Reviews by keola
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

the story seems to be getting overly complicated now..you're a really good writer though so I am going to trust it's all leading somewhere and there's a point to the introduction of a new plotline

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

well done! great story

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 77002
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

finally!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Vivace

i really like this story and I have followed it from the beginnning.i think you are a good writer and it's a great plot But I have to admit it's getting boring now with the unrequited stuff on bella's side going on and on and on.



Author's Response:

I understand...I hope you continue. It's only been 4 weeks since she met and spoke to Edward in the bar to give him the lyrics...she's annoying, but she doesn't have the insight we do as she can't 'read' Edward's thoughts...so I hope the next couple of chapters redeem her in your eyes...let me know :)

 

Luv BBxx

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Caret

I really like htis story and admire you for writing it...but the big reveal is really dragging on and on so it's getting a little boring



Author's Response:

Oh, boring? You didn't like the dream, or the slow rubbing in of sunblock? I think you will love next chapter! Thanks for sticking with it...

 

BBxx

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167604
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

i thought it was agood epilogue overall but weird and out of chaaracter that they didn't invite all their friends to the wedding

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

i really love this story I love the ooc bella & edward and the hip badss cullens. It's on of my favourite stories adn I eagerlly look forward to the pdates

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

i really love this story i constantly look forwar to the updates and they never dissappoint. I love rockward and sexy fesity bella. your writing is really good and the dialogue and iner thought process of teh characters is realistic. you're greeat at keepong teh story interesting too

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

you know I love this storyy-rock on!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

ahhhh where's the wedding?!!! Bring on the wedding!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

nice to have you back! I have a real soft spot for this story and love rockerward & fiesty Bella

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Lunch Time Revelations

nope just can't bear a story where edward is gay..to much of a waste of some fione manhood..



Author's Response: lmao sorry you can't accept my changes to a fictional character, hope you find something else that makes you happy

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro

this story is really creepy....edwards a sadistic coward and a not very appealing anti hero. it's well written, I'll give you that...



Author's Response:

The content of my story may offend some readers. You don't have to read it if you feel uncomfortable with my characters' twisted minds and lack of morals, but if you do read it anyway, thank you for leaving a comment, it means a lot to me.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue

aww so sweet

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i'm really enjoying this story

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

laugh out loud funny. I think I wet myself, really. You've out done yourself with a most unexpected plot twist. thanx!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0) I'm so glad you liked it, though I'm sorry about the tinkle!!!!

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Edward's POV
"Yea?" I grab my brand fucking new cell phone off the hotel nightstand. The fucker woke me up, this better be important.
"Ed, you awake?" Em's voice comes down the line.
"I am now fucktard." I grumble looking at the 3:30 am flashing on the clock.
"Dude Bella and Rose are wasted, I mean drunk off their asses. I had to carry them out of the bar." He laughs.
"What the fuck Em?" I'm not sure if I'm mad that he called me about drinking women, or that he let them get drunk.
"So we go to Bella's bio Mom's nudist commune cult place, and I mean her Mom greats us butt ass naked. Then we meet this guy with a monster cock, wearing a leather loin cloth. All these people were chanting and dancing naked. It was wild. They tried to get us to get naked and we declined. Well any fucking way..."I interrupt his ass.
"You fucking let them stay there? What the fuck Emmett, you should have loaded them back into the fucking car, and gone back to fucking Seattle!" I yell.

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

get rid of tanya fast

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I just want you to know thst I think this is an amazing story. it's interesting, iengagin and really well written. I eagerly look forward to the updates.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease. 


Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out!  http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/


Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!


Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel

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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing. 
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"


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Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

aaaaghghhhh!!!!! I need to know what happens next!!!! can't wait another week-stop reading this and get writing =please!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

noooooooo! you can't end it there !!!!!! what happens?!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

realllllly great chapter ! I love this story



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!

My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today! 

Hope you enjoy the teasers!

XoXo  Shel


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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.

Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father. 

"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward. 

Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded. 

"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."

