Reviews by bab1067
First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189018
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Little League

OMG.........this chapter was hysterical.  Is Bella going to give in and have another? I think you should write a couple of outaes as the kids age. Megan was awesome staking her claim. Gad Bella wasn't there when the moms were flaunting their stuff at Edward.

I didn't know you had a novel, good for you. What's the title and what's it about?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Could you say no to QB's adorable babies?  I plan on writing at least one more of the kids.

It's called Code Red and it's romance/humor just like you're used to from me.  Details will be on this site :)

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672850
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter One in Edward's POV

Will we be getting more Edward pov's?   Loved hearing what was going on in his head:-)

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Wow! I can't imagine going through what she is.  Glad you shared this out take with us.  You know I love this story and was so excited when you updated two chapters.  So what's next for us? Damion?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533160
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I can't believe your readers would high five Damion with Lauren....... I definitely agree with you.   Honestly I hope Bella finds out and puts a bullet between her eyes!  First of all she was imagining fucking Edward because Damion looked like Edward, who she can't have:-(

I think Maggie would be good for Damion......level him like Bella did for Edward. How old were Bella and Edward when they got together?  I'm sure if Sonny or Edward saw Bella hosing Damion down it would have been a hysterical sight.  I think Maggie's not out of the picture yet.

So where is Kylie at? Did her and Peto run off and get married? Are we going to find out about the sit down with Edward? What's Alex going to do? Will she confide in Bella?

I feel like there are so many loose ends.

Can't wait until wednesday and thanks for the back to back chapters:-)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

About time Bella let Lauren have it.   To many women disrespecting Bella in her own home.   So what exactly is her moms problem with Bella? Does she resent her for being Derecks or the result of something she did?

Love the story! Will definitely miss it when it is gone.   I look forward to the updates.  I flip between here and FF.  

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

Interesting girl talk.  I forgot about Alex's scheme.   Will Carlisle fess up about Theresa?  I don't know why people have issues with Alex.  I really enjoy her character.  So what's up with Elena?   Nervous about being around the Cullen's?

I know I always say this..........but when your story is done (which I will miss immensely) you should consider pulling and publishing.   Could make it big:-). I saw 3 patients today that were reading Fifty Shades of Gray because everyone is talking about "christian Gray"

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Can't wait for the next chapter and Sonnys!  So is Carlisle cheating?  I would hope sonny would be like his dad and not end up like Carlisle going through women like water.  

Im going to miss the story when your done:-(

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow........... Things have changed so much.  It's wierd hearing there pov as grown ups. Are we going to hear from them all?   I just can't wrap my mind around all this....... Sonnys comment about Aro and Edward dogging Bella, katie and the pregnancy, Dame being the assassin in the family, fuckin Bianca, Dame having a thing for Alex?????? Anthony and A.J.............like I said WOW!  Can't wit for the next chapter.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Awwwwww.....Kylie:-) now I understand why she was pushing Bella away!  Joe's dead for sure!  I love the POV from the kids.......some of your readers are just idiots, if the don't like it don't comment or read it!

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Can't wait for Damions POV.  Bella will be speech less if Edward asks her to remarry him:-) I'm thinking Edward should take her to a private island, propose and then also have everyone from the family there for a wedding the next day.  Edward having put it all together......... Definitely would show he's romantic:-)

Hopefully Kylie will apologize to Bella and they will be close again.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow.......... Damion's a little fucked up.  Was it from Edward being away, Sonny getting shot or Lauren?  Bella will fucken kill her!  If he was my kid I'd kill her, to take away innocence at such a young age:-(

Maybe he'll run into the red head. Was that Aro's old Angela?

Off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

You know I love all your chapters, but I think I loved this one the most..........the honesty, love and protection from all of them towards each other.  I can't believe Kylie never put 2 and 2 together.

Cant wait for EPOV and to see what happened after the dors were closed. Have to love that Bella put Edward in his place.  Gotta love that protective momma bear:-)

I thought Damion was upset about Maggie but then remembered he's remembering his stupidity with Alex.  What is going to happen at dinner? I'm sure lex doesn't know he's at home.  Will everyone pick up in it?   

