Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 50
damn! who was it at the door?! It's just sooo unfair!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
For some reason I think that the door is not Edward. Lord ... If only Bella nothing happened! I hope that Edward finds out where she and save!!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 50
I think I know who is behind door number 1...i am afraid to say his name out loud even. Poor Bella - I hope I am wrong.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 48
okay I put down the pitchfork...and chewed off exactly three nails on this chapter alone. Thanks so much for writing such a thrilling story.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 50
I am really hoping that is Edward outside of that door!! Or that could be Jasper or Emmett!! Just don't let it be Carlise or Marcus or anyone on his side of the famliy that is in to this kind of stuff!!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh, Fuck.
Fuck fuck fuck fuck!
I'm thinkin it's everybodys-favorite-phsyco-rapist-father-in-law at the door.
Dammit all to hell. Hope Bella survives this encounter.D:
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 50
Woah......
Ok, I really think, the other voice is Carlisle.... But I´ve to admitt, I wish it would be Edward....
Very good chapter... I loved to read it, especially the mind changing from Edward... I think he´d really understand, what it is about... That this is not about how he feels because of Carlisle´s action, but rather about Bella and her feelings, her fear... I do understand, that this situation might be very tough for Edward, knowing his own father wants to rape his fiance, but he´s to be there for Bella and not wallow in self-pity.
I really hope, that Edward will make it in time - rescue Bella...
Looking forward for the next chapter...
Love Snilla
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 50
you know someday im just going to drop dead from all these cliff hangers. gosh well all i could think at the end was please let carlisle be outside the door. it was the only thing i thought of and idk why but even though he is evil i sort of feel that he would bring bella back.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 50
you're awesome :D
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 50
Cannot wait for the next chapter. A cliffy!!!!! I hope that Edward can save her!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 50
Aaargh! That was so frustrating! Great chapter, but ... aaargh!
I really liked Edward's POV in this. I'm glad to see he realises the full horror of what he did to Bella and how he treated her in the beginning - he sees that he really was a monster. Sometimes I've felt he's a bit too easy on himself, but he's not letting himself off the hook now at all.
I'm sure it's Carlisle at the door - hope Edward and the boys can get there in time! Or maybe Bella will find a way to save herself?
Small thing - I was surprised Edward was drinking just before going to pick up Bella. It doesn't seem like him.
Can't wait for the next chapter - please update soon!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 50
dear mic,
oh my, y'can't do this to me?! its really awful not to know where there is.
is it carlisle? i not hope so, this would be really bad for her...
'ill next week...
Sema.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 50
oooh more angst?!:) So who is it? Carlisle? I know I know, I will have to wait to get that answered....
Thank you for writing this angsty story.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 50
After reading for the second time this chapter I think that is Carlisle who's at the door (TERRIFYING IF IS IN FACT HIM). I loved Edward's point of view it looks like a pair is really growing btw his legs. Happy to read that he wasn't turning into Carlisle's Edward again. Today is Monday which it means that is next week already. I developed OCD with your story.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG!!!! I HAVE NO WORDS...JUST... OH NO!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 50
Giving a good guess I think it's Carlise at the door...I hope Edward gets there in time
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG!!! I wish she could tell Edward whats going on!! I hope Edward gets to Bella in time. I mean I dont want her to get raped but I would rather her not go to Alaska and get married. This is such a crazy hard situation to deal with. Looking forward to the next update. I hope she gets that break she is praying for.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 50
oh no damn demetri....and yeah just give her a break for once!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh no!!
what do you make with my emotions!!
i hope for bella, the time will be better!!
i love this story, but now i cry! this story is the best, i have read since long time!
i'm sorry for my english, but i'm better at reading in english!!
thank you to make us the gift (this story)!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 50
let me think, that's marcus and carlisle out of the door!!??!! Holy shit!! why oh why must this happen?!?!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 50
If it's Carlisle... so help me...!
It is isn't it!? Arrgggghhhhh!
Awesome chapter!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 50
Cant this poor girl just get a break!
I wonder who is at the door, I have a feeling its not Edward though.
Cant wait for next update
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 50
Hope that doesnt mean Carlisle is on the other side of that door!