 

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

this is my favourite story in fanfiction right now. it's realy compelling and I love you're writing



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

i'm scared!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

 i love this story. It's  mature, intelligent , poignant, humorous and well written. Great plot and characters, good dialoguw. I reallty applaud you for writing it. You've got quite the talent.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I just want to say thank you and well done. It's rare in fanfic to find a story that ticks all the boxes..meaning it's an intelligent well written story with a great plot, good characterizariosn and dialogue. your story had a nice blend of action, romance,humour, and a tad of smut...without the citrus overwhelming the storyline or the characters.

 



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

really enjoyed the story thanx



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read it.  I'm really glad you enjoyed.  :-) 

Summary:

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Sometimes love is darker. More crimson.

For the 'Beyond The Pale' Contest located at: http:// www. fanfiction. net/u/2431148/BeyondThePale. Image used: #17. (Voting open NOW!)

WARNING: Contains graphic violence, sex, and language. There are disturbing images and themes in this story.

(Banner by: Me, Myself, and I.)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7242 Read Count: 648
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Crimson Love: One-Shot

ewwwww!!!

Summary:

Bella needs to sober up before going home. A late night stop at Denny's provides her with more than breakfast, thanks to an old crush. E/B


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6529 Read Count: 444
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mooning Over My Hammy

Seriously that scene with the stoners in the diner is hysterical. Great dialogue and funny as hell I really did lol. I hope you keep writing you have real telent. One shots are hard to pull off and i think this one is excellent.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

yeah i sorta hate eward right now



Author's Response:

I understand...hopefully that will change before the end :)

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter

i admire you for wrting and outting yoru work out there but the premise of the story seems kinda stupid.



Author's Response:

You shouldn't read this story if you're looking for something serious and plausible. We're on surreal territory here, dear.

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184429
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Blanched

charlie? jake? Billy? Grandma swan?

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

nice to have you back...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

i really like this story and am looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

i love this story.. great character development, right amount of angst & fluff, great attenton to detail and realistic dialogue

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

ooooh i bet it's alex....

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31181
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

did not see that coming!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 55

yikes!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue

hi really love this story. even though it's angsty, there's somehting so refreshing about it. I like the writing and the short chapters leaving me eager for the next installment. i really appreciated the quick updates as well-so thanks

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

soo dissapointed -i say she dumps him and moves on and elaves him desperate and opining for her

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112984
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

geez he's a horrible edward



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) Sorry for the delay in my response! 

He's not the most prim and proper Edward, but I assure you, there is a soul buried deep down in there, and it will start to surface. If you check out the outtakes that I'm going to be posting, you might find a wee bit of empathy for him as his back story is revealed. 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167503
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 26: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

I really admire your depth as a writer and the detail and complexity in this story.



Author's Response:

We appreciate hearing that!  It's a lot of hard work but also a complete labor of love <3

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: 12 Friggen Epic

great to have another chapter



Author's Response:

:)

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

i really love this story, but edward's current actions don't make sense to me especially as he's a reformed character after the jenna incident.it just seems like you're slipping in the old new moon edward leaves for her own good routine, when everyhitng else you've written ahs seemd a pretty orginal spin on things..so I'm a bit dissapointed as a reader. itw oud, ahve been more interesting terretory for me if he stayed and faced his demon head on.

 

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yikes!



Author's Response:

hang in there honey!

:)

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great story

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this is now my favourite story in twilight fanfiction-am so looking forward to the enxt chapter



Author's Response:

You are too kind, keola - thanks for the review Honey!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i love this story. it's so poignant and well written. It's great to have another chapter

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Noooooo!!!!!!!!get writing ! post the next chapter you meanie!!!!!:-)

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

ohhhh-geez-what the f*** is edward's problem?!!!! get on with it man.

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

i really love this tory but geez the whole edward thing is really ragging out

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

ahhh so satisfying

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8913
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

what a bautiful story... really lovely, thank you:-)

Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime…mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed. –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: To Read, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125792 Read Count: 33644
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow! didn't see tht coming. really good story & nice twist on teh bella hears edward in her head plotline from new moon

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i can understand the plot line..but it jsut seems out fo cahracter for the reformed edward to take off like that

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times

great story



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete.  We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short.  When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both.  Nikky has written hers and I have written mine.  Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on.  I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS.  We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten.  THANK YOU!  Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it.  Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!