69 chapters?????? I'm in heaven.  I know it's suppose to end but you could have a story about the kids life.  This highway has so many off ramps that we haven't even gone down!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113002
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: All Good Things...

Oh............this could end very badly...

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Second Thoughts

For some reason I have a feeling Emmett caves or someone at the bar heard something and is going to run with it.  Especially since Edward took Jasper's house out of the bet, even if it was forfeit.

Ties that Bind by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44259
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Where are the Cullen men?   Did they catch Aro?  Update soon.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Question and Answer

Can't wait for the next chapter and what they find on the other side of the island.   Will ViVi be showing up?   Will they be on the island for Christmas and what will Edward do for a ring? Will there be a Christmas wedding?

Hot water lowers blood pressure not rises it.  Hot water dilates the blood vessels whic causes dependent pooling and less blood pressure to the brain. That's why a lot of people pass out in showers or when getting out of hot tubs.



Author's Response:

Hi Bab1067

Thanks for your review to chapter 30 on TWCS and Fanfiction.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

LOL...... poor Edward, but its not like they don't live in the same house.



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for reviewing chapter 33 on TWCS and fanfic.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Date

What an awesome date and proposal:-) so they are engaged and committed but she won't marry him until they get back? What if they never get back?  What if she gets pregnate?  Which by the way how have they dodged that bullet?



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for your review on TWCS and Fanfic.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

It it truly very possibly. If they are all still having cycles and having sex they can have babies!  A lot of women give birth in their 50s they have more complications and potential risks..........so I definitely think we need them rescued before Esme gives birth but I think it would be awesome for Bella and Esme to be pregnant at the same time!  Love the hula lessons.  We need to get them to civilization........ 



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for your reviews, and your advice - it's much appreciated.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Wow, loved Felix's POV......gave a lot of info. Really Aro wants Edward and Jane together?  Hopefully Edward and Bella's marriage is binding and there are no loop hoes since Jasper had already looked into that.  Like the jumpers in time:-)



Author's Response:

Hi Billie

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Felix's POV - I think it adds to the story to know what is going on off the island.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: You're My Best Friend

Hopefully they tell each other how they are feeling, things will go much smoother for them once they quit acting.

Enjoyed hearing what was said to Rose, can't wait to see what Rose had to say to Bella.  Wonder who Carlisle wants to introduce Edward to............hopefully it's a good thing:-)

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Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Silent Lucidity

I loved it, I think it was perfect timing.  They have both fallen in love with each other....... Hopefully they realize it.  Esme.........VWW.....had me laughing so did carlisle.  I love the way you portrayed them.

Love Dishie and Black Diamond, great story.  Have you read The American President by Rushed? It also a great WIP.

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

 

Can't wait for another drunk Esme appearance, she's a hoot. I'm sure Carlisle has some of his own secrets. Can't wait to see what hurrican Alice creates and how faulty is she planning on having them get married? Think Bella fits in great with the family especially dishing back wat Emmett serves:-)

Can't wait for the real proposal to come.

You need to check out The Cullen Enterprise by Amethyst Jackson...WIP daily updates short chapters. Also. Under Pressure by JiffyKate...WIP daily updates short chapters based off John hughs 80's films. Frontline by MissAlex...WIP it's a rewrite up to the new chapter 15 and boy is it getting good (is Edward terrorist or CIA operative?)

Loved The gentleman from Washington State thanks for sending it to me.

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: One for the Money

Awwww......... They have the reception hall and the colors picked out, we just need for Edward to get the real ring and ask her properly!  

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Status

Things seem to be going well, can't wait until the Charlie meeting. Then the FB status change and Alice friend request!   What will the hospital and school gossip be?

I have two recs for you...... I love dishie 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8625307/1/In-Plain-Sight

I usually don't do an angsty story but I gotta tell ya this one has me hooked, 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8259969/1/A-Dry-Heat

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Executioner's Song

I'm thinking Edward needs a plan that involves a specific ring and three words!  What do all the nurses think about him being taken?

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

fs Banner Fictionators  Blinkie

 

Nominee Banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

WOW, Edward finding a loop hoe to the treaty...........interesting. At least he has decided he would not let her die.  Hummmm, Alice's vision............ Could it be we are at that turning point?  

