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Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 90

Hot citrus - the right thing for the beasty weather outside ;-) I liked it and am looking forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 90

I loved it now that was a fun night and yummy too more please update soon 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 90

Awesome

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 90

I need a cold shower! Woohoo...hot damn!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 90

Bella's a horny little thing when alcohol is added. hehehehehe
So many events on the horizon. How will Bella survive the stress and potential exposure to her stalker?

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 90

; )

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 90

Perfect! :D

Reviewer: Twipotterlover2244 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 90

Great chapter!! 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 90

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 90

That was the best release of tention ever they are good together ;)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 90

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 90

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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 90

Nice!

ready for more drama and angst.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 90

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 90

:)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 90

wonderful! thanks so much, I needed that!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 90

yummy lemony goodness. LOL for the picture Garrett picked for his computer.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 90

I'm sure now Edward is glad that Alice "dragged" them to go out;)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 90

Wow, that was some ending to the day. Maybe they should do their own private photo shoot sometime and then they could just get to it right in the middle. At least they had a fun night since it sounds like the next few weeks will be busy.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 89

I love this story, it is so fun for me to read. I hope life is settling down and you can post more often. I'm like a junkie wanting my next fix.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 89

; )

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 89

Love it! Cute chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 89

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 89

I would love to see that calendar!  Eagerly awaiting next chapter's citrus....

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 89

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 89

Sounds like a fun time to me ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 89

The photo shoot sounded playful and very age appropriate for everyone with just the slightest twist of the fabulous male physique.
Hm, Bella's afraid of heights.
She needs to work off all her physical attraction that Edward provided during the shoot. hehe

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 89

Now that was sweet!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 89

Nothing like a hot firemen shoot. I am sure it will be inspiration for Bella and Edward later. And that was so sweet what Edward said about getting the chance to rescue Bella. It is handy having a fireman around.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 89

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 89

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 89

I absolutely love this!!! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 89

=)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 89

Glad that the photo shoot went good. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 89

hmmmm   yummy fireman

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 89

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I loved it that was awesome and yummy more please 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 88

I think they should just move in together. They are already in love, so it won't just be about the Jame's situation. Edward would probably sleep out in his car before he let Bella stay by herself in the house anyway. Bella won't feel safe by herself. She needs to admit she feels saver with Edward with her.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 88

Good chapter!!!

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 88

I think that she will let him move in, at last. She will need some time to think it over, but she knows that it is better, for both of them.

My first thought also was that James is behind this cruel act, and this is really scary! So I hope that they will catch him before he can do any harm to Bella or her close friends als Dad!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 88

Great chapter. I really hope she lets him stay

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 88

She's being quite foolish here, I think. Edward is bending over backwards, want to take care of her. Why won't she just let him protect her? Pride?

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 88

Of course she'll say yes. She wants it even though she fights it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 88

She'd be a fool to make him leave. 

Reviewer: pjr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 88

I love reading your work.  I don't usually start a wip, but I'm glad I did here.  I look forward to reading more of this story. I'm on pins n needles! 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 88

She needs to let him in.  If she is willing to geg pregnant by him, surly letting him live with her should be no problem. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 88

She will make room in her closet for his stuff? 

Reviewer: Momomegm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 88

Awesome!!

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 88

I bet Bella is warring with herself about that. Not only does she not want to inconvience Edward but I wonder if she worries that James might hurt Edward. I admire Bella for not wanting to give up her new life but she also needs to take her own safety seriously.

By the way, I am assuming that when Edward asked Bella if she wanted him to go tonight and she said yes, he really meant to ask if she wanted him to stay.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 88

Bella is very stubborn

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 88

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 88

I think she is right about James but will he get to her and I hope she let Edward stay with her 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 86

I think it is James...

