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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

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Thanks for all the reviews have you not read this before?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Ilike that you have put all the sory lines in the same story.... thanks

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Love it write, write write more please!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7

Great chapter!  I'm interested to see what is up with Carlisle and why Bella had to eat in her room!

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

I think I really like your Rosalie!  Great chapter!

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

I'm actually feeling sorry for Victoria! That's not normally an emotion I associate with her in fanfiction!  It feels strange, but I how you've painted her!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

Great chapter!  Mike definitely creeps me out!

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

Holy cow he's so sick!

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

Oh boy I hope Edward's reactions don't get him into trouble!!!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

Okay he's a lot twisted!  LOL!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

Poor Edward!  I'm anxious to hear his story! I wonder who came into the room?!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

Oh James is a bit twisted for sure!! 

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

I'm glad that Jasper seemed gentle with her!  I'm starting to wonder if any of them know the real reason she is at the school. 

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

I love how you are setting this up!  I was hoping Edward would be the one that Emmett called!  I'm sure he'll come into play soon though! 

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

Great second chapter!  I feel so horrible for Bella!  I can't imagine going through something like this!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Great start!!  Lovedforeternity and Edwardandbellabelong2gether sent me over here to read your awesome story!  I am so excited about it!!!  Onto chapter 2!!

Reviewer: CaroSlickLips Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Well damn. I want to know more. You always leave us hanging :(

You know, I hadn't thought about what would happen with their Training School lifestyles. I guess if it doesn't work for them, they just go about things as a normal couple. Personally, I enjoyed them in the school...they were smokin hot :D


Alright, so I'm going to take your challenge...we'll see what I come up with in the forum :P

Reviewer: CaroSlickLips Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

Well, FUCK!


Lauren is such a damn fool. Why the hell wasn't that door locked?  Someone is going to be in big trouble I'm sure.

Reviewer: CaroSlickLips Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22

Well, I guess I should have accidentally on purpose read further...then I would have known it was actually a dream. LOL!  OOPS :D

I'm glad that it wasn't actually James who was after her, though. I am so enjoying him being torured, and I still want to know what contraption was put on his winky. LOL

I like how Jake got thrown into the mix. I'm curious to see if he can actually help. I don't blame Bella for wanting to keep her father out of it. That would be very uncomfortable.

Reviewer: BUTTON Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

Great chapter!  I can't wait to see what happens next the suspense is amped up now!  Intense.....

Reviewer: CaroSlickLips Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

Hmmmm, what in the word did they put on his cock?  I am thoroughly curious.

Kay, I have to admit, the Emmett shit kinda creeped me out JUST A LITTLE! LOL!  I just kept chanting in my head, HE'SDOINGITTOPUNISHJAMES. ;o)


I am glad that James is suffering, but I am a little confused. I'll make a confession, I accidently on purpose read the latest chapter on the blog, and got really fucking worried...because I know that he somehow escaped. Unless Bella was dreaming. I should have accidentally on purpose read a little more. LOL!

 

Reviewer: CaroSlickLips Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

Well, congrats on getting the new site up and running. It's a lot like Twilighted but homier. :)


I feel badly for Bella. She is so confused right now. Seeing Victoria and how she was sodomized and raped really opened her eyes. It's scary to think she could have been like that too.


I just hope that Edward can keep Bella safe. I dont trust that damn James. *scowls*

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

So glad to see you've got The Library up and running! Nice work, ladies.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

I love you both so much and am so happy to have a good home for TTSS.  I've loved this story from the beginning :)

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Wow, am I really the first one to review TTSS here, in our very own, brand-new library? (jumps up and down)

Ok, this story has taken us for a ride, and what a ride it has been! We've sympathised with Bella, drooled over Edward, and hated James enough to make his effigy and burn it after pinning needles in all his sensitive parts..the jury is still out when it comes to Carlisle, in my book..lol..And the story still goes strong, and I can't wait for more! Thank you ladies, for a true reading experience..Keep writing, and don't torture our favourite characters too much, you hear? Me thinks it's payback time for the evil..

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