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After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624991
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
That was an amazing breakthrough that he just had!!! I am really glad that Bella told him even though she was drunk because Edward needed to hear all of this so that maybe he would get his head out of his ass.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
I am really happy with him that he is trying to make her dreams come true!! That is the Edward that we want to see more of.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love
Awww that is such a sad start to this story. I really hope that it isn't always this sad.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
They are sick bastards aren't they?
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Poor Bella!!! THis is really a sick situation that she is in now. I hope that she can get out of it soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I just don't know what to say! I hope that all of this gets better for her soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Poor Bella! I am afraid that I think that things are going to get worse for her before they get better.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I really feel sorry that she is having to go through all of this. I have a question though what happened to Renee and Phil's will that she would go live with their friends?
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
So Charlie sold her to Edward. That is just wrong.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
As shocked as I am to say this maybe Edward isn't as sick as James and Charlie are. He is mad because they hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Well I hope for Bella's sake that he is better than Charlie and James because she deserves to be happy in her life too.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
I am starting to think that she is really never getting out of there and is going to be stuck there forever.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
They aren't helping her any by not feeding her just making her weak and then she won't be able to do anything with them .
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
So Edward is going to protect her! I really hope that is the case because James is going to hurt her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Well Maybe Edward isn't a monster in this story and he is going to be her saving grace from James.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
I just hope that he can get her out of the hell that she has been living in soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Well he does have a heart and while he has anger issues I believe that he is going to be good to Bella.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
So she is going to move in with Edward now? That has to be better for her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Ok so I am really hoping that I was wrong and that he is still going to be good to her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Ok so I am really hoping that I was wrong and that he is still going to be good to her.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Wow he is going to be the one that is different than the rest of them. He has a heart not that the rest of them don't he just is going to show his differently.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
And there in this chapter is why I had faith in Edward in this story!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
Oh my that is terrible!! I can't believe that James did this and his friend too. Well I really take that back I do because he is a sick bastard and his father too! I hope that Edward listens to what Emmett was saying because that is true.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
There is lots of hope for him if he just listens to what his brothers have to say and listen less to his father and he will be ok.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
All of the stories that he just heard and he still thinks that he can fix Bella by himself!!! He is very stupid if he thinks that way.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Thank God that he isn't going to punish her for that. I think that Esme is right and Edward is the key to breaking down Carlisile.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
I really hope that Edward doesn't revert back to Carlisle's Edward for good because he is a good person when he isn't that one.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
Well Emmett seems to be the first one that has let go of the past learnings from his father and refered to Esme as his mom again.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33
Edward has changed so much I am surprised that he didn't just take the belt and start hitting but I am glad that he didn't. He wants to change his whole person and that is a good thing.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
I was thinking the same thing about their will! How did she have to go to Charlie if Phil and Renee's wil said that she went to her aunt and uncle?
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
It is so nice to see this Edward come out on a daily basis!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37
I think that Edward is going to be the first one to really stand up to Carlisle because of the strength that he gets from wanting to be a better man for Bella!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38
I never thought I would read that he was actually having a good conversation with Alice! He is going to keep the house and send Bella's car home I wonder how Carlisle is going to react to this? I am glad that he has started to repair his relationship with his mom too.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39
He was really a mean bastard that night to his mother. I am glad that he is starting to be that person that Esme raised around others. I just hope that Carlisle doesn't ruin it.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40
So Embry wasn't a friend to them but a spy for Carlisle. That is sick and twisted and maybe that is why Renee and Phil's will was never found Carlisle was behind it. And Edward came back to Bella just like he had been.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41
I can't believe that Carlisle would do this to his own son!!! This is just sick. I really hope that Edward will see what is happening and stop it.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42
Poor Esme getting beat that is terrible but that isn't the worst to come.....
Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 42033
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Bella's Song
Yea Bella actually likes a picture that was taken of her and that is a huge step for her. I really think that they need to leave her be about the whole sex thing.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Broken
I am trying to remember if I have read this story before so don't be offended if I stop reviewing it just means that I have already read it and reviewed it.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home
I don't think that I have read this story but I am finding it sad that Bella has been through this much pain in her life.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice
Man I would be so pissed if that was my car!
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out
It is sad that Bella doesn't give herself the credit that she is due. I hope that someone can bereak through and break her out of her shell.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee
So she is going out on a date with Edward!! The I told you so is going to start when she gets home.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts
Poor Bella so insecure about herself. I hope that things get better for her.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Normal Girl
I didn't think that the date went badly and hopefully Alice can convince her the dame thing.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Flashbacks
Aw that is sad that she thinks that she is ruining everything with Edward when it is apparent that Edward likes her and wants to be with her.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks
That is good that she is feeling normal for once. I hope that she starts feeling better every day. I think that the key to that is Edward.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella's Story
That is terrible but it is good that Edward didn't go running after hearing the things that happened to Bella.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
See no running and she even did better that weekend that is progress.