Kasi (& Nikky)

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise

i just wish he'd stop going to aro's



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.

We know that the more the story develops the more we all want Edward to just post haste stop going to Aro’s club.  I wanted to give a clear run down on the girls that he sees there, so that we can keep things straight.  Edwards’s girls at Aro’s:  Sally: sex addict 27 tall she about 5ft 8 red shoulder length hair thin and tall. Likes roll play.  Irina: 6ft tall slender and Blond Hair to her cheek bones like rough sex and anal sex. 29 years old.  Carmen: 5ft 6 long black hair enjoys being controlled by men, average weight and size. Likes BDSM and being restrained.  Maria:  5’5 180 pounds curvy and thicker than other girls.  Sandy blonde hair, cute features and very large breasts.  More relaxed and sensual.  Edward only sees her maybe once a month, sometimes longer than that between visits.  He controls her too, but it is all about sensual and erotic pleasure with her than it is about rough and controlling hard core sex.  Some question if he chose Maria the last time and more often, because she reminded him of Bella.  Truth be known Carmen would be the one who resembles Bella the most.  He is not with Maria to pretend she is Bella, but because from Maria he gets the softer more sensual erotic side of sex.  Edward had made the decision a long time ago to make himself this untouchable person, and when it came to the girls most of the time he went with the hard core domination side of the act.  I can’t say that Edward’s visits to the club will cease right away, but I do assure you that soon our professor with the extremely dark view of all women will soon realize that he just can’t do it anymore.  He may be smart and he may be a lot of things, but sometimes when you shut yourself off, it’s hard to wake up those pieces of yourself.  I hope that this helps a little in the explanation of Edward and his tainted views.  I will tell you this, I just got done with my part on a chapter where he comes clean with Bella about what he did when he spent time at the club, and telling the truth can be quite cleansing.

Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 9 Teaser… Subject to changes during BETA process.

“Mr. Masen, I don’t mean to be rude, but where are we going? Do you need me to work at your house today?”

I shake my head as we keep walking.  “No Isabella, as you know all my employees have to have a medical check.  I am accompanying you to yours.”  We stop walking when we arrive at the bus stop. I look at Isabella who is looking upset.

“Mr. Masen, I didn’t bring any money with me.  I can’t afford to have a medical check, I am sorry.” I look down at her and frown.  There is something in her expression that tells me that it’s not just money she is worried about. I look up seeing the bus coming to a stop beside us.

We both get on, but this time I lead her to the seats at the back.  I motion for her to sit and I sit next to her, leaving a little room between us. “Isabella, I set up a medical plan for each of my staff including you. Your medical is a part of that so you don’t have to worry about payment, it has already been covered.” I am not really lying, more like stretching the truth a little. “I know that you don’t like people too close to you, for that reason I am taking you to see a dear friend of mine.” I smile thinking about how to explain Carlisle. “His name is Carlisle, and he is much more than a friend to me.  I guess you could say that he is like a father figure. He is a very compassionate man, and he has an amazing ability to relax people. He will not hurt you. I would never allow him, or anyone to hurt you.” I didn’t really mean for what I said at the end to come out, but as I looked into her eyes it just came out.  She looked me right in the eye for much longer then she usually does.  I watch her reaction and notice her bite her lip, as she nods her head.

“Will you stay with me, the whole time?”  She asks, as her eyes fall to the floor. 

Without meaning to, my hand moves to the underside of her chin.  I feel small sparks on the tips of my fingers as I keep my fingers against her skin.  These are those same comforting sparks I felt the night of my panic attack, I dismiss it.  I slowly tilt her chin up, making her look at me again. “I will stay with you, if that is what you want.  This is your choice Isabella.  I know that I have been ordering you around a lot, but this time it is your complete choice and decision.  If you wish for me to stay in the room with you, then I will.  If you want me to leave, then I will.  This is all about you, and what you want.” 