Update soon.



Author's Response:

A teaser for the next chapter has been submitted to Fictionators - Teaser Mondays, Twi fic central - Wednesdays, Twi & VD Fic Recs - Tuesday, and Twilight Fic Zone - Saturday (I think this may have been switched to Sunday).  I will also try to visit the Sneak Peek campfire on A Different Forest on Monday night.  It's the same teaser regardless of which site you see it on.  But I'm afraid you'll have to wait till next Saturday for the full thing.

To me, I think it's more that he realized he already knew he would not let her die than he decided it.  He just never had to admit it to himself before.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I can't believe Tanya hasn't old Edward Bella knows what they are.  I bet the look on the waitresses faces was priceless.



Author's Response:

Tanya hasn't said anything because it's not her place to do so.  It's not her relationship or her business how Edward and Bella decide to handle their relationship or what they tell each other or when. Circumstances will force the truth out very soon, though not in the next chapter.  There is too much more to happen and only 15 more chapters for it to happen in.  In my opinion, the main point of the story is bringing Edward and Bella together, it's their love story, not the story of who told who what and when.  Edward's being a vampire is secondary to the story of them building their relationship; it's their relationship that matters, not his species.

I think Edward would've been so bombarded with fantasies of all the women (and a fair amount of men, I'm sure!) around him no matter how hard he tried to block them, I thought he deserved a chance to shut two of them up.  That scene seems very popular.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh Edward.......what are we going to do with you. He ran once and now again. I'm sure the family won't let him and Bella will be the one to chase him because I'm sure she isn't losing him again!



Author's Response:

You're exactly right, Bella won't stand for it.  The next chapter sets up the rest of the story--which I repeat is not a rewriting of New Moon.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Is Edward avoiding Alice's calls?  Hopefully he'll show up before Victoria finds him or or Bella.  But I'm sure the family won't let her out of their sight.



Author's Response:

I don't think she'd bother to call him, as she'd see that he wouldn't answer.  Plus, where he is, I doubt he'd get any reception.  The Cullens are definitely going to close in around both Bella and Charlie, but Bella has a mind of her own!

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

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One night at a club when two people meet and their attraction is instant. No names, no numbers, no regrets. But what happens when their paths cross again and there are consequences to face.

Nominated for Best Kiss in Fandom Choice Awards.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19462 Read Count: 5668
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2012 Updated: 02 May 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think he is going to freak out and there is a lot of misunderstanding.  Can't wait for the next chapter don't leave us hanging.

have a great holiday

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lmao....... Priceless:-) love Bella inner dialogue with nyddi!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMG, this one was better then a naked flapping Emmett.

Poor Bella, can't wait to see what Edward thought:-)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

The characters you have created just kill me.

Toooo, early to tell if Bella is pregnate? 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I can't imagin being vomitted on while vomiting.  They can't be that blind...... But then they have been going at it like rabbits and just aren't thinking.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

How will Edward react to her going back?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Well, we knew he would freak out about her leaving.

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

BD Banner

The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Bella definitely needs to learn Italian I think Edward would think its sexy.  Bella is acting spoiled, she left Edward and had trust issues so no way should he propose.  She's got to much on her plate anyway.  Wonder what Edward is thinking about the way she shut him out????

Cant wait until the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Maybe she should order the Rosetta Stone!!!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Loved the way he got Bella to get over her sues and say yes. Glad she is getting a Bella house, can't wait to see what the ring looks like and what tethers say.

Bella pregnate? Tired and bitchy????  Are there going to be any suprise visitors on the over night?  Is Leah out of the picture or is she gonna try some more?   Would be interesting to see her face when she sees her home is no more;-)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Can't wait to see what she sees.  Ok, she needs to get over her insecurities.  They have all told her she misunderstood and she destroyed him.



