Date: 25 Nov 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 90
Hot citrus - the right thing for the beasty weather outside ;-) I liked it and am looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 90
I loved it now that was a fun night and yummy too more please update soon
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 90
I need a cold shower! Woohoo...hot damn!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 90
Bella's a horny little thing when alcohol is added. hehehehehe
So many events on the horizon. How will Bella survive the stress and potential exposure to her stalker?
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 90
Great chapter!!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 90
Loved it!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 90
That was the best release of tention ever they are good together ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 90
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 90
Nice!
ready for more drama and angst.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 90
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 90
wonderful! thanks so much, I needed that!!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 90
yummy lemony goodness. LOL for the picture Garrett picked for his computer.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 90
I'm sure now Edward is glad that Alice "dragged" them to go out;)
Date: 23 Nov 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 90
Wow, that was some ending to the day. Maybe they should do their own private photo shoot sometime and then they could just get to it right in the middle. At least they had a fun night since it sounds like the next few weeks will be busy.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 89
I love this story, it is so fun for me to read. I hope life is settling down and you can post more often. I'm like a junkie wanting my next fix.
Date: 18 Nov 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 89
Love it! Cute chapter
Date: 17 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 89
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 89
I would love to see that calendar! Eagerly awaiting next chapter's citrus....
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 89
Sounds like a fun time to me ;)
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 89
The photo shoot sounded playful and very age appropriate for everyone with just the slightest twist of the fabulous male physique.
Hm, Bella's afraid of heights.
She needs to work off all her physical attraction that Edward provided during the shoot. hehe
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 89
Now that was sweet!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 89
Nothing like a hot firemen shoot. I am sure it will be inspiration for Bella and Edward later. And that was so sweet what Edward said about getting the chance to rescue Bella. It is handy having a fireman around.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 89
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 89
I absolutely love this!!! :)
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 89
Glad that the photo shoot went good.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 89
hmmmm yummy fireman
Date: 16 Nov 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 89
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I loved it that was awesome and yummy more please
Date: 12 Nov 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 88
I think they should just move in together. They are already in love, so it won't just be about the Jame's situation. Edward would probably sleep out in his car before he let Bella stay by herself in the house anyway. Bella won't feel safe by herself. She needs to admit she feels saver with Edward with her.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 88
I think that she will let him move in, at last. She will need some time to think it over, but she knows that it is better, for both of them.
My first thought also was that James is behind this cruel act, and this is really scary! So I hope that they will catch him before he can do any harm to Bella or her close friends als Dad!!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 88
Great chapter. I really hope she lets him stay
Date: 09 Nov 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 88
She's being quite foolish here, I think. Edward is bending over backwards, want to take care of her. Why won't she just let him protect her? Pride?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 88
Of course she'll say yes. She wants it even though she fights it.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 88
She'd be a fool to make him leave.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 88
I love reading your work. I don't usually start a wip, but I'm glad I did here. I look forward to reading more of this story. I'm on pins n needles!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 88
She needs to let him in. If she is willing to geg pregnant by him, surly letting him live with her should be no problem.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 88
She will make room in her closet for his stuff?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 88
I bet Bella is warring with herself about that. Not only does she not want to inconvience Edward but I wonder if she worries that James might hurt Edward. I admire Bella for not wanting to give up her new life but she also needs to take her own safety seriously.
By the way, I am assuming that when Edward asked Bella if she wanted him to go tonight and she said yes, he really meant to ask if she wanted him to stay.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 88
Bella is very stubborn
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 88
I think she is right about James but will he get to her and I hope she let Edward stay with her
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 86
I think it is James...
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 88
I can't wait to find out what they decide!! :)
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 88
Let's hope that Edward can convince her to keep him around.
Will there be a clue left behind for the fire investigators to place suspicion on James?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 88
I am glad that she thought about it being James. I kind of think that Edward is not going to let her be by herself, one way or another. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 88
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 88
Ugh Bet Renee did tell him. Witch. Poor B
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 88
At one point in their relation she'll have to see that one of their homes will be left, as they both want to get married;)
But for now, I don't think she'll be able to see it that way...
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 88
Edward needs to stay with Bella and she needs to let him take care of her. She's not alone anymore! I'm just worried about when Edward has to go to work and she's left alone. Can't wait til next time.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 87
Love it! Wow...I wonder if it really is Victoria and if it's James starting the fires...Cant wait for next chapter
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 87
I agree that it is James. They need to be so careful. He hates that Bella is independent and very happy without him. Edward better watch his back.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 87
Love this story. Hang on to RL and write when you can.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 87
Edward is going to really be on his guard now. They should tell everyone because it's possible James will be targeting everyone around Bella now. The question is what is his ultimate motivation, besides the fact that Bella escaped his control.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 87
Well, of course!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 87
I'm glad Bella suspects James. She needs to be extra vigilant with him around. I hope she turns her suspicions into the police - let them investigate him! I also wonder if Renee had a role to play in any of this? We know she's been in the area.
Thanks for the updates, despite how busy you are. :)
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 87
I wonder who James will target next to get to Bella?
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 87
I am so enjoying this story I enjoy all your stories and wait with bated breathe for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 87
I know the life of a teacher leaves little time for anything else during the school year. It's a wonder you have time to write anything! My daughter, a HS Chemistry teacher, just took on a 16 y/o foster child this semester and she is overwhelmed! I will wait for you as you have several stories that I am currently reading, enjoying them all! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 87
That's a strong reaction bella showed there...
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 87
I agree with Bella in thinking its James! Looking forward to hear why she's thinking that. Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 87
Take care of you first we will wait :)
Bella knows James is evil
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 87
Poor Edward and Bella. Sucks having to give people news like that
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 87
YEP! hit the nail on the head girl
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 87
I feel like it is James too. I hope RL allows you some time to write. You are very good at it. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 87
Where is Renee???
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 87
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 87
I love this story! I can't wait to read Bella's theory!! :)
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 87
Wow poor Bella just when she thinks her life is going great she has a set back update as soon as you can I will wait
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 87
James... well Renee has already made a appericance, guessing she knows where he is.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 03 Nov 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 86
I can't think of a worse way to die than to be burnt to death.
Date: 02 Nov 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 86
Love it!! Did not know that Kellar was a real arsonist. Can't wait for more. :D
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 86
Blond hair...I bet it's James. It is interesting that he would use an arsonist as a pseudonym. I guess he is sending a message, especially with what he did to Victoria. I bet he used her to get info on Bella. Although with Bella's business becoming more public, she is becoming even more of a target.
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 86
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 86
That must have been one hell of a research you did for this story... It's always such a pleasure to read stories by such motivated authors!
im sure Edward wasn't too happy thinking it could be Victoria, and if not he didn't see the hint to bella yet...
Date: 01 Nov 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 86
WOW!!! This is sooo fantastic!
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 86
It seems James is back again to terrorise Bella, and he is starting with those with whom she is close. I think he is trying to send a message and alienate her from everyone. I hope Bella does not try to distance herself from all her friends when she starts to put clues together.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 86
It sounds like James has struck out at Bella via an associate.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 86
So here comes the drama !! Poor bella, I hope she can stay and safe strong through this
Date: 01 Nov 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 86
Oh dear. I think we all know it was James. That means Bella is in grave danger....again.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 86
Why would he kill Victoria did she find out James doing something and she was going to tell Bella??
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 86
The plot thickens...sounds like James has struck again. Can't wait to see all of the pieces come together.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 86
Oh snap is it her and why was it James and is Bella next
Date: 01 Nov 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 86
damn, more please :)
Date: 01 Nov 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 86
ugh. sick person.