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Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 102

Bella has a great gut feeling, but I hope she's wrong about the next possible locatios... I know that her new office was such hard thin for her to achieve.  And Alices shop? I don't want to think abut the damage that would do to Bella...

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 102

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 102

Bella needs to tell Edward what she thinks

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 102

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 102

I totally believe they are linked and I say it is James. Maybe Bella could help them reopen the bar.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 102

Wow so sad but will the find out who it is behind the fires and put a stop to them update soon

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 102

sadly I do think they are linked.  If Laurant isnt the dead guy, then he's probably working with james to set the fires.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 102

Poor Leah,  Seth and Jacob.  

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 102

OMG! This is awesome! I am looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 102

Yes, definitely linked.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 102

was it the guy that works for Bella?  I feel so bad for them all.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 97

That was as intense, as the two of them gave everything they had give in response to the desires that have built up over the short period of time they have gotten to know each other.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 101

Someone's cleaning house. 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 101

Great chapter!  I have a feeling Laurent outlived his usefulness!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 101

hmmm  thinking maybe the victim was Laurant and James did it to punish him for being sent away from the house.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 101

hoping it'd not peter, but don't remember mention of his size

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 101

James set it.  Not sure about the big guy. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 101

Well that is sad and bad about who died. Could that person be the arsonist?

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 101

Im not sure who the victim mght be, but hope my guess that its the phtograher Bella hired is wrng...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 101

poor Seth, Leah and Jacob

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 101

Oh wow he is really taking hard but Bella is there but who was in the fire

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 101

Sad.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 101

; )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 101

So sad

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 101

hmm...I wonder if it's Laurant? Maybe he failed James... Bella and Edward will have to make a head count. Hopefully it's nobody too close to them. We know James probably knows where Bella lives, the question is whether he knows where Edward lives. Has he been following them? It seems likely since the arsonist is attacking all the places the are secondary to their lives. Yet their homes and businesses themselves have not been attacked...yet. Hopefully everyone will stay safe.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 101

UGH!!!!!

Love the story.

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 101

OMG! I have so many thoughts about this!! I can't wait to read more!! :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 101

OMGosh!  Update QUICKLY please! !!!! We need answers. I still think James and Laurent are workin together. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 100

Holy crap!  This is not good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 100

Yea people and those turkey fires are idiots.    Hmmm Clear Waters on fire now?  Thinking Laurant might be trying to get somee payback?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 100

Oh Shit that sick creep Laurent is burning down the wrong hole

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 99

So hard to be parted. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 100

Oh no write the next chapter quick

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 100

OMGosh!!!!!! Please update soon. Please don't leave us hanging long. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 100

OMFNG!!! That's not very fair! ;) Excited for more!!! :)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 100

Hmmm...I bet the arsonist strikes again. These places are all related to Bella and Edward. But I have faith in the team to put it out. I just hope everyone is ok. 

Merry Christmas everyone.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 100

yikes

merry christmas

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 100

Shit, no!

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 100

Oh snap that's his family's place is everyone ok update soon 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 100

Merry Christmas 

 

Now this sounds a bit too close to home to be random - knowing Laurent just got his papers and his attitude towards Leah. ..

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 100

Good chapter but hurry back we want to know what happens

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 100

the job of a firefighter is almost worse than that of a policeman as far as the chance of being hurt goes.  happy holidays to you and yours!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 100

You drive me crazy with cliff hangers. It is a great story despite your actions.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 100

loving this.  Merry Christmas to you

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 100

Yikes!  Hope it's not a trap!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 100

OH no!!!!  Now I am scared!!  What has James, Renee and Laurant done now?

 

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 99

Oh snap what is happening?  A great Christmas gift would be another update. Love this story. Just wished chapters were longer.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 99

short chapter! good thing you update this story often! IDK what's going to happen. James? or is he caught already....or maybe Laurent?

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 99

So cute they are withone another. 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 99

I'm sure whatever it is, it's not going to be pretty...

 

Merry Christmas if we're not reading us before;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 99

The calm before the storm.  Can't wait to see what happens. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 99

I love this! I am freaking out! OMG! I am very excited for more! :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 99

Laurent is working with or for James!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 99

Laurant is going to happen!! Bad news. Somehow I think he's in cahoots with James & Renee. They will want $$ and Bella to suffer.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 99

I loved it oh boy how sweet they missed each other but I think Edwardis right something is coming update soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 99

:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 99

James and Renee!!! Thats whats gonna happen.   Laurent, isnt gone far either!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 99

hopefully nothing too bad

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 99

I think there will be some backlash from the Laurent firing. Also they still have not caught the arsonist. But at least now they are back together again.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 99

wow  Laurant was a real loose cannon.  Wonder if he was having the onset of schizophrenia

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 98

 I loved thank goodness he is leaving but will he be gone for good and what will happen next

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 98

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 98

Here is your lovin. I love this story. It's a quick read but not too quick. I would love a little more angst as you have set us up for so I'm guessing it will be coming our way  soon enough. I think Laurant is being blackmailed by James.  Or is simply teamed up with him. I'm scared for Bella, I can see one of them kidnapping her to torture and abuse her. I hope she gets to be the one to kill him.  And, where is her crazy mother?

Edward is definitely a hero and so is Bella. When is the proposal? 

 

Happy Holidays.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 98

I think Garrett was hilarious trying to get out of his talk with Laurent. ..

 

And I'm sure both Tyler and Riley are over the moon happy to get their big chance on the squad now; )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 98

good

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 98

Loving the story can't wait to f nd out what Laurent's problem is!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 98

Hopefully they can get rid of Laurent before he does any damage. I can't imagine he will take the news well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 98

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 98

I want to know what L's problem is but glad to see him go.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 98

Glad that are getting rid of laurant.   Wonder who he's working for. James and /or renee I bet

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 98

Mercy, Laurants gonna be pissed!  lookong forward to more

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 98

Love! I can't wait for more! :)=)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 98

; )

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 98

This is one of my favorite stories! I look forward to your post all week. Thank you for writing such a great story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 98

Glad they are getting rid of Laurent. I have a feeling that he is not going to go quietly. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 98

I really  love how Bella and Edward  love each other.  I am really nervous  about what will happen next with a fire or worse.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 98

will we ever know what Laurent's problem is? why he was acting like that? I am glad he's gone, but wonder will he make trouble now because of this...

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 97

Hot and sweet all at the same time....

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 97

Now they can both be eachother's heros since they are each getting something they needed.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 97

AWESOME!! :)=)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 97

So beautiful.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 97

ooh yumminess

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 97

Loved it!! So sweet at the end

Reviewer: Momomegm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 97

Not Well. awesome!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 97

That is the way to celebrate ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 97

Love it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 97

:):)

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 97

sizzling!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 97

Another very intense night! I really like your way of describing the feelings between the two because you make us feel what they feel!

I think Edward should not think too much about their relationship, sine it evolves in its own pace. Bella is ready to have a child with thim whenever they are blessed with it, so I think she is ready for a marriage soon, as well.

See you next time!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 97

It goes from hot and sexy to heartwarming and sweet

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 97

=)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 97

Perfect!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 97

ah yes! so good! just what I needed....and Bella too, I'm sure!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 97

Beautiful and lemony goodness

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 97

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 96

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 84

Loved it!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 96

; )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 96

He will help her forget everything but him cant wait.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 96

I'm so glad he knows how much she still needs to hear that sometimes....

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