Author's Response:

tonight's chapter is one of my favorites.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Awwwww, she gave in:-) glad Edward didnt sleep with Irina that would have killed Bella and thank god Sam talked sense into him!  Can't wait to see what happens next and what the family does.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, Irina was a teaser. Good God I was thinking about hooking those two up. It's unheard of in the fandom and I think I would have had to pull my story if I did that. Look what happened when I split them up!!!!  It's a good thing people didn't know where I lived!!  But if Irina was successfull in seducing Edward?  OMG. But alas, he stays true to his Bella. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Soooo, does Matt have a thing for Bella? Hopefully Edward won't get to jealous. I'm sure Jacob and Tanya are up to something. 

Cant wait for te update.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Is Jake lerching around Rosalie's?  I think bell should move to Napa especially if rose and Alice will be moving there.  She can do school from Napa.  Will Edward propose?



Author's Response:

bab1067, you are asking important questions that have already been answered in chapters already written. It is a joy to read comments such as yours in how you perceive the story and where it is going. I want to shout "Yeah!" to those of you who get it and "COME ON!" to the nay sayers. But please be patient, it comes out in the end. 

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I love hearing EPOV.

Obviously Tanya is gunning for Bella also, could she have been the one learking outside?

Cant wait until the next chapter.

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Edward in all leather=spontaneous combustion;-)

Still think its Jake or Tanya learching in the bushes. Can't wait until the Italian feast.  I think with the learking, Bella is going to end up moving in with Edward rather quickly when he finds out.

Love the story, update soon.



Author's Response:

You readers are verrrry good. I already have most of this written so it is fun to read your input and your suspicions in compared to how it actually turns out. Thanks for the tea cups.

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Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Edward is always fabulous.

Have you seen his pictures from is Cosmopolis?  He's looking even sexier these days and more mature;-)

I believe Jacob and Tanya have been learking around the house, and Jenks is in big trouble.  I'm sure the sight of Tanya and Jacob was rather nauseating........were they trying to make them jealous?  If that's the intention they defininity have screws loose, but I think we already knew that.

Cant wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Raises my hand........only my husbands office is in a building with a thousand people. Thank good it was evening as he as glass doors;-)

Figured Jake and Tanya were learking but can't wit to find out how they got around Jenks guards.  What are the two up to?

Glad Jenks has Bella moving in with Edward I'm sure Jake and Tanya won't be thrilled?



Author's Response:

Oh, babs, you dirty, dirty girl!!!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

How awesome for Rose:-)  cant wait  to the wedding, glad Bella is moving in........wondering what Tanya and jake are up to.  Are we ever going to get any POV from them?  Might be a good out take. They could boh be in one chapter.

I think Alice will bethe next one i engaged and then Bella:-)



Author's Response:

Thanks bab1067. I hadn't planned on my POV from the others but is sure is worth considering.

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Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Why are you flying to Phoenix to see the movie.   I  love phoenix, awesome state!  Want to mive there in the next 10 years but hubby aint to keen on the heat:-(  Really want to know what Tanya and Jacob are up to and who was outside Rose's home and in the bushes by Edwards.  We know why Tanya wants Edward, did she gave anything to do with Leah cheating on Edward?  Why is Jacob so hell bent on getting Bella back after all this time? Can't wait to see how the Jasper does with the wine train:-)

 

Heap definitely answered a lot but leaves use with so many more:-)



Author's Response:

Sorry for my late response.....I flew to Phoenix because it wasn't here where I live. To answer your question Tanya did not have anything to do with Leah cheating on Edward. Leah just cheated. How can you cheat on Edward???  Jacob realized that he blew a good thing in letting Bella go but has lost it between the time he let her go and now. He's a pretty messed up fella I think and clearly is going about it all wrong. Thanks for reading bab1067.

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Hummmmm............ What are Tanya and Jake up to?  Is Lauren and ex fling of Edwards or a hopeful wanna be?   Can't wait until the next chapter.   You jumped time on me, I was sure Tanya and Jake would be lurking around while they were camping.

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Poor Edward, that man is going to have a break down.  Bet he marrys Bella the moment he gets her back.

What did Tanya give Bella? Bet she's taking her to Denali winery, Edward and the guys should go looking. why didn't her guards see anything?   Tanya off her rocker? I meand we know her and Jake aren't right but Love Jake.......really? Update soon.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Thank god Jacob never made it there. Was he afraid because he was being watched or did they have him?

