Reviews by twilightfanatic93
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Surprises

more more more more more more more! lol pretty please? 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Progress?

finally!! hopefully there will be no more friggin mood swings. Great Job as always hun. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Tears

I knew it!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Connection

it's called communication. Like I get she's scared especially with the way that edward was saying that he didnt want the married life but all she had to do was talk to him. same for him even though he DID want that life he should have communicated that with  her. *Face Palm* 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Perspectives

I wouldn't say hate... per se... I would go with... strong dislike for her lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Time

man, I was expecting Rose to get really excited and slip up and say that it was bella. but i feel as if the truth will be revealed soon. 

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

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Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672665
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

Ok.. that was painfully awkward but I must say that I need a new pair of panties lol. I love this story already and I'm glad it's complete! Great Job Hun. 

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Teachers and TA's

praying for everybody's saftey. Please be careful 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like this story. It's really funny. It gives me some much need comedic relief. Great job hun. 

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

okay... so I cried!! I couldn't help  it! Bellas pain I could handle... but Roscoes? it put my tear ducts on over load lol but great job =) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Home Again

Okay, so I just started reading your story, (pretty fucking mazing might I add!) but I wanted to get this off my mind. at first when 'Mystery POV' showed I thought it might have been seth's 'donor' seeing as he's not in the picture. However! I'm leaning more towards Carlise now b.c he's against Bella as a whole. I'm trying really hard to put it together but I'm pretty fucking stumped. Oh! I also for  a moment thought that it might have been Emmett b.c he gave the suggestion for bella to move in and he was all vague with his "I know things, and I got people speech" also he does alot with technology and security and the mystery person has a live stream. but those are just some of my theories. Great Job hun!

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

OMG!!! okay I just had a mini breakthrough. So this 'Mystery Person' is starting to sound more and more like a female. but thinking about it when they first showed they said that they "charmed" (i think) one of the girls that worked in the white house to give them something or the other. Anywho if it is a female I think it might be Tanya b.c she hasn't made an apperance yet. but! Onwards to the next chappie.

Ps I know I'm late but I'm trying my damnededst to hurry along. 

pps. Great job hun! 

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome death, destruction, drugs, cheating, and everything in between. But can they withstand the possibility of divorce? AH OOC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30149 Read Count: 14870
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Getting Closer

I love this story. I know this may sound harsh but I'm glad Edward didn't sit intimately next to her. she doesn't deserve it especially after that whole sexcapade thing she pulled. but I still love this story lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Glimmer of Hope

awww really? I mean I like Bella and everything but I just feel that she should atleast jump through one hoop before he lets her jump in his arms. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Is It Worth It

I guess she's not too bad. But I still feel like that Edward could be more of a dick lol. I wanted him to get mad at her especially after she slept with him and then left. I guess I can't really say how I would act seeing as I was never in that situation. But I guess that I am glad that they are starting to work it out. 



Author's Response:

hold that thought :) Everyone won't always be so complacent and happy. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: A Flash of Anger

I don't get why the hell she was mad at edward for forgiving jacob when she kissed him! the audacity! that little credit I gave her last chapter I have taken back lol. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: I Don't Know

Welp... least to say... I am... PROUD of Edward!! he finally didnt give in to her. I know that it took a lot out of him but its time he started to speak up for hisself. Regardless if she has her reasoning or not I'm glad that he didn't give in to her. Great job hun as always. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Moving Forward

yep  pretty much feeling the same way that I have the whole time. Well, I'm glad that he is moving on and I'm glad that he didn't give in to her and that he stood up to her... Finally! lol but I just don't want him to be lonely. I dunno... I guess I'm torn, but I can say that if they do get back together I'll still have a grudge against her cause he didn't deserve the way she treated him. Okay.. rant done! haha great job hun 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

"more more more more more" shouts my inner whore, whom I havent named yet. Lol great chapter as always hun, can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

can't wait for her to go back o edward!! it's taking so long! 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I. Love. This. Story!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

my whore on the inside said she wants more! lol great chapter hun

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

OMIGOD! who said it? 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

She picks NOW to tell him? right now? now we're never gonna have a lemon lol *my inner whore wrote this just so you know*

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

well... can we have an update to get through this little hump ourselves? I mean... why wait? lol Great chapter as always hun 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

lol I don't think that she's going to harm bella in any way... I think she may even have a soft spot for her. and rosalie knows that bella makes edward happy so shes not gonna harm her. anywho! can't wait for the next update.... maybe we can get one sooner than later? huh? huh? huh? huh?  *wiggles eyebrows* lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

wow.... soooo another update tonight? *proceeds to fall on knees and beg* 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

awww mannn,.... *in my swiper voice* but I think the person maybe alice. I hope that it's Bella. or hell even Rosalie. great job as always  hun =]

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

rose? hopefully.... 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Edwards ex girlfriend. Who's name slips my mind cause she's not important 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Nooooo... please update soon! lol I want a shower! 

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105611
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Finally!! She's coming around! *fist pumps*

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

*fist pump* finally!

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

or all nine in a day... just saying. lol

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

soooo... tanya's a lesbian? orrrr what? lol and great story even though it kinda frightens me if I were to ever have a a c-section 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

lol very informational indeed

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

it was a great story and I'm happy to have been able to take this ride with you. Can't wait to read future stories. Great job hun =)

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

can't wait for the next chapter =)



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks bb - should be another one on Sunday.

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

UGH! okay so I love Bella but now she's just doing the most lol 

Summary:

SYSM Banner

 

 

When life gives you lemons, you make lemonade. But, what happens when life throws you a bad-boy biker, an uptight neighbor, and a couple of kids? You cross your fingers and hope for the best! AH-Rated 'M'.

Beta: Sunflower Fanfiction


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89 Read Count: 13545
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Jul 2017
Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

I hope it's Edward! lol especially since he said "I can't pretend not to want you any longer". If Paul is saying that, that's just a little creepy lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Haha! Masen is so adorable! I want one! lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Loved it! but I just have that feeling that someone is gonna bring up the kiss and Bella's gonna get mad and blah blah. Lol but great job hun as always. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

Lol God I love Masen! He's just so adorable. 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Saving You, Saving Me

well... since it's split into 2... can we get an early update? can we can we can we?