angela all took the day off and came to help out at the party.  Aro brought Sulpicia and their son, Sammy, who is ten.  Sammy seemed to have taken a liking to Leah, as he stayed mainly with her the entire time. Esme and Zafrina both said it was cute and sweet, but all I wanted to do was kill the kid.  Bella even laughed at me and gave me a look when I let out a growl at little Sammy when he pulled Leah away while she was talking to us. I looked back at Bella and shrugged my shoulders, because I wasn’t really sure where the over-protectiveness came from.

Then there were the moms or whores as I call them.  I got hit on a lot.  Almost every mother of a child that had been invited was dressed like they were having a night out on the town, not taking their child to a classmate’s birthday party.  Some even said that I was really nice to help Bella and her kids out like I have been.  I felt like I was going to lose it as they made her sound so beneath them and that she was simply a charity case.  Thankfully, Bella kept me calm and stopped me from screaming at them.  As soon as school is back in session, I’ll be making it very clear to everyone what Bella and I are to each other. The fact that this was a place for children, and that it was Seth and Leah’s first real birthday party, stopped me from performing a very hot, public display of affection with Bella.  I know for a fact I would have enjoyed it, and I’m sure I would have made Bella enjoy it, too.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

Love epilogues, finish a story off well.



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Eleven by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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How could I have ever thought my perfect recall of her would be enough to sustain me in my pitiful existence? The memory was nothing—nothing compared to the living, breathing reality of my reason for existing.

Banner by vbfb19

Warnings: This story includes difficult / sensitive subject matter that may include one or more of the following subjects: self-harm, vampirism, intercourse, character death.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of Stephenie Meyer. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8716 Read Count: 587
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2012 Updated: 14 Jan 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Eleven

Oh! that was so good. Don't read too many one offs but I am so glad I read this.



Author's Response:

Thank you.. it was a lot darker than the fluff and smut I usually write. Thanks so much for taking the time to review :)

 

Luv BBxx

Sinful by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.

 Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and

nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.

Amazing banner by; My husband

Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story

This story will contain lemons...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12625
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

It was amazing, I was so busy reading I did not review, sorry. This is a sleeper I'm sure it will accumulate reviews Just give it time.



Author's Response:

That's a nice way to put it and very diplomatic ;0) thanks

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

Wicked.....

Summary:

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Awesome Banner made by: vbfb1!  Make sure to check out her great stories and blog to reqyest a banner!

 http://plainjanebydaydommebynight.blogspot.com/?zx=702939f0c989e36

Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62156
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Smooth, swave and liars, love it.