Tanya sure walked off the deep end. Hopefully she gets put in jail and not the nut house.

Bella might be near death but she can't leave Edward..........hopefully she has enough fight in her.

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Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Oh lord, emotionally I don't think either of them can take any more. Poor Bella can't take anything else physically.

Well what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger:-)

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow,interesting information especially Jenks and Lauren.  Poor Bella she can't get a break, the person she thought was a friend was actually an enemy.  Now to have two more people out to get her, will be interesting to see how she fairs with two bodyguards in her classes.

I thought for sure she would just marry Edward when they got the license.  I think they something is going to have Bella getting married by the JP before the one year mark, then having a bigger wedding when the family is involved.

So is Denali winery going belly up? I can't imagine Aro is to happy with Hale transportation.  Did he not know who Rose was and her ties to Bella?

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Good god, Leah just seems to keep popping up.  Sucks because she still wants Bella's man.  I think Edward should rename the club after Bella as a wedding gift:-) can't wait to see what e has planned for the wedding.  I thing the renaming of the club, the house being redesigned and their wedding should be enough of a clue to Leah.

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

So what does Edward have in store for our lovely Bella?  What an awesome gift........ A winery in her name:-)

hopefully Jenks gets his happily ever after with Sandra.



Author's Response:

Let's put it this way.... I had tears streaming down my face writing the wedding scene. 

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

God.........I don't think any man.......minus Edward could come up with a wedding that romantic on their own.  I'd be speechless.  Can't wait for the wedding in Italy.  Is Leah out of the picture now?  I still think Edward should rename his club after Bella:-)

Can't wait for the update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324434
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

I'm surprised there hasn't been anything in the gossip rags about him crashing the party and her mentioning being his wife?????

how is Maggie getting in and what did Edward say to her when Bella left?   Will there be an EPOV?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks

I think it's Edwards turn to do something to save his marriage an Maggie's s the first to to go the deva rose is second.

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Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Can't wait to see what they have planned for Maggie and how has she been getting in. 

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107118
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Can't wait for the next chapter.  Enjoy reading your story........ Obviously Edward picked a naked Bella out of the shower, has he ever seen her naked before?  Why does mike keep calling her fridged? Was it an arrangedment like Edward had with Jessica?  Was Edward sleeping with other people? We know Tanya offered to bow him.   I think Bella has made up her mind:-)



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward picked up a naked Bella. No he had never seen her before, but he was able to concentrate more on her than he state of undress. He will actually talke to her about that later (she will bring it up). Mike calls her frigid because that is what Karen Newton called her, it was just her perception after having a gun pointed at her. Mike and Bella's relationship was not an arrangement...Bella actually thought she loved him. turns out she was wrong, obviously since she wasn't all that hurt with the cheating revelation. Edward was not sleeping with other people. I will actually cover that in a future chapter. You're right also, Bella has made up her mind.

Thanks for reading. Keep your eye out for an outake. People are asking what the note said. Ask and ye shall recieve. Look for it on Wednesday!

Liz :)

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Yeap........definitely worth the wait.  I'm sure there is a back story on Jake and I'm sure Edward will find out what it is.

If Edward wasn't sleeping with Jessica was he with anyone else?

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Love the story. Hopefully Jessica learned her lesson.  So, How exactly is Bella's family involved if edward is boss. Just trying to figure out how they all fall in place.  If Esme and Renee had their wedding planned since infancy why did they allow them to be engaged to oaths? Would they of let them actually marry someone else?



Author's Response:

I can ssure you that Jessica has not learned her lesson. As to how Bella's family is involved it was kind of an accident, Charlie was an underling who rose up the ranks and became a trusted advisor to Carlisle's father. When Carlisle's father was killed he divided the dynasty between the two of them. I plan on writing a chapter that explains everything. Esme and Renee always HOPED that Bella and Edward would get married...so as any meddling mother(s) would do they started planning and dreaming. The choice was always theirs to make. Thanks for reading....

 

Liz:)

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Can't wait for the next chapter, things are just getting good.

