[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 70
UGH!!! Renee is such a nasty, evil b***h! I WISH Bella would've smacked her ass back as well as called the police & pressed charges for numerous things. I HOPE that Renee gets EVERYTHING she has coming to her!
I know Edward probably felt like it wasn't his place, but he should've at least tried to defend Bella when Renee smacked her.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 12 Sep 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 70
Sorry to hear that RL is trying to kick your ass,LOL! Hang in there and keep the faith. Love the story by the way, equal parts humor, angst, intrigue and love. not to mention, fireward!!!!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 70
Hopefully Renee's visit won't cause Bella to backslide too much but at least she has a support system now.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 70
I wonder if Phil actually backed up James' alibi
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 70
I love this story!! I wish Bella had slapped Renee back and then threw her out! ;) I can't wit for more! I am so excited to find out what Renee will get up to next and Edward is so freaking sweet. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 70
Oh wow why did that no good piece of nothing show up what is she up to and is James behide it all update soon and as for you take care of yourself first and if you have haters tell them to fuck themselves
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 70
Why did Bella not hit her back ? She is such a door mat, she's pathetic, and where is that damn Charlie. Must Edward always fall in love with a broken Bella. I only hope she will be ready for them when they return, and they will. Poor old pitiful Bella always the shoe and the ass end.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 70
Somebody needs to kick that woman's ass - I vote for Charlie!!! Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 70
I'm so deeply ensconced in these characters that I'll gladly wait however long it takes for you to update.
Life doesn't come with an itinerary. We take it as it flows, day to day. And some days minute by minute.
Take care of the home front. We'll still be here.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 70
Aww I hope everything in your RL gets better! I really love this story and can barely wait for updates:) good luck with everything!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 70
Guess that's the drama you told us about:(
Renee really knows how to blow up a party by making her entry! This woman has some nerves to hit Bella like that...
I'm sorry RL isn't nice to you and wish you all the best in sorting things out... If that means longer times between updates, that's how it is - RL is much more important to have in the clear;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 70
Poor Bella. Renee is a real b***h!!!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 70
OMFreaking God!!!
Can I slap the the shit out of Monster Mother??? What a heinous bitch!!
James can not be far behind her!!
Looking forward to more:)
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 70
Oh poor bella :(
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 70
Someone needs to find Renee and deat the shit out of her.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 70
I don't think I have written a review before. But I really love the story and can't wait for more!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 70
Please don't let real life get to you
We live for your updates
Reality is soo overrated
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 70
Have her a-- arrested for assault, call locksmith now!!!! thanks for you hardwork that you share with us! I love Firemen!!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 70
Bella should have knocked her out
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 70
Ugh. Renee is a real piece of work. I understand about RL. Give us what you can, when you can....
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 70
I feel your pain with the school year. Mine is like being a first year teacher again after 32 years......but you make my day when you update!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 70
Let me at her! Let me at her
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 70
Glad for some drama. Renee is a piece if work. Can't wait to see what Charlie does. Hope RL gets better, it usually does with time.
best wishes!!
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 70
We will wait forever for you.
I hope Esme kicks Renees ass or Charlie does.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 70
OMGosh! !! I can not believe Renee talked to Bella like that. I would be getting my locks changed right then.
I hope RL will start getting better for you. Update when you can.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 70
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 70
I love all your stories, this one being a favorite....I'd wait forever for a update. Take care of your RL don't let updating control you
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 70
Just take care of yourself, stay high up over that water line...
We can wait for those updates
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 70
should have known that biatch would show her face. Wonder when Phil will drop her skanky butt. I'd be calling the cops and getting a restraining order and press assault charges.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 70
Crap, hope you post soon.
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 69
Puh, that's heavy stuff! I totally understand Em and he really has to sort this out. The question is why Rose and Irina are not talking to each other and if it's permanent. Maybe Rose had an enlightenment and realized that her actions were not ok and that Emmett really is a jewel! At the moment I do not give up the hope that Rose has com to senses, or will do so soon, and that there is still a chance for the two of them, even though this needs time.
As for Bella and Edward, they are just sweet and I hope, still, that the real drama will not be too hard for them, especially Bella!
Date: 09 Sep 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 69
I just started reading a couple of days ago I love your story can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 69
Poor Emmett. Tough decision. Sounds like he is still not ready to totally give up on her. But of course she is playing the sympathy card. However, getting a serious illness I would imagine would make you see things differently.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 69
Wow, I feel for Rose and for Emmett.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 69
Emmett should try and be there for rose she sounds alone or is it all a lie to get back with him hmmm
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 69
Don't envy Emmett's choice
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 69
Tell that bitch Rose to take a hike! But I know emment to nice for that
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 69
Wow poor Emmett she put him in a difficult place what will he do update soon
Date: 09 Sep 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 69
ask for proof first and then if she is he should be the bigger person and help her no matter what she did she is about to go through something that will change her life forever. as the saying goes forgive but dont forget. like edward said he did love her at one point and im sure it didnt die that quickly no matter what she did and after helping her if he still does not want anything to do with her at least he will have a clear conscious and can move on. i think he should give her another chance because we all do stupid and dumb things when we listen to our friends who have no good intentions especially when they are jealous of what you have which is what irena is and she managed to drag rose down into her mysery and rose fell for it. if em did give her and their relatenship another try then they will need to take it really really really slow. oh yeah and still make her pay for his stuff that she destroyed.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 69
He's a good decent man so he'll help her. That's when she'll confess why she did what she did. I see, maybe, another tissue alert coming.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 69
damn thats crazy.....idk its crazy situation she caused a lot of hurt...
Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 69
well if he tells her they can only be friends then maybe he can be a support for her, but if she can't then tell her no
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 69
Wow, that's a toughie! Poor Emmy Bear! :(
Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 69
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 69
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 69
That was a bombshell for poor Emmett. Not sure what he should do about that.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 69
Well, personally, I don't think I would or could help Rose. But then again, it all boils down to being the bigger, better person as well as forgiveness & ultimately that's a choice that only Emmett can make for himself. However, I will say this...even if he decides to forgive & help Rose, that DOESN'T mean he should take her back or get involved with her again in ANY way. That would be a HUGE mistake on his part.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 69
I think he should tell Rose to fuck off she has some nerve to ask him to help her after what she has done.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 69
Emmett needs to talk to Rose again. He needs to hear the reasons behind her falling out with Irina. That may answer more of his unsettled questions and ease his mind.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 69
I WANT LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 69
If there were no Emmett she'd deal, if he still loves her he must be there for her when things are better he can decide if he like to do more or be more with her. If it were me I'd kick that ass to the curve, maybe.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 69
I think Emmett should tell Rose "Im sorry your sick, but what you did to me makes it so I cannot trust you anymore."He had to pay to break a lease, buy all new things for his place, get a restraining order and live with his buddy for awhile. She did all that beacause he took his friends side against her friend. No, he should not fall back into that again.
Date: 09 Sep 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 69
Hm... It's a difficult decision Em has to make. I'm not sure, but I tend to believe I would try to help her through this - as a friend. And if I see a real change in her behavior and would still miss my partner, I think if give it another go, just really slow
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 69
Part of me thinks he should tell Rose that she made her bed. She destroy all his stuff. Got him basically kicked out of his apartment. Tell to f-off.
But Emmett is a good guy. I can not see him doing that.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 69
That would really be a low blow if Rosalie was lying about having cancer. I don't think Emmett should trust her...
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 69
fuck off!! just what edward said!
Date: 09 Sep 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 69
Sorry...rose dug her own hole. Disgusting she is trying to pull em back in.
Date: 08 Sep 2014 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 68
HALLELUJAH!
There you go :-D I wouldn't have thought that Bella goes for it all the way, but this is perfect, of course! She really gains more self-confidence and can thus better listen to her own inner voice and feelings - I hope that the drama will not be too bad, because that would only throw her back...
See you next time!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 68
Excellent chapter!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 68
Bella's sense of security in Edward's presence was displayed through her bold actions of sucking him dry. Not that he complained! Hehe.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 68
He'll yeah go Bella yummy more please
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 68
Bella is getting brave! !!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 68
woo hoo Go Bella!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 67
oooh They are getting there.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 68
This is fantastic! Excited for more!! :)=)
Date: 06 Sep 2014 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 68
Glad she could reciprocate and give him more than expected;)
Date: 06 Sep 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 68
She is getting her confidence and he is loving it.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 68
Go Bella! And at least at the barbeque they will have backup for whatever comes their way. Unless of course it is internal drama.
Date: 06 Sep 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 68
well hell! I never thought she'd blow him yet...I expected a hand job....good going, Bella!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 68
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 06 Sep 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 68
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Why yes she did Edward :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Gotta love Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sometimes it's nice being short..... and clumsy :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
You gotta love Alice :) I bet she put Bella in that size 6.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 67
Hey, that was some hot stuff ;-) Alice can really be a pain in the neck, but in the end Bella stands up and shus her down - great! :-D
I bet for hand job! The two are just hot and it's awesome to read it in the way you've written it, very sensual and sexy, but serious at the same time!
I'm hoping for more :-P
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
This first chap grabbed my attention. Love the story premise and looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 67
Awesome lemon. Sweet he needs to get some relief.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 67
She is getting so close to letting him have the hole her cant wait ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 67
Great chapter!
Bella is making some head way in getting herself better.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 67
Blow Job, definitely. Kick it up a notch because Bella's ego needs to be boosted after the act. It's also more intimate.
But now I'm thinking about her comfort level during fellatio. Maybe a hand job would be more realistic considering her fears.
It was interesting that she initiated the latest physical contact between them. Not that Edward didn't mind giving her pleasure.