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 88

I can't wait to find out what they decide!! :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 88

Let's hope that Edward can convince her to keep him around.
Will there be a clue left behind for the fire investigators to place suspicion on James?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 88

I am glad that she thought about it being James.  I kind of think that Edward is not going to let her be by herself,  one way or another. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 88

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 88

Ugh Bet Renee did tell him.   Witch.  Poor B

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 88

At one point in their relation she'll have to see that one of their homes will be left, as they both want to get married;)

But for now, I don't think she'll be able to see it that way...

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 88

Edward needs to stay with Bella and she needs to let him take care of her. She's not alone anymore!  I'm just worried about when Edward has to go to work and she's left alone.  Can't wait til next time. 

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 87

Love it! Wow...I wonder if it really is Victoria and if it's James starting the fires...Cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 87

I agree that it is James. They need to be so careful. He hates that Bella is independent and very happy without him. Edward better watch his back.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 87

Good chapter!!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 87

Love this story. Hang on to RL and write when you can.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 87

Edward is going to really be on his guard now. They should tell everyone because it's possible James will be targeting everyone around Bella now. The question is what is his ultimate motivation, besides the fact that Bella escaped his control.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 87

Well, of course!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 87

I'm glad Bella suspects James. She needs to be extra vigilant with him around. I hope she turns her suspicions into the police - let them investigate him! I also wonder if Renee had a role to play in any of this? We know she's been in the area.

Thanks for the updates, despite how busy you are. :)

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 87

I wonder who James will target next to get to Bella?

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 87

I am so enjoying this story I enjoy all your stories and wait with bated breathe for the next chapter.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 87

I know the life of a teacher leaves little time for anything else during the school year. It's a wonder you have time to write anything!  My daughter, a HS Chemistry teacher, just took on a 16 y/o foster child this semester and she is overwhelmed!  I will wait for you as you have several stories that I am currently reading, enjoying them all! Thanks for all you give us!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 87

That's a strong reaction bella showed there...

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 87

I agree with Bella in thinking its James!  Looking forward to hear why she's thinking that. Looking forward to next chapter.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 87

Take care of you first we will wait :)

Bella knows James is evil

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 87

loving this

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 87

Poor Edward and Bella.  Sucks having to give people news like that

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 87

YEP! hit the nail on the head girl

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 87

I feel like it is James too. I hope RL allows you some time to write.  You are very good at it.  Thank you for sharing your story with us. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 87

Where is Renee???

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 87

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 87

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 87

I love this story! I can't wait to read Bella's theory!! :)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 87

Wow poor Bella just when she thinks her life is going great she has a set back update as soon as you can I will wait

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 87

James... well Renee has already made a appericance, guessing she knows where he is.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 86

I can't think of a worse way to die than to be burnt to death.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 86

Good chapter!!!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 86

Love it!! Did not know that Kellar was a real arsonist. Can't wait for more. :D

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 86

Blond hair...I bet it's James. It is interesting that he would use an arsonist as a pseudonym. I guess he is sending a message, especially with what he did to Victoria. I bet he used her to get info on Bella. Although with Bella's business becoming more public, she is becoming even more of a target.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 86

Loved it can't wait for more 😊

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 86

That must have been one hell of a research you did for this story... It's always such a pleasure to read stories by such motivated authors!

im sure Edward wasn't too happy thinking it could be Victoria, and if not he didn't see the hint to bella yet...

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 86

WOW!!! This is sooo fantastic!

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 86

It seems James is back again to terrorise Bella, and he is starting with those with whom she is close. I think he is trying to send a message and alienate her from everyone. I hope Bella does not try to distance herself from all her friends when she starts to put clues together.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 86

It sounds like James has struck out at Bella via an associate.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 86

So here comes the drama !! Poor bella, I hope she can stay and safe strong through this

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 86

Oh dear. I think we all know it was James. That means Bella is in grave danger....again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 86

Why would he kill Victoria did she find out James doing something and she was going to tell Bella??

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 86

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 86

poor Victoria

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 86

The plot thickens...sounds like James has struck again. Can't wait to see all of the pieces come together.  

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 86

Oh snap is it her and why was it James and is Bella next

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 86

damn, more please :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 86

ugh. sick person.

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