She keeps looking at me and I could feel her shaking a little, but she never pulls her face away from my hand.  “I would like you to stay in the room please, Mr. Masen.” I nod my head letting her face go.

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In

well I was actually surprised her apt. got broken inot. as she lives so close to Zafrina i htought Aro would be looking out for & protecting her place. Defintiely a grudge crime, too much personal & non saleable stuff stolen. My money's on Alice or Uncle HArry!



Author's Response:

Wow what else can Nikky or I say...once again the overwhelming response and the amount of story love we are receiving from so many people just makes us both feel so loved.  I know that this story may have a few minor flaws, but we have tried all along to keep them to a minimum.  So essentially thank you as always for reading and reviewing our story it makes us all giggly and excited to see all the reviews we are getting. 
We asked you who you thought it might be that broke into Bella and the twins apartment, and I must say we were a little surprised that a lot of you have it figured out.  With a wide range of evil or rude nasty characters, many of you said it was Uncle Harry...and you are right.  There will not be resolution for a bit when it comes to Uncle Harry, so if you want to figure out what he was looking for all I can suggest is watch for clues.  There are some very important and much asked for things coming soon. 
We have been asked many times for Edward to stop using Aro’s girls for his pleasure.  And where we understand why, we also knew it was very unrealistic for a man with so much anxiety, pressure, cynicism and tainted view to jump into a healthy relationship and give up the release and hidden pleasure he has surrounded himself in to get by for the past five plus years.  He has slowly been weaning himself from the place, and very soon he will open up and tell Bella why he went there.  We have been asked when you all get to know a lot more about Edward...well very soon actually, and by that I mean the next few chapters are chuck full of things from the past. 
We have been asked if Renee will come back...(A LOT ACTUALLY)...Renee was Bella’s biological mother, who died when Bella was only three years old.  At the age of three after her mother died, custody of Bella was given to Charlie Swan who was her biological father.  Charlie was married to Sue Swan, who is the mom she talks about leaving all the time.  Sue Swan is the person who left Bella to care for the twins.  Since this story is not alternate universe, neither, Charlie or Renee will be making any grand entrance, unless via a dream.  But don’t get too happy, because Sue Swan is still out there somewhere, and she has a few things to say.
We have been asked a lot if Alice, Rose, Siobhan, and Esme will make any redemption...Esme already has begun her turn around, and we think she is doing well.  Siobhan, well she wore out her welcome quite completely at the ball, at this point there is not a real plan to drag her back into the storyline.  Alice...well this is a hard one for me.  I actually normally always LOVE Alice, but this Alice is a tough nut to crack.  She is not going to bring in the roses and become a fan favorite anytime soon, but you will notice some changes.  As for Rose, well...I just can’t wait to hear your opinions of her...and I am sure you’ll have plenty next week.
Updating...we had planned all along to only update every other week on Thursdays.  However since posting the first chapter we have been on an every week posting schedule...and we have NO INTENTION of changing that at this time.  Nikky and I have a comfortable cushion, and the next chapter to post is with the beta now.  I got this weeks chapter back from the beta on Tuesday afternoon, so realistically we are posting around when they are ready.  Nikky is working on her part of chapter 26 right now, and I am working on 24 so we are not looking at any lapses in time.  We are both so excited you are choosing to come down this road with us. 
Where the next chapter has some major info and angst, we promise that chapter seventeen will make up for it.  Thanks again for always being so supportive and showing the story love HCV deserves.

Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 16 Teaser...subjected to changes during the BETA process...

Its Thanksgiving today, and I am on my way to pick up Bella and the kids.  Bella and I decided that, after dinner with my family, they would all stay the night at my house tonight.  I will run them home to get their things for the camping trip in the morning, and see them off to camp.  Bella will make sure that Jake has enough food, and then she is coming to spend the weekend with me.  I’m looking forward to this weekend, but I am worried about my growing feelings for her. I knock on the door before using my key to get in.  Bella gave me a spare key so I could let myself in. The new door has a double lock on it, and is reinforced with steel; no one is breaking this one down.