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer
That is so cute and that is a good idea that they take things slow.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay
She only had a couple of times where she paniced that was good for her.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble
Oh that would be really horiffic. I am glad that she didn't break down or have a panic attack with that and I thought that she would have.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Girl Talk
Poor Bella all she wanted to do was get some things so that she could spend the weekend with her boyfriend and gets ambushed by her friends.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!
That was a good weekend for them.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
Oh no I think that they created a monster.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother
I think that Edward is on to something about her nighmares. Did something happen to Bella that she remembers but doesn't want to tell anyone.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is
Things didn't go that ba at dinner but I have to wonder what Edward's parents think that they are doing by telling Edward all of that because that is just going to make him more determined to make thing work for him and Bella not that it is a bad thing.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Longest Night
So that didn't go that badly for them. I am glad that they are moving forward in their relationship.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Aww poor Bella! She wrecked her car and then had to have that kind of talk with Carlisle and Esme. I hope that Charlie doesn't kill Edward over all of this.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Our Holiday
Well at least they all stood up for Bella! Emmett was funny and then ruined his and Rose's secret!
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Making Plans
Aw she is really getting better and that is a good thing even if she really doesn't like the whole gaining weight.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: My Worst Nightmare
Well that was just funny! I can't believe that Charlie did that but it was funny.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Surprises
Well at least Victioria isn't going to get out. I hope that Charlie gets better with the whole pregnancy thing.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Nightmare
Well at least she rememberd now what happened. It is terrible that she lost the baby and I hope that she will be able to have another one.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Little House
I am glad that she is going to go and get help and hopefully she will come out of it better.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Only Waiting for This Moment
aww they are married now!!! I am so happy that they were alowed to get to this point.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Two Years Later...
Wow she not only got to have one child but 2 and is sucessful and all that. I am glad that she got to show her classmates that she turned out ok.
I wasn't like the women in those movies. You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning? Everything was perfect. My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set. Until it wasn't.
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15692
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Age of Innocence
Wow!!! It was good that she was able to do all of that in College... I am 31 and I still have to worry about how to pay for everything on a monthly basis. LOL
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Paradise Lost
Oh wow!!! That is terrible that she had to go through all of that. I always say that I wouldn't ever let that kind of thing happen to me but the truth of the matter is that most of the people that it happens to say the same thing but they are powerless to stop it.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Brave New World
Well, Well what has little Alice done???? Hopefully something good for Bella.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Idiot
Wow!! Edward's heart has just been torn out time and time again only to be torn out again.... That is terrible.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Return of the Native
Well something tells me that Edward isn't going to be getting laid that night but he might just find something so much better.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Resurrection
Well if James basically tried to kill Bella why wasn't she notified that he got let out of jail. And I wonder what Alice is thinking now about her brother and Bella.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Concerning Human Understanding
Well I guess that he doesn't want Bella..... Or maybe he does and just doesn't know it yet.
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Dead Souls
Mrs. Shaeffer is such a sweet little lady that seems too trusting hopefully it doesn't get her into trouble....
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Tramp Abroad
Well I wonder who will be the one that will crack and tell about Bella's past..
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Awakening
Well that is funny that Edward stumbled into the store that Bella works at... I wonder if they will ever give each other a chance?
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Prophet
Well it seems that everyone wants Bella to date!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: 3 Lives
It is good that Mrs. Schaeffer has Bella and it seems that she has made sure that she will be able to take care of the bookstore well. If I were Bella I would tread lightly when it comes to James because that man that hurt her is in there somewhere and always will be.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Way We Live Now
And so they meet again! I wonder if she will extend the invitation to Edward to join them for dinner since his siblings are going to be there.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Pride and Prejudice
Well Bella got a little jealous!! I wonder when she is going to stop fooling herself and admit that she likes Edward.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: One Hundred Years of Solitude
Awww... Bella has a screwed up perception of herself and I wonder if she may ever start to see herself clearly. I wonder if she would have a different outlook on her life if she found someone to share it with.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Ambitious Guest
Maybe Edward does like Bella in a I want to date her sense.
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Great Expectations
Awww... Edward got jealous!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Much Ado About Nothing
So clumbsilla strikes again...
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Praise of Folly
Awww..... So Bella hasn't put together that Edward is Carlisle's son.. I thought that I picked up something in the last chapter but I really saw it in this one. It is cute that Edward is worried about her I wonder if he is just going take her home and make sure that she gets there safely.
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
The dirty school girl really got to Edward didn't it?
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The poor unsupecting men that are going to meet those girls that night!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Never thought that Bella would be the first out of that group to do that. Just goes to show how much I know.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Well so much for never seeing him again! That is kinna funny!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Um that was really hot!! I love possessive Edward!! And I can't believe that Bella just green lighted Rose like that.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Um... I like Edward being possive and all but I think that he may need to tone it down a little! I am wondering how long it is going to be before someone notices that Edward and Bella are together because this is Forks after all.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
oh... is he going to tell Emmett that he likes Bella?
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I am thinking that they aren't going to have to plan alot in the operation get Emmett.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Well I am glad that he stopped to think about how Bella felt about that because that says something about him.