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Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowbabe23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 116

Oh wow, that was intense, at least on Edward's part.  Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 116

That would be so freaky knowing you are a target

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 116

Poor Edward And Bella. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 116

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 116

Poor kids.  Hope they catch James and Renee soon

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 116

; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 116

Again, Bella seems to know better what could happen next...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 116

loving this

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 116

What about heirlooms or significant family memories? Can Alice help him rebuild his memories through family photos?
I guess he is living with Bella now!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 116

After all these fires, I would think the arson investigators would have some clue as to who it is doing this.  I wonder who died in Edward's apartment....I hope it was James....

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 116

Bella is going to feel this is her fault and think Edward should leave her.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 116

Oh no it's not Emmett is it what will they find out

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 116

I hate the fact that james could get bella at any time since he has been there without detection 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 115

I am so glad that they were at Bella's. I hope Emmett and Alice are safe.

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 115

That's extra creepy leaving a message in a fire!  I wonder what precautions they're going to try to use to keep Edware safe...

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 115

Oh My  E's place got torched?!?!?! ACK

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 115

I  so glad they were at Bella's.  At least they had the perfect holiday.  I hate that Edward lost everything.  Bella is going to freak out now. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 115

; )

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 114

Alice deserved that surprise.  No one without children want to be up so early on Christmas morning. Maybe she learned something. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 115

Nice Christmas celebrstion. Love the love. thank hid Edward was with Bella. The message is clear and hopefully they will have enough that the police will get involved.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 115

Laurent was the body? What a great time together and till all hell breaks lose again

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 115

I'm curious what Edward and his colleagues will think when hearing that Laurent was the one found in his home

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 115

Poor Edward.....

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 115

Oh snap who was in it and will they find out it was James 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 115

SOMETHING TELLS ME IT IS GOING TO BE LAURANT.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 115

oh no! No, I don't remember. Chapter clue? or not....

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 115

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 115

I believe it was Laurent that was to be used as bait.
Did Edward lose any family heirlooms?
Are the police going to take Bella and Edward seriously now?
Will Charlie be able to help them at all?
I don't even want to guess which friend of theirs gets caught in the crossfire.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 115

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 115

Oh no please don't let bella get hurt because she wants to keep edward safe!!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 114

I love when Alice gets embarrassed!  It's the one thing that seems to actually slow down her Tigger impersonation!  Lol. Looking forward to the next chapter, but I'm really worried and anxious about what James has got planned for Edward!!!  I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what's going to happen. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 114

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 114

; )

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 114

Love it! 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 114

How sweet and beautiful what a wonderful Christmas now what will be next

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 114

Alice annoys me....j/s. I like that they went to visit the sick kids....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 114

ROFL for Edward scaring Alice.  hee hee

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 114

Bella deserves  a happy  Christmas ,  but I fear that trouble  is lurking around  the corner . 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 114

Sweet holiday. Alice, Lol. Now, what's up with Janes & Renee?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 114

Bella got to experience a real Christmas with people that care about her and Charlie is so good and happy to be in her life

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 114

=)

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 114

Loved it. Lol Alice asked for it. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 114

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 114

Well at least they got a fun holiday season before the drama starts. So has nobody tried to connect these fires to James? 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 114

Serves Alice right for intruding on Edward's time with his fiancé.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 113

Oh boy she had a nice afternoon but I think she is right about being followed update soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 113

If she has that weird feeling,  she needs to trust herself.  She needs to go somewhere safe and call Edward.

 

 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 113

; )

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 113

So glad that Bella has Kate. She has a really good support system now. Wondering if James is following her or if he has someone else following her. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 113

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 113

Listen to your gut Bella. That's all I have to say. And watch your back.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 113

Listen to your gut Bella.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 112

Woo hoo.  yey for everyone taing the engagement so well.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 113

Girl, you ARE being followed... she should better not only think about this stuff but tell Edward, at least! Intuition is rarely wrong in these cases and I still hope that you will let them get out of this unharmed...
It's nice to see how Bella is bonding with Kate, she is a good friend I'm sure that this may even deepen :)

See you soon!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 113

hopefully she will listen to her feeling and tell someone

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 113

Sweet. But ready to get James & Renee in jail.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 113

OMG! I am so anxious for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 113

I'm glad she told her NOW she has someone else in her circle. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 113

Did she lose her tail? Or did they ensure she went back to work?
Will they torch Edward's home?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 113

Loving this

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 112

The calm before the storm!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 112

; )

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 112

lovely lemon. very nice! thanks!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 112

Sweet. I love the love before more drama.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 112

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 112

Loved it 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 112

That was sweet and loving and now bad stuff is going to happen I need to hide my head lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 112

It was beautiful and sweet  the love they share is timeless 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 112

good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 112

I love this!! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 112

Perfect! !!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 112

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 111

Drama coming? loved this chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 111

woo hoo for engaged!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 110

aww wonderful speech

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 109

aww Molly sounds sweet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 108

Dress sounds wonderful

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 111

Perfect

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 111

Oh so sweet, him being so nervous and Bella pushing down those thoughts of it being too quick.  Loved it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 111

YES!!!!!!!!! I knew she would say yes but also knew she might think it was to soon. Wow, I wonder what James and Renee is going to think. 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 111

Finally!  Yay!  Great job as usual.  really loving this story!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 111

PERFECT!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 111

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 111

That was perfect

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 111

Oh I loved it  so sweet and beautiful 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 111

good

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 111

Oh, that was AMAZING!  YAY!!  Can't wait for the next one!!  Loved the visuals, BTW!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 111

Sweet!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 111

Keep it comin'!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 111

Fuck logic. My favorite line in the chapter. Very nice, indeed!

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 111

That was so cool. Im so happy for the two of them. I just know its the coume befor the storm.  I just feel like something is missing.  Can't wait for the next chapter. Love you n ur awesome stories. 😘😉

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 111

Hopefully they get some time to enjoy their engagement before more drama starts. Lords knows what James will do when he sees that ring. Also, doesn't bella have the money to rebuild the bar?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 111

Oh yeah!!!

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 111

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 109

Sorry that I have not Reviewed sooner I love it I am a big Edward and Bella fan as well as chicago fire You are merging the two  very well please update soon !!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 110

I loved it wow they both have beautiful words but wow so romantic 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 110

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