I walk in, seeing Leah in a black, knee-length dress with a cream ribbon around the waist, and black shoes.  Seth is wearing a pair of black pants and a cream colored button down shirt, with a black tie and shoes.

“Wow, look at you Leah! You’re very beautiful, and Seth, you look so handsome.” They both smile at me and look up as Bella walks in. She is in a cream colored dress, with a black ribbon around the waist. The dress goes to just above her knees; she looks fucking beautiful in it - so fucking beautiful.

“Wow, Bella! You look sensational...really beautiful.  Are we all ready to go?” I look her up and down, I am so glad she allowed me to buy us all new outfits for today. 

I got around her apprehension by telling her that I wanted to go to church with them this Sunday night.  We are attending the evening service after Seth and Leah return from camp.  Since I was buying something for myself, I wanted to get them something, as well.  As usual, getting Bella to let me buy Seth and Leah something, was easy, but her...not so much.  I was so fucking glad Seth and Leah helped me. I have on black pants and black shirt with a cream colored tie.  I push my fucking guilty feelings down and smile at the three of them.

“Yes, we’re all ready.” Bella picks up their bags, and I quickly take them from her.

“Let’s go,” I say as I usher us all out the door together.

Blood Swan by katiecav Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Blood Swan Banner

Las Vegas, Nevada, 1980. In a city run by some of the biggest mobsters in the country, only the strongest survive. Entry for the LikeTotally80sContest. Now expanded. AU.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13744 Read Count: 3571
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The original O/S

cool story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

ail

A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Witch

sweet

Watching Her by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He
watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the
doors forever? Daily Updates. AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95686 Read Count: 35349
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Princess Aurora

yay!

Romany by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/48500/images/Romany.jpg

Set in England mid 1800's. Edward and Bella live in different worlds, ruled by class and money, where prejudices influence and dictate who you can love. Can they overcome the stigma and gossip to be together?

We can’t help who we fall in love with; however we are responsible for how we react to that knowledge or how we treat that person.

Thanks to fab betas RAH07890 & js18

Awesome banner by ML

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78582 Read Count: 45739
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:-( shame on esme



Author's Response:

I'll make her, make it up to you...one day ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 17073
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Perch

a lovely well writen and very satisfying ending. nicely done! thank you

Summary:

New York City"s night life is always up and running, wether it's a club or a strip joint. but their is only one club that has it all, sexy women, alcohol, gambling, drugs, and a supply of rooms in the back that only the elite can get into, for private dances from one of the sultry untouchables. And if you are a high paying customer you get to spend the night with one.

NC-17 for sex, drugs, gambling, violence, and more sex.

Real banner inside

 

stories/11921/images/PicMonkey_Collage.jpg

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32148 Read Count: 20568
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Isabella

yuck-mean rough edward-graphic, non consensual sex-descriptive & effective writing but  story is a turn off



Author's Response:

sorry you don't like it. but not everyone is going to like it .

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/48835/images/Sperm_Donor_Wanted_Banner.jpg

Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

damn you!!! who's at the door!!!!!?????:-) ha!ha!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

i don't get it, i though victoria was his ex

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

squeeee!!! yay ( smile)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, bb! Thanks so much for the support and the love! Until next time...

 

OzellaMarie

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapter

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

loving this story happy for the update

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ycte

Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

get rid of tanya fast!!!

Unexpected by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Edward's life has been a series of possibly wrong choices. What will he do when his life takes an unexpected turn? Can he find true love? Or will he be stuck in his past mistakes?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38965 Read Count: 18459
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think you have great potential as a writer-but it's kind of a stupid storyline. edward is too unsympathetic to feel any connection too and the women are all spinless or vile, the nature of their cahracters made me lose interest in the story. on the bright side, I admire you for giving fanfiction a go and you do create clear characters and a poltline in a short period of time-that's hard to do and you've done it.