Give Bella a break.
:)
Date: 29 Mar 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 50
Please hurry with the next chapter!!! The story is finally picking up! I can't wait to find out who else came in the room!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 50
i am eager and ready for the next chapter. love this chapter and the cliffy it just seems to make it all the more intresting although i hope that no one rapes bella. i dont know why but there is just something nice about edward being bellas first and only. Cant wait fot the next one :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 50
Ohhh...the cliffy! I am biting my nails here! Oh.My.Word. The other voice belongs to Carlisle doesn't it...this is gonna be bad...Edward's going to kill them!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 50
Amazing update! There's enough tension and emotion in nthis one to stop a MAC truck! Loved it! Nice cliffhanger too, by the way. I'm betting Carlisle's at the door. Hmm?
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 50
Not a good cliffy!
Please don't hurt Bella again.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 50
IS IT CARLISLE?!?!?! I have to know. I was wondering if something like this was going to happen! OhMyGod!!! I can't wait to see what happens! GAH!!!! I can't take this! He just kidnapped her?!? I'm gonna die! This is too much! Whoa! BELLA! This is so sad! Just when things were looking bright THIS happens! Amazing work!
~Jessi
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 50
It's fucking Carlisle or Marcus. I'm going to go with Carlisle. Just because he wants Bella's ass like a fat kid loves cake. Damn it after Edward's emo ways I was getting bored until the text message and your story shot off like a NASA shuttle. OMFG! I was so good. I loved it I so fucking loved it. Angela & Edwards' conversation genius. Poor Bella & Edward WTH!? I fucking love it. This doesn't look good for Bella though and I'm scared. I can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 50
It's fucking Carlisle or Marcus. I'm going to go with Carlisle. Just because he wants Bella's ass like a fat kid loves cake. Damn it after Edward's emo ways I was getting bored until the text message and your story shot off like a NASA shuttle. OMFG! I was so good. I loved it I so fucking loved it. Angela & Edwards' conversation genius. Poor Bella & Edward WTH!? I fucking love it. This doesn't look good for Bella though and I'm scared. I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story is sad. It is heartbreaking to read Renee’s POV of a Mother’s Love and then Bella's POV of what she is going through. Renee took such a risk to give Bella a stable and happy life. I can’t wait to see Bella start to overcome.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 50
no not a cliff hanger i need more!! uup date soon plz!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh shit! Never thought Demetri would come back. Please let it be the boys at the door but how would they have found them so quickly.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 50
That better be Edward and his brothers coming to her rescue, or maybe Carlisle having found out that Demetri took Bella without permission...
Please don't let anymore trauma happen to Bella, seriously, hasn't she been through enough?
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 50
ahh who is it!! great update!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 50
Not fair, no cliffies. Lol can't wait for next update
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 50
But it's Carlisle, right? Damn, Bella, your luck will never turn around.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:48 PM Title: A Mother's Love
Hey sorry, I have another question lol.
It sort of has spoilers so anyone who hasn't read the whole story...just scroll on past this.
Edward said he won the humiliating task contest, but do we ever find out what task he thought of? Or did he do it by humiliating Esme in front of the family at dinner?
Also, if you're not planning on doing C&E's story, can you maybe do some oneshots to give us more backstory?
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 50
Loved the chapter, =) as always,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 50
Amaizing, just amaizing, I'm sceared just like Bella when I read this. Love your work and can't wait next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 50
What an intense chapter. With this twist of events I am pretty speechless, what to write.
In the first half of the chapter I thought, that is is time for Edward to get his head in the game again, but than the kidnapping of Bella. The way you write you can make your reader really fear for Bella. I just hope, that Edward arrives in time to save Bella.
I am also thinking about a possible ending. At the moment I can imagine/wish for endings:
- Carlisle becomes normal and sees that his actions were just wrong and everyone has their HEA.
- Carlisle dies and everyone is free from his clutches and can live the HEA
- Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, Emmet, Rose and Esme can escape and start living somewhere different with new identities.
- Or something entirely different.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 50
Our are the queen of cliffs!!!!
Either there is Dr. C and his crew or Ewdard and his brothers or only at the door. For Bell I hope the best.
