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Reviewer: sogoodtoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

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Reviewer: izhavo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Thank you for this amazing story...i love the improve, the posibility of read in chronological order.

Reviewer: M_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

It brought a tear to my eye that they are closing the school. I can't wait to know what Aro has to say.
You're a very talented writer. Thankyou for writing.

Reviewer: sammy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

*sigh* One of the few chapter that I can easily read over and over again.

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

dun dun duuuuunnnnnnn. You guys are awesome with your cliffies. I figured if Aro ever returned Carlisle's phone calls it would be to say he had absolutely no idea who James was. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Great job with this one. Poor Carlisle. Everything is such a mess and it is all James' fault. I love how you managed to draw out his torture even further but giving him a slight reprieve. Que evil laugh... mwhahahahahah

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when Bella tells Jacob about what she's been through... 

Reviewer: LindyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

OK, so I figured out why I was not getting the alerts & hopefully fixed the problem! Still trying to navigate this new site!

LindyP :)



Author's Response:

OH GOOD...and I know...but it is going to be so great once all the KINKS are ironed out...(I love it.)

Happy reading.

Reviewer: LindyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I can't figure out why I am not getting alerts to the new chapters. I have added your stories to my favorites, is there something I am doing wrong? Great, great chapter. Poor Carlisle. I know he must feel so guilty over all this! I hope they catch James & I wonder what Aro is going to say!

LindyP :)



Author's Response:

I can't remember if I have spoken to you before...so sorry if this is a repeat...but here is the thing.

1. Make sure that the stories you have favorited show up in your favorites...(some people miss the last step in making it a favorite by not submitting on the second screen.)

2.  To do this... go to the Account Info at the top of the screen.  Click on manage favorites...story favorites...you should see your stories there..

3. Next and while you are in Account Info...go to your EDIT PREFERENCE section.  There you have to check the box that says that you want an email alert for your favorites. 

 

AND YOU ARE DONE... you shouldn't miss another moment of all your favorites.  Hope this helps...(If I have just repeated myself, and this is NOT the problem...please let me know..)

Thanks

Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

What a cliffie!  I hope you will be updating soon!  Please let James get captured before he hurts someone! 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Sadly, this is a day that will haunt Carlisle in so many ways. But it's not over yet, they can still find a way to get things back on track and solve their problems. They  need to work together and as a team. 

It's good Emmett and Rose are staying with them, both for moral support and help. James is a clever and sneaky guy. Now we need to find out what does Aro know and how will he help them.

Reviewer: odinamus Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

Hmm, it seems that everyone else is here by their free will. How come she didn't need to sign some papers or get some information before she got here?Why didn't she demand to explain what is going on before stripping on the first day?

well, on to the next chapter to see if I can find some answers...

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I love how this story is developing - but I hope that at some stage the school will reopen!  I love Papa Cullen being in control!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Thank you !!!!!!!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Such a great story!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22

The chapter was well- written, very nice to read.

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22

This chapter was wonderful

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A

Thank you for the good !!!!!

Reviewer: Wombat Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Love you Guys...hehehehehe...Can't wait for more!!!!!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Poor Carlisle - he's really trying to do the right thing.  I can't wait to see what Aro has to say about all this.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Aww snap mofo!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Kristina79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B

Do you realise that chapter 40 and 41 is the same?

Reviewer: Tina Wannabe Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Carlisle is such a responsible man *sigh*

I still believe it is not so bad as they think. I hope James is only focused on getting Bella and Vic back into his claws, and we all know that he won't be able to do that *chants I belive in a HEA*

Reviewer: mikkirose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Finally Aro calls back. Sorry but I think Rose should rip a piece of Lauren's ass off. She needs a good scare to straighten her ass out. Actually she deserves to be in the hands of James MUwahaha. I really don't like that girl. What the hell does Dogbreath need to talk to Bella about. Bella better tell him to speak freely in front of her friends and she should lean on Edward so he knows who she belongs to. No I DONT like Jacob sometimes even more than Lauren. Awaiting the next chapter. This is getting good.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I am glad that everyone will be together trying to figure out how to beat James.  It's about time Aro called.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I loved it as always.  Great job ladies.....Kat

Reviewer: Fates-Love-Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Led astray? Wow, what the fuck is going on? Did James lie to both Aro and Carlisle? Maybe telling Aro that Carlisle was his master and vice versa?