I like that Bella is taking the bull or should I say Edward by the horns:-)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I think Bella will kill Mike once Edward is back and she has answers.  I think she is gonna even be madder once she sees what kind of condition he is in.  Not sure if jessicabis in on it or not, but she can't leave her alive if she kills Mike.   Maybe she just leaves them both for James and Laurent.   I definitely think she is going to be going after those two. 

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Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I'm guessing it's no other than mikes mom? Oh......... She date raped Edward, hope Bella put a lot of pain into her death. Was she trying to get pregnate or the fact that she could flaunt she had sex with Edward?

Bella pregnate?  Update soon.

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Sorry to hear about your past, hopefully your are healed from your experience. Even though you may never forget it:-( 

Ok, knew it was some how involving mikes mom just didn't know Victoria was a sister.  Hopefully Bella kills Karen and Victoria especially after drugging and raping Edward as well sat torturing him.

Update soon.

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So Victoria wasn't a willing participant? Do we believe her?  It has to be hard seeing the women that raped you wanting your help.  I can't image it.  Bella seems really calm about everything.........

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Can't wait until they have something concert on Victoria and Karen.  Esme and Renee must be ecstatic about being grandparents can't wait for everyone to find out.  why did she get pregnate was she off birth control....... I don't remember.  A Cullen-swan wedding........good times and a big party I'm sure!

Broken Arrow by alexajaye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a professional assassin for Aro. He's ordered to kill Charlie, Renee and Bella Swan, but he can't. He won't. Now his new target . . . is Aro. All he has to do is make it out alive.  E/B, C/E, J/A, Em/R - All EPOV - AH - OOC - language, violence, a few lemons.

 

ba


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109715 Read Count: 35838
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Bits & Pieces

I was gonna ask about this new Brit.......

can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Well, as I said in the end notes for the chapter, it's Sam Claflin.  He played Philip in PotC:On Stranger Tides and Snow White and the Huntsman as William.  Like I said, I think I'm starting to like him a lot.

And thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm working on it right now.

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Torture

Poor Edward........is he really giving up. Who is there to rescue him?



Author's Response:

EEK.  I really want to tell you, but I can't!  I'm sorry!

Thanks for reading and reviewing though!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Race

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806550
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
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Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

So what is Amelia up to? Is Dame going to be able to handle her? Or will Bella and Edward have to step in like he was suppose to?  And what was Dame's deal with Maggie being pregnate?  I could see that pissing Sonny of, oh and he's going to be a daddy........good for him. Hopefully things will work out and grandma and grandpa Edward and Bella.......on cloud 9. 

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Glad Dame and Sonny are good. So Amelia and Dame are over?  Did she try to trap him?  Who is gonna be Dame's one?  I don't think it's gonna be Jordan who I thought was a guy.  Can't wait to hear from Bella.  Is Layla gonna be stalking Sonny? 

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 43: New Edition

Wow, I feel about as lost as poor Dame! And I kinda know what's going on. What's this about Amelia calling Maggie? Dame calling her ain't going to settle to well with Jordan. Glad she got to meet the family. Why they keeping dame in the dark? Did grampa toast Alistair?  Can't wait to get EPOV 

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

Oh WOW.....shakes head...... Sonny:-( What will Edward tell Bella?  She's gonna be pissed about a lot of things.  Naked dinner ain't happening now! Edward going to Vegas after Heidi? I just remembered who she is......she was a manager right? Used to be Edwards escort to places? He slept with her? That eas so long ago I can't remember her.....Bella ain't gonna be happy!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

Love the Dame insight .....clears up a lot. Think he found his one in Jordan. Still not so sure about what Amelia is up to, don't trust her. That whole stunt he pulled on Sonny with the dog then running to E & Bs was hysterical! Can't wait for the next chapter.

know all good things must come to an end, will truly miss this series and its characters! Are you going to be working on Tribute and  Offbeat?

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

Holy hell......... dame is sure the sit in a lot of trouble.  I could never be mad at Dame....he's a product of His enviornment and he has repressed a lot.  I'm sure Edward in jail then Lauren using him as Edward (I'm hoping it all comes out........and Lauren becomes a target). Hopefully everything with Amelia is good.......she's good for him.  I love Sonny and Maggie together.  Sonny found his "Bella":-) all of ths seems like similar situations with Edward, Carlisle, and Bella. Hopefully Alex is ok.  Kylie is a hoot also.  Bella is gonna get an earful. Wonder is Alex tells her everything.  Sitting on my hands waiting for the next chapter!

