Reviews by Cynannm
The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I can't wait to read Edward pov. Is he thinking jackpot like an ass or does he think Bella is endearing?

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I was right, he found her endearing and he was being an ass..... lol

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Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Bad dream?

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Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

He's on vacation after he leaves the lodge so I don't see why he has to leave Friday.

Jake seems pretty friendly. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Hate that he's leaving

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I hope Edward doesn't leave a bad review. He knew she really wasn't open for guest and she was being nice by letting him stay. She even told him she wasnt really open so how could he even judge correctly if they weren't officially open and he was the only guest.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Uh oh. ... and I'm wondering if he didn't answer on purpose because he was jealous of Jake being there.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Uh oh..... good thing he already left a message opting out of the article. So jakes engaged but he doesn't seem to be acting like it. Why is he ignoring Edward and what's with the throat clearing and the pissing contest hand shake if he is taken?

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Rosalie was definitely a bitch. Not sure why Bella didn't enjoy dinner by the fire with Edward instead of eating alone and covering herself in flannel to punish Edward like it was his fault. The cat should have been in Bella's suite after the first meeting at check in. It was a little unprofessional for the help to be traipsing through the lodge the way they were. Not sure how one person can do all the work especially if the lodge was full of guest. If there is only one person then they would have to be on alert and available 24/7 which really doesn't seem logical

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm glad emette and Rosalie stayed, a little dispointed that she didn't talk to Bella. Meeting the parents went great.  I was wondering if Rosalie is related to Jasper but I guess Edward would have met them at the wedding if she was.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

What an ass. It seemed like Aro did that on purpose.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I hate that in stories. How can you take time when you don't even know the details? What is there to think over when you don't know both sides to a situation. It's his job and he's not suppose to tell people who he is. I think it would have made a difference if she let him tell her that he wasn't doing the article. I was hoping Edward was calling to quit but I guess he's going to do an article with raving reviews instead.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Thought the review could have been better. It was nice but it didn't say everything offered. He said he was put in activities in the area and he didn't, plus he didn't mention how luxurious the suites were baths were, views, balconies.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I wanted to say last chapter that Charlie was right and Jake should mind his own business.

Aro is an ass. I wonder if Sam changed the review at all or if Aro let it run as is.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Mmmm glad they're on the same page.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Was thinking Bella might be pregnant.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Awwwww

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

Loved the story and thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

My first thought was that Edward always wanted Bella and Alice kept them apart.....???? Not thinking that's the whole problem but couldn't help wondering if it's thrown in there somewhere.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

If I was Bella I would be sure Alice would come back, I mean why wouldn't she?

thats why I have to think ulterior motive, which made me think Edward had a soft spot for Bella that Alice was aware of and she's hoping leaving Bella will help him.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

If I was Bella I would be sure Alice would come back, I mean why wouldn't she?

thats why I have to think ulterior motive, which made me think Edward had a soft spot for Bella that Alice was aware of and she's hoping leaving Bella will help him.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

If I was Bella I would be sure Alice would come back, I mean why wouldn't she?

thats why I have to think ulterior motive, which made me think Edward had a soft spot for Bella that Alice was aware of and she's hoping leaving Bella will help him.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Ok, I guess I was wrong about him wanting Bella but I was grasping at straws on why Alice left her there. I hope he called the cops and sued her ass. Even if both names were on things she just can't take it all and split without consequences.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Ok, I guess I was wrong about him wanting Bella but I was grasping at straws on why Alice left her there. I hope he called the cops and sued her ass. Even if both names were on things she just can't take it all and split without consequences.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Yes... why the facade? How is someone else's actions Alice's fault, even if they were friends? He thinks she's beautiful.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Or you could stay? She's supposedly in the middle of nowhere 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Also.... Bella wasn't exactly judging a book by its cover. The book walked out of a shack looking like a yeti.

he should at least help her out of there.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Also.... Bella wasn't exactly judging a book by its cover. The book walked out of a shack looking like a yeti.

he should at least help her out of there.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Wondering how Bella was planning on getting the jizz...???

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I hat how Rosalie just jumps without any warning. How does she know Bella's intentions.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I hat how Rosalie just jumps without any warning. How does she know Bella's intentions.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Wish Bella had a little bit more balls.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Is Jake going to have a crush?

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh shit.....lol

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Still wondering how old she is.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Now I have to wonder if Edward heard her. Stories all seem to have the person being heard.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

No surprise there.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

No surprise there.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Even if he doesn't know she came by for him he did just hear her call his name while she was getting off. Which he didn't mention.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Even if he doesn't know she came by for him he did just hear her call his name while she was getting off. Which he didn't mention.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Cut the hair too.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Please shave.....

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I bet Edward shaved, I hope he cut the hair.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Mmmmmmm

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Haha

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

How rude of Edward leaving her standing there alone as soon as they get there when she doesn't know anyone. I'm glad her ball grew just a little in front of Rose.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Not sure Bella's intentions are bad but maybe not good either.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

James...... harmless or not?

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Funny.... just a leg?.... lol

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Wonder what Edward is going to think when he finds out why she's there.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Mmmm home. Edward said home.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I hope Bella doesn't mess things up. Please don't let her say she's covered if she's not. I really think she could come clean before they even do anything.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh geez

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I think I would be ready to get the hell out of there. Is she in Edwards bed or a guest bed?

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Seems they both have secrets. What did miss sassy pants do last night? Maybe he shouldn't have been taking advantage of a drunk woman.

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Think Edwards phrasing is being done on purpose.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Think Edwards phrasing is being done on purpose.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I wouldn't mind knowing what Bella does myself. How could Edwards family not know where he lives or what he does for a living? Or is it just Alice but I can't see why she would be kept in the dark.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I don't get it. I'm guessing he's trying to imitate her but she never had her shirt off so....

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Edwards an ass and I would definitely be out of there. Why would he want to humiliate her like that? I'd be gone. Not really liking him too much in this story and I'm sure he's going to end up being a great guy in the story but in real life I would be questioning his character. He should never have been taking advantage of a drunk woman to begin with and he feels she needs to be humiliated as pay back because she fell asleep and farted instead of giving it up? I'd be gone.... just saying. With that said I am still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I feel a little bit better that Edward feels bad and believes he had taken it too far, which he did. I still don't like that he felt slighted by a drunken women that he had no business trying to sleep with.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

They are all nuts. I hope Bella comes clean before sleeping with Edward. Sounded like Rose said this is where Edwards life is and Bella would need to be apart of that.

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Can't believe she said that. I don't think he was going to take her for the first time out there in the open, at least I don't think. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9511
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would have like to know what happened to Alice after 20 years. It sounds like she had some mental problems that should have been addresses. 

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10143
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awesome! I wish there was more. I would love to see what happens with James, Victoria and Jacob.

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2129
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Cynannm Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds awesome. Wish it was completed.