Go on!
With nice sprintime-regards from old Germany
Bussy
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
<3
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMFG!!!!Please tell me it is Edward coming to rescue Bella!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG I hate the cliffy. I will be so worried until next chap!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 50
Gooosh, you're awsome!!! I love that fanfiction. Thank youuuu!!! :)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 50
AUGH! Damnit! Who the hell is pounding on the other side of that door if it isn't Edward, Emmett or Jasper?!?
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 50
ahhhh! cliffhanger! noooooo, lol. but as a writer i totally understand. such a good chapter. i hope that its edward at the door, but i have a feeling its carlisle. i hope its not. i loved edward's breakdown - very humanizing. can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 50
Cliff hangers you say? I've waited so long and you still keep me hanging on. Please hurry this so nerve racking.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 50
Damn.. really can't she catch a break?!.. But truly though I was expecting something to happen.. And you brought it across beautifully.. I have a thought about who's probably outside with him even though I'm wishing for Edward and his brothers as much as her..
His wallowing and anger were expected and I am sorry for him. But he's not Carlisle's pet. So stopping thinking like it and put the monster to sleep...
Can't wait for the next chapter..
Thanks for this....
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 50
I"m hoping it's Edward too!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG...update soon..I have a feeling that it is Carlisle. But i have my fingers crossed that it is not.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 49
Well now that the adoption is voided she clear??
They can't run because Carlisle is paying for EVERYTHING or paid for everything. I hope they saved some so if they run away and Carlisle takes everything from them they have something to fall on.
I feel sorry for Esme. I usual don'th wish death on someone, but i seriously hope something bad happens to him. BUT i wonder what he would put in his will, probably send her to Marcus and Demetri.
I don't think Edward would keep her as a prisoner in the house. he's changing, so it's possible.
I'm a sad it's coming to an end.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 50
sadly, i don't think it's edward :(
please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: A Mother's Love
Mic, I am stupid, I have been going though the review trying to figure out what HEA stands for and I just figured it out.
HAPPY EVER AFTER. Clap clap for me.
Please update soon... as I said I have been reading what everyone else has written to see if I can figure out who would be on the other side of the door. The reason I don't feel it is Edward is because she asked for the man up above to give her a break.
I also have to say I like some of the peoples view of how to get back at Carlisle and I say letting him rest in a prison cell is to nice. I think a lot of punishment from the 4 ladies would be better and maybe some starvation as well like he did to Esme. Then I would turn his words against him and get the 3 boys to come up with the most evil thing they could think of him to do like he made them with Esme. A bit of payback. Maybe even a bit of back door sex seeing as he seem to like to take it by force. Let see how much once he has it done to him by force.
I could keep going by I wont it just get really evil after that one. Barb wire is involved and that is not pretty. But then only the best for him.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
Please, do me a favour: LEARN TO RESIST CLIFFIES!!!!
*sigh*
I liked this chapter, although I found that Edward was being sort of mood-swinging-y at the beginning. Then again, he was drinking.
The one annoying thing about reading this chapter was how all the paragraphs were really spaced out, so it looked like it was going to be twice as long as it was. I was all excited...
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 50
Why? Why would Bella ever leave the classroom with him??? He couldn't do anything to her in the classroom. She should have waited for Edward or someone she trusted. If it were a "family emergency" they would have come for her, not sent him. Please update soon ~ hate the cliffies when we have to wait so long between updates. Thanks!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG! Your killing me with this cliffy!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 50
Thanks for the update!! Can't wait till next week, so I have my money on that Carlisle was at the door.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 50
OMG, please let that be Edward, Jasper, and Emmett at the door. Bella has already been through so much. The last thing she needs is Carlisle showing up and being pissed because she isn't a virgin. If Demetri and Carlisle gang rape her that will destroy her.
Please don't make us wait too long with that evil cliffy.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 50
The other voice was Carlisle. Please give these people a break, they definately deserve one.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 50
I think Bella summed it up very well at the end can' she just get a break. I'm so glad Jasper knocked some sense into Edward, but didn't Bella get ganged raped by James and Paul or was that not enough men to consider a gang???