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

So what is going on with Amelia and damion? Is she really pregnant?

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

Dame Bipolar?  I can't imagine the shit he has seen and suppressed.  The kids have never seen the side of Bella that Edward has.  I'm still waiting for her to find out about Lauren. Maybe Amela will slip.  I think the boys and everyone will see her in a different light and have a lot of respect for her if she goes after Lauren.

 

WOW, Dame and Amela remind me of how Edward and Bella were with each other. Such love and intensity.  I'm surprised he told Dame he thought Aro or Canius would take him out over wanting Bella. 

 

Glad he could go to Bella for comfort:-)

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

Uh oh, Kylie dressing up Maggie for a Halloween party and alcohol..........I see trouble with a capital T.  I think loose lips will be here, maybe Amelia will spill the beans about Damian and Lauren!


Seems like Sonny's got a clue when it comes to Katie.  We gotta find him a hotty.  Layla?

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

Hummmmm..........Sonny and Layla or Sonny and Maggie?  I think either are better than Katie and would make him forget her possibly get him to commit now Katie is out of the picture.   Baby Isabella............LOL Lauren would flip her shit. She's already jealous of Bella and wants what she has.

I love Katie and Maggie, I think they'll be good friends. Like Alex and Bella.  Can't wait to see how the party plays out and if Edward has to pistol whip anyone over Bella.  Hopefully Dame doesn't do anything stupid.  I'm still thinking Bella is going to find out about Lauren here........can't wait:-)

whats up with the extra protection?  

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

All I can say is WOW.  Bella will be on Sonnys side, Edward appears to be there.  Damion needs to focus on Amelia.  I think Sonny has found his one.........his Bella.  I think he knows that but we still have to deal with Katie living at his apartment.  

Im sure Edward is going to say something to Aro and I think I Bella knows what happened between Maggie and Sonny. 

Damn I thought Bella would find out about Dame and Lauren through a drinking slip up.

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

Loved the chapter......... Was actually LMAO at Edward and Kylie.  They are hysterical. Kylie is definitely a character no matter who she is around.  Gotta love momma bear Bella protecting her baby.  God Katie is tainted by Lauren but she sprised me in the end. Can't wait to see what Lauren and Aro have to say about everything.

What's Bella going to say about everything? That happened with Maggie and her dad? Sonny and Maggie's relationship reminds me of Bella's and Edwards.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

Translated with google.  He pretty much told her what was said.   Poor Dame.......he truly is mentally fucked up.  Hopefully the talk with his momma will help.  When is Aro going to give Sonny a break.  Hopefully he drops it now Edward said something.   Does Amelia know everything that is going on...... Is she going with to talk to Bella?   Maybe she dros the bomb about Lauren. 

Can't wait until the dinner....... Is Kylie going to show up at Maggie's school to help with the girls?

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

OMG........ This was one hell of a roller coaster chapter, I've been waiting for this.  Bella is just in her motives but there are to many witnesses right now with the scene she caused.  How would Edward be able to protect her.  If Bella doesn't kill her I'm sure Edward or Sonny will. I'm sure Dame will come looking for mom when he's calmed down.  Amelia possibly pregnant?  WOW, so many issues to deal with.

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

Wondering what's happening with Sonny and where Dame is.  I'm sure the boys are going to find out about Bella..........wonder what they will think.  Do they even know what there mom really is capable of?

Smiles........Lauren's days are numbered and you know I've been waiting for a long time for that.  I don't think Bella is going to be sitting around waiting until her grandchild is born.  She wants justice for her son. With Lauren molesting Dame and screaming Skip does Amela think Edward cheated on Bella? Does Dame? Is that also why he is so angry with his father?  I don't even know how you start to help heal this. He needs counseling for PTSD but can he even get it? Does Edward have anyone on his payroll?  Plus there is patient confidentiality but I'm not sure where the line is drawn with murder.

