[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 76
It' good having Charlie there, also happy birthday Bella.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 76
The casual and comfortable atmosphere between Charlie and Edward is nice to see. They are both able to share a budding connection to Bella. Something the both desire.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 76
My husband said happy birthday.. he sang it over his cell phone from another room in our house. lol
Date: 30 Sep 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 76
Edward is so cool
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 76
Oh I loved it it nice them getting to know one another now will this be Bella's best birthday
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 76
Awww! Love the chemistry/camaraderie between Charlie and Edward. Awesome!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 76
Sounds like they are going to have a great weekend together!
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 76
Love Charlie and Edward!!! Bella is a lucky girl!!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 76
Ahh, male bonding. Good.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 76
a weekend away sounds like a lovely birthday present. I will love any citrus I can get .....
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 76
edward is so sweet and charlie likes him...right?
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 76
I am excited!!! :)
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 76
I agree that with presents it is more about the thought behind it than the price tag. I'm sure Edward will come up with something great. Something that will symbolize how he feels about her but is understated at the same time. Looking forward to their weekend away.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 76
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 28 Sep 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 75
Awwwwww! That is so touching
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 75
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 75
I foresee a very healthy father daughter relationship being forged.
Wow, Renee beat up Charlie. I think that's reason enough for Bella to learn how to use a hand gun.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 75
I love this! Finally she has a parent who treats her like a parent should treat their child! I very much look forward to the full lemon....
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 75
Poor Charlie has missed so much of her life he is a good dad.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 75
Renee is a monster!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 75
loving Charlie.....
Date: 26 Sep 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 75
Nice update loved it
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 75
Awwwww!!! So happy for Bella. She definitely needed & deserved a parent & now she has one. :)
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 75
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 75
MUCH LOVE!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 75
I loved it how sweet she has her daddy
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 75
finally a real parent.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 75
Bella and her dad, so sweet. Glad to see that Bella has added another person to her circle.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 75
Awh. Glad Charlie is there. Bella needs lots of champions. And, ready for some drama.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 75
I am glad that Bella feels loved by Charlie.
Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 75
I love this! :)
Date: 25 Sep 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 75
Kinda agree about the gun and her klutziness. Now pepper foam or a taser would be good. (foam is better than spray; less likely to splash back on the sprayer)
Date: 25 Sep 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 75
So glad to see a happy reunited Bella&Charlie:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 70
I like your story. Bella did good standing up to her. Keep on writing
Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 74
It will be an emotional conversation but it is needed, for both of them. I'm sure Charlie feels guilty but they both got sucked into the Renee whirlwind. I'm just glad they have the chance to clear the air now.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 73
Surprise. At least Edward gets the meeting of the dad over quickly, doesn't have time to get nervous about it. Although I am sure it will be a little awkward for all of them, since Bella and her dad are just getting to know each other also.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 72
Go Bella. She is making good progress with her healing and while she has a long road it's a good start, especially being able to voice her feelings. I'm sure Edwards reaction will be sweet and sexy at the same time, just like him.
Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 74
Loved it can't wait for more:)
Date: 23 Sep 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 74
What a very nice surprise! And he's liking Edward right from the beginning, another point for him;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 74
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 74
This was a good start for Charlie I think! I'm glad that he and Edward do get along, Charlie is a wise man and immediately sees how strong the love between the two is. Bella really needs his support and if he approves of Edward, this will have a positive impact on her as well!
Looking forward to the next part!! :-)
Date: 23 Sep 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 74
lovely chapter! Welcome, Charlie....
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 74
Can't change the past Charlie, but you can focus on the present and the future!
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 74
Soo good for some bella charlie time
Date: 23 Sep 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 74
Nice meeting with Edward and Charlie!!
Date: 23 Sep 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 74
i like charlie already. when will he get to see renee. i hope we wont have to wait to long i wont have any more finger nails left. ha ha
Date: 23 Sep 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 74
Glad Charlie is here.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 74
Love Charlie. Glad he likes Edward. As always we leave me wanting more.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 74
I love this! I wonder what Charlies reaction is going to be to what went on with Renee.
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 74
Oh wow daddy is here will this trip help them fix their relationship and will her mom show up again
Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 74
Charlie is so sweet and has missed out on so much of his girls life.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 74
Aww glad Charlie is there. Showing he really wants to be a part of her life.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 74
I hope he can help Bella get rid of Renee.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 74
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 74
loved and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 73
It is interesting that Bella's dad decided to come to visit her early. I wonder if he had found out that Renee showed up and Bella has recieved a restraining order to keep Renee away from her...and decided he would come visit her early. Does Charlie know that Bella would have been a mother but James ruined that and her chances of plain ally becoming a mother ever again. It will be interesting to see how both Edward and Charlie will react to eachother. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 73
Ooo wooooow. Hi dad meet my man candy lol
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 73
its good they got the restraining order against crazy Renee. wonder what dad wants with her now...thanks for writing this. I like it.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 73
Dad's here!!
Let see Renee and James start their shit now!! :D
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 73
Oh..edward meets charlie!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 73
Awww, Charlie's here! Yay! LOL
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 73
Baby steps for Bella. I wonder why Charlie came early?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 73
Love this!!! :)=)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 73
Charlie:) That's a nice surprise...
Im glad she got the restraining order against her mother, and Edward as a "private guard dog" isn't too bad either;). I'm sure with him and Charlie at her house, she might be able to get some good night sleeps in...
Date: 20 Sep 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 73
Glad they at least got a TRO. Better than nothing but still. Aww Daddy is there.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 73
Well they are trying to get things back to normal but why is her dad early hmmm did he find something update fast please
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 73
Dad's a bit impatient? Or did he find out about the restraining order against Renee?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 73
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 73
I am so happy Charlie is there I think Edward will be happy to.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 73
Glad dad is there now he can help protect her too.
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 73
Charlie to the rescue. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 73
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 73
I am so happy that she told him.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 72
Woohoo! In the end the drama has one positive effect: Bella and Edward grow even closer and they just make up the perfect couple! Renee's appearance really was a blow to the party, but Bella was really brave in kicking her out and having the boys exchange the locks immediately. She also accepts Garrett's offer and will talk to Antonio - this is the only good thing she can do now! She really should get a restraining order, I'm sure Renee will ignore it and she will hopefully be in a bunch of trouble!
I'm looking forward to meeting Charlie and learning which drama you have planned next ;-)
Date: 19 Sep 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 72
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 72
Yay, she finally said the words. I hope her profession of love was not spurred by her fears but a response to his loving guidance.
A restraining order is necessary against Renee. Even though Bella was embarrassed by the situation that Renee presented, she has several witnesses to establish the threat of physical violence.
Date: 18 Sep 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 72
good i'm glad she's going to the police
Date: 18 Sep 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 72
Glad she is going to file a report.
Date: 18 Sep 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 72
She can finally tell him. How sweet. Can't wait to read Edward's reaction. Loving this story.
Date: 18 Sep 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 72
Yes! She said it :)
Date: 18 Sep 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 72
*raises hand* me me me. I want a full lemon...
Date: 18 Sep 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 72
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 72
Thank goodness she has good friends now to help her and Edward was a sweetheart
Date: 18 Sep 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 72
She said it! Yay! I hope they can kero her mother away.