I so can't wait to read their HEA!
Great chapter, I'm so glad Edward got there in time!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 50
DARN YOU!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh shit! Its either Carlisle or Marcus that are outside with Demetri...Hopefully someone will complain about the noise and management will go up there. :(
Once again Jasper saves the day and knocks some sense into Edward's head.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 50
Edward's guilt was getting the best of him. His reasons were good but he was forgetting he isn't the one who has had to go through this. Jasper, as usual, was the voice of reason and made him see things clearly.
As for Bella, at least Demetri is acting on his own, so he has no one to ask for assistance and with luck he will be outnumbered.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 50
ahhhh cliffy! bane of my existence.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 50
dude, i wanted to cry.
I mean really break down and cry.
Bella has been through so much and now this happens?!
I'm soooo proud of you!
you have made the Best story on this god dame wed-site!
love you
~kova_aly (lovethenlost)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 50
HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!! TWST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AGHHHHH IT'S CARLISLE I BET! I DON'T KNOW BUT I BET!
edward better sort his shit and find her fast OH MAN
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 50
What is HEA?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 50
I really don't know how to start to writte all the feelings that your story stir in me ,first i wanna say that is brilliantly wriitten i've read in one of the chapters notes that you're going to published whitout a doubt i will buy a copy,second i relly want to see that bastard of Carlisle pay (i'd love to see him tied up and beaten by every one of the women he hurt especially Esme ,Rose ,Alice and Bella and then sent him to some really sadomasoquist people to suffer for years to come)sorry but he really gets to my most vengeful feelings ,on the other hand this story makes me realize how importatnt is to show our sons the meaning of love and respect ,and finally this story is the ultimate lesson of how love can truly reedim us if we let it,so thanks for writting this i'm sure if it's beenhard for me to read ,it is hard to writte too.
btw this one was a hell of a cliffie ,i have to bite my nuckles to prevent me for scream ,i'm really praying that Edward gets there in time cause things are about to get very ugly in that room whit Demetri and Carlisle.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 50
Not the cliffie! Oh my gosh, this is so painful to read, but oh so addicting!
I've been reading this forever now -- I first got into it when you were at Chapter 21 back on ff.net -- and I am amazed at hw much you'v progressed, and how much better it is now. Good work. :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 50
evil cliffy!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 50
It's Carlisle or Marcus huh?? .... I really like your story, but they truly get on my nerves.. I wish someone would just kill them already. Or have them get in an accident. I think that's why I put off reading the story.. I dont want to feel the sadness when it comes to Bella as to what life has for her next. As she said.. will she ever get a break??
Will Edward find her in time? Before something bad happens to her? Or will she suffer everything, and lose her life completely?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 50
It's Carlisle, isn't it? He's the one outside of the hotel room, right?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 50
Ok now Demetri needs to be hung up by his balls (am I allowed to say that?)! This just doesn't look good!! Hurry with the update I can't wait!! Be mean to the meanies!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 50
Gah! Don't tell me its Carlisle!
I was happy to see that Edward realized that Bella was pulling away and that he needed to fix things. I never expected Demetri to come back into the picture and kidnap her. Please don't let anything else bad happen to her!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 50
oh god! Is it Carlise? I am soooo worried!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 50
It's Carlisle isn't it? Isn't it? Oh, this just keeps getting worse and worse for her, huh? Wouldn't Bella know well enough not to go with him? I mean, after everything, you would think she would. I love the story, I've been with it since you posted the very first chapter on FF. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 47
Cant he just like, tell Bella to pretend or something. I mean, instead of catching her off guard.
As always... I hate Carlisle.. but there's more added to the list this time.. Marcus and Demitri...
Ugh! ..
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 50
Quick question Mic (I hope you dont mind me calling you Mic, but Im so used to seeing it, you know?):
If Bella could text 'demetri' to Edward, why didn't she send more? Or, if she was pressed for time, why didn't she just text him again or call him when she got into the bathroom?
And as far her happily ever after goes...can Alice & Rosalie help with Carlisle's much deserved ass whipping? PLEASE?
And can Esme, that poor, strong, and incredibly brave woman, deliver the death blow? I'd appreciate it so much.