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

Hope your feeling better!  How could anyone hate on Sonny getting married.  I'm sure Lauren will get Artie worked up about the wedding, but her days are numbered.  Belas going to ge hurt and kylie is going to go crazy when she finds out maggie is her sister-in-law.  I feel terrible for Dame, he sure is messed up right now.  Hopefully he lets Amelia back into his life. 

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

WOW....double whammy for you, sick and Sandy. Hope things go well!   I'm sorry you're having such hateful reviewers like I've said in the past..... I love your stories and if people don't like them they shouldn't read and review them!

Ding Dong the bitch is dead:-) I'm sure there will be some backlash over that.  That was a really well done therapuetic Cullen intervention!  I'm sure Dame will be fine. Hopefully he'll forgive Amelia and they will move on and get married.  So what major drama will come ext? Amelia pregnate? Issues with Maggie at school? Do Kylie and Bella know yet?

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

Wow, didn't see that one coming, poor Sonny. But better for his relationship with Maggie. I felt terrible for her when they were going to the hospital.  Can't wait for Aro's POV.  Katie????? Yeah....NO.

Soooooo, did Amelia trap Dame?  What the hell is he thinking.......especially lurking around in the the house. Can't even imagin what Edward thought.  I really like Maggie. 

Just heard on the news about the snow storm you guys had, talk about adding insult to injury.  Hopfully things will get better for everyone out east and this hasn't affected your family too much.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

Enjoyed APOV.  I'm guessing Edward really does like Maggie.  Figured maggie was calling Layla out on her wanting sonny, definitely thing she needs to go. But I think Sonny is gonna need to keep an eye on her, she's a little more falters attraction like sonny eluded to.  Was interesting to see Maggie come and get sonny was reminiscent of Bela going after Edward. Edward was correct in that Bella would go decked him.  Whose POV is next?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

Can't wait for EPOV:-) LOL....... the SAHARA really Edward......... So  what's up with Caius's death are they investigating it.........god that would kill Bella if Edward went back prison.  Dame and Jordan interesting, lets see where it goes. I think Amelia as lost it, what does that mean for the relationship with Luke and Elena?

hope you have a great Thanksgiving.  At least chicken is a bird like turkey:-)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

WOW a lot going on. Can't wait for the vacation, Bella and Edward have never gone away! I forgot who Heidi is and what the situation was with her...... Will where will they find her? I know they will.  Is everyone ok? Can't wait for the update.   

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Holy crap.......all I can say is WTF???? there was a lot going on.   What are the girls up to? Hopefully the guys stay out of trouble, but I ave a feeling with grandpa along there s bound to be some.......especially since he's all about the women.

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Drama At Twilight

WOW another packed chapter.  I love Maggie and Kylie.  I think Kylie is getting her eyes opened.  So they are going to do a bong together this should be interesting.  Poor Dame, hopefully everything will be okay with Jordan, love the way Edward is with Dame.  Are we going to find out about the club and what the girls are up to.

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Everything seems good between them. Makes me laugh how freaked Sonny gets over his mom in the bedroom.  

Bella going with to Vegas, is she gonna show her true mafia wife colors? If she has a bad feeling, something has to be up. Bella has a good sense.

Will we get an update before the holidays? Hope so.......if not have a great Christmas Lexi!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: On the Road

I thought for sure Bella was going with.  Making Kylie walk to BK, now that was priceless:-) So is something going to come up and is Kylie going to see her mafia momma in action, protecting her daughter?  So what's up with all the reminiscing? I'm sure you're going some where with this. 

Hopefully there isn't too much trouble waiting for Aro and Edward when they get to Vegas. Bella is gonna flip when she sees Hs haircut and she'll have a heart attack if anything happens to Edward while he is gone.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

So, who was Alister on the phone with? Is someone after Bella and Kylie? What Edward up to? Can't wait for the update?  Now what's the posting  schedule with tribute?

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

I think sonny is right Amelia is up to something........something big. Can't wait to see what happens and how the phone call goes.  Like Bella said the calm before the storm.....:-(

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: bab1067 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

So how are the ages going?  Are Emmett and Rosealie together? Can't wait to see what Edward and Jasper do about Alice and Bella.