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Reviewer: frostbitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

i like me some possessive edward!! he can dominate me anytime =)

Reviewer: 22amazing Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

OHHHHHHHHHHHH. THAT controling edward is so hoootttttt. Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: alcg123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

Just got in to this and LOVE it!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

wonderfully written story

Reviewer: neffy09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

damn possesive edward is hot...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, that was great!  Love Edward's possesiveness so much!  I wonder how he is going to manage going to the dance?  Also, what does he want to talk to Emmett about?  REALLY cannot wait for their date that weekend!  :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward was kind of an ass about the dance.  I know Bella gets all turned on now by his possesive nature but I bet soon she is gonna get really pissed.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

I like the dom side of Edward too!  Can not wait to read more!

Reviewer: jenjen90210 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait to see how their weekend away goes as well as find out what Edward has to talk to Emmett about!

Reviewer: lilraerae021591 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

i hope emmett understands and i like possessive edward but i also like seth in stories too so i hope edward doesn't hurt him or anything but can't wait to read the seattle and the halloween dance chapters and i wanna know what edward tells to emmett

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bossy to a point is good but wow he is on overdrive.  I cant wait to find out what he is talking to him about  More More More

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

Is he going to tell Emmett about he and Bella? Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter. How is she going to get out of the thing with Seth?

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

epp! possesive edward is hot edward! lol loved the chapter! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Liverpoolfc4lyf Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

OMG i love this Edward, so hot and possessive. i am glad ur not changing him!

its been ages since you've updated... when ur upating next???

looking forward to it!

tc

Liverpoolfc4lyf

 

 

Reviewer: rowenafaire Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love possessive, dominating Edward! Please don't change him!

Reviewer: courtney1022 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

I luv your eddie it is hot

Reviewer: Two-Roses Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

likin it

Reviewer: Teeeessa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Very posessive. But I like it! Update! :D

Reviewer: Vampyslayerbitemeifudare Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can not wait for next chapter love it.....so hot lol

Reviewer: ceflhf Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

I like possessive Edward very much and look forward to reading about him claiming Bella and giving constant reminders, because we all know Bella can be a spitfire .... keep the creativity going, can't wait for a new update and thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

Keep him possesive!!! Love it!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Love love love possesive Edward!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

So good! I really love a dominating Edward!!!!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love your story. I'm a sucker for dark dominant possessive Edward myself.  Yummy!

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

i think you should make bella become more like edward cuz no way should edward change but having them on the same page makes everything less...scary ;)

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

You should definitely keep Edward this way.

I like a darkward.



Author's Response:

I love me some Darkward too!  I'm definitely keeping him that way :)

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh another a little suprise at the end there.

 

Very good.

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMG- that was unexpected.

Edwards a creepy ass little mofo isnt he now.

good chapter

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

It was nice to get Epov.  He doesn't seem mental so that's good just possesive.  It seems like he is totally thinking with his dick.  Do they even know anything about each other?  Can't wait to read more of this great story.



Author's Response:

They do but do not even realize it yet!

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Holy Hell that was hot.  Edwards a little disturbing but the f***hot sex makes up for it.

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Business partners hmmm.... this is getting interesting.

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

Okay that was hot but gotta say I think Edward may have some issues having no prblem taking a 17 year olds vcard.

Reviewer: annienow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love the hot sexy bastard..Is he a freak or love at first sight...I love the possessive Edward, just not a total freak...



Author's Response:

Who couldn't possibly love a hot sexy bastard!  Oh baby it was love at first sight!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

Amazing :)  Cannot wait to read more about sexy hot posessive Edward :)  LOVE IT! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Yeah, I like possesive, dominating Edward too.  Keep it coming please.

Reviewer: LEbackstage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Who wouldn't like him that way.I can't stand the allways nice and caring Edward.



Author's Response:

Me either.  I find when he is all nice and caring I get stomach sick BLECH and I start to lose interest.  There is only so much fluff I can handle :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

I would like to have me a sexy possessive bastard like Edward there is nothing wrong with it as long as you can still exspress yourself

Reviewer: MayraDih Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow!! I like your possessive Edward and kinky Bella! LOL! Keep them both just like this *.*

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow, that man has issues........

Reviewer: MYSTICPIXIE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love it a nice dark dominating edward fantastic

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

like him just the way he is, don't change a thing about him!

look forward to more.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

YAY!!!! I love Domward Darkward Mentalward Fuckedupward everything dark and twisted for me please! Awesome! And NO JACOB!!! AWESOME!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I agree NO JACOB!!!

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

I need more fast :P I like Edward that way and Bella hmm she is " calm water " she can't deny she likes it

Reviewer: machea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love possessive and dominate edward! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

Fuck me control much wow what did Bella get herself into and how will things work out. It would be nice to be controled like that from time to time.  I cant wait to see what happens next.  What is Emmett going to do when he finds out??