Even if something like isn't what you have in mind for Carlisle, I just want all the girls, especially Esme, to have their revenge.
Your story is amazingly epic, and so are you.
-Chea.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 50
Quick question Mic (I hope you dont mind me calling you Mic, but Im so used to seeing it, you know?):
If Bella could text 'demetri' to Edward, why didn't she send more? Or, if she was pressed for time, why didn't she just text him again or call him when she got into the bathroom?
And as far her happily ever after goes...can Alice & Rosalie help with Carlisle's much deserved ass whipping? PLEASE?
And can Esme, that poor, strong, and incredibly brave woman, deliver the death blow? I'd appreciate it so much.
Even if something like isn't what you have in mind for Carlisle, I just want all the girls, especially Esme, to have their revenge.
Your story is amazingly epic, and so are you.
-Chea.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 50
3 words : OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was awesome, cant wait to read next chapter. Greetings from Poland ;)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 50
OMG!!!!
I want to read the next, OMG!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: A Mother's Love
something just stuck in my mind so i need to ask. are U going to make a pfd of of this story when you finish? - coz it'd be nice, you know, to have it all together and be able to get back to it someday even if it will be deleted from the internet somehow & because of something.
it's just idea so no pressure.
i got this idea from the Wide Awake fic which is available on pdf.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh my god.. i did not see that coming.. damn.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 50
Carlisle was the one at the door, wasn't he? I think Bella's HEA should include Carlisle on the receiving end of a good violent ass raping, repeatedly. He could be held against his will and 'trained'.
I agree with Edward that he has much to atone to with Bella. He needs to be more disgusted with himself, though, with reguards to the incestual training of her that he signed off on.
Edward and his brothers need to rethink how they let Carlisle run them. Carlisle is just one man. He maybe wealthy but can he really stand alone against 3 grown sons? Carlisle may have acquaintences but he has no friends. Nobody would come to his aid unless he paid them. If he were chained in the basement, he wouldn't have the chance to hire anybody.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 50
omg its carlisle..... I hate cliffies... but great plot building... cant wait till next week
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 50
No... Is it Carlisle? I bet it's Carlisle...
Omg Edward, Emmett and Jasper should show up and there should be a Cullen throw down (with Bella's team wining of course)
Please please please pretty pretty pretty please with a cherry on top will you update really soon? I don't think I can stand the suspense of waiting for an upload
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 49
I really hope that something bad happens to Carlise and that he will burn in hell!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 50
23 days waiting for the next chapitre, i thing i can wait for one week, i hope so.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 50
It's Carlisle? isn't it?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 50
PLEASE don't let anything bad happen to Bella! I agree - she's had enough and needs a break. And I'm sick of the horrible people getting their way with her.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 50
I agree can't she catch a break!
Great place to end it! :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 50
Ahhhh! This is torture! The scary thing...is that I like it.
Edward finally gets it, just a minute too late. He forgot that what's going on in his mind is no worse than what's going on in Bella's reality.
The cliffie. Could be worse. Could be better. Obviously Bella's reality just got worse because of who showed up at the door. I kind of wish we found out who it was but then it wouldn't be a cliffie, right.
Thanks so much for continuing to share your story. I'm dying to read more.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 50
Oh god -- Carlisle's at the door isn't he? Please don't let Demetri/Carlisle hurt her any more. Please!!!!
And why didn't she cause a scene as he walked her through the lobby -- I sure would have...
You can't update fast enough. Go. Get thee to your computer and write, write, write!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 50
poor bella, someone really should give her a break.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 50
Would it be Marcus, joining his son ? Or worse perhaps : Carlisle ? Can't wait till next uopdate, your story is so enthralling !
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 50
Hello, I really do hope that in your story, which I think is very special, this poor poor Bella is getting her fucking break now and Edward and the others are saving her from this piece of shit named Demitri.
I think Bella and Edward have deserved it to be lucky for now. They have been through enough BS, specially Bella.
I surely know that this is just a ficiton, but I must say, that I dive into your story very deeply while reading and it really exhausts me sometimes.
So please!!!! Let her be safe.
Greetings from Germany