That pic is amazing by the way, as was this chapter, as always : )

Reviewer: Fates-Love-Queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Wow, I can't believe Carlisle is closing the school! : (

Aww, she finally said those three magic words! : )

Reviewer: Kristina79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

What a douche Mike is. Your writing makes my girlieparts tingle, I am not ashamed to admit it, *huge sigh*.

Greetings from Denmark!

Reviewer: Kristina79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

Eww jeez, James is vile and repulsive. You guys really rock writing his pov - It leaves one with the feeling of disgust. 

BRAVO! I bow my head in awe.

Reviewer: Kristina79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

Another fine chapter.

Reviewer: Alexanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Finally we hear from Aro!  I can't wait to find out what he says!

Reviewer: eleni317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I feel so bad for Carlisle :( Stupid Lauren, God that girl is such an idiot! I'd seriously like to know what kind of excuse Aro is gonna come up with here cuz im ready to kill him right about now...n dont even get me started on James!

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

i like the way that carlisetook control and got everything done   and now that aro has clled what is going to happen now that he nows what james had done  will they be able to stop james together

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

i liked this chapter cant wiat to read  more        it was a good chapter and hope that jasmes gets whats coming to him

 

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

that was good i like this stories  cant wait to contimue reading this     i just got on this site so i can read your stories again i have a another chapter to read

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

So glad that Bella and Edward are telling each other that they love one another. Great lemon by the way.

Reviewer: arfess96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

When Aro sounds apologetic, it probably is as bad as it can get. I hope Aro doesn't turn on Carlisle, that is the last thing anyone needs.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

James escapes and Aro appears...dun dun dahhhhh!!!

Reviewer: mrsecullen1967 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

You ladies are fabulous!!!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I love this saga and look forward to the updates.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

S.O. &  Foot

I feel for Carlisle right now!!!! I hope you two have a good plan in place for this fiasco!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

The Tar Treatment is only one of many things that should be done to Laurent and whoever or is it whomever on Aro's side of things.

 

 

Reviewer: EagleGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

love it

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Ooooh, (horns sounding) here comes the cavalry!!!!

I want to sit back with popcorn and watch Aro unleash hell....Please make it so, ladies ;)

Reviewer: Bakergirl24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Oh my!!!! Where oh where is James. That is the question!!!!

Now that Aro knows...what will he do. I think James should think seriously about moving to another country. I can't wait to see what they do to him once they get there hands on him.

Thank you for sharing your twisted tale with us. Take care and be safe. BG24

Reviewer: ktveronica Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

i did not just read the word Aro! as if he turned up.

anyway great great chapter.

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Wow.  I can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: edmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

loved it - how do i set this up to email me reminders or do ijust have to check back

Reviewer: totallyobsessed82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Finally ARO! Christ i didn't think that man was ever gonna call back! Can't wait to see what happens now! Another great chapter ladies!

 

Love you!

Reviewer: skimbo06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

hell yes he was lead to pasture without his hay

Reviewer: skyisthelimit112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Arrrrgggggggghhhhhhhh stupid cliffhangers. Just when we were about to get some explanatiosn too...

Reviewer: MellyJo62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Oh James fucked with Aro too, oh such hubris, oh well he'll learn sooner or later. Me i'm hoping for sooner and i'm hoping that its aro that shows him the error of his ways.

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Fuckin' awesome chap.. so sad about the school closing.. That weasel James..

Damn the infamous Aro has finally made contact..

What will they discover together?

Please be enough to protect themselves from unwanted exposure and to protect the ones they treasure...

Reviewer: vampluvr25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Well Well Well ... The Bastard speaks. I can't wait to see what this mother fucker has to say for himself.

