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Taken by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward makes one mistake, and soon learns he must pay for it. Forced to lie to his family and Bella, will be manage to survive being Taken?

Rated M for lang & Lemons.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153918 Read Count: 28170
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2014
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Fight To Freedom

    Finally! I hope. But he was close before and it backfired. Was James really trying to kill him, or just make him lose the fight? Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey sweetie!! Well I could answer you but... You know me ;-) Love Lou x x 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421236
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

    I just found this lovely little gem this morning. Oh. My. Goodness. This is such a sweet torturing story. I read the whole thing in on sitting. It just grabs you and pulls you right in. Now I'm hooked and waiting for the next update.

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923485
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

No! It has  to be Edward!  Ooooooo, please update soon.



Author's Response:

tuesday, though I will put out the first paragraph of the next chapter over the weekend in the wreck room

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Ah, I've missed these two. I'm glad the wedding day is over and everything went smoothly. Just scared to know what's coming next.

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Okay, this was my favorite chapter so far. After all the terrible things they've had to endure, it's nice to see them have just a fun day. Hopefully, they won't have to pay too dearly for it. Wawiting excitedly for the next update.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Okay. tome fo a cold shower! Getting to the nitty gritty now.Can't wait till the wedding. But I'm sure James is going to try to mess that up some more!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Best. Chapter. Yet. I LOVED it! Poor Bella is so clueless. She must have lived a very sheltered life. I loved Edward and Jasper talking and teasing each other in the woods! That was so funny. I can't wait till the next chapter!!!! Oh, and Jaspers little declaration about his evening with Alice to everyone was priceless!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

AAARRRRGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!! I hope you update SOON!! I love that they told each other that they loved them before they make love!!!! Awesome.Just awesome.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

WooHoo!! Finally!!! That was beautiful.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

O.M.G. What a chapter!!!! I was litterally sitting on the edge of my seat reading this!!

They're free! THEY"RE FREE!!!!!

Fucking Aro is DEAD!!! YES!!!! James has to die too.

 I cannot wait till the next update!!!!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

 Oh shit!! No. No more pain for these two. Please don't let this last too long.

Oh man. How long before the next update? I need some happy!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

     Poor Jasper! That would be so embarassing! I can't wait till Edward comes home and sees that Bella is still pregnant.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

Woo Hoo!!!!!! For some reason, I thought this story ended when Bella and Edawrd found ot that the babies were his. I stopped reading then. I imagine my delight when I found all these chapters just waiting for me today!!!!! There's more!!!!!!!

    I loved everyones POV about killing James! Brilliant.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324451
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Our Desire

I am so into this story and look forward to next update.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Post when you can. Your loyal readers will be here waiting. Everybody has busy times when they need to take a break. We understand. Love this chapter , by the way.

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

I never knew I was such a perv, but this story is SOOOOOOO hot! Waiting anxiously for further updates!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

Emmett is such a shit!!!!

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

I like the butterflies! So pretty. How much longer till Edward can't take any longer? Hmmmmm. I think he's about to lose control. Or at least I hope so!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

* squeal* Doing my hapy dance now! Is he gonna go all angsty and ruin it? I hope not. Or at least not for too long.;0

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 213: Chapter 213

I am really loving this Edward! He is getting to be sooo much fun. I loved him teasing Emmett! That was priceless.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Hahahahaha! Good one Edward! Poor Emmett. He is soooo gullible. You gotta love the guy.

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

Hahahaha! Emmett gets himself in so much trouble. I love him. That was one hot scenario in the conference room! Loved it.

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 245: Chapter 245

Holy Cow!!! I can't believe you left it hanging there!!!! Arrggghhh!!! I'm breathing hard and got nothing to finish with. That was hot. Just the anticipation of knowing what he's going to do next!!! SQUEAL!!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 246: Chapter 246

Damn!!! Vanilla Hazelnut?!!!! If only. UNF. waiting impatiently for the next chapter!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

Yes!!! this has got me squirming in my chair! So hot!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

Whoa! I think I just came a little myself! That was soooo HOT!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Oops!! Did she break his magic stick? She can't be that strong. Or is his cum magical too???!!!! Did it give he super strength????!!?!! SQUEAL!!!! Doing my happy dance. Now hw can fuck her without hurting her!!!!

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

Well, I'm glad she didn't break his pretty peen! This is so freaking HOT!

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

Oh wow!Is this how she is turned??? What a way to go! This story is my obssesion now. Along with IR.

 

Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

 So sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter. Been going through some sad times the past couple of weeks. But I've read all of the chapters and I must say  BRAVO! I love them all!! And the pictures at the end of each chapter......... WHOA! Gives me some good dreams.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117739
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: fanfictional Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

     Oh my gosh! I just found this today. Read all 21 chapters without stopping. This is such a wonderful story. I know some would think it strange of me to say that because of all of the abuse and violence in the begining,but I tend to look beyond the hurt and focus on the healing. That I think comes from being a victum of sexual abuse when I was much younger. But I refused to be a victum and let it get me down. I put it behind me and made sure it didn't rule me. That is why I love this story. Bella is not going to let it rule her for the rest of her life, either.

     This is so beautifully written. You are very talented and I very much look forward to the rest of the story.