Reviewer: IndiaInk68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love it !  This chapter was really worth the last cliffhanger. Please keep them coming.

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

thats hot

i love it tho at times he can be too much

but o well...its still hot

Reviewer: shannlyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

HOLY HELL!  This story is HOT!  You're leaving me panting for more.

Reviewer: suzala Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is my new fave story!you have some seriously mad writing skills girl!love how your mind works and thanks so much for sharing!

Reviewer: dlpash Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love how she stood her ground and tried to make plans with Seth.  Too bad her 'girly parts' betrayed her.  I can't believe you're turning me on my team again...he's such an asshat.  I'm trying to be a team player (god I wish) but he's an ass.  Can't wait to see what the 'ripple effect' is....

 

 

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love your story! Yes, I love the possessive Edward. I can't wait for more of their sneaking around. LOL

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 4

I LOVE a little dominate, possessive Edward!  He is so hot!  Love it!  I am so glad you updated :)  makes me so happy!  Cannot wait for more of him ;)

Reviewer: lshannon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

MMM love possessive Edward!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it

Reviewer: Carabu83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

good chap!! : ]

Reviewer: MayraDih Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

OH.MY.GOD. Seriously, that Edward will be the death of me.

Reviewer: loribell Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Um... that was hot!  can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: soccer11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: xosummerxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good chapter. Edward&Emmett moving to Forks. Update

Reviewer: MissSashaFierce Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

*thump*

You really have a dirty mind girlie..but I love it ;)

Update soon x

Reviewer: Aether Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

It looks like Bella is in for extreme dating.  I can't wait to see how this move will effect what she had in store for herself this year.  I do love a possessive Edward- I'm not just talking about sex either!  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love the dominant Edward. More please!

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

i think this Edward is just a bit nuts! but then again, so is bella for going along with it! the poor girl has no self-preservation skills!

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

i think this Edward is just a bit nuts! but then again, so is bella for going along with it! the poor girl has no self-preservation skills!

Reviewer: wrighthangal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Extra Oh WOW

Reviewer: wrighthangal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh wow

Reviewer: IndiaInk68 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome story !  You're great at cliffhangers also. Can't wait for next chapter, please update soon.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Wiwi88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

haha

can't wait tilll the next one.

Reviewer: beatingheartsbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

love.love.love!!

cant wait for more

Reviewer: Hollyaj Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I freaking love it. keep going!

Reviewer: Teeeessa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

I expected this but it was still awesome to read! UPDATE!!! xx

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh this is getting good. I wonder if Edward knew he was going to see her already?

Reviewer: Aether Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love this twist.

Reviewer: AugustaBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Uh oh. *snicker*  I knew Elderward would find her! LOL  Can't wait to read the next chapter--I do love me some creepy, bossy Edward... :D

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

looks interesting.

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

haha more spicy drama! but could u tell me exactly y he is so obssessed with her?????

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

i like this story...its so straight to the point (unlike sum certain 5000 word chapters)



Author's Response:

Yes I know what you mean.  I don't know if I could word vomit.  Glad you are enjoying this chapter.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is great so far!  I really cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope Bella and Edward continue their realtionship :)

Reviewer: jenjen90210 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

it was good. 

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was hot but Edward's a bit of a dickhead isnt he lol.

 



Author's Response:

Oh he definitely can be!  But then again, can't we all? LOL

Reviewer: chelletwi83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

very nice start.

Reviewer: gabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love naughty Bella and older Edward.  Great story.  Hope you will update soon.  Oh, the lemon was awesome.

Reviewer: klingie Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hot damn...I need some sexy Edward!!! I like this slightly possessive Edward!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

WOW that was so hot! You have me hooked!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent begining!

Reviewer: MayraDih Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Gosh! That was motherfucking HOT. Hmm possessive Edward is coming uh? I want to see how it's gonna work from now on. ;)



Author's Response:

Oh I love Possessive Edward...HOT!!  Thanks for the review.  I hope to update by the end of the weekend.

Reviewer: Aether Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm really interested in the over the top possessive Edward.  I love a virginal Bella- so this works.  Will he live up to the last line.  I sure hope so.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Samantha1175 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

i love possesive edward... hes so hot, and what makes it better is that hes older!!

i cant wait to see how everything works out.

UPDATE SOON!!

Reviewer: Avery Shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooh an older possessive Edward, this could be fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  Hopefully will update by the end of the weekend.

Reviewer: jenjen90210 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

please update. 



Author's Response:

Just waiting for my beta to return the finished chapter two...hopefully tonight :)

Reviewer: WrightlessLily Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really looking forward to reading more - sounds like my kind of fic!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) can´t wait for the updat

Reviewer: Wiwi88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

nice story.

Can't wait till the next one:-)

 

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