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I actually feel sorry for Carlisle.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

loved it oh crap james on the lose can't be good lol

Reviewer: DivineElmo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

This story keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what happens next...Seriously Can't wait...Gonna bite my nails until I see the next update... :)

Reviewer: markadda Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I hope Aro can kick some ass too!!

Reviewer: lady-janine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Wow, this was a bit hard I think.

But in a way interesting...

You write very good, lets go to the next chapter

Jay

Reviewer: snix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Oh just another little place Edward has tucked away...

Gah, my alert hasn't been working and it took me forever to find the rest of the chapters. :(  But I have found them now!! :D

 

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Reviewer: snix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Yummiliousness!! Edward's adoreable!

 

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Reviewer: ImAllMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

i love the story here.

things are getting really scary. holding my breath til next chapter...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I need more. I feel sorry for Carlisle and Esme they did not know they were doing anything wrong. The guilt they have to be carrying must be very heavy.  I cant wait to see what happens next.  I have tears in my eyes for Rose poor girl.

Reviewer: pigitel26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I really love this story and am very computer illiterate. Is there any way to get emails of updates like on fanfiction.

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

oh now Aro decides to call! that's really sad that Carlisle has to shut down the school, but understandable. stupid James. anyway, great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: eleonor317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

OHHHHH! Aro finally! Poor carlisle i feel so bad for him. Im pretty sure james will find them farely quickly tho, doesnt he have a gps thingy in victoris...yaaa their screwed lol Sooo excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Well, maybe Aro is less scrupulous than Carlisle & will deal with James as he should be dealt with;~)

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: buskirk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!!!!!

Reviewer: arrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Yes, yes - glad site is up and running but too short - I was so excited to see an update and it was over before it began - update soon!!! PLEASE

Reviewer: cabr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

So Aro finally appears... interesting timing!

Reviewer: cabr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

I finally made it over here to continue reading your story! Thanks for this chapter. 

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

OMG!!! I'm curious what Aro and Carlisle will do to find James and I'm so afraid about the girls they can't hide anywhere because of that damn Victoria's GPS!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Good chapter, cant wait to see what upcoming pain can be inflicted on James and Laurent, between Carlisles' and Aros' people.  I assumed that Aro is not real pleased either and is not someone you want to cross.

Reviewer: jdm13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hmmm...finally the elusive Aro calls back. And he's been led astray too? Looking forward to the next chapter to find out more!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hmmm, does that mean that someone on his end was intercepting Carlisle's phone calls???

Reviewer: Nicflex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Aro! I can't wait to hear this...

Great chapter!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

i am  for one glad this site works as well as it does i was so ready for another update and i was not dissapointed this is another fab chapter in a  fab story,  and it seems after dippy lauren let james out there was trouble on all sides,   aro was also led astray possibly by somebody on the inside but who? more please to answer all questions

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I can't wait for the conversation with Jacob. I can't wait until the confrontation with James. I also hope the story goes far beyond James ultimate demise. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Uh oh..now Aro is involved. Can't wait to see what's up with James and his surprise when he finds Victoria isn't at his home. 

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

That cliff hanger was absolutely evil!  Aro, the man we've all been waiting for, finally picks up the phone to reach out and touch someone, and the chapter ends.  You two ladies are diabolical! Wicked I tell you! 

Thanks for the update.  I'm confined indoors because of the nasty winter storm we were hit with here in Pennsylvania last night.  It's not the pretty fluffy snow, it's the heavy kind that bends trees and pulls down power lines and causes chaos on the road ways.  So, thanks for the entertainment while I'm held hostage by the weather.

Amy

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I am sad to see the school closing but understand why.  I am waiting to see what will happen when they figure out James tagged Victoria with GPS.  I also cant wait to see what Aro's story is and how is that led astray. 

Reviewer: sammy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Damn cliff hanger! Do you enjoy torturing me?

Great chapter, although I wish Lauren was punished.... But I understand that it wasnt the time. I hope that the school opens again.