 



Author's Response:

Hmm... well, first, thanks for the complement on my skills as a writer. I'm not really sure you're completely understanding the story line. It's a little harsh to call something stupid that only has two chapters posted. We've not even really got going yet. I don't see Edward as unsympathetic at all, he's actually the total opposite. He loves to please his women. He's a gigilo with a heart of gold. I don't see how you think the women are spinless, or vile, we've barely met them. As far as plot it's only just beginning with many more twists in store. I think your review is a bit harsh and premature. But good use of the sandwich method, you know good, bad, good. LOL Read it or not, either way I'm having a good time writing it and there's plenty of people that are loving it. Thanks for the review! 

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/6405/images/WildChild(TWCS).jpg

Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

awww so sweet

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

great chapter...

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Arrrrghhh! I wan tto stragnel edward-please tell me he comes ot his senses before it's too late !!!!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

what the fuck is he thinking?!!!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Noooo you bitch!!!!!! stop this jane & edward crap right now!!!!!!!!lol

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

ahhhh much better...you know I was teasign when I called you abitch, right? lol you're obvuiusly a very effective writer to stir such strong emotions in me! really love this story and am happy for such regular updates..

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i love this story, but i can't beleive edward is still running that "i'll give you up for your own good routine!" What happeend to fighting for her and sweeping her off her feet?

Summary:

ea

Very mature subjects matter - AU- Canon pairing – Edward kidnaps Bella to use as a toy. The Cullen's attitudes different from canon – lots of lemony goodness, or badness depending upon your mindset. Some bondage, ok lots of bondage...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43257 Read Count: 36496
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

bit too crude for me



Author's Response:

How much did you read?  And it is rated N17 for a reason.  Thanks for trying it though.

;D

Summary: Past Featured Story

cc

 

In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

is edward married? Kids his? Eager to see how the story unfolds

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

yep i'm  a sucker for a good period story and this is a good one!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

I'm getting impatient!!! Bring on the meeting!!!:-)Enjoying the story though

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awwww....sweet.

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

thanks for the chapter. i really love this story. I'm sorry to hear about yoru daughter adn am glad that she's ok:-)

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

oohhh I'd love to see them happy, married and with babies!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

so sweet

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

definitely a big giant awwwwwwwww..lovely & sweet

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Stormy Weather

it's s good story-but edward's a bit naive to think people are just gonna automatically see him differently after being a slut for so long

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

nice unexpected twist-really engaging story-but what happened to the lasagne!!!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

charming story-loking forward to see how it unfolds

The Follower by MareyahJ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Bella is a stripper that has a stalker.  One night the stalker followed her home.  That was a night he will never forget.

This story was a one-shot but I have dedcided to add to it.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Bella/OC
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3029 Read Count: 4742
[Report This] Published: 13 Oct 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2015
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

horrible i now want to bleach my brain & get rid of the memory



Author's Response:

Thank you for our honesty. My first story, just getting a feel for the writing process.

Summary:

Written for Fandom For Suicide Awareness. A possible futuretake for my character Wisp. Inspired by LyricalKris, who dared me to write angst at Disneyland! Mostly fluff, a little angst. Bella and Edward go on their first vacation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18096 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Nov 2012
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow! beautiful, moving and very well written.

Second Choice by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Second Choice banner made by Caiteexx

 

Everyone has a first choice. A something they think they want more than any other. Edward Cullen had his, and he thought not getting to hold it in his hands would forever define his life. And he was even content to let it... Until he discovered how much better, and more clearly and purely defining, a second could be.

*Beautiful banner made by Caiteexx

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7389 Read Count: 854
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2013 Updated: 15 Dec 2013
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

dpn't care for it as much as your other stories-maybe it's the rose/edward paring...don't know

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

r2


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

did not see that amnesia coming!!!!

Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

yay!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478689
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wait doesn't that make bella cassie and cullen's sister?

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

good twist! Did not see that coming !

 

Summary:

Not everyone finds a love that fills them with happiness, but I did. We made each other happy, and our happiness was ... just a kiss away. Canon Couples. All Human. Rated for language and adult situations.

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2703 Read Count: 1234
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2014 Updated: 17 Nov 2014
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sweet

 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

bannner

Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: keola Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

woo hoo!