Reviewer: bussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

....yes, Carlie and Aro have been on a astray, but the familiy will help to find James - I hope so!

Have a nice weekend!

With best wishes from Germany

Bussy

 

 

Reviewer: ldybug1701 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I am dying to hear what Aro has to say.  How was he led astray.  I know that James pretended to be trained by him, but what was done to him.  This is getting so good.

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

FINALLY!!!!  Aro calls back, but I wonder if this is a good thing or not.  I'm glad Carlisle is taking the right steps in handling the school and how quickly he is doing it as well.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LatinaLola Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

First..Yes, I am very happy your site is working reliable, glad to see someone still knows what they are doing  ; )

Now, on to the review:  We knew eventully the mistake Carlisle made with Bella's enrollment would effect the whole school, but I hadn't realized how emotionally it would hit me, it's he craziest thing. I guess it's because the school wasn't just a place it was a very integral part of your characters lives, it allowed them to be comfortable with who they are. I keep thinking back to what Carlisle, Emmett, and Jasper did to Bella in the beginning and how they are going to rectify that her in the end.  That and a much more is what keeps me coming back for more, like a moth to the flame, I return to your story despite my fears of what is next.  You've done an excellent job at keeping the reader totally enthralled in this story, it is well written and completely entertaining.  Thank you for sharing your words and talent with us

 

Reviewer: dkm241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

WTF?????  What is going on with Aro? Who has led HIM astray? This just keeps getting better and better!

Carlisle's anxiety is making me anxious! I'm in a near panic attack for the next chapter!  (LOL! Maybe not, but I am looking forward to the next installment.   ;)

Whose point of view is next? Will their be more Aro? more Jacob? more James?  I'll certaintly check out Just a Sip on Thursday to find out!

Thanks!

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Very nice. I love the Master's POV. Wow, glad to see him recognizing that he has a family in all of this. Sorry to see him having to close the school down, but it is the right thing to do. I wonder what Aro has to say. Keep it coming ladies. I love this story!

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

That's all?! We need more, lol!!

Reviewer: TwilightDramaTeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Well it's about time Aro got off his ass and called back!  I certainly hope he has a good explaination!

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I like seeing Carlisle taking care of business, even as craptastic a situation as this is. Esme is the very pillar of strength and support. They are doing perhaps what they should have done once they knew about Bella's situation. Carlisle never even checked to see if Laurent had gotten any other people into the school they way Bella was forced.

 

And for the twist, Aro finally calls back and appears to have also been manipulated. How does the biggest mater of them all get tricked and for so long? Looking froward to the answer to that one.

 

Meanwhile, James is somewhere gathering his strength and preparing to locate Victoria with the tracker no one knows about. This is going to get even crazier...

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Finally Aro has made contact - but to what expense!

OMG - closing down the school...

I'm still worried that James will get home to his place, set the tracking device on & track Bella & Victoria down anyway!!! 

My heart is in my throat just thinking about James on the loose!!!! Scary just thinking about it & I'm not even living it!

 

Thanks for the update - phew, need to calm down the heart rate now!!

Reviewer: JED66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Ugh - this story is totally gripping.  I hope that Aro will step in and do what is necessary so that Carlisle doesn't have to get his hands dirty. 

I hope they'll all be able to work together in teh end to re-open the school.

Reviewer: BUTTON Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

ugggg I want more...........

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hi,

Another awesome chapter! Little happened except seeing Carlisles side, but I was anxious to know that side! I cannot wait for the rest, because there are so many things happening! At the same time, this also means the story might be slowly wrapping up... I'm sad for that, but happy that I can always come and reread it!!

thank you

ttfn

Annelies

Reviewer: Mels78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hmm, what could Aro have to say?  It was nice to see how quickly Carlisle wanted to protect the people around him from James and that he was willing to take responsibility for what happened.  I will be very curious as to what happens to the school in the future.  Looking forward to the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I love the chapter. u loved carlisle pov.  i cant wait to see whats going to happen next with the story.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

:)

Reviewer: TwiMandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Great chapter  So anxious to see what Aro has to say!

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